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Mystery/Thriller/Suspense

Suspenseful Settings

Authors begin a new story by creating and building their characters—the hero, heroine, and villain, but shouldn’t we also consider the setting as a character? Furthermore, can the author use it to create suspense? How? Here’s what I’ve learned recently on this subject.

Setting is where your story resides. Could be a town, city, castle, beach, office, etc., and should be looked at in the same way as we do characters by using the senses and physical traits. We want to draw our readers in by transporting them to another world. The character of the Overlook Hotel in The Shining created suspense and haunted the reader. Middle Earth in the Lord of the Rings did the same. We want to learn more about the surroundings as it keeps us on the edge of our seats, turning the pages.

What can we use to formulate suspense in our settings?

Five senses – sight, hearing, touch, smell, and taste. The creaking of the stairs in a haunted mansion or the howling wind echoing in the corridor gives the reader goose bumps. How about the taste of coffee in our character’s favorite café or the smell of mildew in an old estate? The touch of a sharp knife as the killer holds it against his victim’s throat or the character catching a glimpse of the eerie castle blanketed in fog. The senses are powerful and ushers the reader into the story, capturing their attention.

Nature – Does the snow sparkle in the moonlight of the quaint small town or the fireflies flicker on a warm summer night in the campground? A slithering snake or an owl hooting in the middle of the night can create suspense in our settings.

Weather – It can form tension, but don’t overdo it. Picture how a stormy night in an eerie town could add angst to your character. Also, the weather can help solve the crime. Were there footprints in the mud outside the castle’s window or a trail in the snow leading away from it?

Parts of speech – Similes and metaphors are a great way to help describe your locale and enhance the suspense, but use them sparingly.

Powerful words – Pick the right words when describing the setting. Use strong verbs and nouns. The rain pelted or the trees swayed.

In the following scene, I used sensory plus a simile to produce tension and suspense:

The wrought iron gate creaked open, revealing the brick mansion in the distance. Ominous twin turrets towered at opposite ends while cypress trees lined the lane like sentinels protecting the property from outside forces.

Setting is a powerful character that can be used to create suspense and establish the mood the writer is trying to portray. Choosing the right one is the key and we must go beyond the obvious to describe it. When we do our settings will come alive and stay with the reader long after the story is finished.

Darlene L. Turner writes romantic suspense and won the 2017 Genesis award in the Romantic suspense category and was a 2018 finalist. She was a finalist in the 2017 Daphne du Maurier Award for Excellence in Mystery/Suspense contest and won in 2016 (Inspirational Unpublished). She’s represented by Tamela Hancock Murray of the Steve Laube Agency. Visit Darlene at darlenelturner.com where she believes there’s suspense beyond borders.

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Mastering Middle Grade

Gratitude

The life of a writer isn’t for the faint-hearted, is it? Words do not always order themselves on the page in the inspiring pose you had intended to place them. Editors not only suggest you kill your darlings, but perhaps maim a few other precious pumpkins while you’re at it. Readers view things differently than you expected they would. Agents or publishers look for stories other than what you have written. This is the life we’ve chosen, and it is not always pretty.

The good news is, here we are in November, and it is the perfect time of year to reflect on all that we are thankful for. If you’re like me, you’ve noticed that the more you fill your heart and mind with what is good, the better equipped you are to navigate the less-than-good (or the downright ugly).

Here is my gratitude list for this year. I’m thankful for:

Electricity. It’s not just about keeping the ol’ Dell laptop buzzing. If I am on a deadline, I need the coffeemaker going. Electricity is my friend. Plus, can I tell you how many times an electric crockpot has saved dinner when I’ve had to hunker down over a draft? That number is higher than I thought possible.

Stolen moments. In the face of work changes and illnesses, I have learned how to claim even the tiniest blocks of time to write. Day by day, week by week, these little chunks add up to a completed manuscript, freelance work, and an occasional blog post.

Community. It’s odd for me to write this because I am an introvert through-and-through. In spite of that (or maybe because of it?) I know that I need writer people in my life. I have been fortunate to meet people who have cheered and encouraged me throughout this journey. As important as encouragement is, it is also healthy to have trusted people who will tell you the truth in a way that helps you hear it.

Words and the children who love them. This may seem like a no-brainer to some, but for me it is essential. Without words to build worlds and tell stories, we writers have nothing. We cannot take for granted that our world needs children who read, and parents and grandparents who encourage them. I am exceedingly grateful that words exist, and that there are children and adults who love to read them.

If you have read this far, I am thankful for you too! Thank you for letting me be part of your writing journey today. Since you’re here, what are you thankful for? Please take a moment and write your list in the comment section below. I would love to read it!

Kell McKinney earned a B.A. in journalism from the University of Oklahoma and an M.S. in documentary studies from the University of North Texas. She’s a part-time copywriter, double-time mom and wife, and spends every free minute writing and/or hunting for her car keys. Connect with her on Twitter @Kell_McK or kellmckinney.com.

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Writers Chat

Writers Chat Recap for November, Part 1

Writers Chat, hosted by Jean Wise, Johnnie Alexander, and Bethany Jett, is the show where we talk about all things writing, by writers, and for writers!

“Because talking about writing is more fun than actually doing it!”

Book Chat: Getting Into Character with Johnnie Alexander and Melissa Stroh

In this episode, Johnnie and Melissa lead an open mic discussion based on the book, Getting Into Character: Seven Secrets a Novelist Can Learn from Actors by Brandilyn Collins. If you want characters your readers get attached to, then this fiction help book is for you.

Watch the October 30th replay

If you want more information about this great book as well as other valuable resources, check out this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

 

Book Proposals: Mastering the Comparative Section with Cherrilynn Bisbano and Bethany Morehead

In this episode, Cherrilynn and Bethany share their expertise in presenting the comparative part of a proposal. They share examples from different publishing houses of how to make your proposal rise above the others in a very competitive market.

Watch the November 6th replay

To learn more on mastering the comparative section of book proposals, plus some great resources, take a look at this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

Meet our guests

Cherrilynn Bisbano is the founder of The Write Proposal book proposal services. As submissions reader and junior literary agent with Cyle Young, Cherrilynn learned the importance of a professional book proposal and many other aspects of the literary world. If you need help making your book proposal shine, visit Cherrilynn at www.thewriteproposal.com

Bethany Morehead is a Jr. Agent at Hartline Literary Agency and Associate Agent at Cyle Young Literary Elite. She keeps her own personal blog focusing on ministry, being a wife, and relationships. She is acquiring in the genres of Children’s Board and Picture Books, Romantic Fiction, and Speculative Fiction. You can visit Bethany at bethany@welcometocyle.com or www.bethanymorehead.com.

Open Mic: NaNoWriMo & More

In this open mic issue of Writers Chat we discuss conferences, Nation Novel Writing Month, affectionately called NaNoWriMo, and fun family traditions for Thanksgiving.

Watch the November 12th replay

To be encouraged in your writing and get ideas for new holiday traditions, check out this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

 JOIN US!

Writers Chat is hosted live each Tuesday for an hour starting at 10 AM CT / 11 AM ET on Zoom. Here’s the permanent Zoom room link.

Participants mute their audio and video during the filming, then we open up
the room for anyone who wishes to participate with our guests. The “After Party” is fifteen-minutes of off-the-record sharing and conversation.

Additionally, you can grow your network and add to the conversation by joining our Writers Chat Facebook Group.

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The Poet's Pen

Giving Thanks

There are many ways to show gratitude and writing a Thanksgiving poem is the way many have expressed themselves over the years.

“The New England Boy’s Song About Thanksgiving Day”  written by Lydia Maria Child in 1844, is one of the most well-known poems of thanksgiving. (Although, you might recognize it as the song “Over the River and Through the Wood,” published in 1897.)

The poem describes a sleigh-ride through the snow. It begins with, “Over the river, and through the wood to grandfather’s house we go”.

Other well-known Thanksgiving poems include: “The Pumpkin” by John Greenleaf Whittier (1850); “No. 814” by Emily Dickinson; “Fire Dreams” by Carl Sandburg; and “Thanksgiving Time” by Langston Hughes.

The Bible also has thanksgiving verses, many of them poems. The books of poetry are Job, Psalms, Proverbs, Ecclesiastes, and Song of Solomon.
This year as you prepare for Thanksgiving why don’t you try your hand at writing a Thanksgiving poem.

