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History in the Making

The Desire for Street Cars-Then and Now

In the early 1900s trolleys, otherwise known as “streetcars,” began popping up all over the United States. (For this article, I will use the words trolleys and streetcars interchangeably).

Omnibus

Omnibus, a horse-drawn wagon made to carry more than one family, were already in use and continued to be used during this time. However, omnibuses didn’t follow a track and the ride was often bumpy. Trolleys were larger than the omnibuses and had a more elaborate design, but still began with horses or mules pulling them. They didn’t look as much like wagons and they were designed to carry a fairly large number of people.

Horse drawn trolley

In the beginning, horses or mules pulled trolleys along tracks. Mules were preferred because they had more stamina than horses. These trolleys provided a smoother, faster ride than the omnibuses. Streetcars were used in towns and cities where there were a lot of people, so the streets had to be regularly cleaned of horse or mule manure. The streets in the towns and cities were grated, making it easier for trolleys to provide smoother, faster travel than walking, which had been the main way to get around in the city.

Companies were always looking to improve their trolleys to provide faster transportation and a smoother ride. So, in the late 19th century, operators began trying steam engines and electricity. Some of the first cities to use electric trolleys were: Scranton, Pennsylvania; Montgomery, Alabama; and Omaha, Nebraska.

Electric street car

Electric streetcars followed a track, but also required a cable attached to the roof that would then clip onto an electrical wire strung across tall wooden poles along the track routes to power the electric engine. These trolleys allowed people to live farther outside of towns and cities, and what were called “interurban” lines became popular. The interurban lines connected cities within a state, and even cities from state to state.

Sadly, as soon as the streetcars became popular, automobiles started appearing, and it didn’t take long for automobiles to replace the trolleys in most locations.

However, some places like my hometown of Ephrata, Pennsylvania, still have trolley cars that are now run with a motor and wheels, like a bus. Each Christmas, Ephrata offers a Jingle Bell Trolley Tour for people to ride the trolley around the town and view the Christmas decorations of Ephrata homes and businesses. They also offer a family night that begins with arts and crafts activities and a visit with Santa.

Modern Trolley

So, though the streetcars may not be desired as much as they were decades ago, some of them have been refurbished and changed to still offer a taste of the past to those who want to experience a historical ride.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Romancing Your Story

Why Are Christmas Romances So Popular?

I’m sure you’re aware of all the Christmas romance movies that Hallmark airs on television before Thanksgiving into the New Year. Christmas romance novellas and novels also show up on bookstore shelves and on social media sites and can easily been found on Goodreads and Amazon between Thanksgiving and Christmas. So, what is it about romance stories that take place during the Christmas holiday that glues people to the television set or to the pages of a book?

I believe there are three reasons people, and particularly women, can’t get enough romance stories set during the Christmas holiday, and we’ll look at these one at a time:

1) The Magic of Christmas

This is a secular concept where you can make a wish upon a star or send a letter to Santa to get what you’re looking for. Christmas has been touted as a time when dreams and wishes come true, if you just believe in Santa Claus delivering your much wanted item to your door while you sleep on Christmas Eve, or believe in wishes coming true simply because Christmas is advertised and promoted to be magical. I already mentioned the Hallmark movies, but there are classic movies that include Christmas romance as well, such as White Christmas and Miracle on 34th Street. All you have to do is believe in the Magic of Christmas and you’ll find love.

2) The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

When people are generally happy and will give you a cheerful greeting on the street. When people are feeling more generous and are more willing to lend a helping hand or provide something for someone in need. Nonprofit organizations send out flyers or have tables in store foyers seeking donations to help the needy. Christmas music is played over store loudspeakers or via church bells in the local town, and on the radio. Most people think of a chill in the air and the beauty of a freshly fallen sparkling white snow on the ground, and snuggling by the fire in the fireplace drinking hot chocolate. So many wonderful happy pictures are painted in her minds through the music, movies, books, and advertisements of the Christmas holiday, when even the Grinch and Ebenezer Scrooge find room to be generous, loving, and happy.

3) Jesus Christ, the Savior

To those who know and believe the Word of God, this is the best and most important reason to celebrate Christmas. We believe that God sent His one and only Son to earth around the time that Christmas is celebrated. Why? Because God saw that people needed a Savior – a way to be reconciled from their miserable sinfulness to God, the one who is the only source of true love. Jesus Christ – the true meaning of Christmas, the one who not only brought and offered love, but who is the very embodiment and example of real, true love. He came to live among us and show us how to love one another and how to live with the hope of one day spending eternity with Him, Jesus, the one who laid down his life for each and every one of us; the one who showed us that real love is sacrificial and priceless, and this is the kind of love we all hope and long for.

As a believer in Jesus Christ, I have found The Nativity Story movie, written by Mike Rich, directed by Catherine Hardwicke, and released in 2006, from which I used a picture above, to be my absolute favorite Christmas movie of all time. Though it does not include a typical romance, I think the way Mr. Rich depicted the relationship between Mary and Joseph was so perfect and touching. So, if you’re looking for inspiration for writing a romance story, you might want to consider watching this movie and paying attention to the interaction between the characters of Mary and Joseph.

No matter which of these reasons is your reason to seek and enjoy Christmas romance, they all have a “feel good” sentiment, which is what romance readers want. That’s what I believe makes Christmas romance stories so popular—all people want to be accepted, loved, and happy. So no matter which of the reasons above is your reason for watching Christmas movies, listening to Christmas music, or reading Christmas romance novels, you will find the magic of Christmas is love.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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History in the Making

Some Interesting Facts and a Statue of Classic Author, Charles Dickens

Did you know Charles Dickens’ full name was Charles John Huffam Dickens? I didn’t, and Dickens is one of my favorite authors. His classic stories of life in England in the 1800s were full of wonderful characters, some of which the stories were named after – Oliver Twist, Nicholas Nickelby, and David Copperfield to name a few. But, there is also Pip, Miss Havisham, Fagin, and many more, including Little Nell.

Little Nell is the beloved little girl in Dickens’ novel, The Old Curiosity Shop. Charles Dickens published a weekly serial in 1840-1841, called Master Humphrey’s Clock. In it, he published two novels, one of which was The Old Curiosity Shop, along with short stories. The Old Curiosity Shop was such a popular feature of Master Humphrey’s Clock, that readers in New York stormed the wharf when the ship bringing the final installment arrived in 1841. Then The Old Curiosity Shop was published in book form later in 1841.

Charles Dickens was born in Portsmouth, England. Dickens’ novels tell of the injustices of the times he lived in, often featuring the brutal treatment of the poor in a society that was divided by levels of wealth.

Dickens’ family also faced poverty and Charles was forced out of school at twelve years of age to take a job in Warren’s Blacking Warehouse, a shoe-polish factory. He was treated badly by the other boys working there. Then his father was imprisoned for debt. The humiliation of these two circumstances hurt Dickens profoundly and became his deepest secret. However, they obviously provided an unacknowledged foundation for his fiction.

Charles Dickens published 15 novels, one of which was left unfinished at his death, The Mystery of Edwin Drood.

