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Blog Tour Stop – Connie Wohlford

[author title=”Connie Wohlford” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/09/14-Connie-photo.jpg”]As a follower of Jesus Christ and one who’s deeply in love with the Word of God, Connie has been a Bible teacher and ministry leader in her church for many years.
She enjoys reading and especially study of the Bible, recognizing the value of and power of, books and other media in the development and lives of people, young and old. It’s Connie’s passion that others know and love God and His Word. She wants to do all she can to help equip followers of Jesus and build God’s Eternal Kingdom.
It is of upmost importance to her that her children and grandchildren are followers of Christ and she tries to encourage and guide them in that direction whenever possible. As she often says, “Eternity is a long, long time.” Her first book, “Joy Comes to Bethlehem,” was actually written for her grandchildren to accompany the little olive wood donkeys she got each of them while in Bethlehem, Israel.  
Connie and her husband, Guy, make their home in the New River Valley of Virginia which is flanked by the beautiful Blue Ridge Mountains. They also enjoy active membership in their home church.[/author]

What is the title of your latest book?

“He is the ONE”

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Tell us more about your book:

“He is the ONE” completes my trilogy telling the three things the Bible records that happened to Jesus as an infant. At the age of 40 days little Jesus’ parents take Him to the Temple to be dedicated to Yahweh. It’s there an amazing thing happens. The elderly man, Simeon, and the widow, Anna, recognize the infant, in Mary’s arms, as their long awaited Messiah− the Promised One of Israel!  
In “He Is The ONE,” the reader can share the surprise and wonder with Joseph, Mary, and bystanders when these strangers recognize Jesus as Messiah. What would you have thought if you’d been there to witness this event, recorded in Gospel of Luke?
Their faithful donkey, Gil, has accompanied the Holy Family to Jerusalem. While she waits outside the Temple, her thoughts turn to her own little one, Elpis, who’s back in Nazareth. On this day, Elpis’ jolly fun with her buddy, Buzi, turns into a painful tumble. Join in to see how the little donkey deals with her ordeal with her Mama so far away.   
Young and old alike take pleasure in gaining insight into these early days of the King of kings, artfully captured in the story and carried along through charming illustrations by artist, Molly Keller.

Why do you write what you do?

I’m passionate about God’s Word and the Gospel message it contains. The Bible is God’s representation of Himself and His Son, Jesus, to mankind. Most of what I write is about the Bible or has a Christian message. It’s my desire that others come to know and love Jesus and the truths in the Bible. I hope my writings will encourage and facilitate this end.
I write interactive Bible studies for adults and children’s story/picture books. My children’s books have Bible and life lesson themes.

What are you currently working on?

I’m currently working on an interactive adult Bible study of the Book of Colossians and a children’s chapter book compiling and expanding my trilogy about Jesus as a baby.

How does your work differ from other work in its genre?

Regarding my Bible study on the Book of Colossians, I’ve found that there are almost no studies on the Book of Colossians written in recent years. When I write a Bible study I go verse by verse, leaving no verse untouched along the way. I’ve found that most studies I’ve participated in do not cover every verse.
Regarding my trilogy about Jesus as an infant– I’ve found almost no children’s books about the Halakah ceremony and Dedication of Jesus. Also, these my books contain a captivating parallel donkey story.
My other two children’s books are stories about a unique animal, friendship and working through trials. I think, and have been told by many, they are very unique.

How does your writing process work?

I always pray for God’s guidance before writing (during as well). Typically I write, by hand– pen & paper, in my loft study, keeping my iPhone handy if I need the internet. There, I also have a number of reference books and other resources.
When I reach a satisfactory stopping point or must stop because of a time restraint, I take those pages to my PC (downstairs) and, when I have time, type what I have hand written, editing and expanding as I go.
Once, I’ve completed a chapter or a “day” of the Bible study, I print that portion. Usually the next day, in my loft, I proof and edit. Then I go back to the computer to make corrections. I do this editing process a couple times (or more).
Then when I’ve completed a week of the study, I print again and edit again over and again until I’m satisfied, for the time being.

You can find Connie online at:

Social Media and Blog: https://www.facebook.com/ConnieWohlfordAuthor

Website and Blog:  www.debracolemanjeter.com

Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/conniewohlf/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/ConnieWohlfordAuthor

Twitter: https://twitter.com/wohlford_connie

 

 

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Create. Motivate. Inspire. Support

3 Reasons to Get Busy

You paced around the house all day doing unnecessary chores. You read an article on writing. You rearranged stuff on your desk.

You thought about that novel or short story or article. You will get started—tomorrow.

An idea flits by and you think about writing it down—but your hand never gets the message to grab the pen. Whatever. There will be other ideas. Other opportunities.

If only you had more time. Less responsibility. A better writing space.

And so it goes…

So, what’s the big deal? Who cares if we squander a few writing-days waiting for inspiration?

 Here are 3 reasons for a writer to strap in and engage:

  1. Your readers are waiting. There’s a woman in the fight of her life—and with every chemo treatment her sword grows heavier. That devotion the Lord laid on your heart? This woman needs it. Now. Oh, you haven’t written it because you’re “just not feeling it?” Well, she’s feeling it. Every moment of every day. She’s a warrior—are you? And don’t forget the empty-nester, the overwhelmed mom of little ones, and the man contemplating divorce. God wants to use you to speak to them. So, um…get busy.
  2. You want to avoid a case of “writer’s misery.” We’ve all had it—that dreaded affliction called running-from-your-calling. Oh, we feel all noble—God called me to write but I just can’t break away from my responsibilities. I guess I’ll have to put my real-life on hold… Really. Well, you know what? Running makes you mean. And the meanness spills out and sloshes onto everyone around you. Remember the Jonah thing? I do. I’ve been there, suffered that. I was unbearable. There’s nothing more tragic than someone standing guard over their buried talent while they snap and growl at those who dare hand them a shovel. Enough already. Quit being mean.
  3. Your life depends on it.  Joy. Passion. Peace. All by-products of doing what you were created to do. God designed us for abundant, purposeful living. So, why do you waste time fighting those purposes? Stop it. If you’re like me, you prefer peace over chaos, and long for joy over misery. Do the Toby Mac thing—speak/write life.

 

Are you ready? It’s been buried long enough. Put all your weight on that shovel, dig deep, and brush away the dirt-covered excuses.

Fire the laptop. Prime the pen.

Now.

Do it now.

 

[bctt tweet=”Nothing more tragic than someone standing guard over their buried talent while they snap and growl at those who dare hand them a shovel. #writer #amwriting”]

[bctt tweet=”Joy. Passion. Peace. All by-products of doing what you were created to do. #amwriting “]

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Uncategorized Write Justified

To Join or Not to Join – That’s the Rhetorical Device

Last month I introduced the concept of rhetorical devices. We started with a couple familiar devices that students of English would know if they’d been paying attention in school—metaphor, simile, and analogy. So much for the basics. Let’s explore a few literary tools whose names are far less well known, but that you’ve likely seen or used. You probably just didn’t know they had a specific name or function.Death_to_stock_photography_weekend_work (10 of 10)

Asyndeton

You may spot the technique in these sentences:

·         We came, we saw, we conquered.

·         The fair goers spent the day eating, walking, resting, riding, laughing.

·         God is relentless, personal, intensely private.

You probably notice that none of these sentences uses a conjunction (joiner) in a series of words or phrases. That’s asyndeton—omitting the conjunction in series to give a particular effect.[bctt tweet=” …asyndeton … steps up the pacing or rhythm and gives the sentence a punch, a more precise and concise meaning. #writer #writerslife”] It helps to convey a sense of spontaneity, immediacy, incompleteness.

Notice how leaving out the conjunction and in the third sentence, God is relentless, personal, intensely private, gives the feeling that the sentence is not complete, that there is more to God than these three attributes—a wholly appropriate feeling when writing about God.

Asyndeton comes from Latin and Greek, syndeton meaning connected; the prefix a renders it unconnected or without conjunctions. An asyndeton can be used in a series of words, phrases or sentences, or between sentences and clauses.

Conversely, polysyndeton is the repetition of a conjunction. While it is structurally the opposite of asyndeton it has a similar effect of multiplying, growing energy, and building up.

·         Armed with diapers and bottles and formula and blankets, the new parents left the hospital.

You get the sense that these folks are embarking on a monumental task, don’t you?

Polysyndeton is most effective when used with three or four elements. Notice the strength piling on the ands gives to Spencer Tracy’s pro-evolution argument in the 1960 movie, Inherit the Wind:

“Can’t you understand? That if you take a law like evolution and you make it a crime to teach it in the public schools, tomorrow you can make it a crime to teach it in the private schools? And tomorrow you may make it a crime to read about it. And soon you may ban books and newspapers. And then you may turn Catholic against Protestant, and Protestant against Protestant, and try to foist your own religion upon the mind of man. If you can do one, you can do the other. Because fanaticism and ignorance is forever busy, and needs feeding.”

[bctt tweet=”Both asyndenton and polysyndeton are useful tools in giving greater power to your words, establishing a rhythm that creates a feeling of rising action, giving the impression there’s more that could be said. #authors #writing”] But leave it to a truly inspired writer to skillfully shift from polysyndeton to asyndeton.

