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Interview with Award-Winning Author Lisa E. Betz

Can you share a little about your recent book?

My newest award-winning mystery is Fountains and Secrets. Here’s the blurb:

In bustling, affluent ancient Rome during the reign of Emperor Claudius, status matters—yet some dare to ignore it. And some dare to defy social conventions.

Inspired by Jesus’s radical views, unconventional Livia Aemilia cares little about stuffy Roman dignity. She’d rather help others and solve crimes. But when her new husband forbids her from sleuthing, she continues in secret and soon learns that dishonesty doesn’t work well in a marriage.

His face and reputation scarred from an old betrayal, Memmius Avitus cares about justice. Although from a respected senatorial family, he takes pride in helping underprivileged clients win legal battles over more privileged opponents, to the annoyance of his peers.

When Avitus’s mentor is murdered, Avitus investigates undercover because he doesn’t want his inquisitive wife to get involved. His attempts to conceal the truth only cause more problems for his reputation—and his marriage. Eventually the couple forms a tenuous alliance, but when Avitus learns the mastermind behind the crimes is a ruthless longtime enemy, he fears for Livia’s safety and orders her to stop. His reluctance to explain why only infuriates her into reckless action.

Fountains and Secrets, book 2 in the Livia Aemilia Mysteries, is quirky, fast paced, and clever, showing readers that trust and honesty are more important than winning the battle of the wills.

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Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

I’ve never been good at fitting molds. I have learned to choose authenticity instead of striving to fit in. It’s not always easy, but it’s worth it.

My main characters all clash with their society’s expectations in some way. (Some of these clashes are due to the vastly different worldviews between Christ followers and the typical Roman outlook.) I hope my characters’ struggles will inspire readers to live in a way that upholds their core values.  

My heart passion is to help others, especially those who struggle with people-pleasing, find the confidence to live more authentically and intentionally. I blog on these topics at my website, Quietly Unconventional.

How long have you been writing?

I took a correspondence course 25 years ago, just for fun. I’ve been hooked on creative writing ever since, but for many of those years I only dabbled. It wasn’t until my youngest son went off to college that I sat myself down and decided to take writing seriously.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

Getting my first book published with a traditional publisher was a series of God-orchestrated events combined with many years of effort.

I wrote three practice novels before I wrote the manuscript that became my first book. During that time, I wrote on group blogs, joined writing organizations like ACFW, and attended conferences. All of those things helped me find an agent and taught me how to craft a publishable manuscript.

I began writing seriously in 2012. Seven years later, my mystery manuscript was a finalist in the ACFW Genesis contest. That led to a contract in 2020 and my first book was released in early 2021.

Which of your books is your favorite?

My debut will always have a special place in my heart, but I’m improving as a writer, so I think book two is even better.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

I love all my main characters. I particularly enjoy how they are different from me.

Since I’m a cat person, I’m very fond of Nemesis, the intelligent, independent, and sometimes naughty cat. I have fun writing her into scenes for a little comic relief.

In the next book, I’ve added a dog to the household, and there’s a really fun scene where the cat and dog race through the house causing havoc.

Tell us about an award you won that was particularly meaningful.

My books have won multiple awards, but the most impactful was when my debut novel, Death and a Crocodile, was named Golden Scroll Novel of the Year.

I was totally astounded! And it was a great confidence booster, which I needed at the time.

How long does it take you to write a book?

Too long. I have resigned myself to the fact that I am a slow writer.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

I do my best creative thinking in the mornings, so I focus on composing new material before lunch. In the afternoons I work on editing, or on other tasks like marketing work.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I prefer to compose on-screen, but I edit much better on paper (using a mechanical pencil!)

Also, I’m terrible at multitasking. I do my best work when I can concentrate on one project for several days in a row. Sadly, that’s not always possible.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

Meeting people who have read my books and enjoyed them. I’m particularly thrilled when a reader says something like, “I don’t usually read historical novels, but I liked your book.”

I was tickled when my husband’s manager told him how much she enjoyed Livia, my strong female sleuth, Livia. My books are set in ancient Rome, so Livia must be courageous and determined to investigate crimes in a world that thinks women can’t (or shouldn’t) do things like that.

I was happy to hear that a successful modern women related to my main character despite her very different time and culture.

Could you tell us about a dark moment in your writing career?

The first time I hired an editor to critique a novel manuscript, the editor told me my main character was whiny and unlikeable! I was devastated. I stewed over it for a week, alternately furious at the insult to my character, and seriously doubting my writing abilities.

This very professional editor took pains to highlight the problems in my manuscript while encouraging ma as a writer. She backed up all criticism by citing specific passages in the manuscript, so once I was able to loo at things objectively, I understood why my main character was coming across as unlikeable. I learned so much from that critique, and my writing has improved considerably since then.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

All writers face rejection. I learned enough about this reality during my dabbling phase that by the time I had novels to shop around, I knew to expect rejection. It still isn’t easy to accept, but it hasn’t derailed me.

Where do you get your ideas?

I’m a firm believer in the importance of keeping my creativity reservoir filled with wide variety of material, and then trusting God and my subconscious to provide inspiration when I need it.

One bit of advice regarding creativity I’ve found helpful is: Don’t settle for your first idea.

The first solution that pops into my head tends to be unoriginal. Therefore, whenever I run into something in my writing that needs a creative solution, I grab a notebook and write my questions down. For example, How will Livia escape?

Then I make a list of as many different options as I can think of. Usually somewhere around idea number six I stumble onto one that makes perfect sense, or one that opens up a whole new line of thinking. I have piles of notebooks filled with these lists and related scribblings.

Who is your favorite author to read?

I first fell in love with ancient Rome when I read The Bronze Bow by Elizabeth George Speare in elementary school. Shortly after that I discovered Rosemary Sutcliff, who wrote dozens of YA books set in ancient times. More recently, I’ve enjoyed Tracy Higley’s series set in various ancient places.

Three historical mystery authors whose memorable characters and humorous voice inspire my novels are Lindsey Davis, Elizabeth Peters, and Ruth Downie.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have heeded?

An author is a small business owner. If you can learn to write well, you can also learn how to market and think like a business person. I had convinced myself that I’d never be any good at marketing, so when my first book was finally published, I didn’t have a good attitude about marketing and I didn’t know very much about how to do it. Big mistake!

