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Journeying through the Writer's Life

Time to Write—The Best Gift You Can Give Yourself

We writers are an odd lot.

We’re driven to write, spending time composing poetry, writing books, researching articles. We doodle titles, character names, and plot ideas on scraps of paper. All the while feeling guilty about the time we spend pursuing our dream. I call it writer’s guilt.

So how have I solved this dilemma?

Years ago I made a conscious decision to give myself permission to make writing a priority. I gave myself the gift of time to write. Not only has giving myself this gift gotten me closer to achieving my goals and dreams, it’s given me a self-confidence I didn’t expect. The more I make writing a priority, the better I get at it. Then the more success I have, which leads to the courage to push myself and reach for the stars.

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Here are the steps I took to set aside time for writing:

  1. Come up with a schedule and keep regular, consistent hours. Notice I said regular hours—not normal ones. For years I wrote with young children. That meant writing in the afternoons and after they were in bed. Just because you’re working odd hours doesn’t mean you can’t have a schedule.
  1. Respect your dream. If your best friend, or child had a dream you’d encourage them to pursue it. Give yourself the same support that you’d give someone else. Trust me, you’re worth it!
  1. Be consistent. If you’re not accepting calls from your mother-in-law because you’re working, don’t spend the afternoon on the phone with your best friend. Stay focused on your writing. This is even more critical if your time is at a premium.
  1. Recruit a support team. Instead of adversaries, enlist your friends and family to help you reach your writing goals. Communicate those goals, clearly and frequently. Ask for their help to reach them. After all, what mother doesn’t want to help her baby succeed!
  1. Share your victories. Let those that help you share in the joy of goals accomplished and milestones reached.

What do you do to make your writing time a priority? What interruptions do you struggle with the most? Share your thoughts and we’ll all support each other.

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Grammar and Grace

Understanding Lie and Lay

 

We’ll take a break from adding more confusing words to our list this time and  focus only on the two verbs lie and lay. They are often confused because they’re both irregular verbs, and the past tense of lie is lay.

(present tense)     Lie                                         Lay
(past tense)           Lay                                        Laid
(past participle)   Have lain                             Laid

*To lie means “to recline.”

I hope to lie down to sleep at 9:30.

Last night, I lay down at 10:30.

I had lain in bed for two hours before I gave up and turned on the light.

*To lay means “to put down.”

Colleen, lay the baby in the crib for a nap, please.

Colleen laid the baby in the crib twenty minutes ago.

Colleen had laid the baby in the crib before the phone rang.

Next time, we’ll continue with more confusing words.

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The Ministry of Writing

Character Over Completion

I work like a mad scientist. When I am working on a writing project I am all in — laser-beam focus. I won’t shave. I can’t think about anything else. I don’t call my mom (sorry Mom). I lose track of the college football polls. My desk becomes littered with coffee cups, water bottles, and empty diet coke cans. My trashcan overflows with pierced K-cups. My desk lamp never gets turned off. There are stacks of research books everywhere I go. The project consumes me.

My metamorphosis into Dr. Frankenstein is due to the fact that I believe called of God to complete the project. I believe that the book or whatever it might be will change the world. Life begins to revolve around that important project.

Amazingly in those times I am able to do well with my quiet times and my relationship with God. I guess I incorporate prayer and Bible reading into the project. But my prayers center on the project. My Bible roulette is all about finding inspiration to push on.

Life becomes about one thing — the completion of that project.

When I struggle to even give my wife and children adequate attention. When I fail to contact family and friends I love dearly. When I don’t even do the hobbies I love then my personal character development is nowhere on the radar.

Writing. Word Count. Editing. Weed words. The perfect Pandora station. Research. Those things are on my radar.

Life becomes solely about completing the project which means that my attitude may go to pot.

It is downright scary how that I can be so driven to please God and serve Him through the completion of a project, but I totally ignore pleasing Him by becoming the person He wants me to be. I listen to lectures and read blogs of writing tips, but ignore the Holy Spirit prompting me not to be a jerk.

In pastoring I have been given the best advice on making my family a priority. I am regularly reminded that if I succeed as a pastor, but fail my family then ultimately I have failed. I think that same principle should be applied to our writing and our own character. If we succeed in creating masterpieces for the Lord, but fail to let Him work in our lives then we have failed.

To put our sanctification in perspective we need to keep in mind Ephesians 2:10, “For we are his workmanship, created in Christ Jesus for good works…” [bctt tweet=”Although we may be called to write, we are first His workmanship.”] We need to let Him work.

Therefore as writers driven to glorify God and reach others we must remember the words from the Psalm 46, “Be still and know that He is God.”

We need to get up from our desks. Step away from the lap top. Turn off the music. Let the coffee cool down. And let Him complete our character over us completing a project. As followers of Christ, we must remember character over completion.

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Storyworld

Acquiring Things of Value

When writing a speculative fiction novel, determine what the things of value are in your world. Water, food, shelter-building resources, fuel: these are essential to survival and can create primal conflicts in a story. Sometimes wars are fought over precious metals and rare elements with powerful properties either for magic or technology. Maybe your characters aren’t directly involved in your storyworld’s economy, but they’ll definitely feel its effects somehow.

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If precious commodities have anything in common, it’s that they are rare. Additionally, there are only five ways to acquire them: force, theft, trade, harvesting, or begging. The things of valuable in your novel, as well as the manner in which your characters (and their authorities) acquire them, will shape your fictitious world. Here are a handful of examples from various works of fiction.

Frank Herbert’s Dune portrays the relative need of two different substances, one native to the desert planet of Arrakis, the other quite rare. The rare commodity, water, was used as a form of currency, despite also being a necessary consumable. On the flip side, Arrakis’s primary export was its spice, an addictive drug used for its life-extending and prescience-granting purposes. Interstellar trades (and wars) were made to ensure the exchange of these two commodities, and such is the socio-economic and political stage for the epic saga in Dune.

The TV show Firefly also showed an interesting perspective on things of value. In the opening scene of the first episode, a crew of space pirates scavenge what looks to be a crate of precious metals from a derelict vessel. The entire episode leads you to believe that what Mal and his crew have stolen is something of incredible value. But by the show’s end, you discover the blocks of gold are essentially just foil-wrapped Powerbars. This causes some confusion until you realize just how desperate the border worlds are for food. Nevertheless, we get a glimpse of how the border folk survive – namely by trade and theft.

moonSimilarly, Robert Heinlein’s book, The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, briefly alludes to the commodity of air and the complicated manner in which colonists pay for that utility on a lunar base. Certainly not something we think of here on earth, where the air is free.

In these three examples, water, food, and air are all valuable commodities, despite each being common on earth. On the other hand, the fictional resource in the preceding examples, Dune’s “spice,” is unique and fundamental to Herbert’s amazing world – it literally wouldn’t function without it. If you’re writing a speculative fiction novel, what sort of unique resource needs exist in your storyworld? If you’ve read something with some interesting things of value or ways of obtaining them, consider leaving a comment below so you can pique the imaginations of fellow authors.

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Contest – Short Story Finalists and Winner

Congratulations to our finalists in Short Story!

Fox Quest – Sarah Zuehkle

A Child And A Nightlight – Heidi Melo

A Family for Christmas – Anna Henderson (WINNER)

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The Efficiency Addict

Using Pinterest for Writing Research

Pinterest for Writers – Part 1

If you’ve heard about Pinterest and think it’s only for women or crafters, think again. Pinterest encourages people from all over the world to gather around common interests and share their knowledge. This results in a rich database of information for writing research.