Behold, the Lord maketh the earth empty, and maketh it waste, and turneth it upside down, and scattereth abroad the inhabitants thereof. And it shall be, as with the people, so with the priest; as with the servant, so with his master; as with the maid, so with her mistress; as with the buyer, so with the seller; as with the lender, so with the borrower; as with the taker of usury, so with the giver of usury to him (Isaiah 24:1-2 KJV).

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The Writer's PenCase

Writing Ideas–Part II Page Turners

How do you know your story is worth telling? How do you evaluate whether or not your idea is a good one? Will it be a “page turner” or a “book closer?”[bctt tweet=” Will readers stay up just to finish the book of your idea, or will they go to bed early? #pageturners #amwriting #writing ideas”]

In my first post on this topic, I talked about what I liked, what I looked for. I look for unusual things and people. I dig deep to look for the obscure, something that maybe needs to have light shone on it. I look to find the opposites in things, especially when I’m crafting a story. And I look for the extreme. I just read No Safe Haven, by Kimberley and Kayla R. Woodhouse. This is an extreme book. Kimberley and Kayla are a mother-daughter team, and they wrote a gripping suspense thriller in the extreme. A lot of Ronie Kendig’s military suspense books also hold the extreme. These books are page turners.

In my Craftsman class, our first lesson was how to get writing ideas and where to find them. We are a media-driven society, so use your media to help you find interesting and compelling ideas. One thing I love about FanFiction.net is that there are so many story permutations on the same theme that everyone tells a different angle. I first heard of FanFiction while watching JAG, several years after the show ended on network TV. FanFiction readers and writers came up with a bunch of ideas about sixth season cliff-hanger “Adrift.” If this had been a book, it would have been one of those page turners you can’t put down.

JAGcoinIf you’ve never seen JAG, it’s about navy lawyers. The main character, Harmon Rabb, Jr. is a former Top Gun-type pilot turned lawyer for the Judge Advocate General’s office. At the end of the sixth season, the woman he’s secretly in love with for years is about to marry another man. Harm promises to be at the wedding, but decides to squeeze in his “quals” – his qualification flights to continue pilot certification. The cliffhanger has Harm crashed in the ocean in the middle of a severe tropical storm. That summer, numerous ideas about how “Adrift” would end abounded on FanFiction. None of them got it right. One, if I remember, was sort of close, but the creativity of the different scenarios was interesting to read, especially since I knew how it ended. He is finally found because Colonel Sarah “Mac” McKenzie does a sort of psychic exercise that helps people know where to look. She postpones her wedding until Harm is fully recovered from hypothermia. This is the nutshell version. The final scene of “Adrift” takes on a different twist. (spoiler) Mac is adrift in the rain without comfort from fiancé or best friend. The creativity from writers speculating how they would end that episode is the point.

What about you? [bctt tweet=”How do you evaluate whether an idea is a good one or not? What’s a page turner for you? #pageturners #amwriting #writingideas “]

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Journeying through the Writer's Life

13 Things that can Steal Your Writing Joy

Writers have a love/hate relationship with putting words on paper. Sometimes it’s difficult because of the process. Other times we sabotage ourselves. Today I’d like to share my list of things that steal your writing joy.

[bctt tweet=”13 Things that Steal Your #Writing Joy – via @EdieMelson” via=”no”]

  1. Comparison. We each have our own process, our own strengths, and our own path. Comparison will draw you away from being yourself.
  1. Avoidance. The longer we stay away from the process of writing, the harder it is to go back. Not writing will steal away the joy of writing.
  1. Negative Voices. We all have them—those negative voices that live in our heads. We say thing to ourselves that we’d never say to another person. So quit encouraging the voices and just write.
  1. Perfectionism. We all dream about being perfect. But some of us mistake that dream for a goal. We agonize over the fact that we’re not perfect. It’s time to quit and just enjoy the words.

[bctt tweet=”Perfectionism is one thing that can steal our #writing joy – via @EdieMelson” via=”no”]

  1. Fear. Writers and insecurity, it’s so common it’s a cliché. But that’s the thing with clichés, they’re so often based in truth. When we focus on fear, we can lose the happiness we feel when we write.
  1. Time. Yep, busy schedules can come between us and the joy of writing. Finding time to write is a myth, instead we have to carve it out, fighting for every minute we spend putting words on paper.
  1. The Past. We can hold onto past mistakes and missteps and let them steal our writing joy. Learn from the past, but don’t drag it along and let it keep you from the happiness ahead.
  1. Solitude. Believe me, I do fit the stereotype of introverted writer. But that doesn’t mean I should to travel this writing road alone. If I spend too much time along, I loose perspective. I need companions for encouragement and support.
  1. Unreasonable Expectations. This goes beyond perfectionism. So often we have expectations about how this writing life is going to work. We need to get to know the industry and learn how things work.
  1. Lack of Variety. Focus is good. But it’s hard to know where we should focus our writing when we haven’t tried anything new. Writing the same thing (articles, devotions, fiction) day in and day out can make our writing stale. Take up the challenge of something new and you’ll often find joy is the outcome.
  1. Yes. Yep, saying yes to too many things, people, expectations, etc. can come between you and the joy of writing. As writers, we have to find the will power to say no.
  1. Toxic Relationships. Not having traveling companions can steal our joy, but so can choosing the wrong companions. Pick your writing buddies with care or you may find they are the ones keeping you from enjoying the journey.
  1. Forgetting Why You Started Writing in the First Place. It’s easy for the dream to get buried. I keep a reminder above my desk. It’s a few words that sum up what I believe to be God’s call on my life. He fashioned me to process and share life through the written word. When I go back to that, everything else falls into place.
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Mr. & Mrs. Character

Mr. and Mrs. Character,

Characters have always been my favorite aspect of writing. I create stories for my characters rather than characters for my stories. That’s just my style though.

But whatever your style, here are a few ways to build your characters.

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            Establish the basics. What’s he look like, where does she live, is he good or bad? Cast your characters. Think, “If this were a movie, who would play my character?”

Different celebrities are great, but they aren’t the only sources. I do a lot of people watching, and sometimes there’s just that one guy that looks like he just walked out of your world. Even other characters could inspire what your character looks like.

     It’s important to be able to visualize your peeps, but you shouldn’t describe every one of their features in your story. Essentially, unless there’s something important about them, it doesn’t matter what color the eyes are. I’ve read so many books where there was an extensive description given, but by the middle of the book I had my own image for the characters. Be careful not to use the mirror cliché. We don’t need to see your character seeing himself through a piece of glass.

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This guy is an inspiration to me.

    Get to know them. You should know your characters better than they know themselves. Their deepest secrets, their petty wishes, what they do on their down time…what they want for lunch. If you don’t have a connection with your character, then you’re not really done.

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Two of my original characters, Mr. Kabuto & Char.

     Quirks, addictions, and occupations—connect with your character. Your characters are special. Take time to make them so. What sets your villain apart from every other thug on the street? Perhaps she has a kid, or he’s trying to quit drinking. Maybe your character’s completely unnatural, cold, calculated, and depressed but their favorite musician is Michael Jackson or Taylor Swift.

Sometimes, the protagonist isn’t likeable in the beginning. Your readers will grow to like him…if they stick around. What might win them over quickly? Something surprisingly admirable–they tip extra. Something relatable–they miss their sister. Or they share a pet peeve with the masses–they don’t like when people smack their gum. Little things like that draw readers in and make it all that much easier to relate to your character, even if they’re not really likeable. On the other hand, your character might be too good to be true. Give them flaws. Every person struggles with something, be it drugs, rage, eating habits, depression, or self-image. Everyone has problems. Know the inside scoop.

[bctt tweet=”Music is one way that I understand my characters best. #Playlists #Teenwriters”]

     Music is one way that I understand my characters best. When I’m writing a character or brainstorming what s/he is like, I listen to music that creates a certain mood. For lighthearted characters I listen to lighthearted music; same goes with angry or sad characters. Making custom playlists for certain characters helps to give you an inside look at how it feels to be them. I’m always looking for new music, and I have several playlists for general characters. I’m not bragging, but they’re there for the follow. It’s on Spotify. My Playlists I recommend for writing are:

  1. Why Can’t I Dream About Food
  2. Fantasy & SciFi
  3. Explore the Grey Forest
  4. Lupivils
  5. Child of Light
  6. Transistor
  7. (And for all you Zelda fans) Zelda

     Characters are amazing and downright cool! Have fun dreaming them up, and make a new friend.

     This is how I see things through my lenses. Comment below and tell me what you see. Be it music or character ideas. Whatevs.

     Thanks to my bro for taking that picture of me. Also special thanks to me for drawing that other picture. Stay classy, folks.

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A Pinch of Poetry

Keeping Poetry Simple

One of my goals as a poet is to make poetry practical and less intimidating for writers while respecting it as an art form. Maybe that’s why I get a little irritable when I see poets going to great lengths to make their poetry enigmatic.

I’m not saying that we should write greeting card poetry or Mother Goose poems. And I’m not implying that poetry should be an easy craft.

What I mean is that in the very act of writing a poem, an artist is trying to convey a message to a reader. If the reader walks away baffled and frustrated, what purpose has been accomplished?

Complexity and mystery have a crucial role in crafting the poem, but they shouldn’t be the reason people avoid it.

Of course, part of the enjoyment of poetry is figuring out the artistic secrets hidden within the words. But it shouldn’t take a doctorate in linguistics to excavate the meaning.

Because poetic trends come and go kind of like the style and color of jeans that’s in for the year, I have a proposition.

