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Kids Lit

In 25 Words or Less…

“I was born as a small child…and did stuff.” My bio in nine words, but who’s counting?

One piece of information that authors sometimes falter on is the dreaded bio. We have the book synopsis and elevator pitch and one-liner, but at some point, the editor/agent/publicist/person running the panel will say, “Now tell me about yourself!”

What is too long? Too short? Too braggy? Too personal?

So we blurt out something, and, as soon as the microphone moves on, we remember the one thing we meant to say! This month we prepare for publishing and public speaking by thinking in advance about those moments before someone says, “Will you go first?”

First, consider…who wants to know? 

My answer to a group of librarians: “I have an MLS from the University of Iowa and worked in public library children’s departments for three decades. I have co-authored seven resource books for library programs and developed programs for ages 0-3 years at Glen Ellyn Public Library.”

But to other children’s authors: “I have traditionally published over 40 picture and board books in both religious and general markets. I have a monthly column on writing for children for Almost an Author. I have an agent and belong to SCBWI, several critique and writing support groups.”

And if it is preschool kids: “Head, shoulders, knees and toes!” Because they don’t care who I am as long as I brought the dinosaur book.

So when self-introducing to the group, select the parts of life that are most relevant to the listeners. 

It’s easier in print.

I don’t mind saying “Muti award-winning author” on the bio at the end of an article or on a one-sheet. It is easier in the third person, too. 

Who’s it for? 

If I am pitching to an editor in the Christian market: With more than 1.7 M copies of her books sold, multi-award-winning author Rev. Dr. Robin Currie was a public librarian before answering the call to ordained ministry. She has traditionally published more than 40 picture books, including the Baby Bible Storybook. 

But for a general market editor: With more than 1.7 M copies of her books sold, multi-award-winning author Robin Currie led Chicago area public library children’s departments, developing literacy skills for preschoolers. Robin’s most recent book, How to Dress a Dinosaur, received a Kirkus review and has won eight awards in board book categories.

How long will they read?

50-word bio

Multi-award-winning author Robin Currie led children’s departments of Midwestern public libraries. She now volunteers to teach English in developing countries. Robin has published seven resource collections of creative ideas for library story times, and more than 40 picture books.

100-word bio

Multi-award-winning author Robin Currie led children’s departments of public libraries and now volunteers to teach English in developing countries. Robin has published seven resource collections of creative ideas for library story times, and more than 40 picture books. She writes stories to read and read again!

Helpful tip:

Develop four different bios on yourself. Regrettably, unless the facts are critical to the book or speech, most people do not want to hear about the grandchildren or summer vacation.

1. 30-50 words long for print

2. 75-100 words long for print

3. list of 5 items considered primary accomplishments 

4. 3 sentences about a personal incident relevant to the group

Keep all four in your computer under BIOS so they can be whipped out as needed in print. Also, print them out and tuck them in your wallet for the next time you are called on to “Introduction yourself to the group.”

BIO: See above! Or see picture below!

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Book Proposals

Come to the Table-of Contents

Congratulations, the agent, and publisher liked what they read in your Cover Letter, and opened the door to the rest of your proposal. Now, you want to make their experience easy and rewarding.

The top three pages most busy agents and publishers look at are the Biographical Sketch, Marketing Plan, and Story Synopsis.  Your Table of Contents is the map to get them there fast. A happy agent is a signing agent and publishers like an author who is thorough.

(Always follow the submission guidelines for agents and publishers. You can find them at their website.)

Below is an example of a fiction proposal:

Table of Contents

 

One Page Sell Sheet…………………………………………………………………………………3
Biographical Sketch………………………………………………………………………………….4
Synopsis…………………………………………………………………………………………………..5
Marketing Analysis…………………………………………………………………………………..9
Competetive Analysis……………………………………………………………………………….10
Marketing Plan…………………………………………………………………………………………12
History of the Manuscript…………………………………………………………………………14
Sample Chapters………………………………………………………………………………………15

 

In a non-fiction proposal, the “Synopsis” pages will be replaced with, “Chapter Outline.”

Double check your page numbers against the proposal each time you edit.

Next month we look at the One Page Sell sheet and discover why it’s different than a One Sheet.

Meanwhile, if you have any questions about book proposals, email me at editor@thewriteproposal.com.

Cherrilynn Bisbano is an award-winning writer. Her goal is to assist authors on their writing journey.

She is the founder of The Write Proposal book proposal services.

She is managing editor of Stand Firm-Reasons column and co-hosts Fulfilled Prophecy Friday with prophecy speaker Jake McCandless.

She’s the host of Genre Chat where she’s privileged to interview expert writers.

Cherrilynn was Managing Editor at Almost an Author –Top 100 writing websites for 2018.

She loves to teach leadership, book proposals and the bible. Find her biblesSpeakers page at Women Speakers

Leadership Certified and studying Chaplaincy and Business at Christian Leaders Institute

She is a two-time winner of Flash Fiction Weekly. She’s published in many online magazines and contributes to Blue Ridge Mountain Christian Writers blog.   She’s also published in Chicken Soup for the Soul- Miracles, Breaking the Chains and Heart Reno books.

Cherrilynn proudly served in the military for twenty years, earning the John Levitow Military leadership award.  She lives with her sixteen-year-old son, Michael, Jr., and husband of 19 years, Michael, Sr.  She loves Christ, chocolate, coffee, and cats

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