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Picture Book Submissions – The Mighty Manuscript

Picture Book Submissions – The Mighty Manuscript

The third item to include in your full proposal submission for a picture book is your mighty manuscript. This is the reason you are submitting to a publisher in the first place. Once you’ve written your killer picture book manuscript, tightened it, strengthened it, had it critiqued, rewritten it several times and feel it’s ready to send, now it’s time to put it in the correct submission format.

Always use Times Roman Numeral 12-point font and double space your text. Always. Editors read all day long and this is easiest on their eyes. More importantly, they may not read it if its in a different format. Create one inch margins on each page and stick to it. Don’t adjust these to squeeze in more text. Create a title page with your name, address, phone number, email and web address in the left upper corner. One third to one half of the way down in the middle of the page place the Title in Caps and Bold if you’d like. This can be 14-point font though nothing fancy. Don’t include clip art or any form of pictures on this page.

On the first page of your manuscript in the header in the top left put your name – brief title. In the header upper right put page numbers with the exception of the first page. This is in case your manuscript gets dropped, they’ll know if pages are missing and to which manuscript a stray page may belong.

Begin the text one third to one half the way down again with the title centered. Four spaces below this begin your text.  I usually put my suggested page count and pages of text below the title.

As I mentioned in a previous post, I support and suggest breaking your picture book manuscript into spreads and pages. The publisher may not stick to your lay out and has the right to change it as they desire, but it makes for easier reading and gives them an idea of how it will fit within the pages. The right side of a spread are odd pages, the left are even. Remember the book will have front matter so keep in mind as you lay out your text in spreads that the text does not begin on page 1. If you choose to submit in this format, this is the way it may look:

Title

32-page manuscript

26 pages of text

Introduction

Page 6-7

Begin text here with your hook. I usually indent the text but it may not appear that way in this blog.

Spread 1

Page 8-9

Continue your story for these pages. I add a space between the spreads for ease in reading but it may not appear that way here.

Spread 2

Page 10

You may break the spread into separate pages like this.

Page 11

And continue your text here, which your text would indicate the pictures needing two pages for this spread.

Spread 3

Page 12-13

Break your spreads into a combined pictures across both spreads and separate pictures on each page to break up the monotony of each spread looking exactly the same.

I continue on like this and end with my conclusion.

Conclusion

Page 30-31

Ta Da! The fabulous conclusion of your manuscript.

Look through multiple picture books and notice the layout of the spreads. Watch where the pages turn. Are there pictures on each page or across the full spread? How often does this change?

Make sure you don’t put too many words on a page as you want to keep the children’s attention.

Have fun with it and keep in mind that the editor will most likely change your layout so remain flexible.

The editor may change your page count.

Do not suggest specific pictures as your beautiful writing should elicit the images for the illustrator to create.

Keep in mind that this is just one form of picture book submissions. If you have found success with another form, please comment below. I’d love to hear about it. Good luck and happy submitting!

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Picture Book Submissions – The Powerful Proposal

Apparently this is a controversial issue – To submit a children’s Proposal with your manuscript or not? I always do. The editors can choose to read it or not, but I submit it, unless the Market Guide for a publisher states specifically not to submit a proposal. I will share with you what I learned at a conference from Christine Tangvald, back in the early 2000s, who has had a gazillion children’s books published. I figured if it worked for her, then I would do exactly what she did. I have not learned anything different through the years, it has worked for me, so this is how I still submit.

I don’t use the same form of proposals as is encouraged for adult books. Those seem to be more in paragraph form. Children’s Proposals are shorter, more precise with bullet points and sub-headings, and to the point. If you are an editor and prefer receiving children’s manuscripts in a different form, please mention it below. We’d love to submit the format you hope to receive, especially if it has changed in the last 20 years.

Here is a sample of a proposal and a short description of what each section may look like. Number the pages, with the exception of the first page, in the header right corner. In the header left corner put your last name and brief title. Use Times Roman Numeral 12 point font. Let’s use a purse theme and call it For the love of Purses.

In header: Lord/purses

Top left corner

Single spaced

Name/address/phone

email/website

 

(start this about 1/2 way down)

For the Love of Purses

Proposal

By Jill Roman Lord

 

Proposal: A Picture book for girls celebrating a child’s passion for purses that becomes a passion for sharing. (In one sentence tell what your book is about)

Purpose:

  • Bullet points here.
  • What point do you hope to make?
  • What impression do you want this book to make?
  • Any lessons you hope will come across?
    • For example – to demonstrate a girl’s passion for purses
    • To exemplify the joy of having a passion
    • To demonstrate a girl going ‘overboard’ in her passion
    • To serve as an illustration of a girl sharing her passion with others less fortunate
    • To exemplify the joy in giving and sharing
    • To encourage girls to reach out to others in need
    • To encourage girls to share their passions
  • Hopefully you get the idea – not too many but enough to state your purpose.

Target Market:

  • Girls ages 4-8
  • Girls who love purses
  • Girls learning to share with others in need
  • Get as specific as you can… All girls is too broad.
  • Not too specific as to shrink your market too small.

Special Features:

  • What makes your book stand out? List them here.
  • Written in delightful rhyme
  • Scripture verse at the end
  • List of charitable organizations at the end to which children may donate items
  • Template for making purses with items around the house
  • Apps for children wanting to sell purses
  • Whatever creative idea you come up with to help your book ‘rock’!

Specifications:

  • 750 words (shows your word count is within this publishers target range)
  • Written as a 32 pages book (flexible) – always be flexible here, but let them know you’ve thought it out
  • Colorful pictures on each page
  • Any other specifics here…

Comparisons:

  • Do your homework and see what other books are already published similar to yours and list them here, but don’t slam them as theirs is published and yours isn’t, yet…
  • Mention how yours is different. Briefly. Editors don’t have time to read too much detail.
  • Clifford’s Big Red Purse – List author, publisher, date: Story illustrating a big red dog and his love for his new purse. Written in prose. For the Love of Purses is written in rhyme and also demonstrates a love of purses but takes the reader further into sharing this passion with others.
  • Next one, etc.
  • Not an eternal list but enough to show it’s a popular topic but why yours should also be published.

Credentials:

  • Any published work?
  • Start with most recent and work down to oldest
  • Important accomplishments related to your manuscript
  • Won award for starting collection of purses to send overseas
  • Articles published or number of articles if you’ve written a ton
  • This is the place to let them know you’re the one to write this book
  • Not the place to mention your high school summer work at Walmart, unless of course you were manager of women’s/girls purses.

And that’s it. This is not the one and only way to submit, but I learned this method from a professional at a writer’s conference and it has worked for me. Again, if you are an agent or editor and prefer different submissions please let us know! Spend time on this, do your homework, and make it powerful and make it sparkle!