Let’s make poetry simple again.[bctt tweet=”Let’s make poetry simple again. #poets #poetry”]

Yes, I’m swimming against the complicated wave that contemporary poetry seems to be surfing. Maybe I’m kind of like my hero William Wordsworth when he started writing British poetry that everyday people could understand to rebel against the sophisticated language and concepts of his predecessors.

I, too, believe poets need to write so that people can experience it and understand it at the same time.

Poetry should always push your writing and creativity to its limits. Since poetry is an art, we have to keep in mind that it should be approached with respect and effort.

Consider William Carlos Williams “The Red Wheelbarrow.”  This  unusually short poem is recognized as a brilliant work of poetic art.

Isn’t the simple beautiful?

The poet intricately paints the image of a rain-glazed, red wheelbarrow, sitting near some chickens. The first words “so much depends” along with the imagery of rain creates a solemn mood so you know someone’s very life is affected by this simple everyday object.

Williams’ renowned piece proves that a uncomplicated poem can create a powerful image and mood.

Another one of my favorites is John Updike’s “January.”

In four succinctly crafted stanzas, the poem captures the beauty of a snowy winter day. Everyone can relate to the short gray days of winter when the sun seems distant.  The poet’s language invites us to imagine the artifacts of winter, such as the lacey, barren trees and a frozen landscape.

What I’d really like writers to realize about poetry is that a simple poem can be just as moving as a more complicated one.  Complexity definitely has it’s place in structuring the poem and creating powerful imagery and mood, but it shouldn’t rise through the surface to create confusion.

Just remember that simplistic poetry–like a piece of art– can still radiate with sophistication if you use your words and techniques effectively.

Disclaimer: you might not get a book contract by taking my advice on keeping your poetry simple. But maybe together we can turn the tide.

I’d love to hear your opinion. Do you prefer complexity or simplicity when it comes to poetry? Tell me below.

[bctt tweet=”Simple poetry–like art–can radiate with sophistication if you use words and techniques effectively. #poetry”]

 

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Storyworld

Storyworld Governance: A Necessary Evil

The people in your world need governance. I’m sorry. I wish I could make it untrue, but a believable ruling system exists in virtually every fantastic world. The elven child in your young adult novel will eventually run into an elder or deputy. The four-man crew of an isolated space station will require a leadership structure. And even the lone hero occasionally needs to visit civilization to stock up on supplies.

So how do you craft a government? First of all, don’t get too overwhelmed, since you can craft it as you go as I wrote a few months ago. But the first principle to remember is this: Governments exist to ensure the interests of the governing bodies, not the governed. This has been true throughout all of human history.

[bctt tweet=” Governments exist to ensure the interests of the governing bodies, not the governed. #sadbuttrue #amwriting” via=”no”]

Good Governance – A rarity of the modern era

If you’re allowed to read this website and have the freedom to even consider writing a book, you may think my statement is overreaching. After all, you’ve been taught that governments exist to secure the rights of the governed, right?

Wrong.

In most western countries, we are privileged with brilliantly crafted documents called constitutions. In essence, they limit the power of politicians and hold them accountable to the people on a regular basis. Rulers continue to act in self-interest, but those interests (namely, power) rely on popularity and benevolence. In other words, good governments constrain the self-interest of the ruler to the well-being of the public.

[bctt tweet=”Good governments constrain the self-interest of the ruler to the well-being of the public #wisdom #takeitforgranted” via=”no”]

So if you want to create a realistic and stable society, or if you want a world in which the government plays little role in the daily lives of your characters, your fictitious country will need something to limit the power of those in charge. This doesn’t mean you need to go into details about the nation’s founding documents. In fact, if it isn’t relevant to the story, please don’t! But keep it in mind as you craft your world, because eventually your characters will interact with the laws of the land.

Note: A small group of people (e.g. a settlement, a space station) can sometimes get around this formalized power-limitation because the man in charge has a much more visceral threat before him. Specifically, if he doesn’t allow others to do their job well, his own living conditions worsen. Plus if he overextends his power, the populace may just kill him off, so good governance remains in his best interest.

Declining Governance – A violent transition

On a long enough timeline, even the best republic will eventually be found in the hands of a power-hungry zealot with enough popularity to bypass normal rules. You see this in Rome’s transition from republic to empire, Germany’s Third Reich, and of course, the end of the Republic in Star Wars.

The other option is complete economic collapse due to decadence and ignorance. Asimov’s famous Foundation trilogy shows this in sad detail, but it was seen earlier when the Roman Empire imploded from financial and military strains.

If your storyworld persists long enough, remember this other principle: no government lasts forever.

[bctt tweet=”No government lasts forever #whatarelief #scary” via=”no”]

Generally Speaking

If you’re feeling overwhelmed, don’t worry too much. Regardless of the setting, most western readers assume a western culture, 20th century rule of governance unless you say otherwise. Taxes are mandatory, theft and murder are prohibited, and the average citizen can expect a degree of protection from powers foreign and domestic. If this is not the case in your world, chances are likely you’ve already given governance a great deal of thought because it plays a larger role in your story. We’ll look at that more in detail next time.

 

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Bestsellers

Bestselling Author Interview – Alton Gansky

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Alton L. Gansky is the author of 25 novels and 9 nonfiction works, as well as principal writer of 9 novels and 2 nonfiction books. He has been a Christy Award finalist (A Ship Possessed) and an Angel Award winner (Terminal Justice) and recently received the ACFW award for best suspense/thriller for his work on Fallen Angel. He holds a BA and MA in biblical studies and was granted a Litt.D. He lives in central California with his wife. www.altongansky.com

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Can you share a little about your recent books?

My last two traditionally published books are nonfiction: 60 People Who Shaped the Church and 30 Events That Shaped the Church. Both are written for the person in the pew. While basically history books, I focus on the people and the times more than dates. Both books are published by Baker Books. Although I’ve written many nonfiction books, these were a bit of a departure for me but I very much enjoyed the process. Readers seem to be enjoying them.

I’ve also been writing “serial” fiction with three other novelists: Bill Myers, Frank Peretti, and Angela Hunt. The series is called THE HARBINGERS. Each book is a novella told from the view point of a different character. Each story stands on its own but is also a part of a larger plot. Fun and challenging. My first contribution is The Girl. My next story is in development.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

At heart, although I’m pretty much a loner, I am a communicator. For many years, I communicated through the spoken word then I added writing. At first I thought I’d be doing nonfiction books, but that wouldn’t come to be for years. My first half-dozen books or so were novels. The bulk of my 44 books have been fiction. I find it challenging and gratifying. Most writers will say they write because they have to. I’m part of that number. One reason I write is to learn. My education has benefited from all I’ve had to learn to churn out a believable book.

It’s a little known fact that you are the co-director of one of the greatest Christian writing conferences, the Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference (BRMCWC). How did you come to direct it, and why did you want to?

Whatya mean little known fact? Okay, I see your point. I’m the director of the Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference. It meets each May in North Carolina—which is on the other side of the country from me. The conference was started by Yvonne Lehman who led it for something like 25 years and did a super job. She asked me to take over 6 years ago. She still leads a conference for novelists (BRMCWC is a general writers conference covering a wide range of writing outlets). I said yes.

What do you love most about BRMCWC?

The people. Hanging out with established and new writers. The location. It’s a lot of work but once the conference begins it’s a fun place to be. I’m helped by co-director Edie Melson, and contest director Eva Marie Everson. I couldn’t do it without them or without the help of Melissa Inman, the conference director for Ridgecrest Conference Center.

How do you transition from writing fiction to non-fiction, and vice versa?

Writing my first nonfiction (Uncovering the Bible’s Greatest Mysteries, Broadman Holman) was a real challenge. I had to throw away the first chapters. Transitioning from fiction writing to nonfiction was difficult and forced me to use a different part of my brain. It was like starting over as a writer. After awhile I got the hang of it and have continued to try to improve that aspect of my writing. I’ve done something like 10 nonfiction books now and really love the art form.

Do you use any of the same principles to write non-fiction as fiction?

Yes. Of course, there is much less dialog so keeping things flowing is always a challenge. There are principles that are the same in writing fiction and nonfiction: write tight, never forget the reader, keep things moving. I study the best nonfiction writers and try to learn from them.

How has your background as a pastor influenced your writing?

Writing for the Christian market is freeing. Some think it is confining because the writer avoids bad language, graphic sex, etc. I find writing for the Christian market allows me to build three dimensional characters: mind, body, and spirit. Often in the general market, secular publishers get nervous about spiritual content. Not all of course, but many. I remind myself that I write for the person in the pew, not academics or the world in general. I don’t have a problem with the general market. Most of what I read comes from secular publishers, but I understand the Christian worldview. I speak the language and that allows my readers to understand me.

Is it easier for you to speak or to write?

The only advantage to speaking is that the preparation time is less. Still, it is an important art form and powerful tool of communication. I don’t think one is easier than the other. Just different.

What advice would you give to speakers who want to become writers?

If a person is doing a good amount of speaking, then it is a natural next step to add books or articles to his/her efforts. Most speakers what “back of room” sales (books, audio, whitepapers, etc.) for additional income. I’d start by writing about something that fits the speaking topic but that I may not be able to fit into a presentation. The listener is already dialed in the subject and will probably want more information. Printed material will serve them well and the speaker will develop writing skills in the process.

How long have you been writing? And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract?