I would like to call your attention back to Little Nell because there are three statues of Charles Dickens in existence – one in Sydney, Australia, one in his hometown of Portsmouth, England, and one in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. The one in Philadelphia is the oldest of the three. It was created in 1890, and is the only one that also depicts one of his characters, Little Nell from The Old Curiosity Shop. Before it was moved to Philadelphia, this statue won two gold medals at the Chicago’s World Fair of 1893 and crossed the Atlantic Ocean twice. It was sculpted by Francis Edwin Ewell, who was the one to send it to Philadelphia.

There are two interesting things about the statue being placed in Philadelphia: 1) Charles Dickens, in his will, stated he did not want any memorials, and 2) the fact that the statue is in Philadelphia, a city that Dickens disliked. He said, of Philadelphia, “it is dull and out of spirits.”

Funny that, despite Dickens dislike of Philadelphia, the statue has become a symbol of the neighborhood, and both, Nell and Dickens are crowned with flower wreaths frequently, including each year on Dickens’ birthday, when a party is held and there are readings and dancing.

If you are a Dickens’ fan, like me, I also highly recommend the movie, “The Man Who Invented Christmas” from 2017, and I’d love to know which of his classic novels is your favorite.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Romancing Your Story

Why Are Christmas Romances So Popular

I’m sure you’re aware of all the Christmas romance movies that Hallmark airs on television before Thanksgiving into the New Year. Christmas romance novellas and novels also show up on bookstore shelves and on social media sites and can easily been found on Goodreads and Amazon between Thanksgiving and Christmas. So, what is it about romance stories that take place during the Christmas holiday that glues people to the television set or to the pages of a book?

I believe there are three reasons people, and particularly women, can’t get enough romance stories set during the Christmas holiday, and we’ll look at these one at a time:

1 The Magic of Christmas

This is a secular concept where you can make a wish upon a star or send a letter to Santa to get what you’re looking for. Christmas has been touted as a time when dreams and wishes come true, if you just believe in Santa Claus delivering your much wanted item to your door while you sleep on Christmas Eve, or believe in wishes coming true simply because Christmas is advertised and promoted to be magical. I already mentioned the Hallmark movies, but there are classic movies that include Christmas romance as well, such as White Christmas and Miracle on 34th Street. All you have to do is believe in the Magic of Christmas and you’ll find love.

2 The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

When people are generally happy and will give you a cheerful greeting on the street. When people are feeling more generous and are more willing to lend a helping hand or provide something for someone in need. Nonprofit organizations send out flyers or have tables in store foyers seeking donations to help the needy. Christmas music is played over store loudspeakers or via church bells in the local town, and on the radio. Most people think of a chill in the air and the beauty of a freshly fallen sparkling white snow on the ground, and snuggling by the fire in the fireplace drinking hot chocolate. So many wonderful happy pictures are painted in her minds through the music, movies, books, and advertisements of the Christmas holiday, when even the Grinch and Ebenezer Scrooge find room to be generous, loving, and happy.

3 Jesus Christ, the Savior

To those who know and believe the Word of God, this is the best and most important reason to celebrate Christmas. We believe that God sent His one and only Son to earth around the time that Christmas is celebrated. Why? Because God saw that people needed a Savior – a way to be reconciled from their miserable sinfulness to God, the one who is the only source of true love. Jesus Christ – the true meaning of Christmas, the one who not only brought and offered love, but who is the very embodiment and example of real, true love. He came to live among us and show us how to love one another and how to live with the hope of one day spending eternity with Him, Jesus, the one who laid down his life for each and every one of us; the one who showed us that real love is sacrificial and priceless, and this is the kind of love we all hope and long for.

As a believer in Jesus Christ, I have found The Nativity Story movie, written by Mike Rich, directed by Catherine Hardwicke, and released in 2006, from which I used a picture above, to be my absolute favorite Christmas movie of all time. Though it does not include a typical romance, I think the way Mr. Rich depicted the relationship between Mary and Joseph was so perfect and touching. So, if you’re looking for inspiration for writing a romance story, you might want to consider watching this movie and paying attention to the interaction between the characters of Mary and Joseph.

No matter which of these reasons is your reason to seek and enjoy Christmas romance, they all have a “feel good” sentiment, which is what romance readers want. That’s what I believe makes Christmas romance stories so popular—all people want to be accepted, loved, and happy.

So no matter which of the reasons above is your reason for watching Christmas movies, listening to Christmas music, or reading Christmas romance novels, you will find the magic of Christmas is love.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Writing Romance

Who’s Behind the Mask?

Upon doing a search for romance novels that include a masquerade, I found that many romance novels include the word “masquerade” in their title, and Goodreads has a list of 1,147 books that include a masquerade in the story, but not all of the 1,147 have the word “masquerade” in their title. Many of them do not look like something I would read as I only read clean and/or Christian fiction, but I just wanted to point out how often masquerades are used in romance novels.

I remember reading only one book that included a masquerade, but I was very caught up in the masquerade and found it intriguing that the gentleman revealed his name to the woman from the start. However, she did not know him, but knew a bit about him as he was from a royal family. In addition, another man comes and interrupts their conversation to ask her for a dance. This man only reveals his first name to her, and so begins a battle for the female character’s heart.

I have heard of other romance stories where the romance begins at a masquerade as well, but neither character reveals their identity and each is left wondering who it is they have found an interest in, as they have no knowledge of the person’s name or what they look like. This begins the romantic plot of the story.

After finding so many romance books that include a masquerade, I have reached the conclusion that a masquerade is a popular romance trope. Because the masquerade often includes anonymity on the part of one character or the other, it brings to mind another popular romance trope—when one character or other has amnesia, usually temporary.

There is also a very famous romance story, the original being released in installments in a Paris newspaper over the course of five months, from September 23, 1909 through January 1910, before being published as a novel just two months after the last installment appeared in the Le Gaulois. This story also included anonymity because of a mask—Le Fantôme de l’Opéra (The Phantom of the Opera) by Gaston Leroux first published as a novel in March 1910, later made extremely popular by Andrew Lloyd Weber’s Broadway musical.

Another popular story that includes a type of anonymity between the male and female characters is Beauty and the Beast, where the man has become a beast because of an evil spell cast upon him. Most of us are most familiar with the Disney version of this story. However, there is speculation that it originated in 2nd Century CE in an ancient Roman tale. Other claims say that the original Beauty and the Beast was written by Gabrielle-Suzanne de Villeneuve in 1740, and the most popular Beauty and the Beast story is said to have been written by Jeanne-Marie LePrince de Beaumont in 1756. All three of these stories are different from each other and different from the Disney one we all know and love.

Tropes are very popular in romance novels and these are just some examples of how you can take a popular trope, such as a masquerade, and tweak or twist it a bit to still create a romance trope that begins with initial anonymity.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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History in the Making

The Tarnished Glamour of Masquerades

If you watch movies or read fiction novels, your perception of masquerades is probably of elaborate parties among the wealthy elite people in old European societies. I know that’s always been my impression. So imagine my surprise when I decided to dig into the history of masquerades and found almost the exact opposite.

Masquerade

The word “masquerade” has its roots in the French word “mascarade” and the Italian word “maschera”. Masquerades actually originated among the poor people of medieval Europe. However, it didn’t take long for the higher classes, especially in France, to engage in masquerade balls. One such event is known as the “Bal des Ardents” or The Ball of the Burning Men. This particular masquerade ball was held by Charles VI of France in celebration of the marriage of the Queen’s Lady in Waiting. The king and five other men dressed in costumes made of linen soaked in resin and flax was attached to this, making the costumes highly flammable. When the king’s drunken brother threw a torch at one of the dancers, they all caught on fire and only the king was saved.

