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Have Words, Will Travel....Travel Writing 101 Uncategorized

5 Fun Gifts for Your Favorite Travel Writer

Tis the season to gift, and be gifted! Maybe you may have a favorite travel writer on your list, or perhaps you simply need to share a copy of this post with a loved one. (Hint, hint.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vintage Globe Business Card for Travel Blogger/Writer, Set of 50, $27.50, Etsy. Illustration by Nancy Nikko. Searching for a unique eye-catching business card? This one is sure to stand out above the rest.

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Parachute Suitcase Printed Lined Notebook, 64 pages (front/back), $8.00, Etsy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

A3dec2015leatherRugged Medium Leather Travel Journal, with Recycled Paper, $54.00, pen included, Etsy.

 

 

 

 

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Ditch those earbuds and enjoy a sweet set of noise cancelling headphones. The Best Headphones of 2015 list can be found here.

 

 

 

 

A3dec2015aqua-notes-homeAnd finally, a personal favorite. Aqua Notes – Waterproof Pad, $6.99 Amazon. (I picked mine up at a local Mast General Store). Yep, that’s right. Slap it on the shower wall and you’ll be prepared for any water-induced epiphanies that come your way. And what writer doesn’t have these from time to time? I recently did a weekend writing jaunt at a lake retreat, thanks to a generous family friend. My Aqua notepad saved the day more than once. Use any type pen with it.

May you and yours have a very Merry Christmas!

Pilgrims are poets who create by taking a journey. –Richard Niebuhr

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Blogging Basics

Three Ways Comparison Can Kill Your Blogging Confidence

Blogging requires a balanced combination of vision, passion, craft, and energy. Comparison can quickly squelch your energy and derail your passion for writing. Whether you are new to blogging or a seasoned pro, comparison can kill your blogging confidence.

One of the great temptations for writers and bloggers involves the trap of comparison. We constantly see the success of other writers through social media, conferences, and networks. Traffic stats and social media engagement are inescapable even when you try to ignore them. Comparison can creep into your thoughts in many different forms.

For me, one of the greatest challenges in blogging has been learning craft and building a following without falling into the pit of comparison. When I read a great post and see high stats of likes and shares, I often compare my writing and engagement. I can leave the website feeling discouraged rather than benefitting from the great content I’ve just read. When this happens, my thoughts are about me rather than appreciating the gifts and skills of the other person.

Have you struggled with the problem of comparison in your writing?

Three Ways Comparison can kill your blogging confidence:

Comparison Drowns Creativity

Creativity thrives on being different and original. When we compare our content to other writers, it can be easy to try to emulate what works for someone else.

The blogging world is enamored with How-to content and numbered lists. Most of this is aimed at increasing reach, but it can also kill creativity. One look at Pinterest demonstrates this point. Most pins of blog posts now use successful formulas for titles. Success is great, but now too many blog posts look and sound the same. I’ve followed the formulas and written much of this kind of content. This post is a numbered list because it was a clear way to communicate my message.

The artist in me rebels as creativity bows to comparison and the desire to be as successful as others. The key here is balance. Don’t disdain formats that work, but be creative and personable with in the template. Also, write a variety of content that doesn’t adhere to formulaic structure.

[bctt tweet=”Is copying the new creativity?”]

Comparison Fuels Discouragement

Comparison fuels discouragement much like throwing gasoline on a fire. It can ignite quickly and be very destructive.

Recently I was thrilled to have a post featured on the popular devotional site, (in)courage. Like it or not, the social media stats are prominently displayed. You can’t not look at them.

My joy deflated as I realized the stats were not anywhere close to the regular bloggers on the site. It was hard not to receive that as a message that my writing wasn’t as good as others. For a short time, I let comparison steal the delight of success in posting on an well-known website. Rather than growing in confidence, I struggled with discouragement because my post didn’t draw the same amount of engagement as others.

Believe me, comparison is a nasty friend.

Comparison Feeds Pride

Comparison is also a fickle friend. When we are on the short end of comparison, we can wallow in “Not Good Enough” thinking. However, if we rate our work or performance higher than others, we can teeter into the “Better Than” territory of pride. Pride can create divisions and puff up egos, as well as spark criticism. Pride can kill confidence from the other direction, prideful thinking is just as destructive to confidence in that it warps a realistic perception of ourselves.

This verse from the message motivates me to avoid comparison:

That means we will not compare ourselves with each other as if one of us were better and another worse. We have far more interesting things to do with our lives. Each of us is an original. Galatians 5:26 MSG

Particularly for new writers beginning the blogging journey, comparison can kill confidence. Choose to celebrate and learn from successful and experience writers, rather than give into comparison. Give yourself permission to grow through the process and develop skill at the pace that is right for you.

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Truth Be Told

Over or Under?

Over or Under?

Have you fought this battle in your house?

In our home, my wonderful husband has deferred to my preference. I’ve heard though, that such benevolence is not experienced in every home.

Can you imagine that this simple item can cause fights and feuds?

So I had to laugh, when at a conference I visited the church bathroom, and saw this. What a marvelous solution!

Can it be there is no right or wrong way, just preference? And could that extend beyond the bathroom to other areas of life?

Truth be told: more relationships are broken over opinion and preference issues than we might believe.

Team loyalty, music styles, hair length, work, clothing, tattoos. And the list goes on and on.

And just like the toilet paper: is it really worth the battle?

The best piece of parenting advice I ever got turned into the best advice in every situation where I have relationships with other people…which is just about everywhere:

PICK YOUR BATTLES

Are you sure that argument is worth a war?

I have a plaque on my desk to help me weigh my responses. It’s been attributed to many different authors, but whoever said it got it right…in my opinion.

In matters of faith–unity. In matters of opinion–liberty. In all things–charity.

So, will it be over or under for you? Or does it really matter?

 

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Storyworld

Food for your Storyworld

Regardless how fantastic the setting, the people in your book must treat their environment as commonplace. A character who regularly interacts with something will spend little thought on (and the author should spend little time describing) its method of operation. This is true whether writing about food or magic. But how do you describe the common occurrences of a believable system? It’s best done with sparse descriptions of characters interacting with their world, but to write convincingly, you need to think things through. To get your creative juices flowing, let’s look at the energy that fuels your characters.

No, not their motivations, their breakfast.

Food Production

Unless your world breaks the laws of mass conservation (such as a cleric’s “Create Food” spell or the Enterprise’s replicator), your protagonist’s lunch came from somewhere. If survival isn’t one of your story’s tension hooks, you don’t need to describe the origin of each meal, but in a long enough adventure, your reader may wonder where the lone hero gets his food, and you’ll need to consider it as well.

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In our world, all food can be traced back to plants, which require soil, sun, water, and carbon dioxide. This obviously applies to vegetables, fruits, and grains, but grasses inedible to humans are the sustenance of livestock, and from them we get a myriad of consumables. In fact, animal feed can often grow in climates hostile to farming, which is why residents of colder regions historically had more meat in their diets.

Other hostile climates, such as a post-apocalyptic future, may have a similar increase in dietary protein, or they may rely on food production and preservation of ages past (until it runs out!). Alternatively, space stations may house hydroponics facilities, or elven crop growth may depend on the blessings of the local druid. Nevertheless, before food is eaten, it must first be produced.