My first novel came out in 1996 but I was working on it long before that. I used to write video scripts and ads for businesses. I also used to publish a small magazine and did most of the writing, so I’ve been writing for publication for over 25 years.

How long does it take you to write a book?

It varies. I’m pretty speedy once I get started. I wrote one novel in six weeks. I don’t want to do that again (it was a contract thing). I like to have four to six months. I’ve had a couple of years where I wrote four or five books in a year.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

It varies depending on when a project is due, how much time I’m spending on the Blue Ridge conference, and other factors. I spend the better part of a day at the computer. I used to work six days a week but I’m trying to trim that down some.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

Nothing worth mentioning.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

Seeing my first novel. Seeing my first nonfiction. Seeing people I’ve mentored published. Having publishers ask me to write for them (rather than me asking them to publish me.)

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

Publishing is a business run by people and occasionally a writer can be mistreated, cheated, etc. I’ve only had a couple such events.

Which of your books is your favorite?

That’s like asking which of my children I love more. The answer depends on the day and on which direction the wind is blowing.

Who is your favorite author to read?

In fiction, Dean Koontz has been a mentor to me. The man can write. In nonfiction, Malcolm Gladwell comes to mind.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have listened too?

Don’t try to sound like a writer, just be a writer.

No one ever hit a homerun from the dugout.

Writing is putting words on the page; great writing is taking words off the page.

What is the single greatest tool you believe a writer should have in his or her toolbox?

Humility.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection?

Rejection is part of the writing life. Almost every writer, even professionals, have ideas rejected. It comes with the territory. I knew nothing about writing when I started my first novel. I sent it to a pay-to-read agent—I didn’t even know how bad an idea that was. It was rejected, something for which I am very grateful. But instead of being proactive, I reacted. I put the book on the shelf and let it sit for five years. That is one of the dumbest things I’ve done. Another new writer, Jack Cavanaugh, shamed me into taking it off the shelf and reworking it. I’ve been writing books ever since.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

That is difficult to answer. Of course, I like the protagonist of my first two books, Adam Bridger. I like the guy so much that thirty or so books later, I gave him a supporting role in my last novel, Wounds. I think my other favorites would be Captain J.D. Stanton. I did three books with him: A Ship Possessed, Vanished, Out of Time. The Perry Sachs books (A Treasure Deep, Beneath the Ice, and Submerged) are some of my favorites, since they have a strong male cast and appeal to male reader.

Where do you get your ideas?

I think it is Dean Koontz who answers that question, “I get my ideas from a small, mom and pop shop down on the corner.” Ideas just come to me. I stew on them for awhile wondering if the idea would make it as a book. There is no simple answer to this question. Sometimes I see the characters first; other times I see the plot first. If the idea won’t leave me alone, then I try to flesh it out.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writer’s make?

Trying to sound like a writer. Some want to sound like Fitzgerald or Hemingway. That’s nonsense. Those people are often in love with the idea of being a writer instead of being in love with the writing itself. It’s the writing that matters. It is the writing that touches lives. Value the writing and the reader above yourself.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

It is difficult to break-in. That’s true for many professions so there’s no reason to lose heart. I suggest going to writer’s conferences that allow the writer to pitch to agents and editors. I don’t say this because I lead such a conference, but because I’m seeing greater success among new writers who get face-to-face with an agent or editor. If I wanted to become, say, a film writer, I’d start going to film writing conferences to learn the ropes and to meet decision makers.

Check out a selection of Alton’s books here:

http://www.almostanauthor.com/bestsellers-books/

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The Efficiency Addict

Picturing Your Characters

As writers, we do many things to capture what drives our characters. We’ll complete questionnaires detailing their likes and dislikes, create a complete family tree, and of course, analyze their goals, motivations, and conflicts. These are useful tools. However, sometimes we just want to SEE our characters and inhabit their world. When a visual aid is needed, here are three ways for picturing your characters lives:

The Wall Board

This old school method is still quite helpful. Hang a board filled with pictures of your characters and setting(s), and it is constantly before you as you write your piece.

Tips for your wall board:

  • Use foam board instead of poster board. Foam board is stiff and can be leaned against a wall. Poster board will curl over time and fall.
  • Divide your board into sections. In the example below, the top is for main characters while the bottom covers the setting. Remember, to fully capture a character, you need to see them in your story’s environment.

Character Board Layout to help you picture your characters in your story's setting.

  • Look for pictures of your characters in clothing catalogs or fashion magazines. Not only will you capture your character’s style, you’ll also have a nice description of everything they’re wearing. This is great for dressing a character who’s style is not your own. FYI – you can go online to see many companies’ catalogs or request a paper version be sent to your home.

Pinterest Boards

If you’re on Pinterest, you have a ready-made electronic format for researching your characters. Create a board for each of your main characters and pin away with everything that makes them unique.

Tips for your Pinterest boards:

  • Make your character boards secret. You don’t want others to see these wonderful people you’re creating until your story is done.
  • Use Pinterest to research special topics for your story. Beyond boards for your main 2-3 characters, you can also have boards researching a specific location, time period, event, etc. Below is a board I keep on the 1930s. When I look through that board, I not only see information but also the colors, style, and feel of the period.

Pinterest for Writers - Create a secret board dedicated to an time period, event, or setting.

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Bonus: Once your book is sold, you can share your Pinterest Board with the cover artist and marketing group. They’ll immediately have a feel for your characters and the world these people represent.

Scrivener Character Pages

If you’re already using this writing software, Scrivener has a whole section devoted to character research. If you’re unfamiliar with Scrivener, you can see a demonstration video of this software here: www.LiteratureAndLatte.com.

Items of note within Scrivener:

  • This program comes with a basic character template you can customize for your story.
  • You can insert pictures or website links to go along with your notes.
  • Your character profiles stay with your story. When you open your story file, all your character notes open with it. As you write, your can easily reference or update your character notes because everything is with your manuscript document.

Now that you can see your characters, I’m sure there is a lot for them to do. So, get back to writing. Their stories are waiting!

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Dear Young Scribes

10 Teen Authors who Landed Book Deals

Although I don’t believe every teen writer should strive for publication, let’s face it: More and more teen authors are landing book deals these days.

Writing is a form of art—just like dance, theater, and music. Teens have become successful in each of these industries. Why should the writing industry be excluded?

So if you’re a teen writer, don’t become discouraged by the naysayers. Besides, several teens authors have landed book deals, such as:

1) BETH REEKLES

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 17
  • Debut novel: THE KISSING BOOTH
  • Publisher: Random House UK
  • Route to publication: Wattpad.com
  • Film adaptation: In the works

2) KODY KEPLINGER

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 18
  • Debut novel: DUFF
  • Publisher: Poppy
  • Route to publication: Literary agent
  • Film adaptation: Yes

3) CHRISTOPHER PAOLINI

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 19
  • Debut novel: ERAGON
  • Publisher: Self-published, then Knopf
  • Route to publication: Self-publishing
  • Film adaptation: Yes

4) STEPH BOWE

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 15
  • Debut novel: GIRL SAVES BOY
  • Publisher: Text Publishing
  • Route to publication: Literary agent

5) S.E. HINTON

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  • Age when debut novel published: 18
  • Debut novel: THE OUTSIDERS
  • Publisher: Viking Press
  • Film adaptation: Yes

6) SAMANTHA SHANNON

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 17
  • Debut novel: THE BONE SEASON
  • Publisher: Bloomsbury
  • Route to publication: Literary agent
  • Film adaptation: In the works

7) LUCY SAXTON

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  • Age when debut novel sold: 17
  • Debut novel: TAKE BACK THE SKIES
  • Publisher: Bloomsbury
  • Route to publication: Literary agent

8) CAYLA KLUVER

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  • Age when debut novel published: 15
  • Debut novel: LEGACY
  • Publisher: Self-published, then Harlequin Teen
  • Route to publication: Self-publishing

9) KAT ZHANG

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  • Age when debut novel published: 19
  • Debut novel: THE HYBRID CHRONICLES
  • Publisher: HarperCollins
  • Route to publication: Literary Agent

10) ALICE OSEMAN

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  • Age when debut novel published: 19
  • Debut novel: SOLITAIRE
  • Publisher: HarperCollins Children’s Books
  • Route to publication: Literary Agent

Keep writing. Don’t become so determined to snag a book deal that you rush the process of learning and growing. Instead, write because you can’t not write—then you can move on to submitting to professionals when it’s time.

Who knows? You could become the next teen author I add to this list!

(PS: If you are an aspiring teen author and would like to grow in your craft and boost chances of publication, check out this creative writing mentorship program I created just for you!)

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Blogging Basics

What’s Your Blogging Personality?

Remember the insecure days of adolescence? We changed looks, styles, and personalities as we tried to figure out this important question: Who am I?

Back in the day my hair styles vacillated from straight to curly and from Farrah-Fawcett wings to teased up bangs. Some days I was the outgoing cheerleader and other days the quiet bookworm.

When it comes to blogging, it is important to choose a personality that fits you. Your topics may vary, but readers depend on your persona to remain consistent.

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What’s Your Blogging Personality?

Which one of these personalities best fits your purpose and writing voice?

The Expert

Is your blog tied to expertise you have in a subject? Are you an authority with experience and knowledge to share? Are most of your posts informational? Are people coming to your for answers and information?

The Reporter

The reporter conveys facts and information in a journalistic style. Do you comment on current events? Is your focus to share information about what’s happening?