Give Thanks in Everything
by Darlo Gemeinhardt

You see dirty dishes in the sink,

But I see the wonderful meal we had.

You see dog hair on the couch and floor,

But I see pets offering unconditional love.

You see piles of dirty clothes to wash,

But I see we have clothes to wear.

You see an old crippled body,

But I see someone who has had a long life.

You see kids who need a bath,

But I see the future.

You see the overall messiness and confusion,

But I see family.

You see the need to hurry away,

But I see the need to give thanks.

Darlo Gemeinhardt writes middle grade novels. She believes that there is a story in every dog. In her spare time she takes care of 1 husband (of 40 years), 29 dogs and trains with TALLAO, K-9 SEARCH AND RESCUE. Visit her at From the dog pen.com

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Publishing Pulse

Do You “Own” Your ISBN? Do You Really Want To?

I recently read some advice to self-published authors, to the effect that Lulu offers their clients a “free” ISBN—but it comes with a catch. The “free” ISBN means Lulu imprints their name on your book. I suppose the writer was bothered that Lulu was getting free advertising on their clients’ books, but I’m not entirely sure. (The advice was in the middle of an online self-publishing discussion, so you had to be there, I guess.)

The advice was good (a more succinct piece of advice is to stay away from Lulu altogether), but it served another function for me. It pointed out how much misunderstanding there is about the ISBN system among authors.

The International Standard Book Number (ISBN) is a system in the bookselling industry used to identify a specific book (a specific product, really;  every edition of a book—hardcover, paperback, ebook, and so on—has a different ISBN). It’s the number built into the barcode on the back of a printed book. The cashier scans the barcode, the cash register looks up that specific book in its database, and the correct price is added to your bill. Everybody understands how that part of the system works.

What most people, including authors, don’t seem to understand is that the ISBN also identifies the publisher/publishing house—the person or company through which a distributor or retailer can obtain the book. The ISBN system in the US is managed by a company called Bowker. Publishers pay a fee to Bowker to have ISBNs assigned to that publishing house.

Bowker is the ONLY company in the US authorized to assign ISBNs, and they ONLY assign ISBNs to publishers/publishing houses. A publisher/publishing house cannot re-assign their ISBNs. So when a company other than Bowker tells you they will give you a “free” ISBN, or that you can “buy” an ISBN from them, they are not being accurate. What they are really saying is, they are going to publish your book through their publishing house. Distributors that look up your book with an ISBN will be told that the book is available through a specific publisher, because that ISBN is assigned to that publisher.

I’ve heard people try to connect the ISBN to copyright, by asking questions like, “This company put their ISBN on my book; have they stolen my copyright?” No. Nothing could be further from the truth. Remember, all an ISBN does is identify a specific edition of a book, and the publishing house that produced it. The copyright has nothing to do with it.

If you self-publish a book, and pay Bowker to assign an ISBN to you, you are effectively setting up your own publishing house. A publishing house is, by definition, an entity with one or more ISBNs assigned to it—nothing more or less.

Well, let me qualify that. A publishing house is, of course, an entity that publishes books, but one can assume that the books are published so that they can be sold. And to sell a  book in today’s market it needs an ISBN — a number which identifies what book it is and what entity has published it.

A book cannot be distributed and sold commercially without an ISBN, and ISBNs are assigned only to publishing houses.

Do you want to deal with distributors  and retailers about details of your book’s distribution and sale? If so, then pay Bowker a fee to assign you an ISBN, and become a publishing house. If not, then work with an established publishing house, whether it be traditional or subsidy (“self-publisher”), and let them worry over the details. Some of the issues that can arise are complicated and difficult—and dealing with those problems is a rather high price to pay just so you can say you “own” your ISBN!

David Fesseden has degrees in journalism and theology, and over 30 years of experience in writing and editing. He has served in editorial management positions for Christian book publishers and was regional editor for the largest Protestant weekly newspaper in the country.

Dave has published seven books, written hundreds of newspaper and magazine articles, and edited numerous books. He is a frequent speaker at writers’ conferences. Two of his books, Writing the Christian Nonfiction Book: Concept to Contract and A Christian Writer’s Guide to the Book Proposal, are based on his experience in Christian publishing. The Case of the Exploding Speakeasy, Dave’s first novel, reflects his love for history and for the Sherlock Holmes stories of Arthur Conan-Doyle.

Dave and his wife, Jacque, live in south-central Pennsylvania and have two adult sons.

Website: davefessenden.com
Literary Agent, WordWise Media Services
Publisher and Proprietor, Honeycomb House Publishing LLC

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Writer Encouragement

Know Your Writing Strengths

I recently watched an interview with best-selling author John Grisham and was delighted to hear him talk about his strengths in writing. On the opposite end, he also spoke of his weaknesses.

In this interview, done on the release of his 5,000th book—perhaps I exaggerate—he shared a story about writing a love scene for one of his novels. He said he asked his wife to read it to see what she thought. Instead of constructive feedback, he said he could hear her upstairs, laughing uproariously. Having read a “love scene” in one of his many books, I wasn’t laughing at him but I definitely agreed with his wife that writing romance was not his strength. 😉

As a writer of historical romance, I can testify that kissing scenes can be a challenge. But when it’s well written, it will bring your readers back to your swoony novels again and again.

 

Now, if you were to ask me about writing scenes in an action thriller or a fantasy novel, I’d probably stare at you with a lost expression on my face. I’m always in wonder when others can carry these genres off well, with believable plots and characters. Me? I’ll stick with a tender kissing scene any day. 😉

So what are your strengths? If you’re not sure, ask yourself a few questions:

  1. What are your favorite books to read? Do you ever imagine certain scenes being written in a different way?
  2. Can you imagine scenes playing in your mind as though they are a movie image in your brain?
  3. When you write a scene and read it back to yourself, does it move you in some way, whether to tears or perhaps to stir adrenaline from the suspense?
  4. Perhaps most important, do you have an honest person who supports you in your writing endeavors yet will be truthful in their critique? Someone like John Grisham’s wife?

By understanding your strengths, it helps you then to understand your weaknesses. Does that mean you should never write anything in which you feel lacking? Not necessarily. But it should send you a signal that, if you want to write a love scene or a police drama or a comedy, you may need to study up and improve your skills in that area.

 

Perhaps for Mr. Grisham, he is wiser to stick with his legal dramas that he pens so well. Even he had to admit in his interview that he was not adept at writing a love scene.

I actually found encouragement in his interview. Not every writer has to do everything well.

Carry on

Elaine Marie Cooper is the award-winning author of Fields of the Fatherless and Bethany’s Calendar. Her latest release (Saratoga Letters) was finalist in Historical Romance in both the Selah Awards and Next Generation Indie Book Awards. She penned the three-book Deer Run Saga and has been published in numerous magazines and anthologies. She freely admits to being a history geek. Look for her upcoming series set in Revolutionary War Connecticut. The 4-book series is entitled Dawn of America and begins with a prequel novella (War’s Respite) and Book 2, a novel entitled Love’s Kindling. You can visit her site at www.elainemariecooper.com

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A3 Contributor Book Release

A Musket in My Hands by Sandra Merville Hart

Releasing November 8th, A Musket in My Hands is Sandra Merville Hart’s third Civil War romance with Smitten Historical Romance, an imprint of Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas. Her fifth historical romance releases in the summer of 2019. Sandra writes for Almost an Author’s column “History in the Making,” listed under the Genre tab. Sandra loves learning about history through researching her stories—and then passing along these gems to her readers. This book releases today, November 8th.

Back Cover Blurb

Can I count on you in times of great need?”

 Callie Jennings reels from her pa’s decision that she must marry his friend, a man older than him. Her heart belongs to her soldier hero, Zach Pearson, but Pa won’t change his mind. Callie has no place to hide. Then her sister, Louisa, proposes a shocking alternative.

Zach still hears his pa’s scornful word—quitter. He’s determined to make something of himself as a soldier. He’ll serve the Confederacy until they win the war. If they win the war.

Callie and Louisa disguise themselves as soldiers and muster into the Confederate army in the fall of 1864. Times are tough and getting tougher for their Confederacy. For Callie, shooting anyone, especially former countrymen, is out of the question—until truth and love and honor come together on the battlefield.