Food Preservation

spamUnless your protagonists are survivalist hunters or part of the agricultural industry, the food they bring on their adventures must be stored. Portable storage falls into five main categories: canned, frozen, dried, pickled, and salted. Even a high-tech future will have some variation of these methods (e.g. cryo-frozen meats, canned nutrient-paste, etc.).

Preservation only delays the process of rotting as long as possible, but decay is inevitable. You can’t have a character wake from stasis a million years after humanity’s destruction and have her forage for canned food, because by then it will all have spoiled. Exceptions are made for Spam and Christmas fruitcake.

Food Preparation

Anyone who has eaten Cheerios in the car knows not all food needs preparation, but a good meal requires heat. Why? Partly because warm food is pleasant (ever tried cold French fries?), but also because higher temperatures kill harmful bacteria (ranging from 140F for rare beef to 180F for poultry).

microwaveBut no matter how bizarre your world’s heating methods are, your characters won’t think twice about them. Suppose you were an author writing about food two hundred years ago and conceived of a “Microwave Oven.” Should the microwave’s operator need to consider the details of particle physics and wavelengths? Not if you wanted to describe the way we typically use it. Even those who understand microwave technology seldom consider it when they put their leftovers in and walk away. The denizens of your creation should similarly spend little time thinking about something so common, even if it would be unimaginable to those living in a different world or time.

In a fantasy setting, maybe fire sprites heat your villagers’ meals in exchange for precious stones, but don’t revel in the occurrence if it’s commonplace. Or consider a future in which all single-use rations have a self-heating mechanism, making them especially useful on the galactic frontier. At any rate, a method of heating must be considered unless your people eat all their food cold (which limits the kinds of food that can be eaten).

 

Food Disposal

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Disposal of waste is not of great concern unless your characters inhabit a world of extremely limited resources. Some examples are desert worlds, post-apocalyptic settings, or space stations (Hugh Howey’s Wool Omnibus come to mind). For the most part though, trash isn’t noteworthy. Even a short-range starship will probably jettison its refuse.

 

When writing about food, you don’t need to spell out every detail, but you should ponder how and what your characters are eating. A genuine environment will connect with the reader because it feels like you’ve considered how people survive in it, and food is very much a part of daily survival.

Much of this information comes from my own 2,500 square foot garden and from The Encyclopedia of Country Living, a 900+ page tome by Carla Emery that details everything our agrarian ancestors did.

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Write Justified

Making a Point–Indirectly

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Let’s categorize these three figures of speech as “substitutions.” We’re going to explore three devices that make a point indirectly, but no less effectively.

You may be familiar with allusion (not to be confused with illusion). It’s a brief, indirect reference to something or someone—usually a character or event from history or literature, or has some cultural significance. Whatever is alluded to must be familiar enough to the reader that they understand its importance. Note the qualities or characteristics conveyed in these allusions:

Regardless of where people fall on the political spectrum, most agree that Donald Trump brings a Midas touch to most of his endeavors.

Midas touch is a reference to the mythological King Midas; everything he touched turned to gold.

The town fathers were concerned that without adult supervision and additional regulations the proposed concert would become another Woodstock.

Woodstock, a three-day rock concert held near Woodstock, New York in 1969, is considered the nexus of the countercultural generation.

Despite her Ivy League education and silk-stocking upbringing, public speaking proved to be the ingénue’s Achille’s heel.

The sentence offers a trifecta of allusion: Ivy League is a reference to elite, East Coast colleges (Yale, Harvard, etc); silk-stocking upbringing refers to the wealthy region of a locale; Achille’s heel is another mythological reference. This one to a person’s point of weakness or vulnerability.

A closely related figure of speech is the eponym—a word that derives from another person’s name based on some characteristic or historic contribution. [bctt tweet=”Our English language is full of [eponyms] and often we don’t even realize we’re using one.”] Consider: we use

  • Webster in place of dictionary because Noah Webster is regarded as the inspiration behind the earliest comprehensive lexicon;
  • valentine refers to one’s sweetheart or the greeting cards exchanged on February 14 in observance of Saint Valentine and the celebration of romantic love;
  • sandwich was the culinary concoction of the Earl of Sandwich;
  • and quixotic is a reference to impractical idealists in the manner of Don Quixote’s Cervantes.

Because eponyms are only useful when they refer to a famous person/event, they tend to be clichés. But used sparingly, and creatively, they can add the right touch to poetry or prose.

While [bctt tweet=”an eponym draws on a person’s name, an epithet uses an adjective or adjective phrase that draws on a key characteristic of the subject/noun.”]

Historically, epithets were attached to a ruler to describe their character. They gave us Richard the Lionhearted and Catherine the Great. Over time, epithets were used to distinguish one individual from another. And as human nature is wont to do, the distinguishing characteristic was not necessarily a positive one. Hence these colorful epithets: Hallbjorn Half-Troll, Ulf the Squinter, Hjorleif the Womanizer, and Ketil Flat-Nose.

But when the adjective modifies a noun in an atypical way it can be refreshingly effective. Don’t these epithets create memorable images?

  • sagging house;
  • a dancing mountain stream,
  • a politician’s flabby rhetoric.

And isn’t that our goal in our writing—to communicate clearly and memorably?

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Tour

Blog Tour Stop – Carol Heilman

[author title=”Carol Heilman” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/10/DSC0432.jpeg”]Carol Guthrie Heilman, a coal-miner’s daughter, married a farmer’s son, her high school sweetheart, over fifty years ago. She and her husband live in the mountains of Western North Carolina. Their children and grandchildren live near the east and west coasts where they often visit. Carol enjoys traveling, reading, writing, hiking, and cooking for friends. She is a recipient of two Carrie McCray Awards for writing excellence.[/author]

What is the title of your latest book?

Agnes Hopper Shakes Up Sweetbriar

Tell us more about your book:

Summer’s steamy haze coats North Carolina’s Blue Ridge Mountains, but Agnes Marie Hopper discovers the high heat isn’t the only thing causing her blood to boil. After trying to live with her daughter for six months, she and Betty Jo come to an understanding: neither can tolerate living with the other. So on a sultry August morning, a week after her seventy-first birthday, Agnes loads her few belongings into Betty Jo’s shiny, black Buick, and rides to Sweetbriar’s retirement home, Sweetbriar Manor.   

Agnes has a nose for trouble and that’s exactly what she finds when she learns some of the residents are being robbed, over-medicated, and denied basic cable and Internet access. When it looks as if the administrator is behind the facility’s shady dealings, Agnes complains to the local sheriff but is told she’s a senile old woman who should mind her own business. Could it be he knows more than he’ll admit?

No matter. Agnes isn’t about to let bad police work and some unscrupulous administrator stop her. Armed with nothing more than seventy-one years of common sense and a knack for pushing people’s buttons, Agnes sets out to restore Sweetbriar Manor’s reputation as offering a “rewarding and enriching lifestyle” – or die trying.