The Friend

The friend comes along side with a conversational tone. Friendly and empathetic, do you share confidences and build relationships?

The Storyteller

The storyteller master’s the art of story. Posts have a narrative influence and pull the reader into the midst of something happening. Stories are an effective way to entertain, to evoke emotion, illustrate points, teach lessons, inspire changes, and even to sell ideas or products.

The Helper

The helper shares a wealth of practical information and how-to details. Filled with ideas and tips, the helper becomes a go-to source for projects and advice. Generally, the Helper has a friendly, you-can-do-this tone.

The Motivator

The Motivator has the ability to move people to action and change. Motivators build energy and create movement in readers. Flavored with positivism and inspiration, these personalities are popular with blog readers.

The Cheerleader

Cheerleader’s create enthusiasm and build confidence in readers. We’re in this together and You can do it are trademarks of the cheerleader’s influence. Similar to motivators, cheerleaders help readers achieve success and reap practical benefit.

The Marketer

Presenting information and benefits, marketer’s engage audiences with the aim to sell a product or  build an organization. Today’s marketing bloggers cultivate relationships, offer free incentives, and build loyalty in order to effectively convert traffic into sales.

The Analyzer

Similar to the Reporter and the Expert, Analyzers fall more into the informational vein of blogging. Opinions, surveys, reviews, and research are a few of the tools preferred in this style of blogging.

Not sure what your blogging personality is?

New bloggers often try out different personalities and styles before settling into a consistent voice. This is a natural part of the development of a writer. Give yourself time to discover your blogging personality. If you aren’t sure about your blogging persona, ask for feedback from people you trust to give an honest opinion.

Another helpful tip is to evaluate the personality and style of your favorite bloggers. Can you pinpoint a consistent personality? How do they convey personality–through attitude, tone, language, topic, emotion, information? As you learn how other writers show personality, you will learn new ways of sharing your unique voice.

Effective bloggers develop their personality, voice, and style with consistency. A well-developed blogging voice builds trust with readers who have chosen to follow your blog. [bctt tweet=”People read blogs for a variety of reasons, but a strong, consistent personality keeps them coming back.”]

 

What’s your blogging personality? What blogging personalities do you enjoy reading?

 

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Grammar and Grace

Apostrophes Rule!

Let’s talk about apostrophes today. They’re little floating dots with tails that cause major problems for some people.

Apostrophes don’t have to be scary, however. Here are some easy rules to follow so that you can apply an apostrophe with confidence.

  1. Apostrophes are used in contractions in place of the omitted letter or letters:

You are  =  You’re

I am  =  I’m

He cannot   =  He can’t

She could not  =  She couldn’t

They will  =  They’ll

It is  =  It’s

  1. Apostrophes are used to show possession:

The scout’s badge—the badge of the scout

The girl’s book—the book of the girl

*If you have more than one thing possessing something, here’s what it looks like:

Three boys’ coats were left in the lobby. (Make the noun plural first, then add the apostrophe to show     possession.)

The children’s teacher arrived late.

  1. Apostrophes aren’t used for the following possessive pronouns or adjective:

Hers

His

Ours

Theirs

Yours

Whose

Its

Those last two words trip up a lot of people. Notice that its is a correct word. It’s is also a correct word, BUT they are not interchangeable. Whose and who’s both are correct in different applications.

Here’s an easy way to check your sentence for the correct usage:

  1. It’s going to rain today =  It is going to rain today.
  2. It’s rained all day =  It has rained all day.

Both are correct.

  1. The bear licked it’s paw. WRONG!

Remember—it’s is a contraction. When you see it’s, read it as it is. Does the following sentence make sense?

The bear licked it is paw.

NO!

The bear licked its paw.

Yes!

The same logic can apply to whose and who’s.

  1. Who’s going to the party? =  Who is going to the party?

Yes!

  1. Who’s car is parked on the lawn? =  Who is car is parked on the lawn?

WRONG!

  1. Whose car is parked on the lawn?

CORRECT!

Apostrophes don’t have to be intimidating. Follow these three easy rules, and you won’t have to wonder if your apostrophe is hanging in the right place.

You might even find yourself correcting someone else’s.

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Publishing Perspectives

Handling Editing With Grace

1461260062_7c3bf62f2e_oWriting a book can be hard work. Then you polish it: more hard work. Then there’s the hard work of finding a publisher and getting a contract. Ah, at last you can rest from your travails, right? Nope! Lots more hard work ahead, I’m afraid.

Be wary of any publishing house that takes your book to print without doing an editing pass themselves. Even if you paid for editing from another service. Each publisher will likely have their own style preferences that require an editing pass. In addition, they employ editors whose job is to (gasp) edit your book to make it the best it can be (in their opinion, which the house values as evidenced by employment). Beyond the standards of grammar and punctuation, each editor will have their own approach to polishing dialog, point of view, character and plot arcs, and narrative. No book is perfect. Ever. Even after it’s published.

Handling this editing can be emotionally difficult. It can feel like criticism, and sometimes not even like constructive criticism. Your book may have already been critiqued by your writing friends. You may have already paid for professional editing. And yet here is your baby, all marked up with comments and suggestions. You may wonder if you have made a mistake in choosing to work with this publisher.

Don’t interpret edits as a personal commentary on your story, your writing, or you as a person. The editor is simply attempting to improve your book according to their experience and their understanding of what will work in the market. Yes, perhaps editors could occasionally phrase their comments more tactfully. Just keep reminding yourself that edits are not meant as a personal attack, and that encouragement is not necessarily the primary purpose of the editor – that’s mostly the job of your friends, family, and agent.

So if receiving edits makes you feel depressed, try these three steps.

  • Take a step back. When you first receive the feedback from your editor, take a deep breath and a quick look to see how extensive the work will be. Then close the file and step away for at least 24 hours.
  • When you do return to work and start dealing with the edits, try to detach yourself a bit. Edit as if you are working on someone else’s book. When you feel the emotions getting high again, take a break until you can detach.
  • Remember that wording suggestions are just that – suggestions. You are not likely required to simply accept the words that the editor has inserted/deleted. If you don’t like the exact changes the editor made, figure out what the editor is trying to achieve and then fix the problem in your own way. If it’s not obvious why the editor made changes, definitely ask what they were looking for. You may thus learn how to improve your writing, but you will definitely learn more about what the editor likes and does not like.
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Write Justified

Life is Like…

Rhetorical questions don’t require (or deserve) an answer. Do they?

But how about those rhetorical devices—those figures of speech that bring our writing to life. They are the spice of the English language that engage readers, tickle the taste buds of their imagination, and persuade.

Over my next few posts I’ll be covering the familiar and not-so-familiar rhetorical devices that pepper good writing. There’s even a few that you’ve probably encountered, but didn’t recognize as rhetorical devices and very likely are not familiar with their names.

Comparison is a favorite rhetorical device and it comes in at least three forms:

·         Simile compares one object to another. It generally uses like or as. Like for noun comparisons; as for verb comparisons.

Gramma’s hands shook like a fluttering leaf as she opened the long-awaited package. (noun hands compared to noun leaf)

A smile spread across her face as slowly as honey dripping from a jar. (verb spread compared to dripping)

 ·         Analogy is a useful way to compare a difficult or abstract concept with something more familiar or concrete. Simile and analogy may overlap, but a simile is generally more creative, used primarily for emphasis or effect. Analogy fills a more functional role, often explaining an abstract concept in concrete terms, and thus is often more extended.

Forest Gump’s analogy comparing life to a box of chocolates gives us a great visual for a complex concept. Who hasn’t surveyed a Whitman’s sampler, studied the inside cover to determine which foil-covered confection satisfies their sweet tooth only to discover that what you thought was a chocolate covered caramel was really a chocolate covered cherry. Yeah, life is like that. You can’t always tell how something is going to turn out by appearances.

·         Metaphor compares two different things by stating that something is something else—without the use of like or as. Often you can spot a metaphor by the to be verb.

 The late summer thunderstorm was a snarling, angry dog, grabbing its victims in its teeth, shaking them violently before losing interest and moving on to the next county.

 Or this line from Shakespeare: The eyes are the window of the soul.
The Bard uses familiar objects—eyes and windows—to say that the eyes are to the soul as windows are to a house. I see what’s really inside a person—their feelings, passion—when I look into their eyes.

You see what these comparisons are doing? They are giving the reader a visual, playing into their imagination. And giving your reader fresh imagery or a new perspective makes your writing more memorable and persuasive.

A word or two of caution. Be careful about overusing these figures of speech or mixing metaphors. I think you’ll get the point from these illustrations, drawn supposedly from actual student papers.

She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that sound a dog makes just
before it throws up.

Her pants fit her like a glove, well, maybe more like a mitten, actually. (This one also should be a warning to avoid clichés.)

She was a couch potato in the gravy boat of life, flopping dejectedly on the sofa. –

 Here’s a tip: if a metaphor makes you snort, you should probably reconsider and rewrite.

You can find more humorous figures of speech at: https://writingenglish.wordpress.com/2006/09/12/the-25-funniest-analogies-collected-by-high-school-english-teachers/

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Romancing Your Story

WHAT CONSTITUTES A ROMANCE?

How many of you are reading this article under protest? “I don’t write romances,” you say. Well, you might need to stick around as I clarify the word romance for you. “Not necessary,” you say? “Everyone knows what a romance is,” you say? Okay, humor me.

