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Bestselling Author Interview – Jolina Petersheim

Jolina Petersheim is the bestselling author of How the Light Gets In, The AllianceThe Midwife, and The Outcast, which Library Journal called “outstanding . . . fresh and inspirational” in a starred review and named one of the best books of 2013. That book also became an ECPA, CBA, and Amazon bestseller and was featured in Huffington Post’s Fall Picks, USA TodayPublishers Weekly, and the TennesseanCBA Retailers + Resources called her second book, The Midwife, “an excellent read [that] will be hard to put down,” and Romantic Times declared, “Petersheim is an amazing new author.” Her third book, The Alliance, was selected as one of Booklist’s Top 10 Inspirational Fiction titles of 2016. Jolina’s nonfiction writing has been featured in Reader’s DigestWriter’s Digest, and Today’s Christian Woman. She and her husband share the same unique Amish and Mennonite heritage that originated in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania, but they now live in the mountains of Tennessee with their three young daughters. She blogs regularly at jolinapetersheim.com

Can you share a little about your recent book?

My newest novel, How the Light Gets In, is a contemporary spin on Ruth set on a cranberry farm in a Wisconsin Mennonite community.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

I write to understand my own heart, and from that understanding, to draw closer to the heart of God. My themes change as my personal journey changes. I’ve explored the devastation of family secrets (The Outcast), motherhood (The Midwife), the divide between trust and action (The Alliance series), and marriage during the young parenting years (How the Light Gets In).

How long have you been writing?

I’ve been “writing” since before I could read. My father was a carpenter by trade and a songwriter in his spare time. Therefore, I grew up being immersed in music and language. This, combined with always having my nose in a book, made me want to be a writer.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

I got my first book contract for my debut, The Outcast, when I was twenty-five. My eldest daughter, now seven, was only twelve weeks old. The Outcast was my third “novel,” but the first I ever submitted to an agent. I met my agent at an author reading for our mutual friend because we both have distinctly Pennsylvania Dutch last names, which aren’t often heard around Nashville. He asked what I was working on, and the rest, as they say, is history. He’s been my agent for the past seven years. I admire how he treats everyone with respect and kindness.

How long does it take you to write a book?

Well, my pace has slowed with each child (my husband and I now have three girls). I wrote The Outcast in six months; How the Light Gets In took two years. The beauty of the writing/life journey is that even though I’m a slower writer, my children are teaching me how to live.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

Right now, I wake at 5, write until 6:30, get my firstborn daughter off to school, and then write again at 2, which is nap time/quiet time for my two younger daughters. I try to wrap everything up when my eldest daughter gets home at 3:15. That’s certainly not a lot of time to work on a manuscript, but I have found that slow and steady helps me reach The End. Of course, my writing schedule often changes due to sickness (like this week, when we’ve been passing around a respiratory virus), field trips, and book signings, but the key is to jump right back in when I’m able. I love having a creative outlet that works around my family’s life.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

Well, for years I’ve been writing at the kitchen table (which is where I am now). The kitchen table is our family’s hub, and I like to be in the center of everything, so my family doesn’t feel like I’m choosing my art over them. Plus, who knows what my children would get into while I was in a closed room.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

Yesterday, a reader at a book signing showed me a dog-eared section of How the Light Gets In, where Mabel is giving marital advice to Ruth. Another friend rewrote one of Ruth’s letters and sent it to her husband, which served as a medium to help them reconnect. Another friend told me her parents listened to the audiobook version of Ruth’s story while on their way to the beach, and their marriage—at one point—had been severely strained. I love using stories to bring connection and clarity to relationships.

What was your darkest moment(s)?

At the end of 2014, my husband had emergency brain surgery to remove a benign (non-cancerous) tumor. My darkest moment didn’t happen the night before his surgery but the two weeks after it. He was still not well, our children were sick, and the snow was piled up outside our little Wisconsin farmhouse. I remember standing at the window and staring out at that snow. I prayed, and I prayed, and then I walked into the playroom and stretched myself across the guest bed, too tired to cry. That night, our entire household slept, which is no small feat with a newborn and a two-and-a-half-year-old with croup. Looking back, I see that moment as a pivotal shift in my relationship with God. He went from this distant paternal figure to someone who came close to me when I called His name.

Which of your books is your favorite?