Soon the excitement of masquerades spread to Venice, Italy, where anonymity was hard to come by. During this same period, African ceremonial masquerades spilled into the Caribbean and southeastern United States where it developed into carnivals.

The main rule of the masquerade was the privacy and anonymity of all attendees.

Each person’s identity was to be kept quiet, and no one dared to reveal their identity until after midnight. The costume was meant to make its wearer unidentifiable and conversations were to begin with specific phrases, such as “I know you” and “Do you know me?”

Such anonymity gave people the courage to freely express their ideas, regardless of how foolish or wicked they were without fear of retribution. However, it didn’t stop with reckless verbiage. In striving for anonymity, men often dressed as women and women as men. In addition, masquerades became a place for unescorted women. Sexual behaviors, otherwise frowned upon in society, became part of these masquerades.

One masquerade ball even enabled the murder of a King. Gustav III, the King of Sweden had consolidated power in the country and led with an autocratic rule. In 1792, King Gustav III attended a masquerade ball where he was killed by a nobleman. This gave the people a fear of masquerade balls, and masquerade events began to decline.

Carnivals had been very popular among village folks in Europe and masquerades stemmed from the carnivals. Eventually, the masquerades became popular among the aristocrats and royals, as mentioned previously. So, in addition to masquerade events diminishing due to fear, the popularity of masquerade balls also dropped when the population of the aristocrats also began to decline.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Romancing Your Story

Can Your Male Character Still Be the Hero in Your Romance Novel?

The current writing trend is to have strong, independent female characters. These female characters can run a business and a household, AND fight the bad guys, so do they really need a man in their lives? The romance genre has added more types of romance and characters to cater to all the different lifestyles in the current world.

However, God is still the Creator and His Word is still true and still says a true marital relationship consists of one man and one woman. I believe there is a need for both Christian Romance and Clean Romance. I know that the romance genre sales have exploded since 2020. Why? Because romance readers need “happy endings”.

I also believe that plenty of women in the real world, like the career women and the single moms, get tired of being strong and independent. They get tired of “doing it all” and would truly appreciate a strong, yet gentle, loving man to rescue them and give them a break, to allow them to have time to rest.

Maybe the only place they can find such a man or a break and rest in their life, is through reading a romance novel where there is a male character who offers his strong shoulder to the female character to  lean on, cry on, or simply rest on. A male character who will make some of the decisions for a while or take the kids to the park for a while, maybe even cook dinner occasionally. A Christian Romance novel can give them a taste of this type of relationship. It can offer them something to consider, to possibly make a change in their lives—to make better choices or to just know they have options and don’t have to “do it all”, or maybe our stories will simply give them the break they need and help them find their hope and strength in the Lord.

More importantly, we know that God made women more emotional then men, so even the strongest female CEO needs to release her emotions and appreciates a man with a good listening ear who can encourage her and who will hold her in his strong arms.

We may see lots of crazy in the world right now and wonder if there is a place for our romance novels. The good news is “yes”, there is a need for strong male heroes in romance as well as a need for good Christian themes running through our romance novels. There are hungry readers out their looking for, not just a happy ending, but also for hope, and we, as Christian Romance authors can give them what they need and are looking for.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Some Interesting Facts and a Statue of Classic Author, Charles Dickens

Did you know Charles Dickens’ full name was Charles John Huffam Dickens? I didn’t, and Dickens is one of my favorite authors. His classic stories of life in England in the 1800s were full of wonderful characters, some of which the stories were named after – Oliver Twist, Nicholas Nickelby, and David Copperfield to name a few. But, there is also Pip, Miss Havisham, Fagin, and many more, including Little Nell.

Little Nell is the beloved little girl in Dickens’ novel, The Old Curiosity Shop. Charles Dickens published a weekly serial in 1840-1841, called Master Humphrey’s Clock. In it, he published two novels, one of which was The Old Curiosity Shop, along with short stories. The Old Curiosity Shop was such a popular feature of Master Humphrey’s Clock, that readers in New York stormed the wharf when the ship bringing the final installment arrived in 1841. Then The Old Curiosity Shop was published in book form later in 1841.

Charles Dickens was born in Portsmouth, England. Dickens’ novels tell of the injustices of the times he lived in, often featuring the brutal treatment of the poor in a society that was divided by levels of wealth.

Dickens’ family also faced poverty and Charles was forced out of school at twelve years of age to take a job in Warren’s Blacking Warehouse, a shoe-polish factory. He was treated badly by the other boys working there. Then his father was imprisoned for debt. The humiliation of these two circumstances hurt Dickens profoundly and became his deepest secret. However, they obviously provided an unacknowledged foundation for his fiction.

Charles Dickens published 15 novels, one of which was left unfinished at his death, The Mystery of Edwin Drood.

I would like to call your attention back to Little Nell because there are three statues of Charles Dickens in existence – one in Sydney, Australia, one in his hometown of Portsmouth, England, and one in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. The one in Philadelphia is the oldest of the three. It was created in 1890, and is the only one that also depicts one of his characters, Little Nell from The Old Curiosity Shop. Before it was moved to Philadelphia, this statue won two gold medals at the Chicago’s World Fair of 1893 and crossed the Atlantic Ocean twice. It was sculpted by Francis Edwin Ewell, who was the one to send it to Philadelphia.

There are two interesting things about the statue being placed in Philadelphia: 1) Charles Dickens, in his will, stated he did not want any memorials, and 2) the fact that the statue is in Philadelphia, a city that Dickens disliked. He said, of Philadelphia, “it is dull and out of spirits.”

Funny that, despite Dickens dislike of Philadelphia, the statue has become a symbol of the neighborhood, and both, Nell and Dickens are crowned with flower wreaths frequently, including each year on Dickens’ birthday, when a party is held and there are readings and dancing.

If you are a Dickens’ fan, like me, I also highly recommend the movie, “The Man Who Invented Christmas” from 2017, and I’d love to know which of his classic novels is your favorite.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Romancing Your Story

How Candlelight Brings Out the Romance in Your Characters

What is it about candlelight that makes a candlelight dinner so romantic?

First of all, did you know that when someone finds another person attractive, their pupils dilate and the other person finds that attractive as well. Studies have shown that men who viewed a photo of a woman with larger than normal pupils didn’t later recall her dilated pupils, but described her as “more feminine,” “soft,” and “pretty,” whereas, they described the woman with small pupils as “hard,” “selfish,” and “cold.” However, women who preferred “nice guys” were drawn to men with medium sized pupils and women who preferred “bad boys” were attracted to the men with larger pupils. No matter what size pupils you’re subconsciously attracted to, candlelight can help because low lighting, like candlelight, causes pupils to dilate and can duplicate those attraction signals.

Candlelight also reduces stress and helps us relax, making it easier to drop into a romantic mood because you aren’t feeling tense or rushed. Candlelight casts a glow in a small area, so even in a restaurant, if you are seated in a room lit only by candles on the tables, you feel as though you are in your own little private space.

The man in your romance novel can create a perfect romantic scene, whether it’s a candlelit dinner, picnic, or movie night.