Merriam-Webster defines a romance as, “a love story, especially in the form of a novel.” “Ha! You say! Just as I thought.” But wait, there’s more.

Dictionary.com defines romance as “a novel or other prose narrative depicting heroic or marvelous deeds, pageantry, romantic exploits, etc., usually in a historical or imaginary setting.” That might make, say, most of the stories of King Arthur and his knights romances! Still not convinced?

Merriam-Webster also defines romance as, “based on legend and involving the supernatural.” Is anyone else thinking The Lord of the Rings? What about Star Wars? The Christmas Carol (I mean three ghosts)?

Merriam-Webster has a third definition, “a prose narrative treating imaginary characters involved in events remote in time or place and usually heroic, adventurous, or mysterious.” Whoa, Hunger Games just popped into my mind.

This is my final defense. Dictionary.com defines it as “indulging in fanciful or extravagant stories or daydreams.” There it is friends; isn’t that really the definition of any fiction writer?

There is a method to my madness. All of the above was meant to be a humorous way of impressing upon us as fiction writers that there is at least a grain of romance in almost everything we write. But what I wanted us to really understand is that every contest out there gives you different categories, with different levels of romance, where you must determine where your book fits.

Let me tell you that, in my humble opinion, entering contests is an important part of writing. Whether published or unpublished there are contests to fit everyone. And whether you win or lose, if you realize that you are getting terrific feedback on your manuscript for very little cost, you come out way ahead.

I don’t know about you, but I’ve entered my fair share of contests and sometimes the hardest part is which category to enter my manuscript. That is the teaser for my next column. There is no excuse to skip it anymore because you don’t write romance!

I’d love to hear from your feedback on this article and/or questions we might be able to address for my upcoming contest column.

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Tour

Blog Tour Stop – Debra Coleman Jeter

[author title=”Debra Coleman Jeter” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/DCJeter-in-Theatre.jpeg”]A Vanderbilt University professor, Debra Coleman Jeter has published fiction and nonfiction in popular magazines, including Working Woman, New Woman, Self, Home Life, Savvy, Christian Woman, and American Baby. Her story, “Recovery,” won first prize in a Christian Woman short story competition, and her nonfiction book “Pshaw, It’s Me Grandson”: Tales of a Young Actor was a finalist in the 2007 USA Book News Awards. She is a co-writer of the screenplay for Jess + Moss, a feature film which premiered in 2011 at the Sundance Film Festival, screened at nearly forty film festivals around the world, and captured several international awards. She lives in Clarksville, Tennessee, with her husband.[/author]

What is the title of your latest book?

THE TICKET.

Tell us more about your book:

When her father is given a ticket that wins the state lottery, Tray Dunaway thinks her life is about to change. And it does. It is 1975, an ordinary year for a seemingly ordinary Southern family. Like thousands of teenagers around the country, Tray longs to be part of the popular set at school. She’s growing too fast, and her clothes no longer fit right.
The only person who understands is her grandmother, but the kids at school make fun of her when she wears Gram’s hand-sewn clothes.
Tray’s mother, Evelyn, lies in bed most days with a headache, and her bipolar tendency toward extreme highs or desperate lows veers more and more often toward depression. Then something extraordinary happens. A down-and-out friend of the family buys an extra lottery ticket. He gives it to Tray’s dad as a thank-you for driving him to Hazard, Illinois, where he purchased the tickets. And what do you know?
Pee Wee Johnson, who bought the ticket, believes he deserves a piece of the proceeds.  When he learns his view isn’t shared, he threatens to cause problems for the family and begins to show up unexpectedly at every turn.

Why do you write what you do?

I feel there is a need for Christian writers who write for non-Christian audiences, as well as for Christian readers. I like to write about relationships, be it family, friends, or romantic, with some suspense thrown in.

What are you currently working on?

I have two adult novels almost ready to go; they are set in the fictional town of Sugar Sands, Alabama, a small Southern beach town. I am also currently writing an ambitious saga about my grandmother’s life, which is based on the facts that I know, but fictionalized. I start when she is twelve and cover fifty years of her life.

How does your work differ from other work in its genre?

There are certain topics, certain words, and certain aspects of life that are rarely, if ever, addressed in Christian fiction. Anything sexual is typically avoided, and definitely anything explicit. When I started writing The Ticket, I was not planning to break this taboo. But as the novel unfolded in my head and on paper, it took on a mind of its own.

We all know that bad things can happen to good people. But do we want to read about them? Readers of a particular genre grow to know what to expect, and there’s a certain comfort in that. Yet the books that stay with us long after we finish them are often the ones that veer into an unexpected pathway.

Sexual abuse in its varied forms is way too common in our society. The victim may suffer repercussions throughout his or her entire life. Are we better off by pretending that our family is exempt from this risk, or by opening a dialogue about how to react if it should ever happen to someone in our family?

How does your writing process work?

Fortunately, my hours as a professor are fairly flexible. This allows me to start the day on certain weekdays by writing at least a couple of pages, although I aim for five pages. I can make up for this by doing my class preparation late at night, right before I go to bed. One of the challenges I faced in writing The Ticket was getting past inertia at the start of a writing day. For me, the first sentence of the day is almost always the one that comes hardest. The more I tell myself I need to get on with it, the harder it is to make my pen move (yes, I write the old-fashioned way using pen and paper). I didn’t discover any magic tricks here, though I tried copying a passage from a favorite novel a time or two. What I avoided was giving up for the day. Instead I would tell myself that I could always trash the pages later if they stunk, as I often suspected they would. Then I’d force myself to start moving my pen. As a part-time writer, I didn’t feel I had the luxury of waiting until later in the day. Usually, after the rough start, the words would start to flow. But not always. Some days I’d have to grind out every word. Later, though, I discovered surprises in both directions. When I would reread what I had written, the stuff I wrote when I felt inspired sometimes turned out to be lousy; and some of the most painfully written pages turned out to be pretty good. Also, I use Robert J. Ray’s book on writing, The Weekend Novelist, to provide a structure. In it Ray describes a fifty-two week program designed to produce a finished novel writing only on weekends. I didn’t follow his plan exactly.

You can find Debra Coleman Jeter online at:

Social Media and Blog: Book trailer:  https://vimeo.com/50187275

Website and Blog:  www.debracolemanjeter.com

Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/njjeter/the-ticket-a-novel/

Facebook:  https://www.facebook.com/debra.c.jeter

Twitter:  https://twitter.com/DebColemanJeter

Media page:  http://www.meaghanburnett.com/the-ticket/

Amazon Link: The Ticket Amazon page:  http://www.amazon.com/dp/1941103863/

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Talking Character

5 Tips to Deepen Your Characters

Take your characters deeper

All great writers understand the importance of creating well-developed characters, but how does a character go from predictable to unique? Here are five suggestions to deepen your characters, making them more interesting, realistic and memorable.

  1. Include a habit or two – We humans are habit-prone. We chew our fingernails, shove the hair out of our eyes, or always eat a banana and a yogurt for breakfast. Giving fictional characters habits not only enhances their interest but helps the reader recognize and interpret emotions. For example, your hero’s father always runs a hand through his hair when he’s upset, or the villainess cleans her glasses before making a decision. [bctt tweet=”Once you’ve established a habit, readers will take note if a character suddenly changes their normal patterns. #writetip”]
  2. Give them an unusual physical trait or handicap – What if one of your characters suffers from migraines, or is allergic to peanuts, or is confined to a wheelchair? Giving characters a physical hurdle to overcome not only tests their mettle, but can lead to clever plot points. Example: Juan Cabrillo in Clive Cussler’s Oregon Files novels has a prosthetic leg. At least once each novel that leg (or some tool hiding inside it) becomes significant to the storyline.
  3. Determine their love language – Whether your story is a romance or a family drama, communicating love between characters is important. But when it comes to expressing love, we humans don’t all speak the same “language.” If your hero understands one love language, and your heroine another, you’ve created opportunities for tension. How many stories can you think of where the main character’s most heartfelt need is to hear a parent actually say, “I love you?” Take that deeper by showing the parent did love their child, but showed it another way.
  4. Add a hobby or passion – Something outside the main plot that gives the reader a different angle on the character’s personality. If your main character is an amateur photographer, they might notice background details another character misses. If your heroine supports the local food pantry, readers might be more willing to believe it when she later decides to quit her job and go into missions. Example: Sam Gamgee enjoys cooking, so much so that he brings salt along on an epic quest. The ring would still get to the Crack of Doom without that detail, but what does it tell us about Sam?
  5. Violate a stereotype – Want to surprise your readers? Build a character that seems to fit a stereotype, then break them out of it. For example: a motorcycle rider in full leathers who goes to wine tastings—and knows what he’s talking about. Or a mousy-looking woman who works at the library, but is also a loud and opinionated soccer coach with three championships under her cleats. Go ahead, shake your readers up a bit; just make sure you’re not doing it for shock value alone. Find a way for it to enhance the story.

[bctt tweet=”Make your characters unique, but always remember: Story Rules! #amwriting #story”]

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Journeying through the Writer's Life

Sit Down and Write – 5 Tips to Help You Keep Writing

Writers have a love/hate relationship with the blank page. Whether it’s a white screen with a blinking cursor or the empty page in a notebook, we see it as the stuff of nightmares. The fears vary widely, ranging from thoughts of not being good enough, to not living up to the success of a previous manuscript. To combat this, we often resort to any and everything to avoid it. doing it. So today it’s time to quit with the excuses, sit down, and write.