For a healthier attitude and good advice on marketing, read Almost an Author columnist Patricia Durgin’s Marketing Sense posts. Or you might consider joining her Marketers on a Mission Facebook group.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writers make?

Not appreciating how vital it is to get good critiques. All authors have blind spots and we need others to find them for us.

Rushing to implement everything an expert tells them they should be doing, whether that advice is strategic to where they are in the process right now or not.

Getting so focused on attracting the masses that you forget to serve the followers you already have. Look at writing as a ministry. When you keep your focus on serving your readers by continuing to offer valuable content, you will be a successful writer, regardless of the numbers.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

Don’t try to do it alone! The Christian writing world is filled with generous people who delight in mentoring other writers. Get connected to them. Join writers’ groups, in person or via the internet. Attend conferences. Make an effort to meet other writers, editors, and agents, and then stay in touch. You never know when those relationships will be exactly what you need to take the next step in your career.

About Lisa E. Betz

Lisa E Betz

Lisa E. Betz is an engineer-turned-mystery-writer, entertaining speaker, and unconventional soul. She inspires others to become their best selves, living with authenticity, and purpose, and she infuses her novels with unconventional characters who thrive on solving tricky problems. Her Livia Aemilia Mysteries, set in first-century Rome, have won several awards, including the Golden Scroll Novel of the Year (2021).

She and her husband reside outside Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, with Scallywag, their rambunctious cat—the inspiration for Nemesis, resident mischief maker in her novels. Lisa directs church dramas, hikes the beautiful Pennsylvania woods, eats too much chocolate, and experiments with ancient Roman recipes. Visit www.lisaebetz.com.

You can find Lisa’s Livia Aemilia Mysteries on Amazon or wherever you prefer to purchase books.

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Connect with her on her website: Quietly Unconventional

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Writers Chat Recap for September Part 2

Writers Chat, hosted by Jean Wise, Johnnie Alexander, Brandy Brow, and Melissa Stroh, is the show where we talk about all things writing, by writers and for writers!

“Because talking about writing is more fun than actually doing it.”

Featuring…

How to Research for Fiction with Johnnie Alexander and M.N. Stroh

Writers Chat very own novelists, Johnnie Alexander and M.N. (Melissa) Stroh, share a wealth of information on research for fiction. They discuss common pitfalls to avoid and other helpful resources—like personality tests for your characters and drawing maps or street layout so you don’t mix up locations in your story. Johnnie and Melissa offer helpful tips on where to start research for your novel and templates to imbue your characters and story world with the needed realism to engage readers. For more information and resources, check out this week’s replay.

Watch the September 20th replay.

Johnnie Alexander is a wannabe vagabond with a heart for making memories. Whether at home or on the road, she creates characters you want to meet and imagines stories you won’t forget.

A bestselling, award-winning novelist, Johnnie has written over twenty-five novels, novellas, and short stories in multiple genres. She is on the executive boards of Serious Writer, Inc. and Mid-South Christian Writers Conference, and she co-hosts Writers Chat, a weekly online show.A fan of classic movies, stacks of books, and road trips, Johnnie shares a life of quiet adventure with Griff, her happy-go-lucky collie, and Rugby, her raccoon-treeing papillon. Connect with her at JohnnieAlexander.com and other social media sites via https://linktr.ee/johnniealexndr.

M.N. Stroh is fueled by her love of storytelling and history. She writes Christian Historical Fiction with an edge, to inspire the downtrodden and outcasts through adventure-laden escapes leading them back to their First Love, as showcased in her debut series, Tale of the Clans. M.N. serves as Director of Communications for Serious Writer Inc. affiliate, Writers Chat, director of Serious Writer Book Club, a member of ACFW, and Historical Society’s Interviews Admin Team. Connect with her at mnstroh.com and on social media.

Writers Chat is hosted live each Tuesday for an hour starting at 10 AM CT / 11 AM ET
on Zoom. The permanent Zoom room link is: http://zoom.us/j/4074198133

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Writing for YA

Is Your Historical Novel YA or Adult Coming of Age

How do you know if you’ve written a young adult novel or an adult coming of age? What about books that have dual timelines with both a teen point of view and an adult point of view? Finding your genre can be a difficult task. Here’s a few things to look at that might help an author determine what genre their work lands in.

Age of the Protagonist

The age of the protagonist does not determine whether or not a book is young adult, but the age of the protagonist can eliminate some books from the young adult market. If the main storyline is not about how a teen character is dealing with their story world, than it’s not young adult.

The protagonist in a book written for adults can be of any age.

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All young adult fiction is coming of age, but not all coming of age is young adult fiction.

Coming of age written for the adult market tends to be grittier. In these books, the protagonist may be young, but is dealing with adult issues.

In young adult fiction, the teenage protagonist could be dealing with unusual circumstances, but the material is typically less graphic than fiction written for adults.

Word Count

A young adult generally sticks to a prescribed word count, whereas a coming-of-age written for the adult market with a teenage protagonist can have a wide range of word count and can be literary, upmarket, or commercial. 

Point of View

Young Adult fiction can be in one point of view or more, in either first person or third person, as can an adult coming of age. The current trend is to write YA in first person, but it’s not a defining rule.

Voice and Tone

Deep point of view is common in YA, as is an angsty bent. Teenagers are going through a myriad of changes and are focused on their feelings, more inward looking, and young adult is inclined to be written that way.

In adult fiction featuring a younger protagonist, the person is often operating as an adult, dealing with adult issues.

Vocabulary and Style

Novels written for the young adult market may use different vocabulary and language style than novels written for the adult market. Even if it’s historical young adult, the language would be slightly different to make it accessible to the targeted reader. 

Romance

In most YA Historicals I’ve read, romance is often a secondary storyline. Love triangles seem to abound, and I think readers accept that more in YA because young people are experiencing a lot of those first love emotions for the first time. Young people are often still discovering the contrasts between between a crush, an infatuation, or a possible real love, which may lead to developing feelings in two different directions.

Setting for Historical YA

The historical era is a backdrop for the issues that the mc is working through. Description and historical details will be a natural part of how the character interacts with it.

