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How a Novel Came to Be, Part Two

Read the first half of the story here to learn how hopes were raised and then dashed.

In the dark weeks that followed, some unexpected glimmers of light appeared.  Producer-director Bart Gavigan (End of the Spear, Luther) and Emmy and Bafta-winning writer-director Norman Stone (Shadowlands) read my unpublished manuscript.  Film executives at this level are inundated with scripts.  For them to take the time to read a novel – five times the length of a feature-film screenplay – was a huge gift.  As was their response.  Both were unreservedly positive and urged me to begin work on the script.  Bart went so far as to offer detailed notes on how he felt the screenplay should be shaped; I liked these so much I decided to incorporate them into the novel.

A few months later, my newly-completed screenplay was passed to Ileen Maisel, producer of Golden Compass and many others.  She invited me to a meeting at Claridges, where she had taken up temporary station.  She informed me that it was impossible for her to take the project herself, as she was fully committed to a new series (The Dresden Files, soon to be aired on ABC).  But she liked my work, and wanted to remain in contact.

As a result of this meeting, Island of Time then journeyed to Los Angeles.  Soon after, so did I.

My third Hollywood meeting was with David Lipman (producer of Shrek and Ironman), then president of Starlings Entertainment, and his DD Emily Gottlich.  They both were the exact opposite of everything I’d been led to believe about top-tier Hollywood executives.  They were soft-spoken, highly intelligent, and as gentle as they were intense.  Because they had simply asked to meet, without any actual response to my story, I had been warned by others that they probably liked my writing but were not interested in that particular script.  So I had practiced pitching two other stories.  For days.

Their offices were in a brand new building on the corner where Wiltshire Boulevard met the Pacific Ocean.  Not really.  Wiltshire actually dead-ends into Ocean Avenue, which then fronts a narrow park, then the cliff which drops down to the PCH, then the beach and the Santa Monica Pier.  But when I exited the elevator and entered the Starlings penthouse offices, all I could see through the wall of glass was…

Blue.

And storm clouds.  And rain.  Because it was a freezing rain-swept February day in Los Angeles.  For which David and Emily apologized.  Like I was expected to be seriously bothered by the weather. 

So I there I was, poised on the edge of their designer sofa, with the two of them seated with their backs to the Pacific.  Ready for them to ask if I had anything else I could offer…

The words they spoke just didn’t seem to fit inside my head. 

It actually took a while for their news to register.  Probably thirty seconds.  Less.  But it felt like hours.  Then…

They loved my script.  They wanted to buy it.  Not option.  Buy.  Put it into production.  Immediately.  They had decided to approach David Womark, producer of such hits as Deepwater Horizon, to run the project. 

Boom.

I have flashing images of what happened after.  They wanted to know if I had a sequel.  Thankfully, I was so deeply engaged with the story that I already had an idea.  I pitched that, scarcely believing what I was hearing from them. 

Sometime later, I left.  Floated down the park.  Called my wife.  Drove to the hotel.  Too excited.  Walked through the wind and the rain.  For hours.

The next thing I heard was, their legal department would not get around to sending me the T&C Sheet (contractual terms and conditions, negotiated before the contract itself is penned) until after Cannes.  At the time, the news was mildly hilarious – my project was delayed because of something they needed to get ready for presenting in France, and the same should happen to my film the following year. 

My film.

The next four months seemed endless.  A few high notes were reached; film budgeted at thirty million, my payment upon first day of filming was to be six hundred thousand dollars, and so forth.  But mostly it was a time of tension, and trying to stay patient, and unanswered phone calls to the legal department. 

Like I said, endless.

Four months stretched to five, then six, and suddenly the summer was over and autumn had started, and then autumn was winding into winter, and I still did not have the actual contract. 