Long, slender, taper candles on the dinner table between him and his leading lady. Placing scented candles around the living room and choosing a romantic movie for the two of them to watch as they snuggle up to each other on the sofa, or if you’re writing about a married couple having problems and he’s trying to rekindle the romantic feelings they had for each other in the past, he could fill a couple crystal bowls with water and add a floating candle to each and set them in the bathroom near the tub and run a bubble bath for her, then he can prepare dinner that will be eaten by candlelight in the dining room. He could follow the candlelight dinner with a couple scented candles burning in a room with open floor space, play their favorite love songs, and ask her to dance.

Scented candles can also add something to the scene as we are all sensitive to smells, and certain smells can trigger memories, like an ocean breeze scented candle reminding her of that romantic evening walk along the beach on their honeymoon.

The next time you need to add a romantic scene to your romance novel, or your fantasy or other genre novel needs a little something, remember all the things that candles can add to a scene or to a romance through their light or their scent.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Romancing Your Story

Food, Feeding, and Romance

Have you ever wondered why a guy gives the girl he’s romantically interested in a box of chocolates?

Or maybe you’ve seen the main character and his love interest in a restaurant in your favorite movie sitting side by side, and when the food comes, they feed each other and you’ve wondered why is this supposed to be romantic?

Some people and some scientists have actually done research on the connection between food and romance, as well as why feeding your date is considered romantic. Would it come as a surprise to you that what they found is that it’s all in our heads?

That’s right – food and love both produce hormones, like dopamine, norepinephrine, which make us feel good, and our bodies produce a chemical stimulant, phenylethylamine (PEA). The combination of these hormones and the chemical stimulant make our bodies excited and alive.

Can you guess what one of the main foods associated with love and romance is?

Well, here’s a hint: Americans annually purchase almost 60 million pounds of this stuff in just one week, and February 13th  is the biggest day of the year for sales of this food.

Need another hint? Look at the picture above. That’s right – chocolate!

Christian romance writers aren’t interested in taking our leading man and lady beyond the bedroom door, so knowing that chocolate and some of the other foods I’ll mention in this article are considered aphrodisiacs doesn’t matter to us. However, using some of these foods in our romance scenes can help build the romantic interest our leading man and lady have for each other.

There are differences between chocolates. One important difference between high end and low end chocolates: high end chocolates have an intense flavor and luscious feeling in your mouth. The taste experience of chocolate can be a dreamy, sensuous experience which is why a high end chocolate can make people feel romantic, and a gift of chocolate is a way to show a loved one that you value them.

Other foods known to possibly build romantic feelings are: avocados, tomatoes, oysters, spinach, pumpkin seeds, peanuts, crab, bananas, asparagus, chilies, figs, mangoes, peaces, pistachio nuts, almonds, cheddar cheese and berries with whipped cream.

Now let’s look at food sharing.

Research conducted to determine the levels of food sharing that express to observers how romantic you are with your significant other:

    1) Not letting someone have your food at all – no intimacy.

    2) Letting someone else eat off your plate shows a deeper connection than one you would have with a stranger.

    3) Sharing food that someone else has already touched increases the romantic level from 74 percent to 90 percent.

    4) Physically putting food into your partner’s mouth shows the highest level of intimacy and leads observers to assume there is a romantic involvement.

    Other research determined that food sharing stems from a parent sharing food with their child. Parents have a natural tendency to feed their child which shows a strong bond between parent and child. It’s natural to share food with blood relatives. However, studies show that sharing food outside your bloodline means the person you are sharing food with has a significant meaning to you.

Now you have foods and food sharing that you can incorporate into your romance stories to build the bond between your leading man and woman. Or if you need to build some conflict, have them share food in a restaurant while the town gossip or the third person looks on.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

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Development of the Piano-Part 2

Bartolomeo Cristofori accomplished a great technical achievement when he created the piano, but the piano did not become popular right away. It took time and some more improvements, but those improvements were made by other men.

Gottleib Silbermann of Germany read about Cristofori’s piano and decided to attempt making a better one. He added a hand-operated lever that allowed the player to lift the dampers off all the strings which allowed them to continue making sound even when the person playing lifted their fingers from the keys. Gottleib Silbermann showed his piano to Johann Sebastian Bach, and Bach felt that the high notes were too soft in comparison with the low notes. After some more adjustments, Silbermann gained Bach’s approval and Bach became on of the first piano salesmen, dealing in Silbermann pianos.

                              

Why were the early pianos so quiet? Well, first of all, they only had five octaves, but the main reason was that they were built with wooden frames which prevented the strings from being stretched very tight. Another problem was that after pressing a key, the pianist had to wait for the hammer to fall back before being able to play that note again, making it nearly impossible to play repeated notes quickly.

However, none of this prevented pianos from becoming popular. As a matter of fact, during the Classical and Romantic Eras, composers used such pianos to create great works, and though the music of these pianos was softer and quieter, Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart wrote many of his compositions specifically for the piano.

Eventually, French inventor, Sebastian Erard created a way for the piano keys to throw the hammers right after a press of the key, so that pianists could effectively play a repeated note immediately after by pressing the key again. This gave composers in the Romantic Era the ability to write music that included faster rhythms.

Eventually more octaves were added to pianos which gave them a greater range of tones. During the late 18th century, piano making became quite popular in Vienna. Viennese-style pianos had wooden frames, but featured two strings per note.  

During the 18th century, Alpheus Babcock was born in Dorchester, Massachusetts and apprenticed to a piano maker and later entered into a partnership with his brother, and the two of them started making pianos in Boston in 1810. Babcock continued through a series of short-term jobs for companies and more partnerships while building a reputation for himself as an expert piano maker. His pianos were known for their excellent tone and finish. During the Industrial Age in 1825, Alpheus Babcock created a one-piece cast iron frame for his pianos which allowed him to pull the strings tighter, providing more tension on the strings.

However, the iron-framed pianos became the dominant piano after 1850 when piano producers, such as Steinway, produced an iron frame based on Babcock’s design. The louder, richer sounds of these iron-framed pianos is the wonderful sound of the pianos we enjoy today.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

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Writing Romance

What About Commitment?

Let’s face it. The majority of romance readers, including me, prefer a happy ending. But does that mean  the “fuzzy feelings” last?

Of course, anyone who has fallen in love and had a romantic relationship, whether short term or long term, married or not, knows that … no, the “fuzzy feelings” do not last long term, and … “happily ever after” doesn’t mean there will be no bumps in the road or struggles to overcome.

So, does a happy ending in a romance novel require “happily ever after”?

I don’t think so. But I do think our romance stories are missing an important piece. How does a couple remain “in love” for the long haul? They take their wedding vows – their commitment to each other – seriously, and they don’t give up during the difficult times.

What happened to commitment in our society? Sadly, our world has become a place where we get most of what we want quickly and easily, and this has bred expectations for quick and easy satisfaction in every aspect of life. Also, with the high divorce rate and many churches now accepting divorce, I think too many people go into marriage with the idea that “if it doesn’t work out, there’s always divorce”.

Commitment isn’t really talked about in today’s society or in many marriage ceremonies. Could Christian Romance authors possibly have an effect on today’s society or make them start thinking more about commitment again? I believe we have a responsibility to try. 

I believe we need to give commitment more of a spotlight in our fiction.

I’m not saying, “forget the romance”, but let’s show what commitment means. Imagine having your male and female main characters experiencing some conflict in their relationship. Of course, every story has to have some conflict.