Bio

Award-winning and Amazon bestselling author Sandra Merville Hart loves to uncover little-known yet fascinating facts about our American history to include in her stories. Her debut Civil War Romance, A Stranger on My Land, was IRCA Finalist 2015. A Rebel in My House, set during the historic Battle of Gettysburg, won the 2018 Silver Illumination Award and second place in 2018 Faith, Hope and Love Readers’ Choice Award. A Musket in My Hands, where two sisters join the Confederate army with the men they love, released November 8, 2018. Her novella, Surprised by Love in “From the Lake to the River” released in September of 2018. Trail’s End, in “Smitten Novella Collection: The Cowboys” releases in August of 2019.

Find her on her blog, https://sandramervillehart.wordpress.com/.

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The Intentional Writer

Are You Taking Productive Breaks?

It may seem counterintuitive, but we can actually improve our productivity by taking breaks. God invented the concept of rest right back in Genesis chapter one, and we haven’t outgrown our need for it. We do not operate at peak efficiency hour after hour. We do better when we take periodic breaks.

All breaks are not created equal, however.

Some breaks restore our energy and boost creativity. Others simply waste time.

To make your breaks worthwhile, start with the right mindset

Don’t give in to guilt. Ignore those voices that whisper you are lazy or weak if you stop before the job is finished. When you take breaks with intention and intelligence, you are being smart and efficient. Remind yourself of that as often as you need to.

Be honest with yourself and your limitations. You might not be able to sit and concentrate as long as other writers. That’s OK. Find a balance between work and rest that makes sense for you.

Here are some tips for taking productive breaks.

  • Be in control of when you take them. Don’t let distractions like a Facebook notification drag you away from your work at less-than-ideal moments. Find a logical stopping place. Even if you set a timer, finish the sentence or the thought before you quit.
  • Take them regularly. Many of us are in the habit of sitting at the computer for hours at a time, hunched over our keyboards, wrestling with uncooperative prose. Studies say sitting for long periods isn’t good for us. Neither is forgetting to drink enough water. Develop a habit of taking a short break every two hours or so.
  • Be intentional about unplugging. Writers know the benefits of setting a piece of writing aside for a few days, because it allows us to look at it with new eyes. A similar truth applies to breaks. Resist the temptation to keep working in your head while you stretch or refill your water bottle. Give your brain a break too. For best results, get away from your desk completely.
  • Know what restores. The best breaks restore you mentally, emotionally, and physically.
    • Get your body moving. (Do office yoga, take a ten-minute walk…)
    • If possible, go outside. Nature has very effective restorative powers.
    • Connect with other humans. (But not someone who will suck you into a half-hour chat.)
    • Find solitude. If you work in a busy environment or interact with people all day, the best antidote may be a few minutes of solitude and silence.
  • Avoid the gripe zone. Griping about work might vent a little steam but it isn’t going to boost your motivation or enhance productivity. Avoid people or situations that tempt you to waste your break time complaining.
  • Avoid mindless screen time. Surfing social media will not restore your energy as effectively as moving your body and focusing your brain on something else.
  • Keep them short. Aim for ten to fifteen minutes and then get right back to work. No dilly dallying.

And, finally…

  • Stay focused between breaks. Modern society has become addicted to distractions. Learn to resist the siren call of email notifications or incoming text messages. Be in control of when you check devices rather than letting the devices control you.

Lisa E. Betz believes that everyone has a story to tell the world. She loves to encourage fellow writers to be intentional about their craft and courageous in sharing their words with others. Lisa shares her words through dramas, Bible studies, historical mysteries, and her blog about  intentional living. You can find her on Facebook  LisaEBetzWriter and Twitter @LisaEBetz

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Fantasy-Sci-Fi

Inspiration From the Renaissance

Most authors will hit a dry spell at some point in their career. Whether they consider it “writers block” or just a season of life, inspiration runs short. Finding ways to get those creative juices flowing once more is a must for any writer.

Inspiration can come from anywhere around us. A recent trip to my local Renaissance Faire reminded me that we, as writers, sometimes need to look beyond the norm to find that extra boost of creativity. Here are a few ideas gleaned from my trip to the past.

Writing inspiration from a Renaissance Faire

Eat a turkey leg. For some, a faire of this magnitude is a great opportunity to dress up in costumes, fake an accent, eat unfamiliar foods, and embark in the make-believe. This same concept can be applied when searching for that extra spark needed to get into a character’s head or discover the perfect setting for your book. Having trouble finding what motivates your character that loves archery? Then sign up for archery lessons! Not sure exactly how to describe that ethnic food your character eats in chapter ten? Visit a restaurant to get the full experience. It’s easy to read what an activity or place is like from another person’s point of view on their personal blog, but you might find a different experience when you try it out for yourself.

Get immersed in a Shakespeare production. Ever notice you have lots of sci-fi ideas right after watching a movie or reading a book within that genre? Have you ever read multiple books in a row, with very similar premises, only to suddenly have the desire to write a companion novel within that same world? We often get inspired by the things with which we surround ourselves. If you’re writing a fantasy western novel, then watch as many movies and read as many books within that genre as you can. Your inspiration will get a boost and you’ll be ready to get writing in no time!

Buy a souvenir. Sometimes, using an item that reflects the atmosphere within my story, helps direct my thoughts where they should be. If writing a historical fantasy, try using a calligraphy pen to capture your thoughts. If it’s a futuristic space opera that holds your interest, invest in glow-in-the-dark decals of the stars, or photographs of space to decorate your writing desk. Anything physical you can use to bring back a spark of inspiration to your story can help.

God created us to be creative beings. There may be times when our inspiration seems lacking or even non-existent, but that doesn’t mean we’ve lost our creativity. Find ways to jump-start the flow of those creative juices and get back to the heart of your story. Sometimes finding the right catalyst for your imagination means thinking outside the box.

Laura L. Zimmerman is a homeschooling mama to three daughters and a doting wife to one husband. Besides writing, she is passionate about loving Jesus, singing, drinking coffee and anything Star Wars. You can connect with her through Facebook and Twitter @lauralzimm and at her website Caffeinated Fiction.

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A Lighter Look at the Writer's Life

Whatever!

“What do you write?”

Sit down with a group at a writers conference or anywhere else writers gather, and that will be the first question asked. The answers usually vary widely.

“Speculative.”

“Amish.”

“Romantic suspense.”

“Women’s Bible studies.”

“Amish speculative with a touch of romantic suspense, and a secret baby included for good measure.”

(Okay, maybe I’m exaggerating about that last one . . . but it could happen.)

My answer is a bit different: “Whatever God gives me to write.”

That may seem like a super-spiritual reply, but it is truly the way things have happened since God called me to write. Time after time, God has opened unlikely opportunities for me, and all I had to do was to say, “Yes, whatever.”

So, in the last ten years, I have written:

–devotionals

–children’s Christmas plays

–test questions and chapter summaries for a textbook

–standardized test questions for an educational company

–sports stories for an online track and field/cross country website

–blog posts

–news articles

–general nonfiction

–fiction

I’m sure there’s more, but you get the idea.  I don’t share this list to brag on myself, but to brag on God. He’s the One Who has opened (and closed) the doors, and it was up to me to be obedient and to walk through (or to accept the slammed-shut ones). Each assignment has sharpened my skills, taught me about deadlines, and generally stretched me as a writer.

My advice then is not to pigeonhole yourself into one genre or specific type of writing. Sure, it’s okay to specialize and to hone your skills in one area (maybe God has called you to that), but it’s also important to be obedient to God’s leading when He makes a way for you to stretch your wings.

Now, back to Levi and Martha, who are waiting to get out of the time warp . . .  

Carlton Hughes wears many hats—some serious, some goofy.

During weekdays, he sounds like Charlie Brown’s teacher (wah-wah wah-wah-wah) as a community college professor of communication and journalism. On Sundays and Wednesdays, you’ll find him playing games, performing songs with motions, and doing object lessons in his role as a children’s pastor. He and his wife also attempt to keep up with their two college-age boys.

In his “spare” time, Carlton is a freelance writer who has been published in numerous books, including several recent releases from Worthy Publishing: The Wonders of Nature, So God Made a Dog, Just Breathe, Let the Earth Rejoice, and Everyday Grace for Men. He has been featured in Chicken Soup for the Soul and other publications and is represented by Cyle Young of the Hartline Agency. He contributes regularly to two writing blogs, almostanauthor.com and inspiredprompt.com. He specializes in humorous observations of everyday life, connecting those experiences with spiritual application.

Carlton loves watching classic sitcoms like I Love Lucy, eating way too much chocolate, and rooting for his favorite college and high school basketball teams. He is on the planning committee for Kentucky Christian Writers Conference and a year-round volunteer for Operation Christmas Child.

