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Where Do Mannerisms Come From?

Habits and mannerisms must originate somewhere, for some reason. In a novel, where aspect of a character should be intentional, a character’s mannerisms should do more than differentiate them from the rest of the cast but should enhance their unique personality.

In her book Getting Into Character, Brandilyn Collins suggests that a character’s mannerisms should evolve from an understanding of the character’s core values. Those values lead to the character’s motivations, and those motivations are shown through specific mannerisms.

For example, a character in my novel is a retired centurion. Like many Roman men, his primary core value is honor. He believes honor comes from fulfilling his duty in a responsible manner, showing courage in the face of danger and always considering the consequences of his actions. He sacrifices self-gratification for what he believes to be the higher good, which leads him to disapprove of the trappings of luxury, which in turn leads to his habit of pinching pennies. (Much to his socialite niece’s frustration.)

During his service in the legions he learned to keep his face impassive no matter how much turmoil or doubt he felt. This forced control over his emotions has become a habit, but it comes at a cost, and he often rubs his temples to ease the stress, especially when he feels his control slipping. Thus the mannerism of rubbing his temples is not merely chosen at random, but evolves from his need to maintain honor.

Another character is a self-centered, wealthy widow whose deepest need is to be in control of her own destiny—a difficult thing in her male-dominated world. Rather than choose the route of open rebellion, she opts to stay within the bounds of society, but does whatever she can to manipulate people and situations to suit her ends. To her image is very important. If she appears confident and in control at all times, others will naturally bend to her will. Therefore, she never leaves her room unless she is completely put together: hair, jewelry, cosmetics and fashionable clothing. Not only does this radiate confidence, but it gives her a sense of control over her physical image. (If she were a modern woman, she would take full advantage of techniques like botox.) Another of her habits is that she takes five deep breaths before facing a strong male, to get her emotions under control and steel her nerves, because she cannot allow anyone to perceive her as weak.

So now it’s your turn. Consider the core values of one of your characters, brainstorm how those values might lead to traits and mannerisms, then select the ones that best serve your plot.

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Drilling to the Core of a Character

Fictional characters are like onions; they are made of many layers.  A writer must peel back the layers to reveal the core of a character.

The outermost layers include demographics, career, and other information that paints a generic picture: A young, unmarried carpenter named Brandon who lives in suburb of Chicago.

Peel back a few layers and the information begins to get more specific: Brandon played football in high school, works out at the gym, specializes in furniture, and takes care of his younger brother and sister because their parents are dead. With this level of information Brandon is starting to become a unique person with a bit of backstory, but there are deeper truths that have yet to be revealed.

If a writer wants truly well-developed characters, she must drill through layer after layer until she arrives at the core. To get there a writer must keep asking why about the decisions she’s already made until she gets to the bottom of things. For example, why does Brandon go to the gym? Because he wants to stay in shape. Why? Because he wants to take care of himself, but also because he is responsible for his siblings. If we keep drilling along this line of logic we eventually discover that one of Brandon’s core values is the need to protect those he loves. He is willing to sacrifice his religious convictions, his career, or his own happiness in order to protect his loved ones.

That’s the kind of deep truth you can build a story around.

Understanding a character’s core values will inform how they behave in whatever situation you put them in. Or, as Kevin Daum writes at Inc.com:

 …your personal core values are there to guide behavior and choice. Get them right and you’ll be swift and focused in your decision-making, with clear direction. Get them wrong or leave them ambiguous, and you’ll constantly wonder how you got into this mess.

That same truth applies to fictional characters. Understanding the core values of a character will make the writing process smoother.

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How do you know when you’ve reached the core?

Core values are a character’s non-negotiables, the beliefs, needs or truths that form the bedrock of who they are. Core values are things like integrity, the importance of money, and a need for acceptance. Ask what this character will give anything to have or achieve and you’ve identified which values lie at his core.

This post on How Morals and Basic Needs Influence a Character’s Strengths has a great description of how to unearth core values. For more help identifying specific character traits, check out The Positive Trait Thesaurus, and its companion The Negative Trait Thesaurus.

Peeling back the layers to discover your character’s core values is worth the time and effort. Maybe it’s time you tried it.

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