But what would happen if we showed our hero thinking about how much he really loves this woman, in the midst of the conflict, and show his willingness to do the hard work—to find a way to work out the conflict and show he’s in this relationship for the long haul. Or, you can do the same through the female character or, better yet, through both characters.

I know every woman loves a warm, fuzzy, feel-good romance story, but I think there is a place for romance stories to include some of those fuzzy feelings while being more realistic. I believe showing how a relationship can actually last for many years because of the commitment of one or both people can add something to the story – something that will not only surprise the reader, but also give them inspiration, encouragement, and hope in their own relationship.

If you’ve seen the 2008 movie, “Fireproof” starring Kirk Cameron, you know what I’m talking about.

That movie, and Kirk’s insistence to have his real life wife be the one he kissed in the movie, instead of the actress playing that role, was a powerful example of commitment. There must be a need for such stories as that movie grossed $6,836,036 in its opening weekend and went on to gross over $33 million dollars in the box office and over an estimated $50 million in DVD sales. It also inspired couples to try the “Love Dare” to save their own marriages.

This doesn’t mean that if you write a good love story emphasizing commitment, you’re guaranteed a best seller, but your story may inspire some woman or some couple to value the importance of commitment in their relationship.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

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History in the Making

Development of the Piano (Part1)

As a writer it is important to get your details right, even in fiction. I am working on final edits of my first historical romance novel and recently, my critique partner pointed something out in my manuscript. I had written that my main character noticed that the house he was visiting had a piano twice the size as the boarding house he lives in. My story takes place in 1860, so my critique partner wanted to know how big the bigger piano was because “twice the size” seemed to be too big.

Her questions prompted me to do some research on when the piano was invented and what size they were in the 1860s, and my research led me to write and share this article with you. It just might be something you need as you write your historical novel, novella, or short story.

In the Book of Genesis in the Bible, we are told that Cain had a son Enoch. Enoch had a son Irad, and Irad had a son Mehujael. Mehujael had a son Methushael, who was the father of Lamech. Lamech had two wives, and his wife, Adah gave birth to Jabal, the father of those who live in tents and raise livestock. Adah also gave birth to Jubal, who was the father of all who play the harp and flute. (Genesis 4:17-21 NIV)

Through the generations and many years, the harp eventually inspired men to create more instruments with strings that could be hammered or plucked.

Hammered Dulcimer

Hammered Dulcimer by Min Che from Pexels

During the Renaissance, many new things were being discovered and invented in Europe. Some of these things were musical instruments such as the hammered dulcimer, pictured above. The hammered dulcimer had strings stretched tight across a wooden box. The strings were tuned to different pitches depending on how tight each was stretched. To play the hammered dulcimer, a person holds two soft-covered hammers and strikes the strings.

In the fourteenth century came the clavichord, a European stringed keyboard instrument that became known as the mother of all keyboard instruments. The clavichord had an extremely low volume which made it unsatisfactory for large gatherings or playing with other instruments. Therefore, it was mostly used in private residences.

The Harpsichord

Created in Germany in the late 1300s – early 1400s. The harpsichord looks quite similar to a small piano.

Handle’s Harpsichord (Photo by 134213 from Pixaby)

The harpsichord was played by hitting keys on a keyboard. A bird quill or piece of hard leather, both known as a plectrum, would pluck a string. When the harpsichord player hits a key, the key lifts a jack, which pushes the plectrum against the strings, causing the string to be plucked. As soon as the key is released, a damper cuts off the vibration, thus cutting off the sound of that string.

The Piano

Invented by Bartolomeo Cristofori, an expert harpsichord maker. Ferdinando de’ Medici, Grand Prince of Tuscany hired Cristofori to build a harpsichord for him. Cristofori built the first piano around 1700, but Cristofori called it a gravicembalo col piano e forte, (the harpsichord that plays soft and loud). Cristofori called his later instruments pianofortes in 1732, and eventually, this instrument became what we know as the piano today.

Cristofori’s keyboard did not look like the piano keyboard we know today, as he made the natural keys black and the accidentals white. Sebastion LeBlanc later suggested switching the black and white keys. Three of Cristofori’s pianos that date from the 1720s still exist today.

Many men have since built pianos, but all have followed Cristofori’s actual workings and simply made improvements such as adding pedals as well as their choices of materials for the piano case. Size became another variant with the grand piano, baby grand, and upright piano.

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History in the Making

The History of Writing Tools

Do you remember writing your first story idea or, maybe even your first manuscript, with pencil or pen and paper? Maybe some of you still prefer to write with pencil or pen and paper. Writing has an interesting history and has changed many times over.

Let’s take a look at the history of writing tools.

Over the centuries, texts have been discovered on materials such as cave walls, papyrus, clay, and silk. Writing was scraped or engraved on cave walls with stone tools. Many of the findings on cave walls included pictures, some of which were colored, using minerals like charcoal. A sort of pointed tool was also used to carve writing into clay tablets and on pottery.

Quill Pens

If you’re a history fan, I’m sure you’ve seen quill pens. Maybe you’ve even used one. They were popular in the United States in Colonial times, between 1600 and 1800. However, they required time to make and maintain. These pens were made from feathers of geese and other large birds. Also during this time, birch bark was sometimes used as a tablet because of the high cost of paper, as well as the fact that the available paper was dark and rough. During this period, ink was often made from nutgalls—abnormal outgrowths on trees caused by insects. These nutgalls were removed, mostly from oak trees, then bruised in water with a rusty nail to make a colored ink. “Plummets”—thin pieces of lead—were used to draw lines to write on.

Following the Revolution in the United States, from 1800-1850, writing books, (similar to what we call notebooks), with ruled lines came into use, and quill pens were replaced with steel pens. People, especially school children, also began using lead pencils.

Dip/Steel Pens

Although dip pens with metal nibs were used in Ancient Rome, they didn’t become popular until they were mass produced in the 19th century. Inventor, Daniel Schwenter, created a pen using two quills that held ink instead of having to be dipped in an inkwell. During the 19th century, in France, the first fountain pens came into use, and people liked that they were less messy and had no need of being dipped into an inkwell repeatedly. Near the end of the 19th century, ballpoint pens were introduced, and after some updates, became more practical and cheaper than fountain pens. The Japanese invented felt tip pens in the 1960s, and these were soon followed by markers and highlighters.

Rollerball and Gel Pens

As a child of the 70s, I remember the rollerball pen’s arrival. Also similar to ballpoint pens, but did you know that the rollerball pens used a water base paint, while ballpoint pens used an oil base paint?

The popular gel pens, still found in stores today, were first manufactured and sold by Sakura Color Products Corporation of Osaka, Japan in 1984. These are also similar to ballpoint pens, but use a water base pigmented gel instead of ink. No wonder, my left-handed writing smears what is written with gel pen!

If you’ve been writing long enough, maybe you remember writing your first story idea, or even your first manuscript, with pencil or pen and paper. But, aren’t you thankful for today’s technology, where you can simply type your stories on a keyboard, and erase and correct errors with some extra touches of a few buttons?

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at: Website: kellyfbarr.com MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Can You Write Christian or Clean Romance That Isn’t Boring?

Let’s face it, even Christian men and women want to feel that spark of attraction in a romance novel or their own relationship. God designed us to be attracted to each other, but there are definite limits we aren’t supposed to cross before we marry.

Some readers prefer their romance novels squeaky clean. Other readers want their romance novels to express some physical attraction.