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Time Management

Get Ready, Get Set, Go! It’s NaNoWriMo!

As most of us know, this month (November) is known to writers as “NaNoWriMo” or “National Novel Writing Month.” I’m actually giving a NaNoWriMo workshop at my local library on Nov. 6 so I thought I’d tie it into my time management blog here and share on the subject since the two are integrally related – and help you (whether or not you participate in NaNoWriMo, or would just like to start, finish or publish your next book as soon as possible) focus on churning out some pages and getting them published!

First a Little History

NaNoWriMo is a creative writing project and was started in July, 1999 by freelance writer Chris Baty in San Francisco Bay with 21 participants. It was moved to November in 2000 to “to more fully take advantage of the miserable weather” and launched an official website. Participants attempt to write a 50,000 word manuscript between Nov. 1-30. By the 2010 event, over 200,000 participants wrote over 2.8 billion words. In 2013, January and February were deemed NaNoWriMo’s “Now What?” Months, designed to help novelists during the editing and revision process with a goal of getting published.

It’s All About the Numbers

To win NaNoWriMo, which focuses on quantity or length and awards those who finish, participants must write an average of approximately 1,667 words per day in November to reach the goal of 50,000 words.  Let’s see, my newest novel, The Jealous Son, due out next year, is 80,270 words (before editing). I actually was working from home primarily as a full-time author during the time I wrote it (between Jan.-April 2017). I was lucky, I had quit my day job and I could focus on my writing. I learned that a “system” that worked for me was to write during my “prime time” of day – from the time I woke up, coffee in hand, at 7 am until I felt worn out from writing and needed to work on my other “jobs,” (marketing my other books, teaching writing at my local college and as a book coach) – which was typically around 1-2 pm. I figured I could write 3 pages in 2 hours…which meant about 9-10 pages a day. One day at a time I got it finished, edited and submitted to a literary agent by July…and it’s being published in June, 2019!

When you focus and concentrate your best time to a project, you achieve the quickest and best results. Of course you can only do what you can do. But the bottom line is to schedule writing time into your week and stay focused!

Decisions and Deadlines

Organizers of the event say that the aim is to get people to start writing, using the deadline as an incentive to get the story going and to put words to paper. As a former news reporter, I’ve always worked best with a deadline. But you also have to make some choices in advance of putting pen to paper.

Make those choices as soon as possible so you can be free to write. Come up with a good catchy title (narrow your selection to two or three and Google said titles to see if they are unique (or close). Come up with your character outlines too so you “know” your characters and they can flow along with your plot (see below). Do as much research up front as possible. Also devise a timeline for your narrative so you don’t lose track of your characters’ ages, birthdays, etc. And know your readers (or audience) which will help determine your genre.

Put the Finish Line First

How does your story end? You need to know before you start! Decide on your storyline or plot and write it down in a chapter outline. I am a firm believer (as a marketing expert) in the need for a plan. If you have a chapter outline, you will have a road map to get where you’re going much faster and easier than if you don’t.

Do you know where you want your novel to end up? In the hands of friends and family? On the New York Times Bestseller List? In the hands of movie producers for adaptation? This will be important when it comes to making more choices down the line such as finding a publisher, marketing your book and setting goals for yourself. Finally, what message do you want to leave for your readers? (I also believe the best books and movies leave a message – be it educational, informational, inspirational or transformational – behind. Decide what you want your readers to get out of your book so you stick to the main message.

Save the Editing for Later…but Still Use Good Style

You don’t want to have writer’s block too soon in the game, which is why you want to edit your work at the end – after you’re finished writing. If you get too bogged down in word choices and proper grammar, you may lose your motivation, creative genius or writing zest – and it may take ages before you’re done. BUT, do use all of the recommendations of those who know the craft (and if you don’t know, read books on it like “Elements of Style” by Strunk & White, take a writing course, go to a good writers conference or email me). Show not tell, use strong nouns and verbs, don’t use clutter, etc. etc. The more effort you spend in writing well up front, the less work you’ll have to do later.

Now go forth, write, write, write! And make sure you celebrate when you’re all done – let me know and I’ll celebrate too!

Michele Chynoweth is the award-winning author of The Faithful One, The Peace Maker and The Runaway Prophet, contemporary suspense/romance novels based on Old Testament stories in the Bible that get across God’s messages to today’s readers through edgy, fast-paced fiction. Michele is also an inspirational speaker, college instructor on book writing, publishing and marketing, and book coach/editor who helps writers become successful authors. A graduate of the University of Notre Dame, she and her husband have a blended family of five children.

Social Media/Website Links:

Website: michelechynoweth.com

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Screenwriting

The Plot

A few months ago, I was asked by an agency to do a rewrite of an older screenplay I wrote. Idealistically, this sounds rather simple. However, the process of reworking the narrative while maintaining the plot is proving to be both time-consuming and difficult, to say the least.

Imagine taking a completed puzzle apart adding a few new pieces and then putting it all together in a different order and ending up with the same picture as before. Yes, the process is just as confusing as the analogy sounds.

Since I’ve taken over this column earlier this year, I’ve purposely been going through the main pieces of the puzzle we call screenwriting.

  1. Action (Moving Along, Sound Off)
  2. Characters (Keep It Real)
  3. Genre (Messy)
  4. Conflict (Friction)
  5. Setting

Robert McKee noted, “A beautifully told story is a symphonic unity in which structure, setting, genre and idea meld seamlessly.” Together these elements make up the plot of our story. And that is what I want to focus on in this post before we finish the year up next month.

Plot?

When I talk about plot, I’m referencing the noun form of the word and not the verb form which is an action. A movie’s plot is not the same as its theme; however, it can be the vehicle to express your underlying theme or message.

It is simply the main events of the screenplay that someone creates and arranges in a specific order to tell a story. A strong and clear plot is essential to great screenwriting…and great storytelling.

Great movies are ones where the writer has balanced each of the elements to a degree where they enhance one another. Weak writing places more emphasis on one element over another.

  • There may be lots of action visually, but no depth to any of the characters.
  • Characters may be explicitly described physically but have no depth or personality.
  • The conflict may be so intense, yet the story seems chaotic, without any direction.
  • Perhaps the setting is so defined; there is no room for the story or our imaginations to grow.

How many times have many of us walked out of the theater after forking out our hard-earned money for good entertainment to only be let down by an overrated light show or misleading and hyped up advertising that never satisfies our longing for a narrative?

So far this year the biggest flop has been the much-anticipated screen adaptation of A Wrinkle in Time, it has been reported that Disney has lost $100 million from its production.

Last year the film The Promise lost $80 million.

The solution for tipping the scales in the right direction of the balance act we call plot is taking the time to plot–meaning the verb sense of the word, where writers take the time to painstakingly brainstorm and lay out each of the puzzle pieces (characters, events, scenes, turning points, subplots) they plan to use to tell their story.

The end result will be a clearer and more fulfilling plot and our audience will leave the theater having understood not just our story, but its theme, which brings everything together neatly through our plot.

Together?

Once we have our plot, we will see what genre our story fits in. In simple terms, genre in films or literary works categorized by similar subjects, styles, and format. I will discuss this more next year. But for now, the five basic genres screenwriting are

  1. Tragedy – drama that tackles serious or sorrowful events in life.

  1. Comedy – stories that incite humorous narratives about life.

  1. Romances– drama which focuses on a plot about love, between two people or at the least an attempt to find love.

  1. Horror – Plots that offer incite negative responses by our audience, playing off primal fear.

  1. Fantasy/sci-fi – stories that often involve magic or supernatural causes, lots of action sequences as a primary story element or theme.

One of the ironies of screenwriting is the importance of drama. Most of us do not like or tolerate drama in our lives and we go to whatever means we have to avoid it.

However, drama in film helps us to relate to the story, whether it’s a tragedy, comedy or romance. How often do we visualize ourselves into the world of the story?

Each type of drama has its purpose and place: tragedies give us hope in suffering, comedies make us laugh at life, and romances inspire us to love.

Whatever your purpose, it will be a direct result of the plot.

Martin Johnson survived a severe car accident with a (T.B.I.) Truamatic brain injury which left him legally blind and partially paralyzed on the left side. He is an award-winning Christian screenwriter who has recently finished his first Christian nonfiction book. Martin has spent the last nine years volunteering as an ambassador and promoter for Promise Keepers ministries. While speaking to local men’s ministries he shares his testimony. He explains The Jesus Paradigm and how following Jesus changes what matters most in our lives. Martin lives in a Georgia and connects with readers at Spiritual Perspectives of Da Single Guy and on Twitter at mtjohnson51.