Why do you write what you do?: 

I dearly love the elderly and have volunteered in many assisted-living homes over the years. I have listened to their stories, and have laughed and cried with them. Seniors often have no one who will give them the attention and respect they are due. I enjoy being their voice whenever possible.

What are you currently working on?: 

I am working through the editing process of Agnes Hopper’s book two: Agnes Hopper Stuns Sweetbriar Manor.

How does your work differ from other work in its genre?: 

Agnes is a feisty, southern senior with a sense of humor and a sense of justice for herself and her friends.

How does your writing process work?: 

I begin with character development. As soon as my characters become real to me, I place them in a critical situation and see what happens. Then I begin asking, “What if” questions and the story line evolves from there.

 

Social Media and Blog: Email: carolgheilman@gmail.com

Website: www.carolheilman.com

Author Page: amazon.com/author/carolheilman

Facebook: www.facebook.com/carolheilman

Twitter: twitter.com/CarolHeilman

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Uncategorized

Miraculous Moments

She experienced some miraculous moments.

Her name is Betty Killian. For years this precious woman raised children and helped her husband who served as the pastor of Baptist churches. I met the Killians during his semi-retirement when he worked as the Minister to Senior Adults at my home church.

Betty walked with God. A woman of God’s Word and a woman of prayer, she was a follower of Christ who tried to be sensitive to the presence and voice of the Holy Spirit of God inside of her.

After walking with the Lord for many years, she sensed the Spirit challenge her to self-publish a book about the ways God worked in her life and the life of her family. In the prologue to her book Miraculous Moments, she writes, “We are told over and over to tell the wonderful works of the Lord and make His deeds known. This is why I have endeavored to share some of the ‘miraculous moments’ of my life. God is very much alive and active in the everyday affairs of His children.”

Though she never expected her book to become a best-seller nor for a major publishing house to offer a contract, Betty was obedient to what she believed was the nudging of the Lord. Feeling the urge to write detailed accounts of God’s activity in her ordinary life, she obediently wrote and pursued the task. In 1992 Betty’s book became a reality.

Regarding the book’s outcome, she shared, “I am unaware of what God’s ultimate purpose is regarding these shared experiences. I am aware that rejection and ridicule may be in store. The desire to walk in obedience renders such opposition of no importance.”

Mrs. Killian’s books arrived in boxes and were distributed to local outlets. Her church, school, and area bookstores made them available. At the time, I was a young college student. My mother edited the book for Betty, so I had a keen interest in the project. That year I read Miraculous Moments from cover to cover, enjoying the practical, poignant, and sometimes powerful illustrations of the Lord’s intervention in the life of the Killian family.

Betty’s testimonies revealed an ordinary woman who walked closely with God, believed His promises, heard His voice, and obeyed Him. No, this was not a famous Christian hero like Kay Arthur, Anne Graham Lotz, or Corrie ten Boom. This was a regular pastor’s wife, mother, and grandmother from Greenville, South Carolina, who had an extraordinary walk with God.

Betty’s stories challenged me during that impressionable season of life to develop an intimate relationship with Christ marked by prayer, faith, and obedience. To this day, almost twenty-five years later, I still have a copy of Miraculous Moments on my shelf and refer to it yearly.

The book was never a bestseller. And today, Betty still has boxes of her book in her closet at home.
But, Betty experienced a close walk with Jesus through the years. And in her senior years, the Lord challenged her to write down some of those experiences and share them with other people. Betty was obedient, and I was one of the recipients of that blessing.

The scope and reach of your writing is ultimately the Lord’s to determine. He may want to use your words to touch millions, thousands, hundreds, or a few dozen. It is our job to do our best and be obedient.

What if God’s purpose for your writing is to only touch a dozen? If so, like Betty, you may have an incredible opportunity to deeply impact a few lives for God’s kingdom.

Jesus impacted twelve people, and that blessing is felt today across the world.

Be obedient, do your best, and trust God.

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A Lighter Look at the Writer's Life

Writing: All the Feels

If anyone tells you writing is not an emotional thing, don’t believe it. Writing can be quite the emotional roller-coaster, and a recent experience illustrated that fact.

One night a few weeks ago, I was feverishly working on my latest project, ancillary writing for an educational company. It was a perfect project for me (I’m a teacher in real life), not to mention my biggest contract ever. Thankful for the work.

My last LARGE deadline was looming—the clock was ticking, the fat lady was warming up her voice, Elvis was getting close to the exit . . . well, you get the picture (Yes, I love a good cliché). I was feeling pretty good, surges of relief flowing through my veins, as it looked like I was going to finish ahead of time. Hey, this writing thing might work out after all.

Here I was, about 30 minutes’ worth of work left, and I decided I needed a break. That inner procrastinator was not totally under submission. I figured I would check my email before looking for a snack. I need energy for the journey.

In my inbox was an email from a book editor, the one I had sent a proposal to a couple of months earlier. The educational work had consumed my writing life so much that I had nearly forgotten about the proposal, for a project I’ve labored on for years. This could be it.

There I was, “in the zone,” on the brink of completing a big freelance project, and now I was going to get my first book contract. Kathie Lee and Hoda will be calling any minute.

I read the email, and it was a rejection. Bubble burst!

Once I got my feelings of disappointment under control, I studied the email a bit closer and realized it was the NICEST rejection I’ve ever received. It was obvious the editor had taken the time to read my work, mentioning many specific things and offering some genuine praise. There was also an open offer for me to send additional pieces and encouragement for me to keep submitting my work to other places. Not bad.

I’d like to say I brushed off this rejection and returned effortlessly to my educational work. I’d LIKE to say that, but I CAN’T. As nice as the wording was, it was still a rejection, and it still stung a little. I brooded for a while, ate that snack—a guy has to keep his energy up, after all—and eventually met my deadline two days ahead of schedule. I also whispered some prayers, sensing that still, small voice. Keep going.

Writing truly has all the feels. I wouldn’t have it any other way. Just more acceptance letters, please.

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Grammar and Grace

How to Pluralize Names for Christmas Cards

I love Christmas. I especially love sending and receiving Christmas cards. We send out a lot from our house, and we receive a lot in return. We always include a picture of the whole family. The pictures we receive from our friends find a place on our refrigerator and adorn it all year.

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I don’t, however, love the envelopes addressed to The Dougherty’s or closings that read, Love from the Jones’. Ack!! I’m happy to hear from old friends, but I can’t stop my toes from curling when I see those errant apostrophes.

Here are some simple rules to follow so that you can write names correctly and make sure your cards convey the happy messages you intend.

  1. Add an s to a proper noun that doesn’t end in s to make it plural.

Langston = Langstons
Maurer = Maurers
Tate = Tates

  1. Don’t change the spelling of a proper noun to make the plural.

Dougherty = Doughertys (not Dougherties)

3.  Add es to a name that ends in s, x, z, ch, or sh to make it plural.

Capps = Cappses ( I know it looks strange, but trust me.)
Edwards = Edwardses
Fox = Foxes
Rakiewicz = Rakiewiczes

Notice that at no time have I used an apostrophe. I haven’t used one because I’m making the names plural, not possessive.

Three rules.

That’s all you need to write your Christmas cards correctly. If you can’t bring yourself to add the es to someone’s name, there’s always an easy fallback—Love from The Dougherty Family.