When the phone call finally came, it almost felt like I knew what had happened before the connection was made.  Karine Martin, CEO of Starlings, told me in our first-ever conversation that Starlings was being sold.  And the buyers only wanted their television division and their film-investment fund.  And all of the current film projects were being dropped.  And earlier that day, David Lipman had been fired.

Those words still weigh several thousand pounds.  Each.

I actually don’t think the acquisition ever went through.  Covid was probably the reason.  In any case, Starlings is still an indie production group, and Karine Martin is still CEO.  But what I think happened was this.  And David Lipman, now a personal friend, agrees.

The acquirer was probably Lionsgate.  And this illustrates a major issue I’ve faced from the beginning with Island of Time.  And a barrier that David has confronted his entire career.

The standard tracks expected within contemporary fantasy run one of two ways.  Either they hold to the teenage-angst-and-romance structure (Buffy, Twilight), or they are very dark indeed (World War Z).  There are huge hits within both directions; and these structures represent common threads in contemporary entertainment. 

And then there are people who seek a different path. 

But current themes and directions in entertainment are not the topic here.  So I will close with three possible takeaways for all you future creative stars.

First, my aim from the beginning was to apply a classical heroic structure to neartime fantasy.  Use the naturally occurring elements of light and dark, good and evil, and magnify them by adding magic to this world.  This core concept was a vague hope when I began writing.  It came naturally; it is in some respects who I am as an artist.  But it was only through this trial by fire that I started drawing this into crystalline focus.

If or when you face your own impossible delays, ask yourself this question.  What lies at the very deepest level of my creative urge?  What is it that drives me to create?  What is most important?  And how is it represented in this specific work? 

Which brings us to the second takeaway, which is:

Beyond these core elements, do your best to remain open to critiques, and flexible to what needs improvement.  Or change.  Or cutting out entirely.  This disciplined balance is crucial to your future.  And your success.

And finally, accept the risk that such experiences may indeed be part of your own future. 

When I speak with other full-time artists, particularly those working in Hollywood, and tell them about these events, there is a been-there-done-that element to their sympathy.  It is, I’m sorry to say, part of the profession. 

Last month my wife and I were invited to the premier of the new theater-musical, Back To The Future.  Robert Zemeckis and his writing partner, Bob Gates, were there and spoke to the audience at its conclusion.  They described the trials and hardship they went through to get the film done; it took them seven years from the completion of the script to the first day of principal photography. 

I wish you every success. 

Davis Bunn’s novels have sold in excess of eight million copies in twenty-four languages.  He has appeared on numerous national bestseller lists, and his titles have been Main or Featured Selections with every major US book club.  In 2011 his novel Lion of Babylon was named Best Book of the Year by Library Journal.  The sequel, entitled Rare Earth,  won Davis his fourth Christy Award for Excellence in Fiction in 2013.  In 2014 Davis was granted the Lifetime Achievement award by the Christy board of judges.  His recent title Trial Run has been named Best Book of The Year by Suspense Magazine. Lately he has appeared on the cover of Southern Writers Magazine and Publishers Weekly, and in the past three years his titles have earned him Best Book and Top Pick awards from Library Journal, Romantic Times, Publishers Weekly, Booklist, and Kirkus. His most recent series, Miramar Bay, have been acquired for world-wide condensation-books by Readers Digest. Currently Davis serves as Writer-In-Residence at Regent’s Park College, Oxford University. Until Covid struck, he was speaking around the world on aspects of creative writing. 

Watch an excerpt from his new book The Cottage on Lighthouse Lane here.

Watch for Davis Bunn’s novel, Island of Time, to be released by Severn House/Cannondale UK in April 2022

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How a Novel Came to Be, Part One

Four and a half years ago, I was approached by the Director of Development for Gil Netter, who won an Oscar for ‘Life of Pi’.  For those readers who do not know the film industry, a development director (DD) plays an enormously important and complex role.  First of all, they choose the stories or scripts that could potentially be shaped into new projects.  Once this process is complete and the screenplay receives a green-light from the board, the DD then handles all preliminary casting and contracts.  Once everything is in place and the stars align, the DD passes the project over to the chief producer and newly hired director, and they start principle photography. 