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My Writing Journey

Lessons I Learned Along the Way

The fact I started writing a full-length novel as full-time student might seem a little scary, and you’d be right – I did have to combat some fears.

What if it’s not good? What if my characters are lame? What if I can’t keep up the rigorous writing schedule? And my biggest one: What if I can’t finish? Here are some tips that helped me go from blank page to completed manuscript.

Surround Yourself With Like-Minded Individuals

Maybe you don’t have a professional mentor or community. That’s OK. I started on YouTube. No kidding.

I didn’t have a writing community. A good majority of my friends were pursuing teaching degrees or business majors and could only try to relate to the creative side of my life.

Instead of ducking out I searched YouTube and watched hundreds of interviews of different creatives on their craft. Even if you have to start small, start learning from others. You’ll be thankful later!

Lesson I Learned:

You don’t have to have a physical community to be inspired by others. Use what you have in the season you’re in.

Don’t Get Discouraged By Feedback

Throughout the writing/editing process I asked different people to read portions of my book. One reader became so invested in the story she said if something bad happened to a certain character she was going to give up on the book. Needless to say I freaked out.

I spent the majority of my night wondering what in the world to do. What I had written was going to devastate my reader, but it worked best for the story. Thankfully my writing mentor told me to stick with my original intensions. Encouraged, I stayed true to the story. Trust your gut. You’re the writer, after all!

Lesson I Learned:
Stay true to what you set out to do and work hard to complete it, even when you occasionally get feedback you weren’t expecting.  

Work For, Don’t Worry For, the Future

I started out afraid I wouldn’t finish my book on time, then I wrote that last sentence at 4:48pm on a sunny Thursday and defeated that fear with accomplishment. But then I started worrying the book wouldn’t get picked up by a publishing company.

Instead of worrying about a book deal, I started writing a book proposal and reading up on what a good one looks like. I started networking. I met with the VP of Marketing at a big publishing house and asked his advice. I hardcore edited my entire book – 4 times!

Lesson I Learned: 

Show yourself some integrity and finish what you’ve started, no matter how scared you are to keep the promise you originally made.

The future will always come, but you get to decide how you meet it: ill-equipped and embarrassed, or prepared and ready for success. Whatever your goal is, keep working toward it. You never know what one day will bring. All those days piled up are what make the mountain of success at the end!

Sarah Rexford is a Marketing Content Writer, working with brands to grow their audience reach. She studied Strategic Communications at Cornerstone University and focused on writing during her time there, completing two full-length manuscripts while a full-time student. Currently she trains under best-selling author Jerry Jenkins in his Your Novel Blueprint course, is planning a speaking tour, and actively seeking publication for two books.

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Literary Women in Histor

Sarah Hale, Heroic History-Maker: The Pen that Perseveres and Persuades

With the November holiday season upon us, turkey tops the menu lists for traditional American fare at family gatherings. The iconic bird remains undivided from thoughts of Thanksgiving Day, even though the original celebrants in 1621, at Plimoth Plantation, enjoyed more fish and venison dishes as opposed to turkey.

Thanksgiving Day on the November calendar—turkey or not—exists these 150+ years thanks to the historic efforts of American author and style-setter, Sarah Josepha Buell Hale. This patriotic Christian and daughter of the revolution lived an amazing life through the course of the 19th century, serving heroically as wife, mother, widow, writer, publisher, opinion shaper, and history maker.

Sarah Josepha Buell entered the world in 1788, born to Captain Gordon Buell, a veteran of the War of Independence, and Martha Whittlesay Buell in Newport, New Hampshire. Sarah’s love of learning and literature sprouted early and blossomed under the homeschool tutelage of her mother and older brother. She reveled in the grand, patriotic stories she heard at her father’s knee, who passed onto her—through the power of story—a love of God, country, liberty, and truth.

Sarah sought out opportunities for self-learning in many disciplines until she earned a teaching certificate. She accepted a position near her home where she gained a reputation as an engaging storyteller.

One day, a lamb followed a student to school and waited outside the schoolhouse for its owner until Sarah dismissed the class. She thought this was charming and wrote a story in verse about it. That little rhyme has been charming generations ever since. Perhaps you remember the sing-song ditty:

Mary had a little lamb, little lamb, little lamb.

Mary had a little lamb, its fleece was white as snow.

 In 1811, Sarah met and married a lawyer named David Hale. Over the next ten years she gave him five children before he died in 1822. She wore black mourning dress for the rest of her life.

As a widow and single mother with strong skills and a resourceful spirit, Sarah used her academic and writing gifts to provide for her family. She first published a collection of poems in 1823. By 1827, she published a novel titled, Northwood: Life North and South, addressing an abolitionist view of slavery.

This so impressed publisher Reverend John Blake, that he invited her to take a full-time staff position for The Ladies Magazine in Boston, the most popular magazine for American women in the 19th century. Eventually, The Ladies Magazine was acquired by the periodical journal Godey’s Ladies Book, with Sarah promoted to editor.

For the next 40 years—until she was 90 years old—Sarah Hale’s editorial pen proved a formidable weight of authority on every-day American life for women and families. Her Christian faith, intelligence, strength of character, and literate lifestyle exacted tremendous influence over fashions and homemaking.

Reflecting a strong biblical worldview, Sarah’s practical, persuasive words wielded a powerful sway on public opinion. If Sarah said it—American women were doing it. She eagerly pursued the advancement of higher education for women writing:

” . . . not that they may usurp the situation or encroach on the prerogatives of man; but that each individual may lend her aid to the intellectual and moral character of those within her sphere.”

Helping women to impact “within her sphere” would eventually result in women—through the work of their pen—making a unifying, permanent mark on the American calendar and tradition during a critical moment in history.

Thanksgiving: The Founder of the Feast

Sarah’s most famous editorials centered on her personal mission to see a national Thanksgiving Day officially declared by the president of the United States. She longed to see a day set aside where every American gathered with their families, on the same day, in praise, with grateful hearts for the many blessings of God bestowed upon a growing nation. Sarah was burdened by the cultural divide between the American North and South. The slavery issue fueled this rift, and unrest settled across the country, stirring the people to prayer. Sarah believed the problem required a return to the heart of America’s founding principles in the spirit of our Pilgrim forefathers, seeking peace and unity in a shared country under God.

Inspired by the well documented thanksgiving feast of 1621, celebrated by English Christian settlers and Native Americans, she began to do more than just address this in editorials. She started write letters hoping to persuade political powers to proclaim a Thanksgiving Day for everyone in the nation.

Sarah’s pen was not a lone ranger. She instigated an army of quills in the hands of American women through an ongoing letter-writing campaign in the course of five presidential administrations over fifteen years. Her crusade for the proclamation of an official American Thanksgiving Day never wavered. Her influence on America’s God-fearing women, praying for God’s peace and national unity under the cloud of unrest between the North and the South, culminated in blanketing the nation’s capital with petitions to the purpose.

Sarah’s faith undergirded a belief in the importance of her quest. She heroically persevered through years of disappointment until she and her legions of petitioners succeeded. At the height of America’s Civil War, President Abraham Lincoln issued his Thanksgiving Proclamation on October 3, 1863, including these words of note:

No human counsel hath devised, nor hath any mortal hand worked out these great things. They are the gracious gifts of the most-high God, who, while dealing with us in anger for our sins, hath nevertheless remembered mercy . . . I do therefore, invite my fellow citizens in every part of the United States, and those who are sojourning in foreign lands to set apart and observe the last Thursday of November next as a day of Thanksgiving and Praise to our beneficent Father who dwelleth in the heavens . . . it is announced in the Holy Scriptures and proven by all history, that those nations are blessed whose God is the Lord . . . it has seemed to me fit and proper that God should be solemnly, reverently and gratefully acknowledged, as with one heart and one voice, by the whole American people.

It is important to note that prior to the Civil War, each state considered itself its own country. Many issues divided them one from another. Loosely uniting together to defeat a common enemy in the War of Independence some 80 years earlier, 1860s America had reached a threshold of decision on the battlefields of the Civil War. Lincoln, as president, had to be able to unite the nation and bring peace. The path to do so was bloody and traumatic, shifting the nation with rippling effects still felt today.