  • Have a character who’s into sailing, and you need the name of common boating knots? (Pinterest Search “Sailboat Knots”)
  • Want to know the color schemes of a 1950s kitchen? (Pinterest Search “1950s Kitchen Décor”)
  • Need to find a quaint Irish town for your next suspense novel? (Pinterest Search “Irish Towns”)

What’s the best part of using Pinterest for writing research? It’s easy, because other Pinterest users (a.k.a. Pinners) have already done a lot of the work for you.

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Research Tools You’ll Find on Pinterest

  1. Collections – Pinterest users collect articles and pictures that interest them onto boards. The Pinner names the board based on it’s topic and gives it a description. These names and descriptions are searchable by other Pinterest users. If you type the phrase “London Theater “ into the Pinterest search box, individual articles and pictures about this topic will appear as well as entire boards (collections of articles and pictures) on this subject. Bonus – Pinned items come from all over the Internet, including websites, Instagram pictures, Etsy listings, Ebay listings, and more.Writing Research-London Theater
  2. Expert Bloggers – When you click on a pin that interests you, you’ll find additional information. If the pin originated with a website, you can click on the website to read the full article or see other pictures. This is a great way to find blogs written by subject-matter gurus. Bloggers with strong material are pinned and shared. Note- If you’re a blogger, be sure to have a Pin This button on your blog posts so your great material can be shared, too.
  3. Original Documents – It’s critical for writers to get it right. Experts are wonderful. Primary source documents are even better. It’s not uncommon to have scans of primary source material pinned on Pinterest. When I searched Pinterest for “Edwardian Fashion,” I found a link to a 1910 print entitle “Children’s House Clothes for the Little Girl from 6 to 12.” It’s part of the The New York Public Library’s digital archives, a free resource with many additional original documents. Other source documents frequently found on Pinterest include archived magazine articles, how to books dating back to the 1800s, design schematics, and antique photographs. How to Use Pinterest for Writing Research.
  4. Related Pins – When you click on a Pin, Related Pins appear below it. These are pins similar to the one you selected. So, each search and selection you make leads you to a host of other selections that are already pre-sorted for you.

To learn more about how to use Pinterest, connect with me at The EfficiencyAddict on Pinterest or visit my blog at TheEfficiencyAddict.com. This month’s #WorkSmarter Series is all about using Pinterest for writers, speakers, and small business owners.

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Contest – Novel and Non-fiction Combined Categories

Congratulations to our finalists in Novel and Non-fiction!

Dreaming of Darkness – PJ Lightning

The Least of These – Kathleen Neely (WINNER)

The Stone Cottage – Sandra Merville Hart

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Contest – Novella Winner

Congratulations to our Novella Category Winner!

Carol of the Rooms – Diana Leagh Matthews

Play On, Jordan – Iola Goulton (WINNER)

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A Pinch of Poetry

Poet Snapshot: Langston Hughes

I fell in love with Langston Hughes’ poetry when only a teenager in high school. Still today, I enjoy reading and re-reading his beautiful word pictures. This talented African-American poet’s work contributed greatly to the Harlem Renaissance of the 1920’s.

One thing I admire about his work is that he wrote in simple, everyday language. Yet his poetry exhibits creativity and beauty that examines the struggles of everyday life, especially of black Americans. Although his poems are usually easy to understand (and some are quite short) the complexity is between the layers of figurative language he uses.

I connect with his poetry personally because the themes touch on our common experiences: disappointments, love, sorrow, hopes, etc…

As you read through five of my favorite poems below, note his simple, elegant style and the depth of his messages. We can learn from this poet that powerful imagery, figurative language and themes are more important than word count.

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“Dreams,” probably one his shortest poems, examines the effect of disappointment. Take a look at the metaphors and the imagery. Did you also notice the sound devices of alliteration and rhyme?

“Theme for English B” addresses the issue of race on the surface. Underneath it reveals the power of poetry to break the barriers between people and find common ground. Yet even with the complex theme, he still uses simple language and imagery to communicate his message.

“Mother to Son” is a brilliant poem in which he takes on the persona of a mother encouraging her son. He reveals the darkness we encounter in life but leaves us with encouragement to press on. The extended metaphor of the broken down staircase paints a detailed picture of the speaker’s struggles. Each attribute of the staircase can symbolize a different kind of difficulty.

“Dream Deferred” is another short poem that paints a distinct image of disappointment through the use of metaphor. The message poignantly comes through his use of rather disgusting images. His technique shows that it’s not the number of words you use for the effect, but it’s how you use them.

“Dream Keeper” is probably my top favorite Langston Hughes poem. In a succinct way, the poet describes the delicate nature of dreams. His metaphors of “heart melodies” and “blue cloud-cloth” are such unique, amazing images that leave a deep impression on the reader.

Hopefully, you’ve enjoyed reading just a few of the many poems Langston Hughes penned. If you want to read more poetry by this poet, click here.

Did any of these poems resonate with you? Tell me below.

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Article Contest Finalists and Winner

Congratulations to our Article Category Finalists and Winner!

We Can’t Go Back – Curt Lovelace

Suffering Is For A Lot Of Things – Sandra Lovelace

Football, Fireworks, and a Big Green Piano – Leigh Ann Thomas (WINNER)

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A Word in Season Uncategorized

Cracked Pots

Sometimes we feel like cracked pots.

An old story tells of a water-bearer in India who daily carried two pots on a pole carried across his neck. Between the master’s house and river he walked back and forth for two years. One pot was cracked and slowly leaked water along the path. Each day the water-bearer arrived at the house with only one and a half pots of water.

After two years, the cracked pot, feeling embarrassed and undignified compared to the other pot, apologized to the man.

“I have made your work more difficult. I am not as good as the perfect pot. I am ashamed that my flaw increases your labor.”

The compassionate water-bearer, replied, “When we return to the house, notice all the pretty flowers along the side of the path.”

As they journeyed that day, the pot realized that beautiful flowers of many colors adorned one side of the dusty path. But, the pot saw, the flowers only grew on one side.

Returning to the master’s house, the water-bearer explained, “I have always known that you were cracked, and I chose to use you for this purpose. I planted flower seeds of many varieties along your side of the path. Every day as we walk back from the stream, you water them. For two years I have picked these flowers and decorated the master’s table. This saved me time from having to water them myself.”

The water-bearer then said, “You see, it was because you were a cracked pot that I could use you for this purpose.”

We live in a world that idolizes seeming perfection. Photo-shopped magazine covers and internet ads show so-called perfect bodies. Television and movies are able to present flawless scenes. When enraptured with the art of such scenes, we forget that the actors and director may have spent all day filming that one scene, making dozens of mistakes in the process.

Our facebook world allows people to portray the social-media image of their choosing. The person who boasts of the perfect marriage online forgot to tell you about the argument he had with his wife last week. And when your friend posted her pictures from the perfect vacation, she failed to mention that she felt jealous when you went to the beach last year for your anniversary.

God wants to use cracked pots. He designed it that way. Our flaws, though they may never make it to a photo-shopped screen image, do not limit the Creator from working through our lives.

Brennan Manning writes, “Despite our physical cracks, intellectual limitations, emotional impairments, and spiritual fissures, we are providentially equipped to fulfill the unique purpose of our existence.”

The Lord stores His gifts not in Lennox china but in jars of clay – common, earthenware vessels.

As we write, we can resist the urge to compare our writing to others.

“I will never write like John Jakes or Donald McCaig!”