What do I mean by squeaky clean?

These novels don’t go farther than the man and woman finding each other physically attractive to their eyes, and maybe near the end of the novel they’ll feel a spark or tingle at the other’s hand brushing their arm. But throughout the novel, they don’t hug or kiss. Maybe they hold hands once or twice.

So, in a squeaky clean novel, the writer has to really develop the characters’ personalities and they have to know what they are looking for in a person they would want to marry. These things have to come out in their dialogue and the activities they participate in with each other. That’s how they will eventually come to realize that this is the person for them without getting into any physical affection, or keeping it minimal like the spark when his hand brushes hers or the hug he offers when someone or something upsets her.

One other great way to show their attraction without the physical, is to have him protect or defend her in a situation. For example, he protects her from an old boyfriend showing up and grabbing her arm, demanding she talk to him. Or maybe he defends her when one of his friends says something negative about her.

Readers who like their novels squeaky clean find a man who will protect or defend a woman swoon worthy. They also enjoy when a man sends flowers or presents her with chocolates or a small piece of jewelry, or offers his coat on a chilly night, or opens an umbrella to protect them from a downpour.

Don’t get me wrong.

Readers who like novels with a little more physical attraction action also like the above signs that he cares. But they also want to feel the electrical spark between the leading man and lady, and they want to read about their hugs, caresses, and kisses and their desire for more, even though they refuse to cross that line until they’ve tied the knot.

The readers who want a little more physical attraction don’t want things to go beyond the bedroom door. They just want to know that when the time comes for these two characters to cross the bedroom threshold, there will be some fire, but they don’t want to read about it.

Your Christian or Clean romance novel doesn’t have to be chaste to please your reader. It just has to be either modest, sweet, or steamy as long as it doesn’t go beyond kissing and hugging. None of your Christian or Clean romance readers want to read about the sexual act. They just want to read about the physical attraction.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

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History in the Making

An 1800s Christmas

The Christmas season is a great time to discover and explore local history.

Historical Poole Forge was part of the iron industry in my local area of Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. It sits along the Conestoga River. I was invited to spend an afternoon at Poole Forge during the summer a few years ago. At that time, we only had access to the grounds, but what lovely grounds they are. The grounds are the current location for a community park in Caernarvon Township. The Township purchased the property in 2005. They are dedicated to restoring the beauty of the property while protecting its historical integrity.

They open the mansion and the Paymaster’s house and West Tenant house different times throughout the year for activities such as “Christmas at the Ironmaster’s” which my husband and I were able to attend this year. This event offers displays of Christmas trees, light displays, and a traditional Welsh bonfire.

As we walked through the beautiful four floor mansion, we were able to take in the festive sight of many Christmas trees decorated by local businesses and organizations, then asked to vote for our three favorite trees. It was quite a challenge to narrow it down to three choices.

In one room, four young people, dressed in period clothing, were playing Christmas carols on a keyboard, flute, violin, and glockenspiel as we were invited to enjoy some holiday treats and pause to listen to their music. The environment was not only festive, but it was like stepping back in time.

As we exited the mansion, I noticed some free pamphlets on a table and picked them up to bring home. As a historical writer, I love learning about historical places in my local area and was thrilled to find the one pamphlet gave a brief history about Poole Forge. The pamphlet informed me that the property dates back to the earliest days of our country while we still had relations with Great Britain.

In 1775 the property was purchased by an experienced iron master and so it became part of the iron industry in our local area. The property changed hands often throughout its history, but remained in the iron industry until 1852 when the industry faded in the area.

In 1859 a covered bridge was built on the property and still remains today.

I will enjoy trying to find out more about Poole Forge and the families that lived there throughout the years, and maybe Poole Forge will be the setting for one of my future novels. I can envision characters walking through the mansion or working in the kitchen of the West Tenant house. I’m sure I will return to this historical site again.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at: Website: kellyfbarr.com MeWe: KellyBarr8

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Have You Considered Living History?

While experiencing a major event in life, have you ever stopped and thought about the fact that, at that moment, you were living history?

Last month was the 20th anniversary of 9-11, and as I read some of the news items of the day, it dawned on me that my youngest son had not even been alive on the day that the 9-11 events took place. So to him, it is a historical event and he won’t know or understand anything about it unless I tell him about it.

As I thought about that, I realized that when 9-11 happened, I was too busy being afraid of what was happening and wondering what I should do, to consider that what I was experiencing and living through, at that very moment, would become a historical event.

As I reflected back on my life, I realized there have been quite a few historical events that I lived through: July 20, 1969 the first man walked on the moon – I was just five years old but I remember watching that on T.V. with my parents. On January 28, 1986, like many other people that day, I sat, eyes glued to the television watching as Space Shuttle Challenger lifted off, carrying the first civilians to go into space, and just 73 seconds after liftoff there was an explosion that took the lives of all seven people on board and destroyed the rocket. I also remember hearing that the U.S. declared war on Iraq on Wednesday evening, January 16, 1991 on the radio after church, and the next morning, January 17, 1991 the Desert Storm/Gulf War began.

The four events listed above are the major historical events I remember, and not only do I remember them, but I remember where I was and what I was doing when they happened, and I remember how each of them affected me.

We are currently living through an actual chain of historical events: the Covid-19 pandemic, lockdown, a fraudulent election, and vaccine mandates.

Many writers have been told, “Write what you know.” Therefore, if you’re a history writer and you’re trying to figure out what historical time period or event to write your novel around, think about all of the historical events you’ve lived. The ones I listed in this article were big events, but there are also little events that happen in your neighborhood, town, or state. Consider the history you have lived and know best.

If you need more information to set your scene because you don’t remember exactly what your town was like during the historical event you choose, talk to friends, family, and neighbors. Many towns have a historical society or a public library that have historical information about your town.

Living history and historical information are closer than you might think.

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Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

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Romancing Your Story

Developing the Leading Man and his Lady

The man and woman who will fall in love in your romance story are your most important characters. Therefore, it is imperative that you know them inside and out and develop them throughout the story in a way that shows why they are drawn to each other, what makes them move from being drawn to one another to falling in love, and how do they know this will last.

How do you get to know your characters well enough to build a good love story between them?

First, you need to develop their back stories. What is his view on love and on the world. What is her view on love and on the world. How and why are each of them going to make the decisions they will make throughout your novel. These things are a part of their back stories—what happened to them, in the past, that makes them think, react, and make the decisions they do?

Romance relies on strong main characters and your reader engagement will depend on the chemistry between your leading man and his lady. Therefore, you need to make your protagonists convincing.

Building a character

Start by asking yourself the following questions:

Who is he or she?

What is his or her flaw(s)?

What is his or her lie or burden? This is the thing they carry around with them that influences and determines their view of the world.

These things have all come from their back story—things that happened to them in the past: hurt, rejection, abandonment, etc.

Every character needs a GOAL, MOTIVATION, and CONFLICT. Their GOAL is what he or she wants. Their MOTIVATION is why he or she wants that thing, whether it is tangible or intangible. Their CONFLICT is why they can’t get it—what is keeping them from getting what they want?

When it comes to conflict, there needs to be outside forces that add to the conflict, not just internal conflict. Otherwise, you may fall into the trap where they have a very simple misunderstanding. This will not last long enough or be strong enough to sustain the conflict necessary for a novel. External conflict can produce and intensify the internal conflict within the character and between the man and woman.