Right now, I would have to say How the Light Gets In, but that might be because it most closely reflects my stage of life while trying to juggle marriage, motherhood, and creativity.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Ah! That is always hard for me to answer. I read widely, so I love discovering new authors—or at least authors who are new to me. I recently read and thoroughly enjoyed a forthcoming novel called Call Your Daughter home by a debut author named Deb Spera. I met Deb when we sat beside each other at a book signing in Atlanta. She said her novel was about the “ferocity of motherhood,” so I told her I needed to read it! Call Your Daughter home has beautiful language, an electric atmosphere, and a thread of justice that pulls everything bowstring tight. I loved it.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have listened too?

I would tell aspiring writers that no part of the process—writing process and life process—is ever wasted. Not the rejection slips filed in a recipe box. Not the manuscript on a thumb drive that will never see the light of day. I had a goal to be published by twenty-five. I received my first book contract at twenty-five, and though I am extremely grateful for getting an early start, I would tell myself to relax a little more and to enjoy the journey.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

I’ve experienced rejection more times than I can count. However, I believe we really find out who we are in those moments. Are we going to be the kind of person who just wallows in bed with a piece of dark chocolate (though chocolate is never a bad idea), or are we going to pull ourselves up by our muck boots and get back out there? I do believe it’s important to acknowledge pain, whether large or small, process that pain, and then leave it once it’s processed. Rejection is part of life. Pain is part of life. But it doesn’t have to define you.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

I love tucking my personal experiences into my fiction. When I was seventeen, I did a short-term outreach at an orphanage in Bogotá, Colombia, with my future husband and his family (though he wasn’t even my boyfriend at the time). We visited this beautiful stone house while we were there with an orange roof. It had a large round table with a circular skylight above. I remember joking that I wanted to come there for my honeymoon one day. Well, in How the Light Gets In, I placed my characters Ruth and Chandler there for their honeymoon. There’s this one scene where the two of them dance on the table and kiss beneath that circular piece of sky. It was as if my husband and I got to go back there, if only for a moment.

Where do you get your ideas?

My ideas take time to percolate. For instance, I’d been thinking about writing a contemporary spin on Ruth since I took a snowy Wisconsin walk with my firstborn daughter, who was only a baby. I imagined a woman coming there after having lost almost everything. Later, when I put my daughter down for a nap, I had the idea of Ruth. It only took me six years to publish it!

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writer’s make?

Well, I won’t call out anyone else’s mistakes, but I will share mine. Comparison is one of the greatest downfalls in the business. It is easy to get our identity in our book’s success (or lack thereof), and either success or failure can be debilitating if this is our foremost goal. However, when we keep our eyes focused on the ultimate Author and His unconditional love for His fellow creatives, everything else clicks into place.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

Social media is always a great way to connect, but there is truly nothing like face to face interaction. Any creative pursuit requires us to consistently step outside of our comfort zones. Even the most embarrassing experiences can later be turned into funny stories. So, go for it!

Jolina’s books can be found at Barnes and Noble, Books a Million, Powell’s, IndieBound.org, Amazon, Christianbook.com, Target.com, Walmart.com.

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Book Proposals

Create a Winning Competetive Analysis

“Can I really compare my book with a bestselling author’s book?”

“Why do I need this? Won’t I shine the light on their book and not mine?”

“How many books do I need to compare and contrast?”

“What is a competitive analysis, anyway?”

These are just some of the questions I get while assisting my clients with the Competetive Analysis portion of their book proposal.

The CA is vital because it is used to prove to the agent or publisher that your book is similar enough to already published books that have an audience,
yet different enough to grab those established reader’s attention. It provides information on how well your book might sell in the same genre or market.
Publishers and agents love to see numbers, so the facts from a well developed, well researched CA can be used in your marketing plan which in turn gives you a better chance to get a contract.
Before you create you CA ALWAYS read the agent or publisher’s submission guidelines.

Here are a few tips to creating your Competitive Analysis

Research
Make a list of 7-10 books that tell the same type of story or give the same kind of information as your book.
Look for competing books on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Goodreads, BookDepository.com and other online booksellers.
Take a trip to a brick and mortar store or library to investigate what books are on the shelf where your book would
be once it’s published.  Yes, add a few bestsellers to the list. Note that traditionally published books by a larger publisher are preferred.
Stay away from self-published books unless they’ve sold thousands in the first year. Make sure the book was published within the last 5-7 years.

Obtain the following information from the books you chose to compare and contrast.
Title and subtitle
Author
Publisher
Copyright year
Number of pages
Format (paperback, hardcover, etc)
Price
ISBN
Answer these questions when you write the compare and contrast portion of each book.
How is my book similar?
How is my book different?
What promise does the author make to readers?
What promise does my book make that is different/similar from the other book?
How are my credentials similar/different from the other author?

Never criticize the other book or author.