Time-honored, cultural traditions often prove a powerful stabilizer in unstable times.

For over 150 years, on Thanksgiving Day each November, the stabilizing effect of tradition continues to minister peace and unity within our currently fractured society. American families from sea to shining sea gather around a table of customary foods such as turkey, stuffing, potatoes, vegetables, cranberry sauce, and pumpkin pie. The effect of Sarah Hale’s personal mission, perseverance, and influence upon the average 19th century American woman nationwide is directly responsible for this chapter of American history being written and relevant to us today.

May we consider well the words pouring forth from our pens as women and writers, wielding them, for all the good things and beauty the Lord would use, to invade the self-destructing habits of human nature and nations.

Journal Prompt: What kind of history-maker mark is your pen leaving for future generations? Is your pen’s passion influencing within your sphere for those things that work to unify and bring peace? Who is the sphere of society you seek to influence most? What is your message? Do you have perseverance to continue writing even when if seems you are not having the effect you want to have?

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Learn more about the history of the Plimoth Plantation Thanksgiving story dramatized on The Writer’s Reverie Podcast, Episode 3, by Kathryn Ross, From Leyden to Liberty, including The Ballad of Plimoth Plantation. 

Writer-speaker, Kathryn Ross, ignites a love of literature and learning through Pageant Wagon Publishing. She writes and publishes homeschool enrichment and Christian living books for home, church, and school. In addition, she shepherds writers through the steps book development and production. Her passion to equip women and families in developing a Family Literacy Lifestyle, produces readers and thinkers who can engage the world from a biblical worldview. She blogs and podcasts at TheWritersReverie.com and PageantWagonPublishing.com. Connect with Miss Kathy on Facebook.

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Bestsellers

BESTSELLING AUTHOR INTERVIEW with Debbie Macomber

Can you share a little about your recent book?

My recent book. ALASKAN HOLIDAY is about a young woman named Josie, who sets off to Alaska before starting her new much-anticipated career as a sous chef in Seattle. What she doesn’t anticipate is all that the little town of Ponder has to offer her, and the difficult decisions she must make in the future.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

God gave me the gift of being a storyteller. I was born to write. If I had given up, I would have lost a piece of my soul. Each book has a theme that is relevant to the plot, which I hope readers are able to connect and relate to.

How long have you been writing?

Forty years! I rented my first typewriter in 1978, and I remember it like it was yesterday.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

It took me five years to get published. During those five years, I got rejected more times than I can count.

How long does it take you to write a book?

Well to say it simply, as long as it takes. Each book is different.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

My writing schedule consists of setting page goals for myself every day. I do my very best to maintain this schedule and meet my deadlines.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I hum when I write dialogue. Several years back, I was writing in my shared office space with Wayne and he asked me, “What are you writing?” I replied, “Dialogue. Why?”  He said, “Well you ‘re humming.” I was totally unaware that I hummed while I wrote!  It was something I realized that day that I did in fact hum during the dialogue-writing process.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

There have been so many over the years. I will say, there is one moment where I knew I had hit the “big time.” I was watching TV one night and my phone began to buzz constantly. Jeopardy was on and the question was, “Kitty doesn’t like the knitting so much in the Debbie Macomber book “A Good” this, but loves the threads” My book, A GOOD YARN, was a Jeopardy question!  Definitely a highlight for me.

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

This is a difficult question to answer. As with anything in life, success comes with failure, good comes with the bad. However, I make a point to focus on the good. I don’t read negative posts or emails. There are too many critics and I would rather hang out with the cheerleaders.

Which of your books is your favorite?

This is like asking me to pick out a favorite child. I just can’t do it.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Favorite is such a strong word. I read so many genres and authors that it is hard to name just one. I really enjoy Cathy Lamb, Sheila Roberts, and Linda Leal Miller, just to name a few.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have listened too?

Just keep writing.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

More than most people realize, almost to the point of giving up.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

I enjoy writing humor. The scenes I create that give glimpses into this humor are my favorites. I have some of those “I crack myself up” moments.

Where do you get your ideas?

From life, situations and from people around me. From society, the news, and from music.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writers make?

Giving up too soon. Being impatient with the process.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

By writing the best book they possibly can.

BIO

Debbie Macomber is a #1 New York Times bestselling author and one of today’s most popular writers with more than 200 million copies of her books in print worldwide. In her novels, Macomber brings to life compelling relationships that embrace family and enduring friendships, uplifting her readers with stories of connection and hope. In 2018, Macomber’s all-new hardcover publications include Cottage by the Sea (July) and Alaskan Holiday (October). Macomber is also releasing a new cookbook titled Debbie Macomber’s Table: Sharing the Joy of Cooking with Family and Friends (April).  Debbie’s books are available wherever books are sold.

Website: www.debbiemacomber.com

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/DebbieMacomberWorld/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/debbiemacomber

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My Writing Journey

Am I Good Enough?

Talented. Well-intended affirmation sculpted my ego into a thin glass spine. Unaware of how fragile my assurance would soon prove, I ventured into the world of writing conferences. I could invite publishers to join my team of encouragers.

Let’s just say things didn’t go as I had expected. Publishers didn’t coddle me with praise-padded enthusiasm. My misplaced confidence took several critical blows.

Ego properly shattered, I limped to my room. Crawled into a fetal position. Bawled. I no longer believed in myself. I doubted the talent with which others had defined me.

After a snot-streaked, prayerful cry, the Lord stood me back up. Reminded me to follow the call. I resolved to continue writing, keep trying to pursue the work God set before me.

But, the question had etched itself as a skipping album in my mind. Its haunting words would play over and over in my head for years to come.

Am I good enough?

For years, I strove to extinguish my doubt by improving my skill. I went to many workshops, conferences, and writing retreats. I learned a wealth of new craft insights and enjoyed priceless fellowship with other struggling writers.

Yet self-doubt and temptation to give up dogged my heels. I strove harder to emulate the techniques of successful writers. With each new level of training, I merely realized how much more I had yet to learn.

Then, I heard best-selling authors admit they’d heard the question, too.

One day, I cried out to the Lord, “I’m not good enough!”

You’re right. I’m glad you realized that. He responded. But I AM.

Now, I place little faith in fleeting matters of talent and success. Why settle for them? I’m intimately connected to the most creative source in the universe. He’s not merely adequate. He trumps all insufficiency, owns the patents on our gifts, eliminates the very concept of failure.

I still hear the question sometimes. The enemy isn’t the creative one. He re-uses his original strategies. Pride. Discouragement. The temptation to believe fulfilling God’s purpose depends on whether I’m any good.

Scripture confirms none of us are any good. “There is no one who does good, not even one” (Romans 3:12). Thank God we don’t have to stake our confidence in ourselves.

The Lord encourages us to offer him our best. He calls us to serve him with excellence. If called to write, we should attend conferences and hone our craft. When doubts arise, we must stake our faith in something greater than our own effort, however. The Lord alone holds the right to define us and to determine our calling.

Author, speaker, licensed counselor, and life coach, Tina Yeager has won over twenty-two writing awards. She publishes Inkspirations Online, a writers’ devotional, and mentors five chapters of Word Weavers International. To book her as a speaker, coach, or manuscript therapist, check out divineencouragement.com or tyeagerwrites.com.

Tina adores embracing new friends, so feel free to offer hugs to her avatars at Facebook , Twitter , Instagram tina.yeager.9, LinkedIn , Goodreads, and Pinterest

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Writers Chat

Writers Chat Recap for October

Writers Chat, hosted by Jean Wise, Johnnie Alexander, and Bethany Jett, is the show where we talk about all things writing, by writers and for writers!

“Because talking about writing is more fun than actually doing it.”

Creative Website Content with Rhonda Dragomir

In this episode, Rhonda continues the series on effective author’s websites. She shares with us the current trends in site design, as well as simple ways to add effective content that will draw people back to our sites.

Watch the October 9th replay

To learn more on creating amazing website content, check out the information and resources on this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

Rhonda Dragomir is a graduate of Asbury University with a degree in Social Work, she is also a pastor’s wife and Bible teacher. Rhonda is an award-winning writer, with published works in Chicken Soup for the Soul anthologies and Spark magazine.

How to Prep for Writers Conferences with Bethany Jett

In this episode, Asst. Acquisitions Editor and Serious Writer co-owner Bethany Jett gives wonderful tips on how to prepare for a conference and what to expect while there. She also discusses etiquette when meeting staff, either for a fifteen minutes appointment or during a meal.