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I know. It’s easy to say and hard to do.

As people who make up things for a living, we tend to be really creative. We can come up with dozens of reasons not to sit down and write. Here are some tips to move past the fear and jumpstart your writing.

  1. Set a timer. I don’t know about you, but I can push through almost anything for fifteen minutes. So I promise to write for a quarter of an hour, no matter how difficult. What happens is that after a few minutes the fear diminishes and the words begin to flow. After fifteen minutes, I no longer want to quit writing.
  1. Promise a reward. I have discovered that I can be bought. So I dangle that reward in front of myself and write through the agony to get what I want. Figure out what motivates you—chocolate, time with friends, shopping—and offer it as a self-reward for spending time pounding out words.
  1. Walk away. I know, it sounds like the opposite of what we’re trying to accomplish. But truthfully, being a writer is incredibly tough. If you can walk away, you should. If you are meant to be a writer, you won’t be able to stay away long. The words will draw you back. And when you return, you’ll be stronger and more confident that this is what you’re supposed to be doing.
  1. Set a date. Not an end date, a writing date. Round up a writing friend or two and meet to write. It doesn’t have to be an in-person date, you can meet online just as well. But having someone else who is counting on you makes a difference. It’s just harder to disappoint someone other than ourselves.
  1. Do it anyway. At times, the fear is bigger than any promised reward or other mind game. That is the point, for me, that the rubber meets the road. This is when I metaphorically square my shoulders and face down my fear. I push through whatever has stopped me in my tracks and force myself to write. It’s not fun, and there’s no promised reward at the end. But every single time I’ve done this, the act becomes victory. It’s made me stronger as a writer, and as a person.

These are things that have helped me. What would you add to the list? Be sure to leave your thoughts in the comments section below!

[bctt tweet=”Tips to help you push through when the #writing is hard – via @EdieMelson” via=”no”]

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Dear Young Scribes

5 Fun Writing Exercises for Teens to Spark Creativity and Develop Writing Voice

Thanks to my past teen self, I will never run out of book ideas. I spent those years writing pages of book/scene/character ideas—much of which were birthed through exercises that not only sparked my creativity, but developed my writing voice as well.

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Here are 5 of my favorite writing exercises for teens that can spark creativity and develop writing voice:

1. Write fan-fiction.

Have you ever reached the end of a book and wished that it would continue? Or maybe you didn’t like the way it ended and would like to create an alternate one.

Whatever the case, fan fiction is a great way to expand your imagination, establish your writing voice, and have fun with your favorite characters and settings.

2. Participate in writing prompts.

On my blog, Christ is Write, I host a bi-weekly writing prompt contest for teens just like you.

My favorite prompts come from songs and photographs. In fact, the setting of my novel, PURPLE MOON, was inspired by a picture I came across of mountains outlining a lake.

As a teen, I spent my free time listening to my iPod on shuffle and writing a scene based on the song that played. Each time a new song came on, I would start writing a new scene.

3. Write in your journal every day.

Many authors, including Meg Cabot, proclaim that several of their story ideas come from their journals.

Try to write in your journal every day, even if it’s just a sentence. You could even try to turn one of your memories into a scene as well.

4. Write a book with a friend.

When I was a teen, my best friend and I wrote a book together. We didn’t plan the story.

Instead, we each created our own characters—so any time they would interact, we would take turns writing the dialogue. (Similar to playing Barbies, I guess you could say. 😉 )

Here’s a secret: One of my characters actually made her way into my YA novel, PURPLE MOON. (Cough, Hayden, cough.)

5. Make a list of potential book titles.

Listen to music. Read poetry. Is there a specific line that stands out?

You could also try to combine the titles of 3 of your favorite books to generate an entirely new title.

[bctt tweet=”It is now, during your teen years, that you can have fun with writing, without worrying about the career aspect of it.” #amwriting @tessaemilyhall “]

It is now, during your teen years, that you can have fun with writing, without worrying about the career aspect of it.

Keep your imagination open. Daydream often (just not during English class. Math class might be OK. — Kidding).

Take road trips, paint pictures, read books, and jot down any idea that pops into your head, no matter how bizarre.

Who knows? It might just turn into your future best-selling novel.

Any fun writing exercises for teens you’d like to add? Let me know in the comments!

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Editing The Critical Reader

Can a Novel’s Setting Come to Life?

by Alycia W. Morales

Have you ever been reading a novel when it suddenly dawns on you that the setting has become like a character in the book?

As I got into Aaron Gansky’s novel, The Bargain, I couldn’t help but notice how important the setting was. It’s the first time I’ve read a book and the setting has jumped off the page at me as if it had come to life.[bctt tweet=”Have you ever read a novel where the setting came to life? #amreading #amwriting”]

A brief description of the novel:

Connor Reedly is a journalist whose wife is dying. She has chosen to go to her sister’s home in a small desert town named Hailey. It’s there Connor is approached by a local citizen and told he must write ten articles or his wife will die and Hailey will be destroyed. He’s challenged with finding the good in a not-so-good place.

Five reasons why I believe Aaron nailed the setting:

1. It matched the theme of his story. Between Connor’s dying wife and the dying town, the image of death a desert brings to mind fits perfectly.

2. It reflected the lives of the local citizens (secondary characters). Then there’s the challenge of finding good people in the midst of an evil society and secondary character motivation. What setting could be more challenging than the desert? (Maybe the ocean, but it wouldn’t have worked as well in this story.)

3. It mirrored the protagonist’s career. As a journalist, Connor had to dig to find the truth in matters. There is plenty of sand to dig through in a desert.

4. It even resembled the antagonist. Connor’s story involves a lot of pressure from an outside source. The heat of that pressure is well-matched by the heat of the desert.

5. It represented the protagonist’s character arc. Connor had to make more than one life-changing decisions throughout the novel. Think “Refiner’s Fire.”[bctt tweet=”The setting of your novel can make a huge difference in your story if you choose the right one. #writing”]

So, Writer, think about the novel you’re writing right now. Is there a particular setting that would match the theme of your story? Would a different setting better amplify the things your character is going to suffer through or experience during their arc? Consider alternate settings for your novel and see if one may be better than the one you’re using now.

 

 

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Polishing Your Message

Common Error Comma Splices

 

Commas, commas, commas! There are so many rules, but the most common rule broken is creating a comma splice.

How do you know when you have made an error creating a comma splice? When you join two complete sentences together using nothing other than a comma to join them. If you can read the two sentences alone and they have a subject, verb, and a complete thought, you cannot join them together with only a comma.

So how do you correct a comma splice error?

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There are several ways to correct comma splices, but the most common corrections include three easy steps.

1. Separate the two sentences with a period.

2. If the sentences are related in topic, you may join them together with a semicolon (;).

3. Join the two sentences together with a comma and a conjunction. An easy way to recall your conjunctions is to think

of the word FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So.

Formula: Complete Sentence + , Fanboy + Complete Sentence

SAMPLE:

Every day this week God has been showing off, but I am not surprised. Together we have had a terrific week full of surprises and challenges, yet with Him by my side, consistent joy and peace fueled each day and each task.  

Please do not think every time conjunction is used in a sentence a comma is required before it. That is not the case. Only when a complete sentence is present on each side of the conjunction is the comma required before the conjunction.

Again, when we join sentences with a comma alone, it creates a comma splice, and we can correct the error with the three ways above. Sentences written side by side with no punctuation may be referred to as  run-on or fused sentences and may confuse readers. We want to take the time to polish our writing and use our commas effectively.

Comma use can be confusing and often subject to style preferences, but regarding a commas splice, it is always incorrect usage. Proper use of commas will polish and add clarity to the work.

Next month I look forward to sharing how using transitions will help polish your writing. Currently I am experiencing  and embracing multiple major life transitions, and God is undoubtedly  polishing my faith! I am so excited!

[bctt tweet=” recall your conjunctions #commas # FANBOYS”]

Image Credit: Kevin Bondelli

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Specs: Speculative Fiction

OCD–Original Composition Disorder

OCD—Original Composition Disorder

Sometimes it’s hard to be original—especially in today’s world. We see a good story, we like it, we copy it. Late at night, as we’re lying in our beds, it taunts us—the subconscious voice ringing in our heads. “This was cool last time. I know this sells. I’ve seen it…Also, think about how easy it would be to get up and steal that last brownie.”

Wait. Is that last bit just me? (I didn’t think so.)

In response to the voice you might think “Yeah! Wait, what? No, if I steal that brownie, I’ll get caught.”

Well, the same is true if you take a story that’s already a hit and try to make something just like it. We’re not talking plagiarism here—there would be an effort to make it your own, but it’s too close—and it’s just lazy writing.

I myself have often come up with ideas that were not mine (though by accident.) My Papi is my brainstorming buddy. He’s been around. Sometimes I come up with a story, and this is how the conversation goes:

Me: “Dude! I just had a great story idea!”

Dad: “Okay, shoot.”

Me: “So there’s an assassin and he works for an agency, but—get this—the agency sends their agents back in time to stop the crime before it happens. Now something happens with the main character, so that they have to kill him. They send another assassin to the past to kill his past self, and he has to protect himself in the past.”

Dad: “That’s a brilliant idea. It’s called Minority Report, and it stars Tom Cruise.”

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Me: “Dang! Well…oh, we’ll change it. The world has fallen into ruin because of something mankind did. So they send a criminal back to stop it.”