Character growth

You also need to develop your characters throughout the story—they have to have some kind of change from the beginning of the novel til the end. Use the interactions between the male and female to show their character development. Have them challenge each other and bring about change in each other through the conflict and bonding.

Changes from the beginning to the ending of your story will include growth in their relationship as they move from mutual interest and physical attraction to a deeper love. Physical attraction is not enough to sustain a relationship for the long haul. Use some of each character’s attributes or quirks to deepen their love; things like intelligence, wit, charm, humor, social status, etc.

Character development is necessary for a successful romance.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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An Unexpected Nugget

When doing research for a historical novel, you may find an unexpected nugget that could add some extra excitement, conflict, or an extra character you may want to include in your story.

While researching the town my main character lives in, in my WIP (work in progress), I found that a notorious outlaw had lived in that town as well. Though I have chosen not to include him in my WIP, I may include him in a future novel, either part of my current series or a stand alone.

It’s always wise to make note of unexpected finds in you research because they could be a valuable addition to your current work, or may invoke an idea for a future book.

If you choose to use an unexpected character or setting, be sure to research that character or setting in depth because it is important to portray them accurately in your work. Even though you may write historical fiction, you need to be sure any real life person or place is portrayed properly or your history knowledgeable readers will be upset and will let you know either through a book review or a personal email. You always want to keep your readers happy.

You may want to deliberately search for that unexpected nugget. You can begin your search by simply plugging a question, such as “what notorious people lived in the 1860s?” into a search engine and see what comes up. I will issue a word of caution here: do not rely completely on information you find on the internet, especially a site like Wikipedia, which is not always reliable. Also try to find more information by contacting a museum or historical society, or going to the library and looking for books on the subject.

I did an online search on the question from the previous paragraph and the following were the top ten articles that came up:

  • American History Timeline from 1860-1870
  • 1860 Fast Facts—History—U.S. Census Bureau
  • Famous and Infamous Census Records – History – U.S. Census
  • 1860s – the Hanneman Archive
  • The Living City | New York City>>1860s
  • Ozarks Gunfights and Other Notorious Incidents
  • List of Famous People of the 19th Century
  • List of Slave Owners – Wikipedia
  • ‘Dirty Old London’: A History of the Victorians
  • Infamous Mobsters – List and Notable Names – Biography.

If you are a historical writer, you most likely love history, so the above list has probably piqued your interest and you might want to rush off to check out at least one of those topics. But wait!

One more thing – books. You may find them at the library, but you will also want to keep your eyes open at used book sales and used book stores, as well as new book stores if you don’t mind paying new book prices. I have found several great gems for researching historical people. I have purchased them, and they now reside on my book shelf waiting for me to crack them open for a future novel.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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Hole-Hearted to Whole-Hearted and How to Get There

What hole is in his heart? What hole is in her heart? This is where your romance story begins. Both your main male and female characters—the ones that will commit to one another by the end of the book—need to have a hole in their heart they are trying to fill, or are resisting to fill, at the beginning of your romance novel.

Maybe he wants to find a lasting love but comes from a broken home. His parents divorced when he was young after a lot of fighting, and maybe they bounced him back and forth, or maybe one of them completely walked away from him after the divorce. These things cause him to believe that he isn’t lovable or that all marriages are destined for divorce.

Maybe she longs for a lasting love but has been hurt by more than one man she thought was “the one”. Maybe several men who seemed interested, loving, and kind turned into workaholics with no time for her, or verbally, emotionally, or physically abused her. Now she’s afraid to give another man a chance; unsure she could survive another bad relationship, leaving her with a bigger hole in her heart.

These two characters obviously struggle with an internal conflict.

When they are thrown together in your story, in whatever situation you choose, they may feel a physical attraction. They may think “this might be the one”, but their internal conflict is still raw, so an external conflict results. Each of them resist the relationship in some way, trying to protect themselves.

As time progresses and you continue to put them together through the setting or their circumstances, eventually one of them softens and warms up to the idea that this relationship might really work out.

The other one may still resist for a while, but sooner or later, they both soften and their love for one another builds to where they both believe this relationship isn’t like the one his parents had or like the previous relationships she had.

The hole in each of their hearts heals and they commit to one another.

This is one possible basic plot line for a romance story. Every romance novel needs a boy and a girl who want and need love. Maybe the hole in one of their hearts is something that causes them to believe they don’t have time for love and romance. But whatever the hole is will affect the relationship between them.

The romance plot also needs an external struggle because romance stories need conflict. Conflict is the driving force behind a romance story, and maybe the external conflict is the one I mentioned above, or maybe one of the men who hurt your female character comes back seeking another chance just when she thinks she may have some real feelings for the man you’ve recently placed in her life. There are many external conflicts you can use.

But in the end two characters who began hole-hearted, become whole-hearted.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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What Time is It?

When writing historical fiction, it’s important to be aware of your timeline. Timelines are significant in all genres of writing, but in historical fiction, they are imperative.

Why does your timeline carry so much weight? True history is becoming a thing of the past in most books and schools, so as writers who strive for excellence, we need to be sure the history of our novels is true and accurate. The truth and accuracy of your timeline is part of that—keeping historical events in proper sequential order and in the correct years.

How can you keep your historical facts in order, especially if you’re a pantser? As a historical romance writer who has always been a pantser, I have learned to become a “plantser” (that’s someone in between a pantser and a plotter). I research my time period and I make hard copies or handwritten notes of major historical facts and events, and I keep them close at hand as I write my novel.

Pacing is also an important part of keeping your timeline accurate. Determining how many historical events you want to include in your novel is key in creating your pacing. If you’re planning to create a series of historical fiction novels, you need to have a clear vision of what events will take place in each book of the series. You have to weave your fictional characters and story into that historical timeline and framework.

If you love including as many historical events as possible, like I do, this can become quite a challenge. You can collect so many historical facts and events that it can prove difficult to decide what to include in your story and what to leave out, which will also depend on your timeline.

The historical facts and timeline can be worked into every aspect of your story—the description of your setting, your characters’ clothes and dialogue. It doesn’t all have to come out in the plot. Painting your history throughout your novel brings balance and gives your readers a complete picture that allows them to experience a different time period as they are immersed in your novel.

What about your readers? Many people who read historical fiction read about their favorite historical time periods and already have a good bit of knowledge in regard to that time and its history. If you make an error in your historical facts, your readers will let you know, and that could be via a personal email or a book review posted on a prominent book site, either of which may not be kind and respectful.

As historical fiction writers, we should strive to create a story woven throughout historical events that satisfies both us and our readers.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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Romancing Your Story

Humoring Your Romance

I always say that a book that can make me laugh and cry is an outstanding book that will remain in my memory. I believe this is because a book like this evokes strong emotions within me – emotions that create two of the strongest emotional reactions.

As a romance writer, I think it’s easier to make readers cry than laugh in a romance story. Maybe that’s because I don’t consider myself to be a very funny person and so I don’t make an effort to put humor in my romance stories. However, as I have been working on my future novel, I found a touch of humor flowing naturally in one scene and later, through one character.

Therefore, I decided to explore how to write humor in a novel. I wanted to be sure these little humorous aspects in my romance novel would be written properly and well received by my readers. Of course, one of the first things I found was advice on reading romance novels that include humor.