Creating a professional book proposal takes time and effort. Many agents and publishers look at the Competitive Analysis and Marketing Plan first.

They want to know that the author is informed and ready to promote their book.

Yes, the proposal seems harder than writing the book, but I have total confidence that you can do it.

Stay the course, my friend. I’m here if you need me.

For more writing tips, check out www.seriouswriter.com/blog

Cherrilynn Bisbano is an award-winning writer.  She founded The Write Proposal after reading hundreds of book proposals with avoidable errors. These errors cost the author a contract or representation. As a former submission reader and junior literary agent, Cherrilynn wants you to succeed.  Her desire is to help you present a professional and memorable proposal.  She has written proposals for Paws for Effect, a Hollywood movie company, and helped edit many proposals.  As the previous managing editor of Almost an Author, she helped the website earn the #6 spot on the Top 100 best writing websites for 2018 by The Write Life and Top 101 Websites for writers with Writers Digest.

Cherrilynn hosted Genre Chat where she was privileged to interview expert writers like Jerry B. Jenkins, Cecil Murphy, Michelle Adams, Liz Curtiz Higgs, and Steven James.

She earned her associate’s degree in communications and continues to study business management.

She is a two-time winner of Flash Fiction Weekly. She’s published in many online magazines and blogs. Cherrilynn contributed to Chicken Soup for the Soul- MiraclesBreaking the Chains, and Heart Reno books.

Cherrilynn proudly served in the military for twenty years, earning the John Levitow Military leadership award.

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Book Proposals

Do Agents Really Care About My Cat?

My Maine Coon- Peach

I love cats, coffee, chocolate, and long walks on the beach, especially if the beach has sea glass.  My cat is my best friend and therapist.  What does this information have to do with my author bio? NOTHING! All this information is good for a dating website (you won’t find me there, I’m married) or your personal social media page, but not a book proposal bio.

So what do agents and publishers want?

Writing experience

Don’t be shy. If you wrote for the school paper, local newspaper, or college blog, include it in this section. Of course, annotate any books or magazine articles.

Education

Include high school, college, and any online courses. Did you attend an intense class at a conference? Make sure it’s in your bio.

Achievements

Note any writing awards, no matter how small. I read one proposal that mentioned a tri-state, third-grade school award for best story.  As a junior agent, this award showed me that the author began writing early and has a recognizable talent.

Publishing History

Local newspapers, blogs, magazines, books, and newsletters all count. List the name of the article or book, publisher, and date. Self-publishing counts.

Current Head Shot

Use a recent photo. If you do not have one, pay a professional, or ask someone who knows how to take a good photo.

Additional Information

Write your author bio in the third person. Use your name and a pronoun interchangeably.

The agent and publisher want to know you are the best person to write the book.

Some agents and publishers love cats, but if your book is not about a feline,  leave Morris, Tabby, Felix, Sampson, or Peach out of your proposal.

If you have any questions about book proposals, email me at editor@thewriteproposal.com

Cherrilynn Bisbano is the founder of The Write Proposal book proposal services. Cherrilynn co-hosts Fulfilled Prophecy Friday with well-known prophecy speaker Jake McCandless. Connect with her at www.truthtoshine.blogspot.com

As managing editor of Almost an Author, she helped the website earn the #6 spot on the Top 100 best writing websites for 2018 by The Write Life and Top 101 Websites for writers with Writers Digest.

She is a two-time winner of Flash Fiction Weekly. You can find her published in Southern Writers, More to Life (MTL), Christian Rep, Refresh and other online magazines.  Cherrilynn is a contributor to the Blue Ridge Christian Writers blog. She is published in Heart Reno, Chicken Soup for the Soul-Miracles, and  Selah nominated, Breaking the Chains books.

Cherrilynn proudly served in the Navy and Air National Guard; earning the John Levitow Military leadership award.  She lives with her sixteen-year-old son, Michael, Jr., and husband of 19 years, Michael, Sr.

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Bestsellers

Best Selling Author-Tracie Peterson

Can you share a little about your recent book –

My last book is titled TREASURED GRACE and it’s book 1 in the Heart of the Frontier series.  The series is set in 1847 and goes through 1856. The location is the Oregon Territory and book one deals with the Whitman Mission massacre.  It’s a romance set against tragic events that helped to mold the governments’ attitude toward Native Americans.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

Writing for me is a ministry. I want to share the Gospel of Jesus Christ in each book, but give it in a way that isn’t just hitting people upside the head with a Biblical 2×4.  I also include Bible application and encouragement for the believer.  I want each of the books to do what I call my 3E’s.  I want them to entertain, educate and encourage.