Watch the October 16th replay

To get the low down on making the most of your conference experience, including a secret or two, check out this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

Bethany Jett is the Founder and Co-Owner of Serious Writer, Inc., and Vice President of Platinum Literary Services where she specializes in marketing, nonfiction proposal creation, ghostwriting, and developmental editing. Her love for marketing and social media led to her pursuing her Master of Fine Arts degree in Communication: New Media and Marketing. She also holds a degree in Interdisciplinary Studies: Behavioral Social Science and Humanities with a Criminal Justice minor.

How to Create Compelling Book Covers with Graphics Designer Cody Morehead

In this episode, Cody discusses why you want a trendy, good looking book cover. He shows examples of eye-catching covers and explains the importance of understanding the current book cover trends. Cody reminds us, people really do judge a book by its cover.

Watch the October 23rd replay

To learn more on designing your book cover, as well as learning what a hex code is, check out the information and resources on this week’s Show Notes and Live Chat Discussions.

Cody Morehead is the Creative Director for Serious Writer™ Inc, and founder and owner of PubZoo Creative. To get a consultation for your book cover or logo design, go to RealPubZoo.com.

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Writing with a Disability (Different Ability)

In Context

When most people meet me, they often tell me they can’t tell I’m disabled. Sometimes, they will never notice unless I’m tired. When I need rest my brain injury often affects my speech, I tend to slur a lot of words or mumble.

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Songwriting

Creation as a Collaborative Gift!

I have to be honest: I have worked with bands for years and years, and while nothing feels more exhilarating than to stand in front of thousands of people with a loud five-to-seven-piece band playing behind you, I learned in my early years that I prefer to work alone. I idolized men like Lenny Kravitz and Dave Grohl of Foo Fighters. On their earlier albums, they wrote all the lyrics and played all the instruments recorded. They were a one-man band. They only needed a band for live shows.

For years, I’ve become the one-man band on my recordings. While I can brag that I played every single instrument on my last few albums—from guitar to piano, mandolin, bass, harmonica, percussion, slide, organ, vocals, and more, the process became rather lonely.  And while I have improved musically over the years, I don’t feel I grew very much as an artist. I produced the music myself as well. I often ask myself: But what if?

I feel that my strength is in writing songs. What if I worked with a band again? What if I worked with a band all these years? What if I gave them freedom to play what they want to play? What if I told the drummer to create his own beats and the guitar player to start a riff off that, in whatever tone he wanted? What if I approached the songs as the music was the storyline and my lyrics and melody the protagonist? Sure, I’ve done this with bands over the years, only to discover one or two pieces of the puzzle didn’t fit—meaning, one or two of the musicians didn’t seem to gel with the team. Even as a worship leader, every single team I led had at least one player that was rebellious and gave the team a hard time.

The incongruency can become exhausting, especially during songwriting, when you hold that precious baby forming in your hands. I think of the movie, The Wonders, starring Tom Hanks and Steve Zahn, where the drummer hijacked the song at a competition and did his own thing. Lucky for him, it worked in the band’s favor. But that isn’t always the case. So, I started writing songs alone. Then I started recording them alone. Then I started playing all the instruments alone. And when I started doing it all alone, I felt alone.

I had to remind myself… Why was I creating music? Because I must. Because God put it within me. God blessed me as a musician and a songwriter. But why? Why do any of us have gifts? To touch the lives of others. To bless others. To lift others up. I had to rethink why I created music: To touch and inspire. To offer hope. To encourage. To draw people closer to God, perhaps. And God has blessed many musicians with talent and giftings. There’s not a short supply of talent (regardless of what’s played on top 40 stations.) It’s a known spiritual principle that when we come together in prayer in the name of Jesus, miracles happen. The same can be true musically. When musicians come together and lend their God-given talent to one another, something magical can happen. It is symbolic of life. There will be rough edges. There will be personality issues. There may be a slight difference of musical tastes and styles coming together, but when you’ve been playing with the same band and you’ve truly gotten to know one another, there’s an incredible intimacy created that is surely divine. You know and feel what the other musician in your band is going to do. You understand what they are feeling and thinking. You feel their vibe. And sometimes there’s that one musician that just never vibes with you… you may have to replace that person. But don’t give up.

What’s my point? I think, looking back at life and the giftings God gave us, we were never meant to hoard our talent for ourselves, and we were never meant to be a one-man show. Whether musically or relationally. God created us for friendship. He created us for relationships and community. He created us to love one another and be there for each other. And as introverted as many of us artists are, we have to learn how to break through that, share our gifts with one another, and work together to see what amazing thing God will create through us as a team.

Have you been writing any songs lately? My suggestion to you—grab a friend. Get some coffee. Sit down. Get a guitar, a piano, or even a Ukulele. Start writing down ideas together. Scribble anything down, because anything can be re-written. Laugh together. Laugh at each other. Laugh at your song ideas. Share ideas with each other. Don’t hoard them. Build a friendship…and out of that friendship, create some amazing songs to share with others.

I have to brag on myself a bit. I was recently nominated for a Native American Music Award for Independent Artist of the Year. Being that I played all of the instruments on the album myself and produced it in my studio, my joy lasted but for a moment when I realized I had no one to really share the joy and the experience with. Imagine if it was a collaborated effort, I would be celebrating right now with a group of friends and planning our trip to New York together for the awards ceremony. Instead, I’m celebrating alone…okay, I’m celebrating with my cat, so I’m not exactly alone.

Matthew Hawk Eldridge is a coffee addicted, calico-cat loving Renaissance man. When he’s not passionately penning screenplays or stories rich in musical history, he’s writing songs on his guitar or working on a film as an actor, double, songwriter, or musician. He was recently nominated for Independent Artist of the Year with the Native American Music Awards.

 

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Copywrite/Advertising

4 Books that Fueled My Copywriting Imagination

Normally, when you search for a definition, you are looking for a way to narrow a term or concept. But the more I read about copywriting, the broader my understanding of copywriting becomes.

Copywriting is a boundless genre with limitless applications. Every time I bump into another copywriter and we swap writing stories, I am amazed at the uniqueness of his or her experience. I think to myself, “What a great idea! I’ll have to try that!”

The same happens when I “meet” another copywriter through reading their book.

Here are four books that fueled my copywriting imagination:

Writers for Hire: 101 Secrets for Freelance Success by Kelly James Enger. This book takes you step-by-step into the journey of freelancing. Most of the freelancing examples from the book are related to magazine article writing, but the concepts were useful for copywriting as well. Kelly emphasizes a personal touch by giving thank you notes to those she interviews, and she stresses the importance of keeping up on the business end of your writing life with invoices and paperwork.

Building a Storybrand: Clarify Your Message So Customers Will Listen by Donald Miller. People don’t really read emails or websites. They skim them. It’s not facts and figures that capture a skimmers attention. Storytelling captures attention. Donald Miller teaches you the simple elements of storytelling and applies them to business copywriting so you can catch the attention of customers and consumers and inspire them to participate in the call to action. Brilliant.

How to Write Copy That Sells: The Step-by-Step System for More Sales, to More Customers, More Often  by Ray Edwards.  This book is very practical with how-tos and templates for emails, websites, direct mail, and more. Includes tips and guidelines for social media posts as well which is an often overlooked area of copywriting.

102 Ways to Earn Money Writing 1,500 Words or Less: The Ultimate Freelancer’s Guide by I.J. Schecter. This book opened my eyes to unique writing possibilities that I never would have noticed otherwise. Wherever there are words, someone was paid to write them. My kids get tired of me saying it, but whenever they read a billboard or the bag that contains their fast food meal, I say, “Someone was paid to write that, you know.”

Sigh.

“Yes. We KNOW, Mom!”

Also, don’t be shy at initiating to ask if a business needs a copywriter. Even a big company. Send out an email describing your experience and your interest in writing about their service or product. The worse that can happen is… nothing. They never write back. The best case scenario? You land an awesome copywriting gig.

You don’t have to write fiction to be a creative writer. Open your eyes and take a look around you. What words are needed? Could you be the one to write them? Search #copywriter on Twitter and ask what kind of copywriting others do. Meet new people. Share your stories. Inspire each other to use your imagination.

Rachel Schmoyer is a pastor’s wife, mom of four, and a copywriter. She also helps Christians find the simple truths in the complex parts of the Bible at readthehardparts.com. Her other writings and publishing credits can be found on rachelschmoyerwrites.com.