Historical for adults allows for a few short historical tidbits to be inserted into the narrative to give understanding.

In YA, this tends to only matter if it directly affects the main character in some way. Even though there will be history inserted, it only goes as far as to how the main character has to use this information to forward her own story. 

Hopefully, examining these different elements of a story will help authors decide what genre their historical fiction with a teen protagonist belongs in.  

Can you think of any other differences between historical YA and historical coming of age for adults?

Leave a comment below.

Stephanie Daniels writes Christian historical fiction for young adults and the young at heart. Her debut novel, The Uncertainty of Fire, first appeared on Amazon’s Kindle Vella platform where it was a top faved Christian story. It is now available in paperback and kindle format online at Amazon and Barnes&Noble.

The Uncertainty of Fire

Sixteen-year-old Whimsy Greathart would rather fight against Chicago’s child labor practices than attend her privileged family’s high society events. On the night of the Great Chicago Fire, her world turned to ash, she must rely on the mercy of poor relations to rebuild her future and is forced into the very labor system she wished to fight against.

Donna Jo Stone writes YA contemporary novels about tough issues but always ends the stories with a note of hope. She blogs at donnajostone.com.

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History in the Making

FIGGY PUDDING IN THE MAKING

If there’s Figgy pudding, it must be Christmas!

Just ask Tiny Tim, the endearing child in Charles Dickens’ 1843 Christmas Classic, A Christmas Carol. Or consider the carolers as they sing for piggy pudding in a favorite yuletide song, “We Wish You a Merry Christmas”.

Figgy pudding goes way back in English and American history.

In the land of England, as early as the 14th and 15th century, the concoction of chopped figs, raisins, almonds, ginger, bread crumbs, and wine, along with a pomegranate topping, was simply a dessert.

However, in mid-17th century England figgy pudding intertwined itself with Christmas, embraced a whole new era, and acquired another name, Christmas Pudding.

The dessert likely did some travelling also in the 1600’s. It is not far-fetched to think that figgy pudding—its recipes that is—set sail on the Mayflower tucked in the minds of the settlers. Thereafter, with the passing of decades, and the arrival of more English migrants, the tradition of figgy pudding at Christmas likely blossomed this side of the pond.

This is great news for writers. For stories set in post-13th century England and early American periods, and onward into the 21st century, figgy pudding can trickle across the pages of a Christmas story. Adding homey details to the setting, enhancing the plot, or revealing personality in characters can bring another layer of depth to a story.

 A flaming figgy pudding might be the cook’s claim to fame in the decked halls of a 17th century English manor, or in a contemporary New York high-rise following a skating party in Central Park.

Quiet celebrations might be found in rustic villages where fruits and nuts might have been foraged from the woods. Or a resourceful youngster from the poor side of town might scavenge the ingredients for the family’s Christmas pudding.

Figgy pudding can also show the dilemma of the “haves and have nots”. The ingredients are affordable for the rich. The poor might spend the year putting aside coins for the purchases.

A writer might also explore the aspect of making the pudding. Surprisingly, figgy pudding isn’t really pudding. Not in the 14th century and not now. In its early life the thickness was more soup-like. The fixings were boiled in a bag, sometimes twice. In recent decades, the pudding might be described as more cake-like, being poured into molds or bundt pans and slow-baked in an oven.

The fixings themselves can be introduced in the story, whether in a kitchen scene or on a shopping excursion. Figgy pudding has maintained many of the same elements over the centuries. In its early years, chopped figs were popular. By the 17th century, raisins and currants became the fruits of choice, along with suet. Contemporary recipes reveal a return to figs.

Ginger was the spice of choice in early versions of figgy pudding. With the passing of time, nutmeg, cloves and allspice became popular, along with candied orange peel or brown sugar instead of honey.   

The use of alcohol has remained consistent—wine or brandy, or none.

Whew! What a big pot of figgy pudding trivia. And if that’s enough to brainstorm, key word searches for Oliver Cromwell, King George I (the “pudding king”), “Stir-up Sunday”, or coins in the figgy pudding, should whip up more fun and intrigue to add to the mix.

Because if it’s Christmas, there’s figgy pudding.

Jeannine

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry. 

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History in the Making

Have You Considered Living History?

While experiencing a major event in life, have you ever stopped and thought about the fact that, at that moment, you were living history?

Last month was the 20th anniversary of 9-11, and as I read some of the news items of the day, it dawned on me that my youngest son had not even been alive on the day that the 9-11 events took place. So to him, it is a historical event and he won’t know or understand anything about it unless I tell him about it.

As I thought about that, I realized that when 9-11 happened, I was too busy being afraid of what was happening and wondering what I should do, to consider that what I was experiencing and living through, at that very moment, would become a historical event.

As I reflected back on my life, I realized there have been quite a few historical events that I lived through: July 20, 1969 the first man walked on the moon – I was just five years old but I remember watching that on T.V. with my parents. On January 28, 1986, like many other people that day, I sat, eyes glued to the television watching as Space Shuttle Challenger lifted off, carrying the first civilians to go into space, and just 73 seconds after liftoff there was an explosion that took the lives of all seven people on board and destroyed the rocket. I also remember hearing that the U.S. declared war on Iraq on Wednesday evening, January 16, 1991 on the radio after church, and the next morning, January 17, 1991 the Desert Storm/Gulf War began.

The four events listed above are the major historical events I remember, and not only do I remember them, but I remember where I was and what I was doing when they happened, and I remember how each of them affected me.

We are currently living through an actual chain of historical events: the Covid-19 pandemic, lockdown, a fraudulent election, and vaccine mandates.

Many writers have been told, “Write what you know.” Therefore, if you’re a history writer and you’re trying to figure out what historical time period or event to write your novel around, think about all of the historical events you’ve lived. The ones I listed in this article were big events, but there are also little events that happen in your neighborhood, town, or state. Consider the history you have lived and know best.

If you need more information to set your scene because you don’t remember exactly what your town was like during the historical event you choose, talk to friends, family, and neighbors. Many towns have a historical society or a public library that have historical information about your town.

Living history and historical information are closer than you might think.

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Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: kellyfbarr.com

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History in the Making

A Snapshot of a Lifesaving Organization

Consider this scene:

              “Another final notice.” She glared at her husband, slapped the paper bill with the back of her hand.