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The Efficiency Addict

Writing a Novel in Three Steps

A fellow wordsmith recently shared his method for writing a novel. I was so intrigued by his straightforward process, I’m sharing it with you today. If you’ve never completed a novel or if you’re frustrated with your pace, perhaps this method will give you new energy.

I call this system The Three-Pass Method. This involves writing the entire novel but does not include editing. That’s a topic best left for another post. Today we simply want to tell our tale.

The First Pass: Write the entire story in 5000 words.
My friend has done this several times. He thinks of a story idea. Then, he writes all of the main elements. This includes the main characters, a brief backstory, 3-4 pivotal scenes, and the beginning/middle/end scenarios. In one quick 5000-word sprint, he has the whole tale. He doesn’t waste his energy making the words pretty or polished. The point of this exercise is to the see the story from start to finish. When he’s done, he has the bones of a novel and can decide if he wants to pursue it further.

The Second Pass: Expand to 15,000 words by roughing in key scenes and details.
This isn’t a big leap. Moving from 5,000 to 15,0000 words is only a 10,000-word increase. You can easily reach that level by drafting 10-12 additional scenes. You already have your pivotal scenes from the first pass. So, what do your characters need to do or experience that lead them to those critical moments? Write those elements as new scenes and you’ll quickly reach the 15,000 word mark.

The Third Pass: Expand to 85,000 words by filling out the story.
This is the fun part. Up to this point, you’ve been drafting—writing the elements and marking the critical details. Now, you get to play. If you’ve been writing in dialogue, add the descriptive elements. Engage the reader’s senses. Give us a feel for the locale. If you’ve been telling the story, give us dialogue. Add that witty repartee. Let us know who these characters are through how they speak, what they feel, and the way they react physically. Based on passes one and two, you’ll know exactly where this story is going. Use all your writing skills to give us an emotional, fun-filled, scary, suspenseful, or cryptic journey to that fabulous ending.

That’s the whole system. Notice this method focuses solely on the story. Time isn’t wasted on massive editing or polishing, although some editing will occur naturally as you make each pass. The benefit of this method is two-fold: we complete a manuscript (Yay!) and we don’t edit unnecessarily. We know that with each pass scenes and details will be built upon, so there’s no need to make them “perfect” in those first and second versions. By the time we make the third pass, we know the story so well we’re automatically making better decisions with the details we include.

If you try this method, I’d love to hear your results. Now get back to writing—you have a 5,000 word draft to craft!

[bctt tweet=”Have an idea for a novel? Here’s how to draft it in 3 simple steps. #WritersRoad #HowTo”]

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Publishing Perspectives

Submitting a Fiction Novel to a Publisher, Part 1: The Query Letter

You’ve finally got your novel all polished up and ready to submit to a publisher. How is this done?

These days, most publishers will have detailed instructions on their website, so start there and follow them carefully! Do not create a generic submission package and send it to everyone. You must customize it for each publisher. As an editor, it is very convenient for me to quickly reject a submission package that doesn’t bother to follow the instructions. Why would I want to work with someone who can’t follow instructions?

Here is the Writer’s Information page for HopeSprings Books:

http://chalfonthouse.com/hopespringsbooks/about-hope-springs-books/author-information/

We ask for a query letter, a 3-5 page synopsis, a filled-out Author Questionnaire, and the entire manuscript. Let’s look at these items in more detail over the next few columns.

If you have an agent, putting together submission packages for different publishing houses is one job that they should do for you. Some agents only create a generic submission package with minimal customization (editor name and address, and other small details) and assume that acquisition editors will be okay with this. For example, one agent that submitted to HopeSprings Books sent a query letter, a synopsis, and the manuscript, but not our Author Questionnaire (which I consider to be a critical part of the submission). So ask your agent how much customization they will be doing. If they don’t plan to create custom packets, see if they will give you a list of the houses they plan to submit to and ask them to wait for you to give them more information. Then you create any extra materials the house expects and get it to your agent as quickly as possible.

This column will examine the query letter.

Query Letter

Cover LetterAlmostAnAuthor writer Cherrilynn Bisbano has an article titled “Query Letter Basics” which is a general overview, but tailored for magazine article writing. Several of the elements apply to novel writing too. Cherrilynn describes a query letter as a sales letter from the writer to the editor to describe the offered material. A query letter for a novel is similar to a cover letter for your resume when you’re applying for a job. [Tweet this]

So what should be in it?

Greeting: Address your letter to a specific editor and be sure to spell their name correctly.

First paragraph: Grab the editor’s attention and show them you can write. One way to do this is to start with your proposed back-cover copy (which should only talk about the first 25% of the storyline). Alternatively, your paragraph can summarize the entire story: the setup, major disasters, and ending. I urge you to use Step 1 and Step 2 of Randy Ingermanson’s Snowflake Method (http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/articles/snowflake-method/) to help you craft this paragraph.

Second paragraph: Convince the editor that your novel is a good fit for the publishing house. Show that it is in the word-count target, in a genre they publish, with a reader take-away that aligns with the publisher’s mission. Address any other guidelines or topics that are mentioned on the publisher’s submission information page.

Third paragraph: A brief biography that only talks about why you are qualified to write this novel. Have you published other novels in this genre? Won any awards in this genre? Did you do any special research for the book? Do you have relevant life experience?

Fourth paragraph: Thank the editor and say that you look forward to hearing from them. Be sure to include all of your contact information with your signature.

General formatting is: 12 pt, New Times Roman, single or 1.5 spaced with one-inch margins all around. Check to see if the publisher has any other formatting requirements.

Come back next month and we’ll talk about the synopsis part of a submission package.

What other elements do you think could go in a query letter for a novel?

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Platform and Branding

5 Questions Your About Page Must Answer

One of the four must-have features of a website is the About page, but it’s overlooked by many writers. It can be uncomfortable to write about ourselves, and so we often slap together a short bio, upload a headshot, and go back to our projects. But a high percentage of first-time visitors to your site click on your About page, so consider the questions a newcomer would ask.

Platforming - blank manWho are you?

Introduce yourself in a few sentences and include a recent headshot. Don’t be afraid to add some interesting or unexpected facts (and pictures) about yourself.

What do you write about?

Describe your writing niche. Is it historical fiction? Technical articles? Devotions? If you’ve published a book(s), share a brief synopsis with a link to purchase or download.

Let visitors know what they can expect to find when they visit your site. Share a couple of “teasers” with links to your most popular posts. Linking within your site not only highlights some of your best writing, but it also helps boost SEO.

When can they expect updates?

Tell how often you post, even if it’s infrequently, and ask readers to subscribe. Direct them to your sidebar subscription section or include a link/code within the body of your text. If you have a newsletter, explain how it differs from your posts, how it benefits them, and ask them to subscribe.

Where can they find you? 

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Add links to your social media networks and invite visitors to connect with you there. You can insert these links in the body of your text, but also consider adding a widget or gadget to your sidebar so they’ll be visible from multiple pages.

Include a contact form or tell them how to contact you by email. To cut down on spam, thwart bots by breaking up the address: yourname {at} domain {dot} com

Why should they follow you?