Like I said, a big job.

This DD contacted me to say he had become a fan of my work; did I have a concept that was big enough, and original enough, to become their next feature?

The answer was yes, maybe, I had a new idea I was playing around with that might fit the bill.  Even so, it took me almost a month to respond. 

The very idea of pitching a story to someone in his position was terrifying.  Finally my wife put her foot down and ordered me, then and there, to make the call. 

She knew if I waited I would successfully manage to delay things another month.  Or year.  This was my first-ever contact with top-tier Hollywood.  I’ll never forget that moment when the phone started ringing…

We were seated in our car in the central-England market town of Witney.  Rain pelted the roof.  Five o’clock on a Friday afternoon, nine in the morning LA time.  A perfect moment for him to not be available.  Which of course I was desperately hoping would happen.

Instead, he answered.  And to make matters worse, he said he had time to hear my pitch.

With my wife listening over the car’s speakers, I laid it out.  Tried to keep my voice steady by keeping a white-knuckle grip on the steering wheel. 

I described an alternative world where magic was real, and Interpol was tasked with the global policing of Talents – my word for people with magical powers.  The word Talent worked because, except for a very small group of Adepts, wizards generally possessed just one magical ability. 

These Talents loathed Interpol.  The very idea of wizards being policed by the mundane, their powers kept in check by the same laws and principles that were applied to the ungifted, drove them to a constant and never-ending fury.  They used all the money and power at their disposal to have Interpol disbanded.

And then rumors began to surface, of a centuries-old power that had been relegated to the realm of fables, now whispered to be both real and available.  Spells which granted the user the ability to go back in time, remember everything from their previous existence, and change the course of events.  Reshape the global order. 

Two agents were tasked with tracking down the rumors.  Risking their own lives in the process.  Keeping the spells out of the hands of renegade Talents and government agencies who might seek this ultimate weapon for themselves. 

My pitch lasted seven minutes. 

When I was done, there was a long moment of silence, then the words that every author on earth, every artist, dreams of hearing. 

WOW.  I LOVE IT.

He probably didn’t shout the words.  But that was how it sounded inside my head. 

Isabella pried one of my hands off the wheel and pulled it over where she could hold it with both of hers.  We listened to him take this feeble pitch and turn it into something concrete – in his words, a mature fantasy for adults, one that avoided the multitude of cartoonish super-hero stories and the current wave of zombies and vampires.  He urged me to write the novel first, let him go through it, then together we would shape the script. 

Needless to say, the sun came out during our conversation.  No, really.

Further deliberations and long conversations followed, first with Isabella (my wife) and then including my literary agent, Chip MacGregor.  Together we decided it would be best to hold back on pitching the novel, for two reasons.  First, the book’s final shape should fit the actual movie, because the Development Director saw this as the first of several films.  Having the two stories move in tandem was crucial.

Second, we wanted to do what had only happened a few times in history – have the publishing campaign for a new novel work in tandem with the film’s publicity machine.

Only this created a problem.  Because I was already under contract for other books, I needed to somehow squeeze this writing into an already full schedule.

Fourteen months later, I called the film company with the happy news.  The book was completed.  Ready for their first read.  So excited, so utterly thrilled. 

Only there was a problem.  The director, my advocate in the company, had moved on.  And the new director was completely and utterly disinterested in my project. 

I was new to this game, but I’ve since learned this is a common tactic in LA.  Projects started by an ousted executive are almost never taken on by their replacement.  The new guy wants to imprint his or her vision on the group.  Continuing with an early-stage project means burnishing someone else’s image. 

All those hopes and dreams.  Gone. 

Come back tomorrow for the rest of the story.