              “I get paid tomorrow.”

              “That’s too late! They’re turning off the electricity at 5:00.”

              “What do you want from me?” His face heated as frustration grew. Didn’t she know he was doing the best he could? He glanced at his wife then at his two children sitting at the kitchen table, heads ducked, pretending to do their homework.

He had soooo failed his family. That bottle—still haunting him.

He jerked open the back door. “I need a meeting.”

A “meeting” has become a well-known term for attending a gathering with fellow alcoholics. This organization, Alcoholics Anonymous (“AA”), has become a saving grace for burdened people who want to engage with those who share a common goal of conquering their addictions. The promise of anonymity and promotion of accountability gives hope for victory to those beset with this crisis.

The prevalence of this problem invites the world of socially aware writers to weave the issue throughout the pages of their work. A poignant motivating question might be, “What if a fictional character who ‘needs a meeting’ might influence a ‘flesh and blood’ reader to say the same?”

 So, how might “a meeting” be utilized by fictional writers?

A character-driven story focusing on alcoholism might be a place to begin. The growth, regression, or stagnation of affected characters, addicted or not, can be demonstrated as they interface with each other. Building tension that explodes in a dynamic scene or unexpectedly eases in emotional relief can depict the challenges wrought by alcoholism. In keeping with real life, the end of the story may be joyful or heart-breaking.

How deep or detailed writers may wish to go would likely depend on the information available as to time and place of the story. For contemporary writers, the AA organization has matured, and meetings are widely available in the United States and throughout the world. Just pick a modern-day setting and the story would easily unfold. Certain phrases associated with AA—”One day at a time”, “24 hours”, “higher power”—have become well known, even among folks not affected by addiction. Scattered throughout a story, they would surely help bring it to life.

Help signs

But what if the story is historical? Perhaps this snapshot of AA’s history will help one evaluate how a character’s struggle with addiction might be incorporated in a piece.

  • Founded by Bill Wilson and Robert Smith in 1935.
  • First meeting on June 10, 1935, in Akron, Ohio. Three to four people participated.
  • Fall 1935, Wilson began a group in Brooklyn, New York.
  • News of AA initially spread by word of mouth.
  • 1938: a fundraiser, along with publication of articles in several periodicals, increased public awareness.
  • May 1939, “Alcoholics Anonymous” published in book form.
  • 1941: experienced impressive growth spurt, from 2000 to 8000 members.
  • Between 1941 and 1949 groups had formed in many cities across the United States and spread internationally.
  • 1941: adopted Serenity Prayer
  • 1941: First all-women’s group, Cleveland, Ohio.
  • 1942: found its way to prisons.
  • June 1944, first issue of AA magazine Grapevine.
  • 1952: Al-Anon, a family support group, launched.
  • 1954: 130,000 members, in approximately 6,000 groups on five continents.
  • 1957: Alateen, a spin-off of Al-Anon.
  • Today, estimates over two million members.

If one’s story is set prior to 1935, an AA meeting would not have been available, but clergy, physicians, charitable societies, and state hospitals addressed the problem. Researching key phrases like “barbiturate and belladonna” or “purge and puke” should open a door of help.

Depending upon the plot and depth of character portrayal, further research might be required. The Internet can serve up an overflowing plate. The AA website abounds with information and includes a terrific timeline that would assist both contemporary and historical researchers.

Clearly the problem of alcoholism is both widespread and enduring—a compelling incentive for writers to weave the admission, “I need a meeting”, into their stories.

Jeannine

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry.

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History in the Making

An Unexpected Nugget

When doing research for a historical novel, you may find an unexpected nugget that could add some extra excitement, conflict, or an extra character you may want to include in your story.

While researching the town my main character lives in, in my WIP (work in progress), I found that a notorious outlaw had lived in that town as well. Though I have chosen not to include him in my WIP, I may include him in a future novel, either part of my current series or a stand alone.

It’s always wise to make note of unexpected finds in you research because they could be a valuable addition to your current work, or may invoke an idea for a future book.

If you choose to use an unexpected character or setting, be sure to research that character or setting in depth because it is important to portray them accurately in your work. Even though you may write historical fiction, you need to be sure any real life person or place is portrayed properly or your history knowledgeable readers will be upset and will let you know either through a book review or a personal email. You always want to keep your readers happy.

You may want to deliberately search for that unexpected nugget. You can begin your search by simply plugging a question, such as “what notorious people lived in the 1860s?” into a search engine and see what comes up. I will issue a word of caution here: do not rely completely on information you find on the internet, especially a site like Wikipedia, which is not always reliable. Also try to find more information by contacting a museum or historical society, or going to the library and looking for books on the subject.

I did an online search on the question from the previous paragraph and the following were the top ten articles that came up:

  • American History Timeline from 1860-1870
  • 1860 Fast Facts—History—U.S. Census Bureau
  • Famous and Infamous Census Records – History – U.S. Census
  • 1860s – the Hanneman Archive
  • The Living City | New York City>>1860s
  • Ozarks Gunfights and Other Notorious Incidents
  • List of Famous People of the 19th Century
  • List of Slave Owners – Wikipedia
  • ‘Dirty Old London’: A History of the Victorians
  • Infamous Mobsters – List and Notable Names – Biography.

If you are a historical writer, you most likely love history, so the above list has probably piqued your interest and you might want to rush off to check out at least one of those topics. But wait!

One more thing – books. You may find them at the library, but you will also want to keep your eyes open at used book sales and used book stores, as well as new book stores if you don’t mind paying new book prices. I have found several great gems for researching historical people. I have purchased them, and they now reside on my book shelf waiting for me to crack them open for a future novel.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

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History in the Making

The Tale of Two Celebrations

Smell the churros? That cinnamon doughnutty aroma that draws you to the vendor’s stand? Or maybe your eyes are drawn to the rainbow-hued streamers dangling from tree limbs or encircling porch posts like an old barber shop pole. The sound of the mariachi band, shaking and strumming a catchy beat, drums in your ears while dancers twirl and swirl in colorful skirts.

Such a festive day.

But nothing like the first Cinco de Mayo.