Platforming - question markWith millions of blogs and personal websites on the Internet, remember that you offer a unique voice and message. How does your writing benefit your readers? Add a couple of testimonial quotes pulled from reader comments (get permission first) or ask a couple of fellow writers for a short endorsement.

Review and update your About page at least every six months, and monitor your site’s analytics to see how many hits this page receives. As Michael Hyatt advises, don’t think of this page as an obligation but as an opportunity.

YOUR TURN: What would you add to this list?

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5 For Writing

Put a Soundtrack to Your Fiction

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“Where words fail, music speaks,” said Hans Christian Andersen, writer of such legendary stories as The Little Mermaid (not the Disney version) and The Snow Queen (the inspiration for Disney’s Frozen).

I make a living with words, and so did Hans Christian Andersen, but I know exactly what he meant when he said that music can do what words cannot. Sometimes, just the snippet of a song can bring up a well of emotions and memories that all the words in the world cannot. If you have ever watched a scene from a movie, presented with and without the music, you can see the difference that a good soundtrack makes, and you get a greater appreciation for just how important music can be in storytelling.

But we’re talking about writing books, not watching a movie! Until e-books come equipped with musical soundtracks, what in the world does music have to do with fiction?

Music may not play a role in the experience of reading fiction, but I have found that it does play a part in writing fiction. When I write a novel, I find it helpful to select musical themes that connect me with certain characters or put me in touch with certain scenes. For example, I have been working on a new historical novel, based on a true story that took place during the second year of the Civil War, and I stumbled across a song that fit the mood of my two main characters—a husband and wife. I call the song “André and Felicie’s Theme,” although it is actually called “Beethoven’s Secrets,” and it’s performed here by the Piano Guys. Check it out:

Video: “BEETHOVEN’S SECRETS,” by the Piano Guys

When I was writing this new novel, I would often listen to “Beethoven’s Secrets” before I sat down to work on scenes with André and Felicie. The music would put me in the right frame of mind, or rather “the right frame of heart,” because it would bring up the emotions that I needed to write.

As another example, take my second novel, The Puzzle People, which follows the fate of two couples who were split apart when the Berlin Wall went up in 1961. One of the characters, Elsa, is a tortured soul, and the Evanescence song, “My Immortal,” fits her story nicely. The lyrics, as well as the music, captured the feeling of the losses in Elsa’s life.

Here is a video that displays those lyrics while “My Immortal” plays:

Video: “MY IMMORTAL,” by Evanescence

Sometimes, when I find an inspiring song, I don’t always use it to connect with a specific character or scene. In some cases, a song captures the mood of the entire novel. Again, let me use an example from my Berlin Wall novel, The Puzzle People. While writing that novel, I often began my work day by listening to a song from the Scorpions, “Wind of Change”—a song that celebrated the fall of the Berlin Wall and went on to become one of the top-selling singles worldwide of all time.

This video begins with a long musical introduction, accompanied by sobering statistics about the Berlin Wall. Then, about 1 minute and 50 seconds into the song, the lyrics begin and so do some of the most iconic images dealing with the rise and fall of the Wall. So here is the “Wind of Change” video, and I recommend you stick with it until the images and lyrics begin at 1:50 into the song.

Video: “WIND OF CHANGE,” by the Scorpions

When we write, we all want to draw certain emotions out of our readers, and to do that we first need to draw out these emotions in ourselves. And what better way to do this than through music? Your reader will not hear these songs when they read your story, but perhaps some of the emotion from the music will make its way onto your page and into your characters’ lives and stories.

As Hans Christian Andersen said, “Where words fail, music speaks.” But sometimes the right music can inspire you to put the right words on the page—words that don’t fail.

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5 for Writing

  1. Get writing. Find the time to write. Then do it.
  2. Learn by listening—and doing. Solicit feedback, discern what helps you.
  3. Finish your story. Edit and rewrite, but don’t tinker forever. Reach the finish line.
  4. Thrive on rejection. Get your story out there. Be fearless. Accept rejection.
  5. Become a juggler. After one story is finished, be ready to start another. Consider writing two at once.

Photo credit:  Gavin Whitner

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Talking Character

Where Do Mannerisms Come From?

Habits and mannerisms must originate somewhere, for some reason. In a novel, where aspect of a character should be intentional, a character’s mannerisms should do more than differentiate them from the rest of the cast but should enhance their unique personality.

In her book Getting Into Character, Brandilyn Collins suggests that a character’s mannerisms should evolve from an understanding of the character’s core values. Those values lead to the character’s motivations, and those motivations are shown through specific mannerisms.

For example, a character in my novel is a retired centurion. Like many Roman men, his primary core value is honor. He believes honor comes from fulfilling his duty in a responsible manner, showing courage in the face of danger and always considering the consequences of his actions. He sacrifices self-gratification for what he believes to be the higher good, which leads him to disapprove of the trappings of luxury, which in turn leads to his habit of pinching pennies. (Much to his socialite niece’s frustration.)

During his service in the legions he learned to keep his face impassive no matter how much turmoil or doubt he felt. This forced control over his emotions has become a habit, but it comes at a cost, and he often rubs his temples to ease the stress, especially when he feels his control slipping. Thus the mannerism of rubbing his temples is not merely chosen at random, but evolves from his need to maintain honor.

Another character is a self-centered, wealthy widow whose deepest need is to be in control of her own destiny—a difficult thing in her male-dominated world. Rather than choose the route of open rebellion, she opts to stay within the bounds of society, but does whatever she can to manipulate people and situations to suit her ends. To her image is very important. If she appears confident and in control at all times, others will naturally bend to her will. Therefore, she never leaves her room unless she is completely put together: hair, jewelry, cosmetics and fashionable clothing. Not only does this radiate confidence, but it gives her a sense of control over her physical image. (If she were a modern woman, she would take full advantage of techniques like botox.) Another of her habits is that she takes five deep breaths before facing a strong male, to get her emotions under control and steel her nerves, because she cannot allow anyone to perceive her as weak.

So now it’s your turn. Consider the core values of one of your characters, brainstorm how those values might lead to traits and mannerisms, then select the ones that best serve your plot.

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Craft Writing with Humor

How Humor Helps When Writing About Sensitive Topics

At first glance, making people laugh when addressing a sensitive topic seems absurd, maybe even callous. But then again, a little humor used the right way can make a tough topic easier for your audience to handle.

Laughter Sets the Spirit Free

“Laughter sets the spirit free through even the most tragic circumstances.

It helps us shake our heads clear, get our feet back under us and restore our sense of balance.

Humor is integral to our peace of mind and our ability to go beyond survival.”

(POW Survivor Captain Gerald Coffee.)

Capt. Coffee spent seven years as a POW in North Vietnam at the infamous “Hanoi Hilton.” Speaking to a group one evening, Coffee told a story that showed how humor helped keep him sane. It started with a bite of bread.

“One day I took a bite out of my bread, and I looked at it, and I was inspired to compose my very first poem.

I said, ‘Little weevil in my bread, I think I just bit off … Coffee, you’ve got to be going off your rocker. How can you be sitting here in these abysmal circumstances laughing at your stupid little poem?’