But God does not compare us to the other pot. He wants to use our cracked ones. And as substance seeps out of our pen, it waters countless seeds along the way, producing a harvest of beauty to be enjoyed and shared.

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Devotions Contest Finalists and Winner

Congratulations to our Devotion Category Finalists and Winner!

Red Chair Moments – April White

A Christmas Carp – Sandra Lovelace

Sealed With Love – Sheryl Baker

Dying To Self – Leigh Powers (WINNER)

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Publishing Perspectives

Describing the Ideal Reader

In last month’s column, I mentioned that an item of an Author’s Questionnaire from a publisher is the request to describe the ideal reader or target audience for your book. And no, your book is not targeted to “everyone.” And no, don’t assume your reader is just like you and describe yourself.

The publisher will use this description to market the book more efficiently. For example, the details will help them create an ad set on social media, or generate keywords for search engines.

Reader ProfileSo what kind of information is the publisher looking for? It’s a bit like a profile you would see on a crime TV show. Especially if you’ve ever watched “Criminal Minds” because they talk more about habits and behavior than just the physical traits of the unsub (unknown subject, the bad guy). To make it less creepy, let’s instead consider a social media profile. I’m looking at my Facebook profile as I write this. Facebook has your profile divided into sections: Overview, Work and Education, Places You’ve lived, Contact and Basic Info, Family and Relationships, Details About You, and Life Events. Those sound like pretty good categories, so write those down on a piece of paper.

For each of these categories, think in the abstract. Think of the perfect reader. If you could only sell this book to exactly one person, what kind of person would that be so that they would give it the most outstanding review? What kind of person is the best possible match to be a fan of this book?

Many readers want to identify with, or connect with, the main character(s). So think of your hero and heroine. What kind of person would be their BFF? Remember, a BFF isn’t necessarily a clone. Your ideal reader will match this profile in every aspect, but real readers will only partially match. But it gives the publisher an idea of how to find communities of people that are more likely to have that partial match. For example, ideal readers of Amish fiction are probably people who love the idea of a less technological life.

Work and Education:

We don’t need a list of actual schools. Are your main characters in high school? College? Never went to school? An ideal reader doesn’t have to match the education level of the main character; they just have to enjoy the idea of being in high school or college, etc. Someone who hated high school is less likely to be an ideal reader of books with high-school-aged characters.

We don’t need a resume for the work experience aspect. Is the main character working their first summer job in high school? First job after college? Established career? Retired? What kind of career: science? Technology? Arts? Homemaker? Your ideal reader will have a similar background or think positively of that background so that they more easily identify with the character. Main characters who spout technical jargon constantly may be of less interest to the reader who holds a Fine Arts degree. Farmer characters may be of less interest to those who have a PhD in Computer Science. But again, perhaps that PhD person has a vegetable garden and dreams of getting away to a dude ranch for vacation. So, the way you’ll phrase this characteristic is “those who work in or have an interest in blah-blah.”

Places the Ideal Reader has Lived:

No, we don’t really need a list of actual cities, unless those cities are featured in the story. But think about it in general. Is your story set in a rural area? A small town? A large city? What country is the story set in? Is the story setting a specific locale/county/state/province? The ideal reader will live in a similar place, wishes they lived in a similar place, or wants to vacation in a similar place. Make note of any real locations used in the book; the publisher may want to market the book to stores and tourist attractions in that area.

Contact and Basic Info:

If you happen to have a mailing list of specific people who will enjoy receiving an advertisement about your book, your publisher would probably like to know about it. Failing that detailed contact information, let’s talk basic demographics. Is the ideal reader male or female? In general, romances are aimed at female audiences, and thrillers are aimed more at men. I do know a highly-educated man in his 70s who only reads Regency Romance, but that can’t be a common thing. So unless you can present a strong argument why your book would attract a non-traditional audience yet still belong in a particular genre, go with the stereotype.

The age of the ideal reader may have a connection to the age of the main characters. Until recently, Young Adult titles were only read by teenagers. But they are currently attractive to readers in their 20s, 30s, and even 40s. Hollywood adaptations of books has a lot to do with this. Women’s Fiction is typically aimed at the 30+ crowd, etc. Think about your main character. Would their BFF be a teenager? A 20-something? 30-something? 40-something? Etc. So while readers in other age groups may be fans of the book, write down the decade of the reader who would be the BFF. If you really, really can’t narrow it down to one decade, then at least select the generation (Baby boomer, Generation X, Millennials, etc) that is the closest match.

Language is another basic data point, especially if you have a character who routinely injects words from a different language than the rest of the text. For example, if you have a main character who grew up speaking Spanish and uses Spanish frequently in dialog along with English, then the publisher would like to know that bilingual readers could be a special area of marketing.

Ethnic affinity or nationality of the main characters (and thus the ideal reader) may be important to the publisher who targets a minority population.

Family and Relationships:

Your readers want to identify with the main characters, so are we looking for only-children? The oldest of 11 kids? Those who grew up in a single-parent family? Those who are estranged from whatever family they have?

What is the relationship of the main characters in the story? If the main characters are married at the start of the story, then the book can’t be marketed as Romance but has to be Women’s Fiction instead. If they are friends or co-workers but falling in love is not the point of the story, then the plot better have enough action to class the novel as a thriller or suspense or mystery.

Details About the Ideal Reader:

If the above categories seemed difficult, hang on to your hat because this one is harder.

Given the story line, is your ideal reader more likely to be politically or culturally conservative, moderate, or liberal? Are they active in any particular causes (that are important to the book)? Does the ideal reader attend a specific denomination of church?

What interests, hobbies, sports, and activities are important to your main characters (especially if they are in the book)?

Life Events:

Are there any specific life events that your ideal reader should identify with? For example, is it important to the story that your reader got engaged in the last 12 months? If so, your publisher can rent a mailing list of people newly engaged and send them an advertisement… yeah… the list development people know a bunch of scary details about you.

Overview:

Let’s sum up. This is where a cop would say “We’re looking for a married female in her 30s, with more than one child, who is socially and politically conservative, enjoys living near or frequently visiting a large city, and is interested in urban gardening.”

Come back next month to learn more about keywords and BISAC categories!

Let’s practice… leave a comment with your suggestion for an ideal reader for a book you read recently, and tell us what book it is!

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Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Poetry Contest Finalists

Congratulations to our Poetry Finalists and Winner!

Heather Lamm

Jennifer Grizzle

Al Lim

Meredith Hutton (WINNER)

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Contests Fresh Voices Writing Contest

Fresh Voices Flash Fiction Contest Finalists

Congratulations to our Flash Fiction Finalists and Winner!

 

Elusive Forgiveness by Sheryl Baker

To the Old Sod by Curt Lovelace

An Honorable Estate by Leigh Ann Thomas (WINNER)

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Craft Writing with Humor

Five Ways to Add Humor Using Juxtaposition

One of these things is not like the other. One of these things just doesn’t belong . . .

Perhaps that should be the theme song for the useful literary device called juxtaposition.

Juxtaposition — positioning two or more characters, ideas, objects, or places beside each other in order to draw comparisons and contrasts — and for our purposes, a laugh.

Regardless of what genre you’re writing, juxtaposition is a powerful tool, especially when you want to add a touch of humor.

Below are five ways juxtaposition can add humor to your writing:

1. Juxtaposition Provides an Unexpected Laugh

A non-fiction author may write about a serious subject, but depending on the topic, he may still wish to add humor. (See How Humor Helps When Writing About Sensitive Topics.)

Juxtaposition is a great way to inject humor and make any statement more memorable.