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Copywrite/Advertising

Niches: How and When to Find Yours

Online copywriting gurus say you need a niche if you want to make it as a content marketing writer. Are they right? Do you need a copywriting niche? If so, how can a newbie discover the right one? What if you want to change later? Do you choose based on what you know, or what you’re interested in?

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Novelists Unwind

Novelists Unwind Welcomes Melody Carlson

Novelists Unwind Guest

Melody Carlson has written over 200 books but is especially known these days for her Christmas novellas. Her latest story, A Christmas by the Sea, was inspired by her own family’s experience of finding hundreds of sand dollars one Christmas while staying at a cabin along the Oregon coast.

New Releases

The authors featured in past interviews have been busy writing new books! Check out a few of the latest releases on Novelists Unwind.

New Releases from NU Featured Authors

More New Releases from NU Featured Authors

Novelists Unwind Giveaway

Congrats to Mary Roberts Smith who won Falling for You by award-winning author Becky Wade.

The next Novelists Unwind Giveaway will be announced on Saturday, November 3, 2018 at novelistsunwind.com. Be sure to enter for your chance to win a print edition of an amazing inspirational novel.

Meet Johnnie

Johnnie Alexander creates characters you want to meet and imagines stories you won’t forget. Her award-winning debut novel, Where Treasure Hides, made the CBA bestseller list. She writes contemporaries, historicals, and cozy mysteries, serves on the executive boards of Serious Writer, Inc. and the Mid-South Christian Writers Conference, co-hosts an online show called Writers Chat, and interviews inspirational authors for Novelists Unwind. She also teaches at writers conferences and for Serious Writer Academy. Connect with her at www.johnnie-alexander.com and other social media sites via https://linktr.ee/johnniealexndr.

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Book Proposals

Create a Winning Competetive Analysis

“Can I really compare my book with a bestselling author’s book?”

“Why do I need this? Won’t I shine the light on their book and not mine?”

“How many books do I need to compare and contrast?”

“What is a competitive analysis, anyway?”

These are just some of the questions I get while assisting my clients with the Competetive Analysis portion of their book proposal.

The CA is vital because it is used to prove to the agent or publisher that your book is similar enough to already published books that have an audience,
yet different enough to grab those established reader’s attention. It provides information on how well your book might sell in the same genre or market.
Publishers and agents love to see numbers, so the facts from a well developed, well researched CA can be used in your marketing plan which in turn gives you a better chance to get a contract.
Before you create you CA ALWAYS read the agent or publisher’s submission guidelines.

Here are a few tips to creating your Competitive Analysis

Research
Make a list of 7-10 books that tell the same type of story or give the same kind of information as your book.
Look for competing books on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Goodreads, BookDepository.com and other online booksellers.
Take a trip to a brick and mortar store or library to investigate what books are on the shelf where your book would
be once it’s published.  Yes, add a few bestsellers to the list. Note that traditionally published books by a larger publisher are preferred.
Stay away from self-published books unless they’ve sold thousands in the first year. Make sure the book was published within the last 5-7 years.

Obtain the following information from the books you chose to compare and contrast.
Title and subtitle
Author
Publisher
Copyright year
Number of pages
Format (paperback, hardcover, etc)
Price
ISBN
Answer these questions when you write the compare and contrast portion of each book.
How is my book similar?
How is my book different?
What promise does the author make to readers?
What promise does my book make that is different/similar from the other book?
How are my credentials similar/different from the other author?

Never criticize the other book or author.

Creating a professional book proposal takes time and effort. Many agents and publishers look at the Competitive Analysis and Marketing Plan first.

They want to know that the author is informed and ready to promote their book.

Yes, the proposal seems harder than writing the book, but I have total confidence that you can do it.

Stay the course, my friend. I’m here if you need me.

For more writing tips, check out www.seriouswriter.com/blog

Cherrilynn Bisbano is an award-winning writer.  She founded The Write Proposal after reading hundreds of book proposals with avoidable errors. These errors cost the author a contract or representation. As a former submission reader and junior literary agent, Cherrilynn wants you to succeed.  Her desire is to help you present a professional and memorable proposal.  She has written proposals for Paws for Effect, a Hollywood movie company, and helped edit many proposals.  As the previous managing editor of Almost an Author, she helped the website earn the #6 spot on the Top 100 best writing websites for 2018 by The Write Life and Top 101 Websites for writers with Writers Digest.

Cherrilynn hosted Genre Chat where she was privileged to interview expert writers like Jerry B. Jenkins, Cecil Murphy, Michelle Adams, Liz Curtiz Higgs, and Steven James.

She earned her associate’s degree in communications and continues to study business management.

She is a two-time winner of Flash Fiction Weekly. She’s published in many online magazines and blogs. Cherrilynn contributed to Chicken Soup for the Soul- MiraclesBreaking the Chains, and Heart Reno books.

Cherrilynn proudly served in the military for twenty years, earning the John Levitow Military leadership award.

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Blogging Basics

Make Your Blog Mighty: Attention To The Details

Do details matter? In the world of blogging, I would say, “Yes.” You labor over a beautifully crafted blog spending time, effort and energy to share your heart with your audience only to hear crickets. Has this happened to you? The following two tips could help make your blog hum with activity by paying attention to the details.

SEO Your Headings

I recently saw a lengthy news article online. After the title and under the featured image, the writer listed bullet points sharing the most important topics shared in the article. This helped me to decide if I wanted to read the article in its entirety.

Headings in a blog are similar to the points noted in the article. Using the Headings Feature in WordPress will help your blog to be easily read. This allows the reader to scan the blog and know, at a glance, if they would like to read it.

Another reason to craft Headings is for SEO. As stated in a Yoast article,

“Although not a major ranking factor, headings do affect SEO. That’s because headings are important to help users understand the subject of an article. And if readers use headings to figure out what an article is about, Google will too.”

Crafting headings helps visually set a block of text apart and aids with the readability score in WordPress.  Yoast SEO recommends you offer a heading for every 300 words. To add headings, you type the heading, highlight it, and then select the dropdown box that says Paragraph.

Heading 1 – 6 are available options to select from. I usually use Heading 2 throughout my blog. You can choose Heading 1 as your first heading and use Heading 2 in the remainder of your blog.  For this blog post, I used Heading 2 only.

The Mighty Meta-Description

The purpose of creating a meta description is to have a reader choose your blog to read. Similar to the description on a book jacket, the meta description helps draw them in. State why they should read your blog. Using 150 characters, craft enticing phrases like, Learn More, Get It Now and Try It For Free. This needs to mirror/match your content or Google may penalize your site.  The meta-description should have your selected keyword shared at least once for SEO purposes.

For my blog titled, Why Being A Mother Has Great Value, I wrote the following meta description:

Is there value in the mundane daily chores of being a mother? This article says, “Yes.” Read why being a mother has great value.

My selected focus keyword is: a mother has great value. These words are also contained in my title. Using the focus keywords in my meta description, and title helped to give my Yoast SEO score a green light.

Another example of a meta description used by Barnes & Noble for the memoir, I Can Only Imagine By Bart Millard is the following:

I Can Only Imagine is an amazing book. I was humbled just reading it, Mr. Millard’s story is fantastic to read. To know all that he is gone through in his life and how GOD fit exclusively into it.

In this meta description, Barnes & Noble chose to use a book review to entice the reader. However you choose to craft your meta description, remember to make it do the heavy lifting to gain attention. In other words, make it mighty.

Why do these details matter? Meta descriptions help to entice your reader. Headers help your readers decide if they want to continue to read. There are many aspects to writing, designing and marketing your blog. These two details are two of the ingredients to make your blog mighty. For more tips, read Sure Fire Ways To Gain An Audience .

Evelyn Mann is a mother of a miracle and her story has been featured on WFLA Channel 8, Fox35 Orlando, Inspirational Radio and the Catholic News Agency. A special interview with her son on the Facebook Page, Special Books by Special Kids, has received 1.4M views. Along with giving Samuel lots of hugs and kisses, Evelyn enjoys hot tea, sushi and writing. Visit her at miraclemann.com.

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Romancing Your Story

Falling in Love—NOT the Goal

My name is M. Rose Gardner and I am an aspiring author of contemporary romance.  This is my first article for A3 and I hope you enjoy it.

You may be looking at the title and wondering why the goal in a romance isn’t falling in love? Actually, the only person who should have that goal for the hero and heroine is the author.