But I was.

It just reminded me of that beautiful, traditional, axiomatic sense of humor that serves every single one of us each day.

I couldn’t do what I’ve done — you couldn’t do what you do — without that sense of humor.” [1]

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Humor Hints at Hope

Just because we’re tackling a tough topics doesn’t mean we have to be grave in our delivery. We don’t want to depress the cheerful and drag the saddened down deeper. Instead, we can give hope to the hurting by inviting them to laugh with us through our tears.

We should never pretend a situation isn’t as serious as it is, but leaving our audience depressed will likely leave us without an audience, and they’ll miss our message.

Not long after subscribing to a certain blog, I had to give it up. The author continually wrote about sensitive subjects, professing hope, but consistently left me feeling only sadness.

I never sensed she was experiencing the joy she promised her readers. Her tone didn’t deliver what her words had promised.

To Laugh, or Not to Laugh

Not every topic we write about can be approached with humor, even light humor. Some experiences demand utmost seriousness. Wise judgment comes in handy at these times.

If it seems appropriate to the topic, your audience will thank you if you invite them to laugh.

Working humor into the background of sensitive topics can ease the blow and allow your message to take center stage.

In my next post, I’ll give five tips for how to use humor effectively when writing about a sensitive topic.

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Child's Craft

Picture Book Submissions – The Mighty Manuscript

Picture Book Submissions – The Mighty Manuscript

The third item to include in your full proposal submission for a picture book is your mighty manuscript. This is the reason you are submitting to a publisher in the first place. Once you’ve written your killer picture book manuscript, tightened it, strengthened it, had it critiqued, rewritten it several times and feel it’s ready to send, now it’s time to put it in the correct submission format.

Always use Times Roman Numeral 12-point font and double space your text. Always. Editors read all day long and this is easiest on their eyes. More importantly, they may not read it if its in a different format. Create one inch margins on each page and stick to it. Don’t adjust these to squeeze in more text. Create a title page with your name, address, phone number, email and web address in the left upper corner. One third to one half of the way down in the middle of the page place the Title in Caps and Bold if you’d like. This can be 14-point font though nothing fancy. Don’t include clip art or any form of pictures on this page.

On the first page of your manuscript in the header in the top left put your name – brief title. In the header upper right put page numbers with the exception of the first page. This is in case your manuscript gets dropped, they’ll know if pages are missing and to which manuscript a stray page may belong.

Begin the text one third to one half the way down again with the title centered. Four spaces below this begin your text.  I usually put my suggested page count and pages of text below the title.

As I mentioned in a previous post, I support and suggest breaking your picture book manuscript into spreads and pages. The publisher may not stick to your lay out and has the right to change it as they desire, but it makes for easier reading and gives them an idea of how it will fit within the pages. The right side of a spread are odd pages, the left are even. Remember the book will have front matter so keep in mind as you lay out your text in spreads that the text does not begin on page 1. If you choose to submit in this format, this is the way it may look:

Title

32-page manuscript

26 pages of text

Introduction

Page 6-7

Begin text here with your hook. I usually indent the text but it may not appear that way in this blog.

Spread 1

Page 8-9

Continue your story for these pages. I add a space between the spreads for ease in reading but it may not appear that way here.

Spread 2

Page 10

You may break the spread into separate pages like this.

Page 11

And continue your text here, which your text would indicate the pictures needing two pages for this spread.

Spread 3

Page 12-13

Break your spreads into a combined pictures across both spreads and separate pictures on each page to break up the monotony of each spread looking exactly the same.

I continue on like this and end with my conclusion.

Conclusion

Page 30-31

Ta Da! The fabulous conclusion of your manuscript.

Look through multiple picture books and notice the layout of the spreads. Watch where the pages turn. Are there pictures on each page or across the full spread? How often does this change?

Make sure you don’t put too many words on a page as you want to keep the children’s attention.

Have fun with it and keep in mind that the editor will most likely change your layout so remain flexible.

The editor may change your page count.

Do not suggest specific pictures as your beautiful writing should elicit the images for the illustrator to create.

Keep in mind that this is just one form of picture book submissions. If you have found success with another form, please comment below. I’d love to hear about it. Good luck and happy submitting!

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Specs: Speculative Fiction

Wielding Original Tweaks

Wielding Original Tweaks

     I try to come up with as many Characters as I can. This can sometimes be a little hard, because you don’t want to “cut and paste” one of your old characters, but you want someone that you like. I’ve found that sometimes taking a step back, thinking outside the box, and deviating from the conventional way of wielding original tweaks helps in the art of character building.

Taking a step back

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     Music is my way of writing up a character without writing. I create playlists that represent my character’s emotional and physical journey. As I’ve said before in a previous post music is a big part of my writing style. Music can create that deep inflection that you want for your character, in a way it give your character his or her voice long before their words ever make it to the page in your manuscript.

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     Want a challenge, or stuck and can’t make a good enough character? One thing that I do from time to time is pick twelve songs that I like to listen to, or identify with, and smush them all together. the challenge is to create a character based off of the playlist you just made. Some of my favorite characters started out as a playlist.

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Thinking outside the box

     Sometimes interacting with your character for a day, can really help you develop them, and as weird as this sounds, thinking of your character in terms of smell can add an entirely new dimension. What does he smell like? What’s her favorite smell? What’s a smell that repulses them, and do they repulse you? Your world and the places your characters go will determine all of the scents. Their past can even influence the “scents” of your character.

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Deviating from the conventional.

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     The best way to break free from the conventional way of discovering your character is to just have fun with it. Sure there are sciences to creating your character, but the more fun you have with it, the more that imaginary friend means to you. Figuring out what works for you is how you learn to use Original tweaks to the max.

   So these are a few of the ways I see original tweaks through my lenses, How do you see them through yours?

 

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History in the Making

Three Things I learned About Writing Dialogue from Jane Austen

By Sandra Merville Hart

 

I’ve read Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice at least a dozen times and loved it every time. As a writer of historical novels, I’ve learned dialogue that thrilled Jane’s readers doesn’t work as well today.

Don’t get me wrong — the conversations between Miss Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy still sparkle and shine. Their dialogue tantalizes and intrigues us to read on. Even though we sense the couple will marry in the end, Austen weaves convincing arguments that cause us to wonder just how they will overcome all the obstacles in their way.

Austen wrote romances that live on in our hearts.

Writing dialogue for today’s readers of historic novels isn’t quite the same. At least three things have changed over the years.

The first difference you may notice in reading Pride and Prejudice is the very long paragraphs of dialogue. One person might speak for an entire page without interruption. Such lengthy paragraphs no longer work. Readers of current historic novels will probably be tempted to skim through such passages and miss the gems contained inside. Authors must consider shortening these conversations even though it is authentic to the period.

The second difference in Austen’s classic work is that dialogue often continues for several pages with very little action. Conversation was one of the main pastimes in days gone by. Most people worked long days and looked forward to relaxing with a friend over a cup of coffee or tea, so these visits became natural scenes in their literature. Writers these days must shorten dialogue and include plenty of action to hold our reader’s attention.