Though I am not well-read in romance stories that include humor, I found one romance novelist that made me laugh and thoroughly enjoy her romance stories. Her name is Jen Turano, and she uses humor through her characters, whether it’s built into their quirky personality or things that they do. These seem to be two of the most suggested and, possibly, the easiest to write.

Other humor writing options include juxtaposition, hyperbole, alliteration, or an exaggeration from your own life experience. As writers, we often use metaphors, and one idea was to create a list of metaphors for something then use the most ridiculous one. However, this example was also issued with a warning not to use this trick too often or your readers may think you aren’t good at using metaphors. There was also mention of simply playing with your words.

When writing humor into your novel, think about your sentence construction. Stand-up comics generally use longer more descriptive sentences at first, while painting the picture. Then as they approach the punchline, their sentences become shorter and punchier.

The most important thing when attempting to add humor into your romance is to read what you write out loud, which can help you determine whether what you wrote is really funny or not.

Adding a little humor to your romance can add a sense of fun to your story, make an intense scene more bearable, lighten the mood, or allow your characters or readers a moment to breathe. Humor is a great way to connect with your readers or add a spark of fun to your romance.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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History in the Making

Using Your Research for More than Your Novel

Writing a novel is hard work and takes time. Writing a Historical Fiction novel may require more time and hard work due to necessary research.

Then there’s publishing. Whether you publish traditionally or indie publish, it takes time to publish the book and make sales. Let’s take a look at ways you can use your research while you wait:

1) Writing short pieces – you can purchase the current Writers Market Guide, the current Christian Writers Market Guide (or both) to find magazines that might be interested in an article about your research topic (i.e. the California Gold Rush). Then you will need to find the magazine’s website and download their guidelines. Be sure to follow their guidelines carefully because they will not consider your article if it isn’t written, formatted, and submitted according to their guidelines. You can do this any time during your novel writing process.

However, I don’t recommend putting the next two suggestions into practice until closer to the time of releasing your novel, six months to a year prior depending on how many pieces you can write and put into use. You don’t want to run out of writing subjects for these important items before your novel releases.

2)Building your audience and building your brand – I’ve been told many times that it is very important for a writer to have a presence on Social Media – specifically, Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. I’ve also heard that Pinterest is a great place to connect with readers. You can connect with readers on these sites by posting interesting things from your research. Be sure to connect it to your novel by giving them a small tidbit of information like revealing the name of your novel’s town and sharing history about that town.

  You can also create a blog and write blog posts about something you’ve researched for your novel. This is a great place to include pictures as well. You might write about men’s and women’s fashions from the time period of your novel and include a couple pictures showing some of the clothing from that time period.

3) Market your novel – You can write an additional story that connects with your novel and release it for a reasonable price or offer it as a free gift for purchasing your novel. It could be a novella about the backstory of one of your characters and how they ended up in the time, place, and/or situation of your novel. You could use a scene from your story to create Flash Fiction story, or maybe create a short story about one of your minor characters.

Any of these suggestions can put your research to good use and make it work for you as it builds your brand and/or audience or as it draws readers’ interest in your upcoming novel. Your research can serve multiple purposes and be an enjoyable endeavor, making all your hard work pay off.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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Romancing Your Story

Should Your Romance Contain a Trope?

In case you’re unfamiliar with the word trope, let’s define it. A trope is a character trait or plot line that has become commonplace. If you read romance, you’ve seen quite a few romance tropes. Some of the most common are: the love triangle – two men competing for the love of the same woman; forbidden love – (this one goes all the way back to William Shakespeare and his classic Romeo and Juliet), where the boy and girl are forbidden to love one another due to parental stipulations, or differences in status (he’s rich, maybe in line for the throne, and she is a commoner or comes from a family with no wealth); Mail-Order Bride; marriage of convenience; and the list goes on.

Now that you know what tropes are maybe you have a favorite romance trope or maybe you don’t like tropes because you prefer a unique romance story. No matter what you think of them, tropes are popular. Recently tropes have been getting a lot of attention. Therefore, including a trope in your book could be helpful in obtaining readership. That doesn’t mean your trope has to be predictable and “just like all the rest”.

If you’ve submitted any queries or studied what agents and publishers look for in a query, you’re aware that one of the questions an agent or publisher wants answered is: how is your story different from those already published in the same genre?

So, if tropes are so popular and used so often, how can you use a trope and still have an original story?

There are several ways, but the first thing you should do is become familiar with the popular tropes. For instance, a current popular genre is fairy tale Retellings. If you haven’t read any, this may be a good place to start to see how an author takes a popular trope and puts their own spin on it. I recently read The Rose Princess by Ivy Hollins, a retelling of Sleeping Beauty, and Ivy had several unique plot points that made her retelling distinctive, such as the Prince and the beauty having a unique link years before they first meet. This story was just as enjoyable as the original fairy tale.

When you consider which trope to use in your story, consider your purpose for using the trope. Are you using it because you know it’s popular and has been successfully used in lots of other romance stories? If this is your reason, you should reconsider.

Instead, start by considering how you want to present your story or what you want your character’s values or point of view to be. Then consider how to use the trope by putting your own spin on it. Think about how the trope will best serve your story. Use your own voice and your own plot. You can also use a bit of the expected before surprising them with your own unique details to create fresh characters and an unexpected twist to the plot.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

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History in the Making

The History of Your Characters

When we think of “historical”, we think the story is set in a historical time period, and many of us have a favorite time period – the Victorian Age, the Renaissance, the Old West, or any one of so many more. We imagine poring over history books, encyclopedias, or websites that provide information about the time period so that we can be sure the historical parts of our fiction stories are accurate.

What about the history of your characters? This is otherwise known as “backstory”. The history or backstory of our characters can be just as important, maybe even more important, than the history of our time period.

Just like people in real life, your characters need a history. You can’t write accurately portray a character without knowing their back story. Just like real people, the histories of your characters are important to who your character is. Their history has an effect on the character and personality of your character. It may even be important to their motivation and goals.

Therefore, whether you are a pantser, plantser, or plotter, you need to create a backstory for your characters before you write your story. The better you know and understand your characters’ histories, the more realistic and believable you can make them.

Do you have to create a backstory for every character? No, I wouldn’t say that. I would say it is most important to have well-developed backstories for your main characters, and at least a good idea of the backstories of the minor characters make regular appearances in your story.

Even though you need a thorough backstory for your characters, you won’t include all of their backstory in your novel. You will only include what you need for your readers to understand your characters.

For example, your twenty-eight year old female character is terrified of being outside in a thunderstorm. Why? Maybe in her backstory, when she was a little girl, she witnessed a tragedy that took place during a thunderstorm – maybe a tree struck by lightning fell on a relative and they were badly injured or killed, maybe she was raised by an abusive parent who locked her outside during a thunderstorm, or maybe lightning struck a tree stump near her and it burst into flames. I’m sure you can come up with more possibilities that would cause her to still be afraid of thunderstorms as an adult woman.

Why might this be important to the story? Well, maybe a thunderstorm begins quickly, with little to no warning, and her little boy is outside and she has to go out to bring him into the house or maybe she’s on her way home and there is no where to go to get out of the storm along the road she’s traveling and her only option is to get home.

I hope, by these examples, you can see how important your character’s backstory can be and how it can add tension to your story.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: https://kellyfbarr.com/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/kellyb_26

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