Davis Bunn’s novels have sold in excess of eight million copies in twenty-four languages.  He has appeared on numerous national bestseller lists, and his titles have been Main or Featured Selections with every major US book club.  In 2011 his novel Lion of Babylon was named Best Book of the Year by Library Journal.  The sequel, entitled Rare Earth,  won Davis his fourth Christy Award for Excellence in Fiction in 2013.  In 2014 Davis was granted the Lifetime Achievement award by the Christy board of judges.  His recent title Trial Run has been named Best Book of The Year by Suspense Magazine. Lately he has appeared on the cover of Southern Writers Magazine and Publishers Weekly, and in the past three years his titles have earned him Best Book and Top Pick awards from Library Journal, Romantic Times, Publishers Weekly, Booklist, and Kirkus. His most recent series, Miramar Bay, have been acquired for world-wide condensation-books by Readers Digest. Currently Davis serves as Writer-In-Residence at Regent’s Park College, Oxford University. Until Covid struck, he was speaking around the world on aspects of creative writing. 

Watch an excerpt from his new book The Cottage on Lighthouse Lane here.

Learn about his new home at Blenheim Castle here.

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Interview with Best-Selling Author Davis Bunn

Can you share a little about your recent book? 

 The Cottage on Lighthouse Lane, Kensington Books, April 2021

Sometimes life flips the script . . .

Billy Walker is a North Carolina boy whose Hollywood star is beginning to shine. His rough past is in the rear view. Now seeing the world from the back seat of a limousine, Billy has no regrets about what he had to do, and the choices he made, to get there. But all it takes is one death-defying moment for Billy’s world to shift. When an on-set accident leaves him shaken, plagued by haunting dreams, he’s in desperate need of a rest cure. Given keys to a getaway cottage on Lighthouse Lane in Miramar Bay, he’ll regroup, relax, and recover. Yet as Billy’s dreams grow darker and more fearful, his only promise for light is in a stunning, mysterious, and uniquely gifted stranger . . .

And your next act is rewritten  . . .

Mimi has never forgotten her tragic childhood in eastern Ukraine. Violence, a vanished family, abandonment, and a hard-won struggle to escape. Miramar Bay couldn’t be a more beautiful or unexpected refuge. In yoga, teaching dance, and imbued with a talent to read the unrestful visions of others, Mimi has a seemingly divine ability to comfort. She may be everything Billy desires, but Mimi knows what Billy needs. He must confront his troubling past—and not just in his dreams. As their connection deepens, Billy finds himself falling in love, and waking up to something he’s never felt before. But when the real world comes calling again, how can he say goodbye to a woman who’s changing his life one illuminating sunrise at a time?

Poignant, powerful, and surprising, The Cottage on Lighhouse Bay is a love story for every wounded heart that hoped for a second chance.

Davis Bunn. The Cottage on Lighthouse Lane

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

It seems like I transition from one theme to the next every three or four years.  In my current version, I’m looking at stories based around the idea of lost hope, the unexpected opportunity to renew.  Lighthouse Lane is book five in the Miramar Bay series, which is based around a mythical town on California’s central coast.  Whoever finds their way to this place is offered a second chance at what is most important, what vital element is missing from their lives.  If only they manage not to make the same mistakes all over again.

How long have you been writing? 

I have been a published author for twenty-eight years.  Before that, I wrote for nine years and finished seven books before my first was accepted for publication.

Which of your books is your favorite?

Some of the frequently-asked questions are so tough to answer honestly.  Just two days ago completed a new first draft.  It has dominated my life through this loooonnnng UK lockdown.  Right now, I can’t see much further than this newest story.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

I had a book, a legal thriller, that came out last September entitled Burden Of Proof.  I wrote the first sixty pages seven years ago.  They were powerful, really potent stuff, but I couldn’t find a way to make the rest of the concept live up to what I had done thus far.  So I set it aside.  Seven years passed, every now and then I’d reread the pages, until finally…

I was under huge unexpected pressure.  My publishers had an empty slot in their list, another author was late delivering, could I help?  It meant giving them a story in seven and a half weeks.  Just as I was about to write and say no, literally staring at the email, ready to say so sorry, not a chance, it hit me.  The missing theme came as one scene.  The pivotal moment I had waited seven years to find.   