Another difference about Austen’s era was the formal language. They spoke more eloquently. They communicated well. We’ve lost a little of this ability because of all the distractions in our lives.[bctt tweet=”Three Things I learned about #Writing #Dialogue from #Author Jane Austen”] Cell phones, televisions, radios, IPods, Internet sites, and YouTube videos didn’t claim the attention of Austen’s audience. Still, authors who want to remain authentic to the period they write in should soften the formality. Contractions are fine. Don’t be afraid to select words that characters from previous eras often used, but make certain the meaning is clear.

What worked for Austen probably won’t tempt our readers to keep turning pages, but they will continue to read her books. After all, her novels are classics.

 

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Create. Motivate. Inspire.

Writers—Grab a Book!

Would you like to improve your vocabulary, fire your imagination, and learn about story structure and character development from an endless variety of authors?

Pick up/download a book!

READING is the most overlooked, undervalued activity for a writer—whether that writer is multi-published or just starting out.

Where should you start?

Read something that makes you laugh (or cry, or shout, or…).

Losing ourselves in words that stir the emotions tends to relax our writing muscles. Read in various genres. Soak in the talents of others. Simply take joy in reading. (Don’t we hope that someone will take joy in our work?)

Read something that makes you think.

In seconds, we can download the greatest literature of all time. We have the ability to peer over the shoulders of C.S. Lewis, Vance Havner, William Shakespeare, Agatha Christie, A.W.Tozer, and myriad others. What a privilege! (I get excited just thinking about it…)

Pouring over the words of others triggers creativity. We may want to carry certain ideas further or we may decide to take a different path.

Read something that makes you study.

Slow down. Analyze. Pull out passages that engage and ask why. What drew you in? What caused you to stumble? What “popped” you out of the story? Keep pen and paper handy to capture thoughts and ideas.

Read. Underline. Take notes.

Writer’s conferences and classes are indispensable—but they only happen a few times a year. The good news? We can learn from great writers at any time simply by picking up a book.

Want to be a great writer? Start by becoming a voracious reader!

 

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Tour

Blog Tour Stop – Dina Sleiman

[author title=”Dina Sleiman” image=”http://www.almostanauthor.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/10/5500b4595b888.image_.jpg”]Dina Sleiman writes stories of passion and grace. Most of the time you will find this Virginia Beach resident reading, biking, dancing, or hanging out with her husband and three children, preferably at the oceanfront. Check out her novels Dance from Deep Within, Dance of the Dandelion, and Love in Three-Quarter Time, and look for her Valiant Hearts adventure/romance books, Dauntless and Chivalrous, with Bethany House Publishers.[/author]

What is the title of your latest book?

Chivalrous

Tell us more about your book:

Strong and adventurous Gwendolyn Barnes longs to be a knight like her chivalrous brothers. However, that is not an option for her, not even in the Arthurian-inspired Eden where she dwells. Her parents view her only as a marriage pawn, and her domineering father is determined to see her wed to a brutish man who will break her spirit.

When handsome, good-hearted Allen of Ellsworth arrives in Edendale searching for his place in the world, Gwendolyn spies in him the sort of fellow she could imagine marrying. Yet fate seems determined to keep them apart. Tournaments, intrigue, and battles–along with twists and turns aplenty–await these two as they struggle to find love, identity, and their true destinies.

Why do you write what you do?: 

I fell in love with the medieval era many years ago, but I discovered it was a bad fit for the Christian market after I had already completed my first novel set in that time. Thankfully, markets change. With a subtle shift from adult romantic historical to young adult historical adventure/romance, I was able to return to the time period that I love. I’m very excited about writing for a cross-over teen/adult audience. It is such an honor to be able to influence the upcoming generation with my stories. I have a heart to teach young women to be strong and courageous and follow God’s leading, wherever that might take them.

What are you currently working on?: 

Courageous is book 3 in the Valiant Hearts series and will be coming out in July of 2016. This is the story of Rosalind, the lady’s maid in book 2. She goes on crusade to the Holy Land in search of redemption from a tragic mistake in her past.

How does your work differ from other work in its genre?:

To my knowledge there are only three of us currently writing in my exact genre of YA Christian medievals: Melanie Dickerson, Jody Hedlund, and me. My story concepts differ in that the entire series sets females in legendary medieval male roles, while the others tend more toward a fairy tale feel. I think my strong and courageous Valiant Heart heroines are pretty unique. I certainly have the only female knight and crusader to date, although, as it turns out, we’ve all three written Robin Hood adaptions. Other medievals out there tend to be fantasy or time travel, but I don’t really know the fantasy genre and backwards time travel completely freaks out my rather scientific brain. In addition to the medieval setting, my books differ from other general historical romances in that I love to weave in a variety of elements like adventure, suspense, humor, and a deep spiritual thread.

How does your writing process work?: 

I like to write alone and in silence, preferably curled up in bed with my laptop. I also like to begin my writing time with prayer and invite God to be my partner in the process. Generally when a story idea hits me, I’m in a pleasant daze for weeks. During that time my family has to remind me to do stuff like shower and cook dinner while I frantically try to type up everything my characters are telling me. But eventually I do have to get down to the hard work of writing, especially now that I’m on deadlines and can’t always wait for the muse to hit.

Social Media and Blog:

http://valiantheartsseries.blogspot.com/
http://dinasleiman.com
https://www.facebook.com/authordinasleiman?fref=ts
https://twitter.com/DinaSleiman1
https://www.pinterest.com/dinasleiman/

Amazon Link: http://www.amazon.com/Chivalrous-Valiant-Hearts-Dina-Sleiman/dp/076421313X/ref=asap_bc?ie=UTF8

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A Little Red Ink Editing

What Is a Macro Edit?

What is a macro edit?

When you’re ready to choose a freelance editor, knowing the level of edit you’re after is important. Over the next few posts, let’s take a look at what the differences are in each level of editing.

Macro (or substantive) edit

Line edit

Copy edit

Proofread

Critique

First up is the macro edit.

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Often called a substantive edit, this is concerned with the big picture.

After you’ve finished your manuscript, this is the first edit you’ll need. Let me offer a caveat here: By finished, I don’t mean you’ve typed “The End” on your first draft. I mean your beta readers or critique group has given you input, and you’ve taken that into consideration, revised your work, and polished the manuscript up. You can save yourself a lot of money and heartache if you do this hard work yourself.

Even if you’ve got a stellar crit group or crit partner, a professional editor could still find several big-picture issues that need to be addressed. So…what is a macro edit? What is the editor looking for?

A Killer Hook

You know this bit, I’m sure. Personally, as a reader, I’m a tough sell. Convince me that your book deserves 15-20 hours of my time, anchor me in your story world, and get me to invest in your character’s plight, or I’ll put it down.

As an editor, I obviously won’t put it down. But I’m going to focus a Herculean effort on it.

A macro edit zeroes in on the firsts—first lines, first pages, first chapters.

Compelling story arcs

A macro edit eyes the story arcs of your entire cast. Crafting awful, believable circumstances for your main character isn’t so tough, but what is the antagonist after? What do the minor characters want? (Hint: knowing the answers to these and threading them throughout the story is the way to set up a series. Make people wish they knew the other characters’ stories.)