Dad: “Ah! Now we’re talking. You know, if it becomes a movie you should get Bruce Willis to play your convict, and we’ll call it Twelve Monkeys. Already done.”

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It’s not easy. But it can be original. “Stop stop stop!” you say. If you’re going to tell me nothing under the sun is new, then you’d be correct. But I didn’t say “new,” now did I?

Stories always stick to major life themes—ideas, longings, hopes, struggles that resonate with people. They always have and always will on earth. It’s also true that humans have the same basic bone structure, but there’s never the same person twice. We, as writers, have a duty to “Original Tweaks” as I call them. We can take the structure and make it unique, by using totally different characters who will respond differently to the drama, risk more. And we can drop them in a unique story world.

[bctt tweet=”Use totally different characters who respond differently to the drama, risk more. And can drop them in a unique story world. #amwriting #original”]

Characters are some of the most effective Original Tweaks. To pull this off, you’ve got to love your characters. You need to know them better than anyone else. Two character flaws do not make a compelling character. What does? We’ll get further into the art of character design in the next post. (Geek’s honor).

[bctt tweet=”Enthrall your readers in a rich story world, so they fear for all your characters are risking. Let them experience it. #amwriting”]

World-building is so important, especially if you write Spec Fic. A world with its own religious, natural, and political systems is always more believable and more in depth than one without. Your world shouldn’t be the only thing that matters, but it should excite the readers’ minds. If they’re enraptured in the world and the characters, they’ll want more. They’ll feel what’s at stake. Little by little, you unravel your world, revealing just how fantastic it really is. More on this later, but an example of beautiful world building would be the Earthsea series by Ursula K. Le Guin.

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Cass J. Tuck, a new favorite YouTuber of mine has a great video on original writing and why it’s important. What’s Wrong With YA Fiction? Seriously go check it out.

This is how I see things through my lenses. Comment below and tell me how you see things. This week, share what you think makes a compelling character.

Thanks to a friend for first introducing me to Cass J. Tuck, and thank you Ryan, Triet Do, Alyssa L. Miller, and Jon Gosier for the images.

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The Efficiency Addict

Tracking Your Writing Submissions

Today we’re going to talk about the benefits of tracking your writing submissions and learn an easy way to do it so you can reap all the rewards. Our focus today will be on tracking article submissions but this system can be used for many forms of writing.

So, why might you want to track your writing submissions?

  • See what’s working for you. Who’s accepting your work? What types of articles are selling? Which markets are paying best for what you do?
  • Gauge your productivity. How many articles did you submit this month? Are you on target for your goals? Were your goals reasonable?
  • Determine if follow up is needed. Is it past the time when you should have heard a response from that editor? Scanning your spreadsheet will tell you which contacts are due for follow up.
  • Find your articles when you need them. Ever searched for a piece you’ve written and can’t remember where you put it? Those days are about to be a distant memory.

[bctt tweet=”How to find the articles you write when you need them. #WritersRoad, #HowTo”]

Tracking Your Submissions

To use this system you’ll want to create some folders on your computer. Start by creating a Submissions folder. Inside that folder add the following folders:

1-Submitted

2-Accepted

3-Recycle

4-Photos

You’ll also include your tracking spreadsheet in the Submissions folder. You can download a pre-formatted one here:

Submissions Spreadsheet (Excel version)

Submissions Spreadsheet (Word version)

Submissions Spreadsheet (PDF version if you prefer to print it and track by hand.)

*Notice the spreadsheet is titled 0-Submission Tracking. Having the 0 in front keeps your spreadsheet at the top of your folder list.

When you submit an article, add it to your spreadsheet and put it in your Submitted folder. When you receive a reply, update your spreadsheet and move your article to the Accepted or Recycle folder. Notice you don’t have a Rejected folder. All items that aren’t accepted can be pitched elsewhere or potentially revised and resubmitted. If an article is in your Recycle folder, it’s one that can be reused.

Using the Spreadsheet

Most of the columns are self-explanatory: Article Name, Publication, Submit Date, etc. Two columns warrant discussion: Pics Sent and Notes.

Pics Sent – In this column, list what pictures you submit and add them to your Photos folder. If you collect pictures elsewhere on your computer, don’t move those to this Photos folder. The only pictures you want here are your author headshots and those that correspond to a specific article. A word about headshots: create a simple naming system for your options. For me, I use Cynthia Owens 1, Cynthia Owens 2, etc. In my Pics Sent column, I abbreviate this to CO-1.

Notes – In this column, add items such as the name of the receiving editor, the date by which you should have heard a response, whether rejected pieces receive a response, and any other details that may help you. When you review your spreadsheet, you’ll see a blank space in your Outcome column and can check your Notes to see what steps to take next.

Special Cases – Revisions

If an editor asks for revisions, you’ll want to take some specific steps.

  1. Make a new entry on the spreadsheet.
  2. Put “Revision” in the Notes column of this new entry and add any pertinent details. This shows you the number of times you redo a piece as well as the types of things editors want you to revise. Periodically, review your Revision notes to know where you should focus to improve your writing craft.
  3. Keep the article name the same but add R1 (or 2 or 3) at the end of the title. Example: The Power of Dialogue becomes The Power of Dialogue-R1.
  4. Put the revised article in your Submissions folder and leave the original article there as well.
  5. When the editor makes a final decision, move all versions of the article to the appropriate folder—Accepted or Recycle. You’ll know which was the most revised work because it will be the last piece in the group.

Now that you can track your submissions, it’s time to write something new. Get to it!

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A Little Red Ink Editing

Why Hire an Editor?

Why hire an editor if you’ve got a great critique group and you’re a grammar stud?

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Answer: A fresh set of eyes. But there’s more.

A good editor is worth his weight in Sumatra. But a great editor? When you find someone you can trust with your baby, whose goal is honestly to help YOU make it the best it can be? It’s tough to put a price tag on that kind of worthy investment. It could pay you back.

And then some.

Over the next few months, we’ll hash out specifics on where to find a qualified editor (and how to whittle down the choices), the different levels of editing (substantive, line editing, copy editing, proofreading), and what’s important in navigating the editor/author relationship. But for today, let’s stick to why you need a freelance editor.

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Whether you want to pitch your work to an agent or acquisitions editor in TradPub Land, or you want to brave the Indie Ocean and see this writing thing through on your own, hiring a qualified freelance editor is a business-savvy move.

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A good editor will give you professional, objective feedback.

A fiction editor knows what to look for in a story, in a plot, in pacing, in character arc. A non-fiction editor has an edge when it comes to structuring your book with compelling advice or arguments, including anecdotal evidence and research (and they’ll know how to document it). Both have learned the craft by either studying it for themselves (fellow-writers) or through professional courses of study.

All good editors—no matter the material—will be objective. They’ll tell you where your pacing drags, where your protagonist acts out of character, where your argument falls flat, and where you’ve broken a promise to the reader. They won’t be cruel, but they’re not family. They’ll be honest without worrying about facing you at the Thanksgiving table.

A good editor will notice things you miss.

Some editors, like me, are also writers. (And even we hire editors before we publish, if we’re wise.) When we spend hour upon hour staring at All the Words, our minds begin to fill in words that ought to be there but aren’t. During your self-editing/revision process, it’s easy to move things around and forget to tweak every detail. Especially in fiction, the story is a tapestry, tightly weaved. Every single thread matters, and if you pull one, it tugs others, causing a wrinkle in the story surface. An editor’s job is to offer a fresh set of eyes, catch the wrinkles, and smooth those details out.

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A good editor will spot things you overdo.

Maybe you have a pet word or phrase. Perhaps you overuse a sentence structure. You might over-explain when you ought to give your readers more credit. You might have several characters who sound exactly alike when they speak. Or—in the larger scheme of things—you could be so careful to consider your surprise ending as you write that you inadvertently give too many clues.

Subtlety is a beautiful thing.

I often make guesses about where a story will go in the margin. Sometimes, writers have laughed because they’ve done such a fabulous job of setting up the red herrings, I was completely blindsided; a few have decided to rewrite, because they realized their plot was too predictable. With nearly every client, I hear, “I don’t know why I didn’t see that!” And often, those clients learn from the first edit. When they come back with another manuscript, they’re not making the same mistakes anymore. Their craft is improving from the editing process.

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A good editor will help you hone your writing while keeping your voice intact.

If an editor rewrites your words or changes your story to the point that it doesn’t sound like you anymore, step back. Evaluate whether they’re showing you how a few simple tweaks can tighten your writing, or whether they’re changing your voice. Either way, they shouldn’t do this all over your manuscript. They should help you see the possibilities, make suggestions, and let you decide. You are, after all, the author.

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There are rules, and then there is poetic license. Personally, I believe in knowing the rules well enough to break them with flair. I also believe that—in dialogue and deep POV—a character’s voice ought to shine through more than the author’s. And a character may not use perfect grammar. There is freedom in writing well enough to bend the rules effectively.

There are great editors out there. The goal ought to be to find an editor who works well with YOU, sharpens YOU, encourages YOU, learns YOUR voice, believes in YOUR story, and will help you make it the best it can be. Finding one can be an ordeal, but when you’ve found them, the editing process can actually be fun.

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Hit me in the comments with this: What’s important to YOU in an editor?

Thanks to Jennifer BradfordMatt Hampel, Nic McPhee, and Andreas-Photography for the most excellent images. They win the Internet.