I read a poem recently by an unknown author. One line remains stuck in my head like the Nationwide theme hum by Peyton Manning, except I like this line: 

I thoroughly hate loving you.

What a perfect juxtaposition. Love and hate.

2. Juxtaposition Creates Interesting Conflict

Without conflict, there’s no story.

Novels, movies, and plays often feature lead characters with opposite attributes or personalities in order to create interesting conflict.

Consider the 1970’s TV series The Odd Couple.

The juxtaposition of the fussy, neat freak Felix Unger with his apathetic, sloppy roommate Oscar Madison created five seasons of TV fun and plenty of awards.

Watch the following opening theme song for The Odd Couple’s humorous juxtapositions:

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Uncategorized WARFARE!

Overcome Evil With Good

I remember when I had my first Twitter shock a few years ago: I discovered that people post pornography on Twitter. Lots of people. Lots of pictures.

But that is not the shocking part. The internet is full of pornography, nothing new there.

The shocking part is that Twitter allows it. And you can get a Twitter account at any age, which in my mind equated to, “Twitter Supports Exposing Minors to Pornography.”

After my initial outraged-sobbing-yelling-hair-peeled-back explosion, I did a little internet research on Twitter and pornography. Apparently they’ve been in the news here and there for several years now on this topic. Their position is to monitor what appears directly on their site, but to not monitor links to external sites. They leave it up to the individual user to determine who to follow and who to block.

Still a bit upset about all of this, I went for my daily walk with the Lord. I walked, listened to worship music, and pondered.

“OK, well, then, I just won’t use Twitter. I’ll show them! I can’t believe so many other Christians are out there, are they all oblivious to this awful danger? What am I missing here? I just can’t believe this! I’m going to take action, write to someone, see …”

Overcome evil with good.”

The Lord interrupted my ranting with His still small voice. The complete verse is, “Do not be overcome by evil, but overcome evil with good.” (Romans 12:21 NIV)overcome evil with good

Yes, I allowed the evil I found in Twitter to overcome my thoughts, my emotions, and my time. I was ready to attack – not just the evil, but all those who I felt should be DOING something.

Then I realized it: they ARE doing something. They are posting about the Lord, His goodness, His truth. They are sharing each other’s posts of encouragement, love, and kindness.

They are overcoming evil with good.

This is why it’s so important for all who are called to write to share on Twitter or on other social media venues. Each time we post something that glorifies God, we give Him ammunition – truth – to reach all the people who are searching, seeking, restless, and lonely. The more we share God’s truth, love, and grace online, the more opportunity everyone will have to meet Him and know Him.

Including those who use Twitter for evil. May they be overcome by Jesus Tweets!

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Romancing Your Story

ENTERING CONTESTS – PART TWO

 

In my last column, I tried to convey the good outcomes you can receive when you enter your writing in contests. I used some of my own experiences and the benefits of entering – even if you don’t win.

This time I’d like to give you a little more practical information to help you know what the process will look like; nothing earth shattering, just tips that might save you some time and money. I will also give you a web site that can help you find the right contests for you. (NOTE: Remember, I am speaking from a strictly fiction view point. I believe there are blog site contests and non-fiction contests as well, but I personally don’t have any experience in those areas.)

In my humble opinion, there are four distinct elements to be aware of when considering whether to enter a contest:

  1. TIMING – This aspect is pretty simple. If you’ve written a book in 2015, you will be entering contests in 2016, even if your book came out in January 2015. The entry dates range from January through April for the most part, so that will be key in looking for the contests you might be eligible to enter.
  1. LOGISTICS
  • Eligibility – 99.9% of the contests out there are for either published or unpublished works. They would very rarely be mingled, so be sure to determine first whether your work is eligible. Obviously, if you are unpublished, you may not be hampered by a date requirement as addressed above, just be sure and read the eligibility requirements closely.
  • Category and Word Counts – When I introduced myself to you in my first column, I explained to you that I write Christian historical romances set in the Regency genre. I can promise you there is no such category in any contest I’ve ever been a part of. That description is way too specific. And you need to know that the majority of rules allow you to enter your book in one category. So in my example, I must choose to describe it as “Inspirational” or “Historical Romance” or “Regency Fiction” – only one! And there are many more categories to choose from: Young Adult, Contemporary Fiction, Paranormal, Romantic Suspense, Erotica, and Novella, just to name a few. And each contest may have any combination of the categories available to you. So you must think long and hard about the strongest element of your story and the category that will give you the best chance of winning. Just an afterthought, I can let that decision keep me up nights and/or second guessing myself to death. Be smarter, submit your work, then give it to God!
  • Costs – The entry fees for most contests are really pretty reasonable. Usually, if you are a member of the host organization (i.e. ACFW – American Christian Fiction Writers), you enter at a lower dollar figure than if you are not. The entry cost can be as low as $20-$25 for a member or $30-$35 for a non-member. It varies, of course, but that is the average.

The additional cost is in the submission of your entry. An unpublished contest normally asks for a full synopsis and the first 25 pages of your manuscript. Usually, they ask for you to submit it electronically and that, of course, would cost nothing. But it is possible they will want a hard copy and that results in postage costs to you, whether you send it regular mail or certified decides the amount.

For published author contests, most entries are 3-5 actual books mailed to the contest administrator. As most authors know, the too few “author copies” the publisher sends can seem like gold to be hoarded. Once they are gone, you may even have to buy more copies of your own book! Depending on the number of author copies given you, you may not have the luxury to enter every contest you would like, so you may choose a little more thoughtfully. Perhaps you would skip a Suspense contest because the romance element outweighs the suspense. (NOTE: Because I like entering contests, my agent and I worked with my publisher on my contract to include a higher number of author copies.) But if you do not need to buy any more copies of your book, the only other cost for you is the postage.

  1. JUDGING – You need to know right up front that sometimes the judges’ comments vary so

greatly you will wonder if they all read the same book! While that is a drastic statement (sort

of), judging, by its very nature is subjective, so don’t fret, it is all part of the contest

experience. The important thing is what you take away from the judges’ comments,

suggestions and criticisms, not the score itself. The judging can be invaluable to you, not

only in the work you submitted, but in everything you write in the future…if you take them

in the way the judges want you to. If you don’t believe a judge has your best interest at heart

and disregard them, you miss out on a fount of wisdom (by those who know) on which to

build a little more with each contest you enter.

  1. REWARDS – Rewards! Once you start entering contests, many coordinators may ask you to be a judge down the road. This is as valuable as the comments to your work. You will see excellence in writing and you will see, perhaps, some sloppy writing. Either way, you can weigh that against things you have done or not done and learn the difference. Judging is also a serious matter to the author and you can provide insights of your own to help out another.

Finally, there is always the possibility of being a winner! You will notice I used the word

“rewards” and not “prizes” because most give out framed certificates. And you know what?

a framed certificate exclaiming you as the winner looks just as great hanging on the wall

over your desk as a trophy or award. Then you also have the right in your new author

bio and the wonderful feeling each time you sign your name to add “Award Winning

Author.” Forever! It doesn’t get any better than that!

I hope this has been helpful to those of you who have avoided contests like the plague or those of you who have wondered about their worth. I will end with the most valuable information I can give you, how and where do I find out when contests open up. This Yahoo web page will alert you to upcoming contests. If you are not a member of Yahoo, you may have to “join” or “sign-up” to be a member, but it should be worth your while if you want to hear about some of the contests you might be interested in. (NOTE: – When you see the different contest names, I google them and get sent directly to the site that is administering the contest for the most detailed information.) Once you are signed in as a member of that Yahoo group, you should get email updates when someone posts a contest to that site. Go to:

https://groups.yahoo.com/neo/groups/contestalert/conversations/message

In fact, this contest for unpublished authors is active right now:

https://sfarwa.net/contests.htm

So there’s no excuse NOT to enter at least one! Let me know below your thoughts and/or experiences and should you have questions, feel free to ask.