Characters acting…out of character

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As the story arc climbs, and as readers get to know your cast, the characters need to behave believably. If a girl always, always keeps her face covered with a scarf, she’s not going to suddenly walk into a crowd in a sundress, smiling at everyone she meets. If she does show her face, it’d better be worth it. She’s doing something out of the ordinary for her—and she shouldn’t feel comfortable with it.

Another macro object: If a character is going to be a changed person by the end of the story, readers need to see either a microevolution or a major life-changing event. The macro edit will look for these things and point out spots where those could be enriched.

Plot holes

Since it’s every writer’s goal to avoid these little buggers, the macro edit is the hired mercenary. Seek. Target. Destroy. Some editors will mark them. “How did we get here? I thought we were…” Or “They’re discussing something that happened…before they make the discovery that it happened on page 218.”

Don’t convince your readers that the thing they’re most rooting for is on the horizon…and then leave it out. If you make promises to your readers, keep them. The macro edit will focus on that as well.

Pacing

Maybe your setup takes too long; maybe your middle sags. Perhaps the action scenes take a full ten minutes longer to read than they would to see played out. Maybe the readers need a breather or a little humor to break the tension. An editor will be sure to point spots like this out on the macro.

Dropped threads

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Sometimes—with the best of intentions—you’ll include details of a story thread (a minor theme), and it’ll get lost along the way. During the substantive edit, an editor will notice those, possibly suggesting they get cut, and possibly pointing out a few areas they can be worked back in.

A satisfying conclusion

Most of all, the editor will make sure your story comes to a satisfying conclusion—leaving readers right where you want them. Do you want to end with possibility but uncertainty? Let your editor know. Are you setting up a sequel? Is there enough resolution to hold the reader until it’s available (while still leaving them longing for more)?

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Of course, each editor is different and will handle the points in his or her own style. This is why a sample edit or a personal recommendation is a great idea.

And remember, when you get the macro edit back, the work isn’t done. Think of it like a bull’s-eye. The macro edit is the outer ring. The follow-up edits (copy edit and proofread) will get you closer to center.

Until you truly hit the target.

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The Writer's PenCase

Putting Fire in Your Fiction Part II

The Writer's PenCase
The Writer’s PenCase

We’re looking at Donald Maass’ The Fire in Fiction. @DonaldMaass #FireinFiction

I’m on a quest to learn more about writing and share it with you, Today, we’ll talk about Chapter 1, Protagonists vs. Heroes.

“…think about the people whom you deeply admire. Who are the individuals for whom you would cancel other plans? Who stirs in your awe, respect, humility, and high esteem? Are these regular people, no different than anyone else? They may not be famous but they are in some way exceptional, right? Click to Tweet

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Have Words, Will Travel....Travel Writing 101

Make Your Next Travel Writing Article More Memorable

Andrew McCarthy, guest editor of The Best American Travel Writing 2015, says that the best travel writing is “the anonymous and solitary traveler capturing a moment in time and place, giving meaning to his or her travels.”

Capturing a moment in time—and sharing it in a way that captures the very imagination of the reader—is the goal of every writer. Below are four tips to consider in making your next project a memorable one:

  • Make your prose sing. Read a little poetry every day. Yes, poetry! Read it aloud. Feel the cadence and you’re sure to gain a new understanding, as well as a fresh appreciation, for the value poetry can bring to your prose.
  • Make it impossible for readers to turn away. Engage a person’s five senses and you’ll go straight for the emotional jugular. Include as many of the senses as your piece will sensibly allow—especially where the sensory of scent is concerned. It’s a powerhouse player on the sensory team and unfortunately, often overlooked.
  • Make your point. If you don’t know the focal point of your travel story, chances are your reader won’t either and who wants to ride a merry-go-round of endless details? Most of us enjoy the scenery but we all expect to land at a particular destination.
  • Make continual learning a must. Howard Hendricks once said, “I’d rather have my students drink from a running stream than a stagnant pool.” When we as writers hone our skills by furthering our education through classes, increasing our time between the pages of quality travel books, or joining a local or online writer’s group, our readers will drink from a running stream, leaving them refreshed… and wanting more.

Is there one tip, either from above, or from another source, that you plan to integrate into your writing to make it more memorable?

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Almost an Author (A3) Audio Blog – Week of November 1, 2015

Almost an Author (A3) Audio Blog – Week of November 1, 2015.

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The Ministry of Writing

Daddy are There Potties in Heaven? — Where Do You Get Your Truth?

“Daddy are there potties in Heaven?” My two-year old daughter asked when the subject of Heaven came up. She has been potty-training so potties are on her mind. As a pastor I am asked a lot of theological questions, but I have never been asked that question.

Interesting question, right?

As her theologian-dad I could not let her question go unanswered. I had to provide her with the truth she so desperately needed.

But after Google failed to provide an answer I was stuck. So where do I go from there? How do I find the truth? And while we are on the subject — where do you get your truth?

So as I was replying, “uhhhhhhh” and my daughter was moving on to something else I had a few thoughts:

 

As a Christian Writer, You are a Dispenser and Framer of Truth

Although Tyndale’s dream has long been succeeded in that even every plow boy has a Bible they can read we still live in one of the most biblical illiterate times in history. Our Christian writings provide truth. If it is nonfiction then it serves as truth while in fictional works entire worldviews and understandings of life are framed.

Your readers are forming their understanding of God and a life with Him from your writings. Therefore it is important that you realize that you play a part in the formation of truth in this post-Christian environment. The Bible warns extensively about the dangers of false teachers, and we write against them. [bctt tweet=”If we are not careful we can be that false teacher.”] So where do you get your truth? Where would you draw your answer about heavenly potties if you were asked?

 

Truth is What is Needed

My two-year old could have lived with a cliché answer, and my wife thinks I should answer in a way that motivates her to continue using the potty. So yeah this question was not that a big deal, but our writing is important and influential. It may sound odd to talk about “truth” in terms to such a cute but goofy question. I could simply reply with an opinion or a belief. In the more important issues your readers need truth. They do not need an idea or opinion pulled out of thin air. They don’t even need to hear what you believe. Your belief does not make something truth. Rather we and our readers need to believe the truth, but how will they know the truth unless it is told. So when you want to provide the truth where do you get it?

 

Where Do You Go for the Truth?

The answer is simple, right? The Bible.

If it is so easy then why is it not the place we go first? Why don’t we work hard to make sure that we know what is in the Bible? If you are a Christian writer, but you have not read and studied the entirety of the Bible then your readers are in danger. They need to know the truth and you are a dispenser of that truth. Read it.

But in my case there is no Scripture reference of potties in Heaven. So what do I do? It is important to use the whole of Scripture and work Scriptural to come to the most biblical answer.

In Bible Study turn to trusted commentaries. Follow hermeneutical rules in your biblical interpretation. The Bible is not a free for all. Take the time to not only go to the right spot for truth, but search it correctly and biblical.

So go to the truth and provide the truth.

That’s what I did and I told my daughter, “I don’t know.”

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For my complete analysis on potties in Heaven check out www.graytotebox.com.