May 5, 1862 was not marked by spirit-lifting dance moves or enticing aromas of tacos and burritos. Instead, it was defined by a battle. The colors were not expressing gaiety, but identity. France’s navy blue, white and red flag proudly preceded a regiment of French soldiers as they charged up the hill to the City of Puebla. Mexico’s red, white and green flag few high, declaring the loyalty of the Mexican soldiers who bravely met the enemy.

The battle raged, a flurry of fighting men carrying rifles and sabers, some on foot, some astride horses. Frenchmen’s dark navy and red uniforms tangled with Mexican’s pale blue ones as they clashed outside the fort’s walls. Soon, the blood of soldiers and horses seeped into the land. Moans of pain and screams of the dying tormented the ears of those who persevered, until finally… France surrendered.

Did cheers erupt from the conquerors? Probably. But how many minutes ticked by before the excitement of victory gave way to weeping and wailing as news of the injured and dead circulated? Did surviving Mexican soldiers dig 83 graves or just one to receive their dead?

Could they taste the post-battle meal?

This was the first Cinco de Mayo celebration.

In modern-day Puebla, its citizens memorialize the day with parades, festivals, re-enactments of the battle between Mexican and French soldiers, and local cuisine.

However, in the United States, Cinco de Mayo is less about memorializing the victorious battle and more about celebrating the Mexican-American culture and heritage. As early as 1863, celebrations popped up in the State of California. By the 1980s, over a century later, Cinco de Mayo flourished across the United States, its popularity fueled by marketing ploys of beer and wine companies. The jubilant atmosphere and extensive menu of Mexican dishes still lure many folks to gather for a May party.

For writers, a Cinco de Mayo scene can add sparkle to a story. With the winter holidays over and summer fun yet to come, this mid-year festival paves the way for a social gathering. Whether family or friends, a big event, a small gathering, or a restaurant’s promotional event to increase patronage, things happen when people come together. A door opens to romance, tension builds in a relationship, or just plain old fun is the name of the game for the day.

The 5th of May gala has the potential of igniting a change of mood; shifting setting; deepening plots; and/or revealing personality or growth in characters. Such a scene might even add a boost to the “sagging middle” of a story.

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry.

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Mastering Middle Grade

Three Tips for Middle Grade Historical Fiction Authors

I once asked New York Times bestselling author Melanie Benjamin her top tip for writing historical fiction. She gave me two: write to entertain, and connect with readers on issues in the past that resonate in the present. Although Benjamin writes for adults, her advice proves equally applicable to middle grade historical fiction authors.

New York Times bestselling author Lisa Gardner answers this question by focusing on a paraphrase of Hemingway’s Iceberg Theory. “Research the iceberg, then write the tip.” Writers of middle grade historical fiction would do well to keep these three suggestions in mind.

  1. Write to entertain.
  2. Write to connect the past with the present.
  3. Write the tip.

Write to Entertain

In order to entertain, MG writers must first provide readers with a strong protagonist—one generally two years older than the age of the author’s target audience (8-12-year-olds). The story should embroil this sympathetic character in historical situations that compel the protagonist to respond. Unlike YA or adult stories, these MG characters are not out to “save the world.” They make decisions based on their immediate circumstances with a focus on friends and family.             

The Bicycle Spy provides a good example. Twelve-year-old Marcel discovers that his friend’s entire family is in imminent danger. He knows he can help, but it will involve a risky bicycle ride to pass along covert information. When his plans go awry, he must keep pedaling and think quickly… because his friend, her family, and his own future hang in the balance.

Enable Readers to Connect the Past with the Present

In addition to crafting an entertaining story that involves the main character’s friends and family, middle grade authors must also connect events in the historical novel with situations experienced by their target audience. According to Linda Levstick, a professor at the University of Kentucky, embedding history within this kind of a narrative arc will help middle graders make sense of, personalize, and remember historical events. Evoking readers’ emotions helps young readers forge important connections.

All middle grade readers have experienced loss of some kind. They also know how it feels when adults have them do things they’d rather not do. Tapping into these common emotions can bring historical characters to life. The past becomes more memorable when readers connect historical events with their own experiences.

For example, in my middle grade novel, California Trail Discovered, orphaned thirteen-year-old Daniel and his ten-year-old stepsister Hannah (fictional characters) must travel West with their guardian, Jim Savage (a historical figure). Daniel doesn’t want to go. He wants to stay in Illinois and solve the mystery of his parents’ deaths. Forced to join Jim’s wagon train and travel to California, Daniel and Hannah become friends with Virginia Reed, a historical figure and member of the Donner Party. Together, Daniel, Hannah, and Virginia face the trials and triumphs of life on the trail.

Write the Tip

Lisa Gardner’s advice to research the iceberg (the history surrounding an event you want to bring to life) and then writing only the tip, is sound advice for historical fiction writers. Just as only ten percent of an iceberg floats above the surface, so too, authors of historical fiction should only reveal ten percent of the research they discover. The ninety percent of the information writers withhold acts as the bulk of their story’s iceberg, providing substance and weight. As literary agent Rachelle Gardner warns, writers must always make a story’s message subservient to its plot. This is especially true of middle grade fiction.

Conclusion

Middle grade historical fiction authors who write to entertain, connect the past with their readers’ present realities, and reveal only ten percent of the research upon which their novel is based will not only reach this age group at a very formative time in their lives—they help them become life-long learners.

Marie Sontag, a former middle school teacher, writes historical fiction for middle grade and young adult readers. A member of ACFW and SCBWI, she has a BA in social science, a masters in instructional technology, and a Ph.D. in education. She and her husband reside in the Texas DFW area. When not researching or writing her next book, she can be found helping her grandson capture his superhero or Lego-created stories on video (after, of course, he shows Grandma his storyboard!), or acting our princess stories with her granddaughter. You can connect with her at www.mariesontag.com.

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Bestsellers

Interview with Award-Winning Author Jarm Del Boccio

Can you share a little about your recent book?

Sure! The Heart Changer is a middle-grade historical fiction that puts a fresh spin on an Old Testament story as seen through the eyes of a young captive who made an impact on the lives around her. It debuted April 26, 2019 with Ambassador International. My back copy says it best:

“Can an Israelite captive, wrenched from all she loves, serve the very man who destroyed her village?