 

 

 

 

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Platform and Branding

How to use weaknesses and threats to grow your writer platform

Occasionally a business development tool comes along that works well for writers.

SWOT Analysis

SWOT—Strengths, Weaknesses, Opportunities and Threats—was popularized in the 1960s by management consultant Albert S Humphrey. This planning model helps managers develop marketing and project strategies.

Writers can also apply the SWOT Analysis to grow their platform. Your goal is to look objectively at the following four areas (a critique partner may help you think through your lists):

SWOT - strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, threats

Strengths and weaknesses are the internal factors you can control. Opportunities and threats are the external factors you can’t control.

A worksheet is available in this download: SWOT Analysis for Writers

Strengths

Make a list of things you do well. Include professional skills as well as strong personal habits, such as:

  • relationships with other writers,
  • keeping a consistent posting schedule,
  • keeping up with trends,
  • concise writing skills,
  • attention to your social media network,
  • ability to self-edit,
  • strong vocabulary,
  • self-discipline,
  • commitment to learn and grow,
  • focus,
  • determination,
  • thick skin.

Weaknesses

List your weak areas, being brutally honest:

  • procrastination,
  • being easily discouraged or distracted,
  • balking at critique,
  • insecurity,
  • lack of discipline,
  • apathy,
  • overly critical,
  • pessimistic attitude,
  • isolating yourself from other writers, or perhaps even friends and family.

Opportunities

What opportunities did you have last year? What opportunities are on the horizon? Are you aware of any writing or publishing trends that may benefit you?

Threats

What external factors, factors out of your control, could sidetrack your writing progress this year?

The Analysis

Once you’ve compiled your lists, ask these four questions:

  1. What can you do to continue making progress in your areas of strengths?
  2. How will you position yourself to take advantage of your opportunities?
  3. What can you do to turn your weaknesses into strengths?
  4. How might you guard against threats, or avoid them altogether?

A personal SWOT Analysis can help writers develop a strategy that minimizes their chances for discouragement and maximizes their potential for success. Download your worksheet here: SWOT Analysis for Writers

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Polishing Your Message

Building Bridges With Transitions

Transitions are an important element in our writing. Without them a paragraph can sometimes feel like we are reading a grocery list. The sentences seem choppy feeling like we are jumping from one thought to another.

I like to tell my students to think of transitions as bridges. They help connect the writer’s thoughts and allow the reader to easily follow and comprehend the message. Without them, the reader may have to work harder to concentrate and associate the unwritten connections. (Do remember, as writers, it is our job to make reading easy for our audience.) In addition, transitions will polish our writing and help us not lose our readers as we deliver our message.

As mentioned, I think of transitional devices as bridges, which brings to mind many different types of bridges: short bridges, long bridges, covered bridges, weak bridges,  and sturdy steel bridges. Without them, we cannot get to the other side, which is often where we are trying to take our readers. Equally, many different types of transitions are available as tools to help move our thoughts along. These transitions can be short using one word, long using phrases, weak by choosing wrong words, and sturdy dependable transitions like the list below.   These bridges can transport readers past years in time with a few little words. For example: “Six years later. . . .” Or maybe we skip to the next thought using words like ” first, next,” and “finally.” Choosing the best transitional device takes practice and a good ear, so be sure to read the text aloud and listen to hear if it connects your thoughts smoothly.

The different transitional devices and phrases will lead the reader in a variety of directions.   See below a list of common transitions and their purposes.  Many list are available online (see above link) and handy tools to have available.   

  • Addition or Sequences – also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, in addition
  • Comparison – also, similarly, in the same way, likewise
  • Contrast – even so, however, in contrast, still, otherwise, nevertheless
  • Examples – for example, for instance, that is
  • Emphasis – Indeed, in fact, of course
  • Place – below, elsewhere, nearby, to the east
  • Repetition or Summary – in brief, in other words, in short, in summary
  • Cause and Effect – as a result, consequently, hence, therefore, thus
  • Time Sequence- Eventually, finally, meanwhile, next, once, then, today, now

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In a similar manner, life also offers us many transitions. I recently experienced a major life transition (which is why my posts are void a couple expected blogs). On July 15, 2015, I had no idea what my immediate or long term future held. I didn’t know my future job or expected resources. My youngest was leaving the nest and starting college. Thus, I was unsure of my future purpose and direction. Nevertheless, by August 15, 2015, God had moved me to Savannah, moved me from a three bedroom home with a garage to a one bedroom condo, moved me into a new job, and made me an official Empty Nester all in one week. How is that for godly transitions? He built a bridge in 30 days which was easy to follow and easy to comprehend knowing His hand was in every aspect of my life transition.

As a result, I think God often likes to show off in how he makes a transition come about. During that month, He sure showed off to me. He had me laughing, praising, and full of joy as he provided  encouraging Christian shoppers at three yard sales to downsize. The sales alone were fun, joyful, and full of good wishes and prayers for my future from strangers. Next, He led me to the perfect condo close to the beach, and He provided kind people to help me move. (Living near the beach has been a desire for many years, but I expected it would not be reality until much later in life . . . Thank you Lord!) He opened a door to teach in a Christian environment, and as always, He provided the resources needed perfectly. This bridge to my next season in life was joyful, easy to cross, and covered with his protection all the way.

Meanwhile, my long term future is still unknown now living as an Empty  Nester  enjoying Fridays spent reading, writing, and biking.  As an adjunct instructor, for me my semesters are also my bridges. I know not where the end of this one will lead, and I do not worry. He has provided all I need for this semester. So although I am single, I am not alone. Today, January 15, 2016, I am here Lord, ready to cross the next bridge with you.

PS. When I wrote my bio 6 months ago, I never dreamed I would be living near the beach within 30 days. God is good. (Imagine big smile here.)

So, what life transitions has God used to show off in your world lately?

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Sources: Quick Access: Reference for Writers 7th ed.  Lynn Q Troyka and Douglas Hessee (65)

 

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Tour

Blog Tour Stop – Lisa Belcastro

[author title=”Lisa Belcastro” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/12/lisa_belcastro-439×320.jpg”]Lisa Belcastro lives with her family on Martha’s Vineyard. She loves time with her family and friends, running, gardening, outdoor activities, cooking, chocolate, reading, traveling, a healthy dose of adventure, and her cat, Ben, who keeps her company while she creates fictional lives for the numerous characters living inside her head. Lisa runs as an ambassador for TEAM 413 (www.team413.org), and has completed a marathon (26.2 miles) in all fifty states. Lisa’s stories are set on the Vineyard amidst the magnificence of the ocean, the beauty of sandy beaches, rolling hills, and ancient cliffs, as well as the people and events that make the Island so very unique. When she’s not at her desk, Lisa is living in paradise, volunteering at her daughter’s school, serving in her church community, planting and weeding her numerous gardens, training to run the Walt Disney World Dopey Challenge in January 2016, walking the beach looking for sea glass, or enjoying a great meal while she pens the cuisine column for Vineyard Style Magazine.[/author]

What is the title of your book?

A Shenandoah Family Christmas

What is it about?