How long does it take you to write a book?

As you can see from the last answer, it can sometimes take as little as two months.  I do tend to write a lot.  I think it comes from being so determined, so desperate, to make it work.  During those looooonnnnnggggg nine years of struggle, I ran a consulting group based in Germany and operating through all Europe.  I was in two, sometimes three countries every week.  The temptation to quit, give up, go back to my well-paying day job was just so intense.  I had no choice, not if I wanted to make this my professional life.  I had to write every day.  Become a regular, disciplined writer, accept this as a SECOND JOB.  Whether I liked it or not, whether it felt good or not, this had to happen.  I learned to write in taxis, airports, waiting rooms, hotel lobbies, wherever I could carve out ten or fifteen minutes.  I developed a series of triggers to help me depart from the outside world and re-enter the story, the emotional state, the creative mood.  I use these still.

So what’s the end result?  Okay.  Revealing secrets here.  In the past twelve months I have written…

Wait for it…

Two full-length novels, 

And

A feature-length screenplay,

And

A new series pilot,

And

The second series episode,

And

The season one bible (used in series to establish the character and story arcs for the season)

And 

Half a Christmas novella

All because of the discipline learned in sheer desperation during those initial years.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

The creative bliss.  The unexpected moments when I become lost in the new story.  When it becomes alive and I become transported.  Elevated.  Reformed in union.  Bliss.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

I have been rejected over forty times in the past twelve months.  If you are going to keep growing, push beyond the boundaries that the commercial world wants to use as defining traits, this is going to happen.  Learning to live with rejection, moving beyond, continuing the creative struggle, all are crucial to success.

Who is your favorite author to read?

I am researching a new story.  As usual.  What I look for on the non-fiction side are authors who manage to make the situation live for me.  Who are not afraid of emotions.  Who do not feel it necessary to write from a dry, dead-as-last-autumn-leaves perspective.  So right now I’m reading Ben Mezrich’s amazing new book, Bitcoin Billionaires.

On the fiction side, I’m studying two authors who have taken their success as screenwriters and allowed this to refashion their approach to sentence and scenic structures.  These are Robert Crais and Michael Crichton.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have heeded?

My very first mentor was Arthur C Clarke (2001, A Space Odyssey).  When we started out, he required two things of me.  One was, write a new page of new first draft every day.  Second drafting, adding to what was already written, did not count.  He forced me to confront the challenge of the empty page each and every day.

The second was, read at least one book by a living best-selling author in my chosen genre every week.  The aim was for me to come to terms with what was working in the market in this present time.

A very wise man.

Davis Bunn

Davis Bunn’s novels have sold in excess of eight million copies in twenty-four languages.  He has appeared on numerous national bestseller lists, and his titles have been Main or Featured Selections with every major US book club.   In 2011 his novel Lion of Babylon was named Best Book of the Year by Library Journal.  The sequel, entitled Rare Earth,  won Davis his fourth Christy Award for Excellence in Fiction in 2013.  In 2014 Davis was granted the Lifetime Achievement award by the Christy board of judges.  His recent title Trial Run has been named Best Book of The Year by Suspense Magazine. Lately he has appeared on the cover of Southern Writers Magazine and Publishers Weekly, and in the past three years his titles have earned him Best Book and Top Pick awards from Library Journal, Romantic Times, Publishers Weekly, Booklist, and Kirkus.  His most recent series, Miramar Bay, have been acquired for world-wide condensation-books by Readers Digest.  Currently Davis serves as Writer-In-Residence at Regent’s Park College, Oxford University.  Until Covid struck, he was speaking around the world on aspects of creative writing.