Miriam is asked to do the impossible: serve the wife of Naaman, commander of the Syrian army. Clinging to treasured memories of home and faith, Miriam faces captivity with worry and bitterness. Little does she know the Heart Changer is wooing and preparing her for a greater mission—far beyond what she could imagine.

This middle-grade historical novel reflects the heartache and angst of a young refugee in a foreign land where all hope seems lost.”

The Heart Changer, written for ages 8-12, has short chapters so reluctant readers will not be intimidated, although the language is descriptive and vibrant.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

Yes. Not only do I want to inspire my young readers by bringing a historic hero to life in a relatable way, but I also want to bring hope in this sometimes confusing and dark world. My debut novel in particular shows that even though their lives can be full of angst and uncertainty, God is writing their story behind the scenes, working everything together for good.

How long have you been writing?

I’ve been keeping a diary since I was a teenager, but didn’t begin writing in earnest as a career until my almost 100-year-old mother passed away. Thinking I might forget events of my childhood, I began writing my memoirs. Soon after I was drawn to writing picture books, and eventually landed comfortably in the middle-grade historical fiction genre where I could share my love of history and description using many more words!

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

It took me almost seven years before Ambassador International found my story at a Twitter event called #FaithPitch. After signing a contract, it took another year to bring my story to young readers.

Which of your books is your favorite?

Since I’ve published only one, it’s The Heart Changer. But if you ask me about my WIPs, I’d say the middle-grade historical fiction, Fair Investigations! set at the 1893 World’s Columbian Expostion. Therefore, I continue to diligently seek for it’s perfect publishing home.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

Yes. In The Heart Changer, Adara, (wife of Naaman, the commander of the Syrian army) is at her loom weaving, while Miriam, the servant girl (MC) is brushing her long dark hair while recounting her nation Israel’s history. Adara is so taken with the stories, especially of Joseph (who was sold into slavery) that she is sure Miriam has come to their household at the perfect time to help them — and she is right. Adara uses her weaving as an example of how God works in a life, which creates a memorable scene.

Tell us about an award you won that was particularly meaningful.

My first award was the most meaningful — an Illuminations Silver Medal in the Children’s/YA category. It gave me joy and confidence knowing my story had value, and it urged me to keep on writing! Since then, I’ve won two others: a Purple Dragonfly Honorable Mention Award in the spiritual/religious category, and the Moonbeam Children’s Book Award — a Bronze Medal for a Young Adult Fiction E-book.

How long does it take you to write a book?

It depends. I wrote Fair Investigations! a 50,000 word MG novel in 30 days for National Novel Writing Month. Others, like Soli’s Saving Grace, a MG historical fiction about a Huguenot girl who escapes persecution and flees to England, are still in the rewriting phase, and I’ve been at this one for about five years. My debut novel, The Heart Changer, I wrote in two years as a chapter book, then expanded it to a middle-grade novel. After signing with Ambassador International, my editor and I spent another 6 months revising it before publication.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

I work in my Victorian sitting room most days during the week, using my writing skills in many ways — blogposts, newsletters, social media posts, and my latest manuscript which I am revising with my faithful critique group. I’m also taking three classes online, and continue to tweak my website and fine-tune my brand. Since I have many writerly friends online, I connect with them weekly, whether at a conference, a Zoom meeting or on social media. I am very organized and driven, so I have no problem staying on task. But I must admit I drag my feet when it comes to revision, but my insightful critique group motivates me to press on.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I’m not sure if it’s a quirk, but I love finding unsung heroes in history, especially children, who have made a huge difference in the world. I am inspired to bring their stories to life. Although I have not written a new story lately, I have a computer file with many ideas. I also write exclusively on my iPad. It’s so much easier to tap away on a flat keyboard rather that a laptop. And I always have a candle lit and a cup of White Peony Tea or coffee with coconut sugar and homemade almond milk by my side.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

When a child tells me my story and characters have inspired and encouraged them to be courageous and hopeful, especially in their faith, that brings me joy. I want them to know that children who lived long ago were just like them, even though their way of life may have been different. All kids have the opportunity to be heroes in their own stories.

Last year at family camp, two young friends, each with a copy of The Heart Changer, decided they’d create their own book club. After reading a chapter on their own at night in their cabins, they would meet at breakfast to discuss what they had read. That made my heart sing.

Another young friend (8) in the UK where I was visiting, read my book through twice in two days — she couldn’t put it down. That was quite an encouragement to me!

Could you tell us about a dark moment in your writing career?

When my favorite historical fiction novel which I wrote during NaNoWriMo over four years ago is continually rejected, I get extremely discouraged. Many editors and agents praise me on my descriptions, setting and plot, but somehow, the characters need attention. So I am working diligently with my critique group to fix that problem once and for all!

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

I am constantly bombarded with good news from fellow authors who have just signed another book contract. Although I am very happy for them, it makes me question my gifts as a writer. I feel rejected and despairing of ever publishing again. But, deep down inside, I know God has a purpose for the gift He has given me, and will bring a contract to pass at the perfect time.

Where do you get your ideas?

Travel is my go-to for inspiration. When I am on a historic tour and discover a fascinating tidbit in history, I am inspired to delve into the story and bring it to light. Especially if it involves a child, since I want to bring historic young heroes to life.

Sometimes, it’s insight I receive during a sermon, or in a nonfiction book I’m reading. During our homeschool years, while reading one of our engaging historical textbooks, we found a few fascinating gems. This is how I discovered material for the story I’ve entitled, The Orphans Who Saved the World. It recounts a Spanish vaccine expedition organized to eradicate smallpox from the New World back in 1802. There is very little information on the event, so I am free to use my imagination, within limits of course. I’m always on the alert for curious pieces of unexplored history or faith insights.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Ahhhh, that depends! If we are talking about present day Biblical/historical fiction authors, Tessa Afshar, Lynn Austin, Anthony Doerr, and Heather Morris come to mind. Since I am attracted to the classics, Charlotte Brontë and Jane Austin are two of my favorites. There are so many authors I love, but they all have a historic bent to their writing.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have heeded?