Disease, freezing temperatures, and the Revolutionary War bring bitter reality to the Reed home in December 1777. Captain Benjamin Reed is ordered to sail a supply shipment south to General George Washington. Days before Shenandoah’s scheduled departure, Ben’s first mate succumbs to smallpox.

Rebecca Reed had never feared the dreaded disease until her one-year-old daughter Felicity breaks out in the telltale rash. In the cold, dark days of Advent, Rebecca, Ben, and the Reed family wait in prayerful hope as Felicity fights for her life and they wonder who could be next.

With the rest of the family at risk, they decide to obtain the forbidden cowpox vaccine. Ben’s brother Jonah, his uncle Isaiah, and Shenandoah’s cook Adam Greene venture off in search of the outlawed vaccine. A blizzard hits. A tree crashes. Jonah crumbles to the ground. A woman with the face of an angel aids Jonah, but is it too late? And where are Adam and Isaiah?

As the death toll rises throughout the Colonies, the Reed family prays for more than one Christmas miracle.

Why do you write what you do?

I write both historical fiction and contemporary fiction. Growing up outside of Boston, I’m an avid history fan of the American Revolutionary War time period. When I began writing my first novel, Shenandoah Nights, I knew I wanted to have part of the story set during the War. I can spent hours, or days, immersed in research. A research trip to Boston is an extra-special treat, especially walking the Freedom Trail again and climbing aboard the USS Constitution.


All of my novels are set in part or in whole on Martha’s Vineyard. I love the Vineyard. I summered here for years, and then ten years ago I decided to stay on. My contemporary novels are very Vineyard, with my characters walking, swimming, fishing, dining and living just as my family and friends do. When I’m writing in present day, I get so caught up in the story that I occasionally forget that I my character was the one who went to the grocery store, not me, and I’d better get there if we want dinner. At times my family was less than amused. 😉

What are you currently working on?

I have three books for 2016 — Audition for Love, which is the second book in my Possible Dreams trilogy. I’m having a blast with this one. I’ve got a Broadway star on Island for a month as she’s starring in a summer theatre production. She meets an attorney, also from New York City and also on vacation. They have nothing in common and absolutely no interest in each other. At least that’s what they keep telling themselves.


The next book, Shenandoah Song, is the sixth installment in the Winds of Change series. Set in 1778, Shenandoah Song tells the love story of Jonah and Ava, who were minor characters in A Shenandoah Family Christmas. I absolutely LOVE Jonah and Ava.
I’ll also have a Christmas novella next November, but I haven’t decided which series will be represented in the novella. I guess it will depend which characters I’m missing the most. Right now I’m leaning toward Ryan, Laurel, and Gracie for A Dream for Love.

How does your work differ from other work in its genre?

My stories are set on Martha’s Vineyard. I think I’m the only faith-based author writing inspirational  novels on Island. Whether you’ve visited the Island or want to visit, my books will give you a true taste of what life is really like on Martha’s Vineyard. It’s not all presidents and movie stars. I portray the “real” everyday life, with a romance, history, adventure, and a happily ever afters.

How does your writing process work?

I wish I could tell you that I plan every chapter, and make copious amounts of wonderful detailed notes. I don’t. I picture the story in my head, jot down a page or two of notes so I don’t forget, and then I start writing. If I have to break for research, then I’ll do a quick notion of my thoughts about where the story should be going.  So far, this method works best for me.


At the end of each writing day, I print out the pages that I’ve written. I bring them to the gym the next morning, and edit while I’m running on the treadmill or elliptical. It might sound crazy, but I have my best ideas while running.

Social Media and Blog:

www.lisabelcastro.com

www.facebook.com/belcastrolisa

www.twitter.com/VineyardRomance

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Truth Be Told

Keep Those Batteries Charged!

I love my spin toothbrush. My teeth just feel cleaner.

The other day I was surprised when it stopped working. What I hadn’t realized was it had been dying for days. Slowly slowing down…until it just…stopped.

I stood there at the sink holding my fancy toothbrush that was no longer fancy. I tried to finish brushing, but it just wasn’t right without the power.

How had I managed all those years without it?

Power is like that. We don’t tend to realize how much we have until it’s gone. And it doesn’t go away all at once.

No. It slowly disappears. Bit by bit. Little by little. Until it’s gone.

I’ve noticed this happening more as the years go by. Physically, I have less energy. And it doesn’t take near as long for the reservoirs to be depleted.

And it happens spiritually, too.

We must, therefore, pay even more attention to what we have heard, so that we will not drift away. For if the message spoken through angels was legally binding and every transgression and disobedience received a just punishment, how will we escape if we neglect such a great salvation? (Hebrews 2:1-3a, HSCB)

Truth be told: We can’t.

Either way you want to look at it: it’s easy to drift and hard to hold on. Schedules fill up. Days are spent on the run. And I don’t know about you, but I blinked and lost this entire year. Then before we know it we have neglected our spiritual lives and like the Ephesians have left our first love (see Revelation 2:4).

As I considered using the Hebrews text, I noticed for the very first time the instruction is to not merely pay attention, but we are counseled to pay even more attention.

Going through the motions is not enough. The NIV translation paints the clearest instruction, “we must pay the most careful attention.” I imagine there will be as many different ways that will happen as there are believers. I’ve got my list, do you?

Here’s what I believe, if we become more intentional in our attention we will be less likely to find ourselves with spiritually dead batteries drifting away.

Now if you’ll excuse me I need to hunt for some AAA batteries.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Bestsellers

Bestselling Author – Doug Peterson

[author title=”Doug Peterson” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/Bowler-Hat.jpg”]Doug Peterson is the author of over 60 books, including four historical novels–The Disappearing Man, The Puzzle People, The Vanishing Woman, and the Lincoln League. Doug’s first novel with Kingstone Cinema Books, “The Disappearing Man,” is based on the true story of one of the most amazing escapes in American history. In 1849, Henry Brown, a slave, was sealed inside a wooden box and mailed from Richmond to Philadelphia–a 27-hour ordeal. “The Disappearing Man” was selected by Canton, Ohio, as its featured book for its annual One Book, One Community program in 2011. It has also been optioned for film. “The Puzzle People” is Doug’s page-turning follow-up. It is a murder/suspense novel based on events surrounding the rise and fall of the Berlin Wall. “The Puzzle People” follows the lives of two couples who were split apart when the Wall went up. “The Vanishing Woman” is based on the incredible true escape from slavery by Ellen and William Craft. In 1848, Ellen escaped by posing as a white man, while her husband pretended to be her slave. Ellen and William Craft put the Fugitive Slave Law to the test, changing our country forever. “The Lincoln League” is inspired by the true story of John Scobell, one of the first African American spies in the U.S. intelligence service. John worked as a spy for the Union during the first year of the Civil War, while his wife remained in Richmond. This Civil War novel follows both of their stories during the tumultuous first year of the war. Doug also authored 42 books in the popular VeggieTales series. “The Slobfather” won the 2004 Gold Medallion Award for preschool books, and he was co-storywriter for the best-selling video, “Larry-Boy and the Rumor Weed.” In addition, he has written for the University of Illinois for over 30 years, covering everything from engineering and agriculture to chemistry and history. His popular short story, “The Career of Horville Sash,” was made into a music video featuring Grammy-winner Jennifer Warnes, and he even co-wrote “Roman Ruins,” an episode in the bestselling line of How to Host a Murder party games.[/author]How long have you been writing?

I have been writing since the first grade, which was when I decided I wanted to be a writer (honestly). In fact, I had my own publishing empire in third and fourth grade, writing over 100 books that I stapled together and passed around to friends. This was the 1960s when good photocopy machines were nonexistent, so I couldn’t make copies.