How long have you been writing? And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract?

I had tried off and on to publish since I was a teen. I got my first contract in November of 1992.  You have to remember, however, that I wanted to write Historical Christian romance and there wasn’t a market for it prior to that. I was even told at one point, “Christians don’t have romances.”   Since then, most publishing houses agree that Christians do have romances and have tried their hand at publishing stories about that.  Now I write primarily Christian Historical Romantic Intrigue and was recently introduced as the Queen of Christian Historicals.  I thought that after 110 books, most of which were historical, the title was a good fit.

How long does it take you to write a book?

I dedicate 3-4 months for each book’s writing. However, I’m doing research well in advance of writing and I’m plotting out story ideas prior to that.  I also write up a detailed synopsis as a road map for each book which allows me to write super fast and then have lots of time for editing.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

Normally I write each day.  I strive for a chapter a day and when I sit down to write it, I go over the chapter I wrote the day before to get me into the flow of writing the next chapter.  I write the first draft fast and furiously and then spend a good amount of time in editing.  When my writing for the day is done – sometimes this takes a couple of hours and sometime it takes a lot more – then I do research work for future projects, look for events and locations I’d like to write about, answer fan mail and so forth.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I don’t know if it’s a quirk or not, but I’m a stickler for two things.  I want accuracy in my writing and reading materials. I research as much as possible for each book because nothing ruins a book faster for me than historical inaccuracy.  I am also a stickler for a detailed chapter by chapter synopsis which I know seat-of-the-pants writers would consider a negative quirk. J

The detailed synopsis saves me from ever having much in the way of rewrites, however, so I’ll stick with it. Some writers worry that this takes out the spontaneity of the story, but it doesn’t.  I use it as a guideline only. If I need to make changes or add characters or subplots, I do. It’s just that with the detailed synopsis I can write something even when I don’t feel overly creative.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

Seeing lives transformed by the stories God has given to me to write.

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

Hmmm, that’s a tough one.  I can’t think of any real dark writing moments. I suppose the thing that bothers me most is seeing authors caught up in the contests and best-seller’s lists and being depressed when their books don’t get there. Satan uses the world’s judging standards to make authors feel like winners and losers, and it has ruined many a great author. I remember an author coming to me once after her book didn’t win in a contest. She told me she was giving up writing because apparently, she didn’t have what it took to win.  That’s a dark moment.

Which of your books is your favorite?

That’s really impossible to say – kind of like “which kid is your favorite”. I can honestly say they’ve all been favorites for one reason or another. Generally, however, the book I’m writing at the time is my favorite just because it’s uppermost in my mind.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Again, there are a great many.  I love Charles Martin, Liz Curtis Higgs, Jen Turano, Judith Miller, Kimberley Woodhouse, Cathy Marie Hake and Elizabeth Camden just to name a few. There are also quite a few secular authors I regularly read.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have listened too?

Over the years, I got a lot of really good advice, but one question came to me from a little workshop I attended when I was first getting started.  It was so simple, but so important.  This was the question:  Why are you writing?  It’s critical to know why you write.  If you are writing for money, then it will send you in a different direction than if you’re writing as a ministry. If you’re writing as a ministry, then that will send you in a different direction than someone who is writing to make the New York Times best-seller list for the fame of it or to make their mom proud or to prove something to someone who put them down.  Everyone has a reason they write and what it is they’re trying to accomplish.  However, what I wish every writer would do is write for the pure joy of storytelling.  I know that I would write, even if I never published another book.  I love writing and storytelling and therefore whether a book sells one copy or a hundred thousand, I enjoy what I do. Knowing why I write takes a huge pressure off.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

I had a lot of rejection letters in the early years of pursuing publication. Some were form letters and others were given with kind comments. Those rejections made me try harder. If advice was given, I heeded it and went in search of learning.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

Not really.

Where do you get your ideas?

They come from all around me. I truly believe that my storytelling ability is a gift from God and I know that He gives me ideas by sending things into my life. Some come from Bible studies, some from non-fiction reading and often from travel, but always I know God is at the very core of it.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writer’s make?

Some of the biggest problems I see with new author work today is that they haven’t bothered to do their research. I’m known for my detailed research and accuracy is important.  It doesn’t mean I won’t make mistakes and readers are ever so happy to let me know when I do, but I try to be accurate.  I’ve read books lately that were so bad where research was concerned. Even silly details like a book saying that Denver sat surrounded by mountains. (It doesn’t – they’re on the western side only).  Or an author having a gelding horse give birth or describe a bay horse as having a pale blond coat. These are easy things to research and if an author is unwilling to do their work in those areas, then I can’t trust them to have done it in other areas more critical to the story. Writers need to remember the reader develops a trust with them and keeping that trust is important.