Breaking into the publishing field is not easy. It involves much research, writing, reading and most of all, waiting. I didn’t realise just how much effort it would take, with very little results to show for it. I would tell aspiring writers to read in the genre they wish to write, write every day, (keep a journal, or write a story, daily writing prompt, blogpost or article), and study the current market. Connecting with other writers is a must, especially in professional groups such as SCBWI (Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators).

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writers make?

They expect immediate success and accolades. It takes years of writing and revising to get your manuscript to submission-ready status. And even then, there is no guarantee. You must write because you love it, and have a story to tell, not because you want to be rich or famous. Keep on writing, but don’t quit your day job. You will eventually be rewarded for your perseverance.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

Read and write in the genre you love, be a member of a writer’s organization and critique group, take classes and examine The Writer’s Market Guide https://www.amazon.com/Writers-Market-2020-Trusted-Published/dp/1440301220 which gives details on submitting to publishers and agents.

Jarm (’J’ pronounced as a ‘Y’) Del Boccio finds her inspiration in everyday life, but in particular, when she travels the globe, observing the quirky things that happen along the way. Focusing on the lives of characters from the past, her passion is to breathe new life into the pages of history, offering her young readers hope, heart and a hero. Her award-winning MG Historical fiction, The Heart Changer puts a fresh spin on an Old Testament account of a young captive who made an impact on the lives around her. You can find The Heart Changer teaching resources at: Jarm Del Boccio, Author or connect with Jarm on her social media platforms: Goodreads, Pinterest, Facebook and Instagram.

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History in the Making

Corn Flakes, The Journey of a Favorite Cereal

  • A health guru…
  • Stale wheat…
  • A tight budget…

This hodgepodge of events would lead to the creation of a long-time favorite cereal!

Corn Flakes’ journey began in 1877 when John Henry Kellogg (“John”) sought to provide a vegetarian diet to his patients at the Battle Creek Sanitarium in Michigan. John combined wheat, oats and cornmeal, baked them at a high temperature, then smashed the mix into little pieces. After pouring the hard morsels in a bowl and covering them with milk (to soften them), John served this nutritious breakfast to the patients.

But the concoction wasn’t corn flakes…yet.

In 1898 the cereal’s journey took an unexpected turn. A pan of the wheat mixture was accidentally left out for too long. Faced with stale wheat and budget constraints, John couldn’t bring himself to toss the tray of grains into the trash. Instead, he donned his “creative cook” hat and rolled that stale mixture into thin sheets which crumbled into flakes. He toasted them in the oven, and when they emerged, the flakes were crispy and tasted good.

But John didn’t stop there. Experimenting with corn, he discovered those flakes came out of the oven crispier and crunchier than wheat.

Voilà−Corn Flakes!

But the journey of Corn Flakes didn’t end when those crispy flakes were pulled from the oven. Notable events followed, curiosities that might whet the appetite of fiction writers. The mystery, intrigue, drama or humor surrounding Corn Flakes could be injected into a story.

Mystery: Just who was in the kitchen making something good out of those stale flakes? John Kellogg? His brother, Will? John’s wife?

Envision a character (a young reporter?) snooping around the sanitarium grounds or chatting up a group of gossipy patrons lounging in the hot tub.

Industrial Espionage: C.J. Post (Post Cereal Co.) is said to have been a patient at the sanitarium who worked in the kitchen to help pay his way. Upon his return to Texas, toasted corn flakes (“Toasties”) became part of his cereal line. Did he steal the recipe from John? Add a telling tidbit: Post beat the Kellogg brothers to the patent office to register the rolling machine.

A character could be an employee at Post Cereal during this intriguing season.

Family Drama. Add sugar to those healthy corn flakes? Anathema! Market them? Not on my watch! John’s and Will’s differing aspirations resulted in a rift between the brothers. Ultimately, Will bought the rights to Corn Flakes and by 1906 he had formed the “Battle Creek Toasted Corn Flakes Company.”

Over a bowl of Corn Flakes, a story’s characters might discuss the newspaper’s coverage of the feud or engage in a discussion about the healthiness (or not) of sugar.

Wink at your grocer and see what you get.”

A free box of Corn Flakes!

What a playful marketing scheme by Will Kellogg!

What a playful scene to add to a story!

Imagine a 1907 male character winking at a female cashier! LOL!

Or perhaps the main character is the cashier; at first it’s fun, but being winked at all day long can get old fast.

The Rooster: In 1957 Cornelius “Corny” Rooster appeared on boxes of Kellogg’s Corn Flakes.

Picture a breakfast scene with young children enamored by the rooster.

 In the 1990’s, Cornelius received a makeover. Fiction in that time period could include a debate over breakfast: which Cornelius do you like best?

And there you have it−Corn Flakes!

From the mind of a health guru to Cornelius the Rooster−who’d have guessed Corn Flakes would give us so much to crow about?

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry.

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Novelists Unwind

Novelists Unwind Interviews Becky St. Amant and Bryan Litfin

Betsy St. Amant, the author of more than fifteen inspirational romances, shares the inspiration behind her latest novel, The Key to Love, an “opposites attract” story featuring a romantic baker and a jaded travel writer.

Betsy originally planned to set her story both in the U.S. and at the love-lock bridge in Paris. The bridge, which crosses the Seine River, had a metal railing. A longstanding tradition was for couples to place a padlock on the railing and throw the key into the river to symbolize their everlasting love. About the time Betsy was writing her story, officials decided the railing was an eyesore and replaced it with panels. During our chat, Betsy talks about how that Paris decision inspired her to create a love-lock wall behind her heroine’s bakery.

Dr. Bryan Litfin is a theological scholar who mined his expertise of the ancient Roman Empire to imagine an epic adventure saga about what he describes as “one of the most pivotal eras in all history.” The first story in the series, The Conqueror, takes place in the early years of the fourth century A.D. when Constantine is fighting to reunite the divided empire under one rule.

Bryan’s multiple trips to Italy and throughout the Mediterranean region also grounds his writing in authenticity. He shares what it’s like to take students to ancient sites such as the Catacombs. We also talk about Bryan’s writing journey from scholarly “publish or perish” articles to nonfiction books such as Getting to Know the Church Fathers and Early Christian Martyrs Stories to his first foray into fiction with The Chiveis Trilogy.