I also published a monthly magazine, The Peterson Popper, for three years in grade school, and I put out a weekly newspaper, The Weekly Waste, for almost a year (and I had two whole subscribers at school). My favorite book that I wrote as a kid was 20,000 Leagues Under the Swimming Pool, and my favorite book series that I wrote was The Man From A.U.N.T.I.E., my spoof on the popular TV show at the time, The Man From U.N.C.L.E.

You can probably see why I wound up writing for VeggieTales.

I majored in journalism at the University of Illinois with the idea of working for a newspaper and then writing the Great American Novel on the side. But I spent only a year working for newspapers before I wound up writing half time for the University of Illinois and free-lance writing half time.

In my free-lance work, it’s almost as if God outlined my writing life decade by decade. In the 1970s, I primarily wrote for newspapers; in the 1980s I wrote for magazines (although my first book was published in 1987); in the 1990s I wrote Christian humor books; in the 2000s I wrote for VeggieTales; and in the 2010s I write historical novels.

I’m really anxious to find out what’s in store for me in the 2020s.

 

Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

When I wrote for VeggieTales, each book had a specific lesson—as all VeggieTales stories do, with the overarching theme of “God loves you very much.”

When I switched to writing novels, I didn’t set out with any particular message or theme in mind. I just seemed to stumble across the theme of freedom, although I think it was more than just an accidental stumbling. I believe God put the theme of freedom in my path, and I tripped over it.

I have written two novels based on true stories from the Underground Railroad: The Disappearing Man, the story of Henry “Box” Brown, a slave who escaped by shipping himself in a box from Richmond to Philadelphia; and The Vanishing Woman, the story of Ellen Craft, a slave who escaped by pretending to be a white man, while her husband William posed as her slave.

My latest novel, The Lincoln League, is based on the story of John Scobell, the first African American spy for the U.S. Intelligence Service; and my other novel, The Puzzle People,” covers the rise and fall of the Berlin Wall.

In all of them, freedom is front and center.

I look for stories that appeal to a broad, general audience, and I also look for real-life stories in which a character’s faith is prominent. For example, Henry Brown thought God told him to “go and get a box and put yourself in it.” In The Puzzle People, I show how the church in Leipzig played a key role in bringing down the Berlin Wall.

Faith and freedom. That sums up my themes pretty well.

 

How long did it take you to get your first major book contract?

I started firing out manuscripts in my twenties, and like most writers I got a long string of rejections—and most, if not all, of them were well deserved. My first published book, I Never Promised You a Hot Tub, was a compilation of humorous parables I had written for various publications. It was published by Zondervan in 1987, which would have made me 32 years old at the time. That means I probably had about eight years of rejection before getting that first book published.

Rejection is a big part of a writer’s life. To find out how I learned to accept rejection, check out my story, What Bob the Tomato and Baseball Taught Me About Risk and Rejection.

 

How long does it take you to write a book?

When I was writing picture books for VeggieTales, it would take about ten to fifteen hours to write one. The most time-consuming part of writing a VeggieTales book was brainstorming the idea, which would probably take about five or six hours, spread out over several days.

Once the idea was approved, I would write the first draft in an afternoon and spend the next few days editing and rewriting (while juggling other writing assignments). After running the draft by my wife and some friends, I would do final revisions and ship it off.

Writing novels is a quite a bit different because we’re talking about 100,000 words instead of 1,000 words for a picture book. But I have managed to write one historical novel per year, on top of the freelance work that I still do for the University of Illinois.

When writing historical novels, I do some initial research, and I keep doing research on the fly while the novel is in progress. It takes about six months to write the first draft and the next five months to rewrite and edit. But I’m typically juggling several projects at a time, so I do not devote my entire days to working on the novel. For more details on my writing routine, check out my Almost An Author blog, How Many Words Should You Write Per Day?

 

What has been your greatest joy in your writing career?

I never get tired of the process of writing. Some people describe writing as sweating blood, but I have a wonderful time; it’s a joy. If I’m sweating, it’s only because my office has a southern exposure and it’s on the second floor of an old house, which gets pretty toasty.

It’s also a joy to see the moments when God does the unexpected. The best example was when I was still writing VeggieTales books, and I attended the premiere of the movie, The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything, in Cincinnati. I was supposed to go to the Chicago premiere but wound up in Cincinnati because of a scheduling mix up, and I’m so glad it happened that way. While I was in Cincinnati, my wife and I went to the National Underground Railroad Freedom Center, and we came across an exhibit devoted to Henry “Box” Brown—a slave who escaped in 1849 by shipping himself in a box from Richmond to Philadelphia.

This doesn’t happen very often, but both my wife and I had a strong sense that God was leading me to write Henry Brown’s story. The result was my first novel, The Disappearing Man. Strangely enough, the same month that I stumbled across the Henry Brown story, VeggieTales put a hold on their books.

So I made the transition from talking vegetables to historical novels. That museum visit changed my life.

 

Which of your books is your favorite?

That’s a tough question. As some writers say, that’s a bit like asking who’s your favorite child.

Among my VeggieTales books, however, I have clear favorite—my first picture book, The Slobfather. For those old enough to remember the old TV series, Dragnet, this is a Dragnet spoof in which Bob and Larry talk in the clipped fashion of Sergeant Joe Friday as they investigate messes that Junior Asparagus and Laura Carrot get into. But you don’t have to remember the old TV series to understand the books, of course. The concept is pretty simple. Bob and Larry are “Mess Detectives” who investigate the messes that kids get into.

Among my historical novels, I can’t pick a favorite, but I am partial to my first one, The Disappearing Man, which I mentioned in the earlier question. It’s been optioned for film and I co-wrote the screenplay, so I’m praying it will hit the screen.

 

What is the single greatest tool you believe a writer should have in his or her toolbox?

If you can fit “persistence” in a toolbox, that would be it. I have one writer friend who made his mark in science fiction quickly, with little in the way of rejection slips. I’m sure he must have had some level of discouragement, but he became very successful very fast. This is not the norm. Let me emphasize that: This is not the norm. Immediate success is not most people’s experience, and it hasn’t been my experience, so be persistent and keep learning.

 

How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

I think attending writer’s conferences is invaluable. It has been for me.

I have regularly attended the Gideon Media Arts Conference in Asheville, North Carolina, and the conference changed my life. At the first conference, my screenwriting teacher encouraged me to write the Henry “Box” Brown story as both a novel and screenplay. I also met my agent and publisher at this conference.

Ironically, the Gideon Conference has always concentrated more on film than on books, and yet it changed my book-publishing life. Only God can work something like that out. Today, the Gideon focuses almost entirely on film and acting.

If you’re writing for print, rather than film, another great conference that I have attended is the Blue Ridge Christian Writers Conference, which also meets in Asheville, North Carolina. However, there are many wonderful conferences out there. But if you’re trying to break into the market, I recommend you make sure the conference will have editors and agents in attendance.

When I started in the field, many writers (particularly in the Christian market) didn’t have agents and didn’t need agents. But that’s not true any longer.

 

Who is your favorite author to read?

I like all kinds of books, and I usually try to read a non-fiction book, a fiction book, and a Biblical study book at the same time.

My favorite all-around writer is C.S. Lewis, but my favorite non-fiction writer is G.K. Chesterton. My favorite Christian book is Chesterton’s Orthodoxy, but ironically the first time I read it I couldn’t get through it. Chesterton is an acquired taste for many, so you have to get used to his style.