I see a lot of head hopping with new authors – where they are in one character’s point of view and in the next paragraph they’re in another’s and back and forth.  It’s impossible to get into deep pov-which is preferred by most publishers without sticking to one pov at a time.  You can separate points of view by chapter breaks or space breaks within a chapter, but don’t bounce back and forth in the same paragraph.

Probably the other really big mistake I see is refusing to take correction. I’ve been the managing editor of a line and can’t tell you the number of times new authors would argue with me about something I pointed out or ask them to change. For example, I had one woman who had written a story based on something her grandmother had told her.  The situation, however, was well-documented and didn’t happen that way at all. I ask the writer to make changes because I liked the general story, but she refused because her grandmother’s word was Gospel to her.  Another time I pointed out the head-hoping to an author and ask them to rewrite to one pov at a time. She refused and said it ruined her story. The publisher, however, had a hard fast rule about this and I couldn’t buy the story even though I loved her work.  Yet another time I asked an author to verify and offer proof of details she’d put in her book and she wouldn’t or couldn’t and told me she shouldn’t have to.

Writers, especially newbies, but all writers need to respect the authority of the publishing house. It doesn’t mean you can stand up for your work, but you need to handle things in a respectful manner.  I’ve had publishers challenge details before. I remember once, early in my career, I had written into a story the location of the train depot in Washington D.C.  At that time it was at an intersection of two streets, however those streets no longer intersect. My editor called me on it and I produced the map to show her that in 1840 those streets did intersect.  It’s important to be able to show proof to defend your writing with something more than “grandma’s word”, but it’s also important to realize that your editor is only trying to make your book the best it can be.

Writers do not publish a book alone.  The writing is just one aspect of the book. There are so many people who will play a role in your book from editors, proofers and typesetters, to artists and design experts, to marketing and distribution people, to bookstore owners and the readers themselves.  Without any one of those people, your book suffers.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

I think the best thing writers can do is attend conferences where editors and agents will be present to take one-on-one appointments.  Most publishing houses are requiring agents now, but even if they don’t, they like to use agented material.  The publishers rarely ever look at anything that comes in without first being requested so it’s important to at least get their attention at a conference.  Sometimes it also saves the writer a great deal of trouble by sending their work to a publisher or agent who doesn’t deal in that type of writing.  There are a lot of really good conferences out there and often, even if there aren’t a lot of editors or agents attending, a writer can team up with other authors who might be able to get their work into the hands of an agent for consideration.

Ultimately, it’s up to the writer to be the best they can be and that includes being well-informed.  Join a local or national chapter of writers. You can learn so much this way. I helped to found American Christian Fiction Writers and know that this organization has helped to get many an author published.  They offer great workshops online and at conferences, as well as net-working, critique groups, industry news, etc.  They’re just one of many writer groups out there.

Last of all, I encourage all writers to keep writing. Your genre may not be popular right now, but I’ve seen various genres rise and fall over the years. Chasing the market by writing what you think the market is looking for can be a deadly trap. I’ve seen authors try this and instead of writing what they know and are really good at, they try to emulate other authors and fail. Often this has ended their career.  So write what you love and have a deep passion for writing. It shows in your work and will definitely be noticeable to the editor.

 

Tracie Peterson is the best-selling, award winning author of over 110 books.  Her work in historical romance garnered her the Best Western Romance Author of 2013 by True West Magazine. She was given the Life Time Achievement Award from American Christian Fiction Writers in 2011 and the Career Achievement Award in 2007 from Romantic Times, as well as multiple best book awards.

Tracie has been married to Jim for over 37 years and enjoys working with him on historical research for each of her books.  They make their home in the mountains of Montana. They have three grown children and three grandchildren. They also have an adopted family in Africa that has given them another seven grandchildren – two of whom were named for Tracie and Jim.

The most important thing about writing for Tracie is – this is her ministry.  It is her deepest desire is to share the Gospel with a dying world and to bring glory to God in her work.  She works with each storyline to include the message of salvation and Biblical application for daily obstacles. Throughout her career she has been blessed to see how God has used the books for His glory to change lives.  Tracie works to make each book meet her required 3 E’s.  The books need to Entertain, Educate and Encourage – all to the glory of God.

Summing up what she does, Tracie said, “I get to do something I dearly love – tell stories, travel to meet wonderful and interesting people and see new places, work with my husband and serve God, all while being paid.  Who could ask for anything more?”

Website: www.traciepeterson.com

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