But I persisted in reading Chesterton, and I now love his work. There’s that word again: persistence. It should be every writer’s favorite word.

 

 

 

 

 

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Publishing Perspectives

Submitting a Fiction Novel to a Publisher, Part 3: The Author’s Questionnaire

The first part of this series examined the Query Letter. The second part looked at the synopsis. In this column, we’ll look at the Author’s Questionnaire. It helps the publisher understand a bit more about your platform, and about how you view your book. Your responses to this questionnaire will be used in preparing promotional materials.

Personal information

This part of the form will feel a bit like a resume because it will likely ask for:

  • your contact information and demographics
  • a list of cities where you have lived
  • a list of schools you attended and the degrees you received
  • other special awards or honors you’ve received
  • your hobbies
  • a list of your social media profile pages
  • URLs of any other internet presence you have, such as a website or email newsletter
  • a biography (that would be appropriate for a book back cover; you should develop a 50-word version, 100-word version, and 250-word version)

Experience as a writer

In this section you will list:

  • any other books you’ve written
  • magazines to which you have contributed
  • any media interviews you’ve given
  • any writing-related awards you’ve won
  • whether you have done any public speaking related to your writing topic

This information indicates whether other organizations have felt you were a good enough writer to be published, and that you may have a following of people who look for your writing. The more you have been published by other entities, the less of a risk you might be for this publisher.

Your book

This information is supplemental to your synopsis, but also helps the publisher understand what part of the genre spectrum (and thus the likely audience) your book fits into. Questions may include:

  • how you got the idea for the book
  • any interesting experiences while researching, writing, or pursuing publication
  • the theme of the book
  • why your book is unique; how it differs from other books on the same subject; what strengths your book has; anything controversial in the content
  • a list of similar books that could reasonably be considered competition
  • sample marketing ideas (a two sentence summary of your book; back cover copy; a list of 10 interview questions)
  • description of the target market for your book (and no, this isn’t ‘everyone’)

Marketing contacts

Another section will ask for your help in promoting the book. Do you have connections beyond friends and family? Are you a person with a readership already built? Do you have friends who are professionals in the media industry? Some publisher will reach out to these organizations for you, others simply use the information to evaluate the size of your platform. You will list things such as:

  • contact details for your alumni magazine
  • names of professional organizations or clubs of which you are a member
  • conferences or conventions that you regularly attend
  • names of bookstores where you are known
  • names of hometown newspapers
  • a list of any television shows, radio programs, or podcasts that would be interested in having you as a guest due to the subject of your book
  • a list of people (preferably, who you are already acquainted with) who would be influential in promoting sales via an endorsement of some sort (other authors, bloggers, professional reviewers, famous individuals)

So, you can see that there is quite a bit of researching and writing that you will do after you finish your book! Please comment with any questions you have about the above information, and come back next month to learn more about describing your ideal target audience.

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Do Your Research Right When You’re Writing Historical Fiction

The author, Doug Peterson, received a brand-new bowler hat for Christmas this year. It brings him back to the year 1849.

I’m not sure what historical novelists did before the advent of the Internet. What takes a matter of minutes to discover on the Internet today probably took hours of library work in the pre-Web Stone Age.

A case in point: In my first historical novel, The Disappearing Man, I had a character sporting a bowler hat. But as I prepared the manuscript for the publisher, I decided to do some final fact-checking, and I thought it would be a good idea to make sure people were wearing bowler hats in the 1849 world depicted in The Disappearing Man.

They were doing no such thing.

I discovered that the bowler hat was evidently invented by two London hat-makers, Thomas and William Bowler, in 1849—the very year of my novel. However, because my story took place in America, it was highly unlikely that the London fashion made it across the Atlantic that quickly.

But this was an easy fix, so I took the bowler hat off of my character’s head and replaced it with a top hat.

It goes without saying that you have to be careful about the historical information you dig up online, so I seek out what I believe are reputable sources, such as the History Channel page, and I also check facts on multiple sites.

The Internet is wonderful for these quick fact checks, but there is still no replacing good, old-fashioned books when it comes to the heavy-lifting part of my historical research. So this is a brief rundown on how I go about my research for my historical novels. The headline above says to “do your research right,” but I should note that there is no one system that is best for everyone. We all need to find our own method. Here’s mine.

First, I should say I have been blessed by living in Champaign-Urbana, Illinois, and having access to one of the greatest libraries in the country. That’s no exaggeration. The University of Illinois has the second-largest university collection in North America, and its Library and Information Sciences program is number one in the country, according to U.S. News and World Reports.

The University of Illinois may be struggling on the football field and basketball court these days, but at least the Illini can do some serious trash-talking when it comes to its books. Take that, Ohio State and Alabama!

Although I have access to the U of I library, I actually begin my hunt for historical resources on Amazon. I like the Amazon search engine, so I begin by looking for books there. For instance, I have been working on Biblical history recently, and my Amazon search has turned up some gems, such as Daily Life in the Time of Jesus, The Life and Times of Jesus the Messiah, and The World Jesus Knew.

Once I identify some promising books, I go to the U of I library and check them out. If the book provides only a smattering of information that I need for my novel, I stick with the library copy. But if a book looks like something that I will regularly dip into throughout the course of my research, I will go back to Amazon and purchase a copy of my own. In all, I may use close to 30 books when researching a novel, and of those I will purchase about a dozen.

By having my own copy, I can freely mark up the book to my heart’s delight. As I go through the research books that I own, I jot notes at the top of the page, indicating the topics covered on that particular page. As a result, I don’t spend forever flipping through pages, trying to find that handy tidbit of information; I simply look for my notes at the top of each page.

Another key component to my historical research is digging into historical photos and videos. Again, there are so many options available today that weren’t possible just 25 years ago. If you’re doing more recent history, the options expand exponentially. For instance, one of my novels—The Puzzle People—took place in the last 50 years, so I could find a wealth of footage on YouTube.

The Puzzle People is a suspense novel based on the rise and fall of the Berlin Wall, so I went to YouTube to see film of the Wall going up, as well as footage of that magical night on November 9, 1989, when the Wall came down. One key scene in the novel took place on November 9, so some of my descriptions came straight from viewing YouTube films.

But how do you know when you’ve done enough research to begin writing?

I tend to be a rather impatient writer. I love the research, but I am always anxious to get started on a new novel. So I do not wait for all of my research to be done before I begin to venture into a new story. I do just enough research to jump-start the process, and I continue to research as I write—about a one-year process.

Think of writing as a long-distance car ride, with research being your fuel. When I travel from Illinois to Florida, I don’t carry all of the fuel I need for a single trip. I fill up the tank, which is enough to carry me for a couple hundred miles, and then I fill up along the way. It’s the same with my historical research. I do enough research in the beginning to fill my tank and get me going on the first ten chapters or so. Then I fill up the tank all along the way—going to the library and doing more research as I write. I guess that makes the library my gas station.

As amazing as the Internet is for historical writers, there’s still something about physical books and brick and mortar libraries. So let me end by tipping my hat—my bowler hat (see photo)—to librarians everywhere.

The Internet is boon for research, but there is no replacing libraries. Not yet at least.

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5 for Writing

  1. Get writing. Find the time to write. Then do it.
  2. Learn by listening—and doing. Solicit feedback, discern what helps you.
  3. Finish your story. Edit and rewrite, but don’t tinker forever. Reach the finish line.
  4. Thrive on rejection. Get your story out there. Be fearless. Accept rejection.
  5. Become a juggler. After one story is finished, be ready to start another. Consider writing two at once.