The next Novelists Unwind Giveaway will be announced on Saturday, December 5, 2020 at http://www.johnnie-alexander.com/. Be sure to enter for your chance to win an inspirational novel.

Meet Johnnie

Johnnie Alexander creates characters you want to meet and imagines stories you won’t forget. She is a best-selling and award-winning author who writes in multiple genres, serves as a board member for Serious Writer, Inc. and Midsouth Christian Writers Conference, co-hosts an online show called Writers Chat, and interviews inspirational authors for Novelists Unwind. She also teaches at writers conferences and for Serious Writer Academy. Connect with her at www.johnnie-alexander.com and other social media sites via https://linktr.ee/johnniealexndr.

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Bestsellers

Bestselling Author Interview with Jane Kirkpatrick

Can you share a little about your recent book? (Releasing in September 2020)

Like most of my historical novels, Something Worth Doing is based on the life of a real woman, Abigail Scott Duniway. She was an early reformer as well as a wife, mother of 6, businesswoman, teacher, wrote 22 novels, was a public speaker and owner of a newspaper for 16 years, all in the 1800s when women were to be seen and not heard. Oh, and she was a suffragist for 40 years working on behalf of women’s rights. a remarkable woman who is a metaphor for endurance.

Jane Kirkpatrick. Something Worth Doing

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

I’ve been intrigued by stories of historical women whose stories are often forgotten. Virginia Woolf wrote that “women’s history must be invented…both uncovered and made up” and that’s why I moved from non-fiction or biography to fiction. My stories don’t have to have a happy ending, but I want them to have a hopeful ending. I’m asking a reader to choose time to read it when they might be doing something else, so I want to be respectful of their time and engagement in the story. Most of all, I’m answering a question that the story has posed, and it won’t let me go until I answer it. For example, when I visited an Oregon state park that a man had created for his wife in the 1800s I wondered why there was no mention of her there — except that it had been his gift.  It was a mansion, formal gardens, on the Oregon coast, an incredible landscape. I kept asking “what kind of woman would inspire this and why doesn’t anyone talk about her?”  That became A Gathering of Finches written in 1997 and still in print and has been adapted for the stage.

How long have you been writing?

I wrote “wretched little poems” when I was very young and always loved words and their sounds. My teachers said kind things about my writing through the years. But it wasn’t until I left my job as a mental health clinic director in 1982 and moved with my husband to a remote ranch (I called it rattlesnake and rock ranch) that I began to write for others to read. I took a creative writing class at the local community college and had magazine articles published before we moved. My first published book was a memoir in 1991 about that journey to the end of the world. The first novel came out in 1995 and there have been one or two books each year since then.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

My books are traditionally published though when a non-fiction grief book went out-of-print, I did self-publish a new production of A Simple Gift of Comfort. My first book, a memoir Homestead, was sold by a proposal. I read a book about how to write a proposal and proceeded to treat it like a college term paper. It was 75 pages long!  I don’t recommend that, but it included some of the essays I’d had published in regional magazines. I read dozens of memoir and read the acknowledgments and when I found one I particularly liked (A Walk Across America by Peter Jenkins) I sent my fat proposal to their publishers unsolicited. Also not recommended but this was 1988. After about a year they called and said they were interested, and the rest is history. The novels were also all written by proposal and I ended up signing contracts for them, usually three books at a time to come out yearly so I always had a deadline. The good news was I had convinced someone besides my mom that this was a great story.  The bad news is that I never know if I can write it!

Which of your books is your favorite?

The one I’m working on now.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

I have always liked the opening sentence of my first novel A Sweetness to the Soul because I know where I was when I wrote it and didn’t imagine it would be the opening to a story. I was sitting on a hillside watching our alfalfa field become flooded. It went from all green with little pools of water to all water with little pools of green. Here’s the sentence: “Like the slow rising of the river after an early snowmelt in the mountains, he seeped into my life, unhurried, almost without notice until the strength and breadth of him covered everything that had once been familiar, made it different, new over old.” It introduces the narrator of this story and speaks of change in our lives and how it can happen so slowly we barely notice the enormous change that results.

How long does it take you to write a book?

A lifetime really.  Each of the stories began somewhere in my own experience even though I’m writing about another woman from the past. But specifically, I block out June, July and August to write 8-10 hours a day, five-six days a week for a book due September 1. Then I begin researching the book that will be due the following year in September and I’m also promoting the book that has just come out in September. So, while I’m promoting, I’m researching, and working on queries from my editor for that book I just turned in and doing what I call “the work before the work.”

Whats your writing work schedule like? 

See above. That’s kind of a picture given the schedule of when manuscripts are due and when they are published. For three months a year, I am getting up at 4 or 5 in the morning, taking a break around 8 for breakfast, returning and writing until noon then back at it until 4 or 5 pm.  In the evening, I’m researching, checking on timelines etc. When I worked full time, which I did for most of the first 20 books, I wrote for two hours in the morning from 5-7 am every day. You can get a lot of work done in two hours.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

Hmmm.  I suppose the early morning thing. As I get closer and closer to finishing I get up earlier and earlier so sometimes I’m writing at 1:00 am after having gone to bed at 10:00 pm.  I also answer three questions (from Structuring Your Novel  by Roberts and Fitzgerald) before I start writing. What’s this story about? What do you feel deeply about? How do you hope a reader will be changed by reading this story?” I might write many pages to answer them, but I get it down to one sentence each that I put on top of my computer screen in tiny font. So, when I get lost in the writing, wonder why I’m doing this, and who will care I look up there and get inspired. The other note I have up there is from Anne Lamont: “You don’t have time for that.”

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

Being part of a panel with two authors I so admire and both National Book Award winners,  Barry Lopez and Ivan Doig. It was at a Pacific Northwest Booksellers Association trade show and we were asked questions about writing and life. The other moments of joy have come from readers who have written about how the books have touched their lives. After 9/11 I had a signing which was a scary time for people. I didn’t expect a crowd, but we had close to 100. The last woman in line told me she had wondered what she could do for a Pakistani family who had not come out of their house since the tragedy.  She told me she asked herself what she thought my characters would have done and then she baked bread and took it to them and broke bread with these neighbors whom she had never spoken to before that time. That story and others has given me great joy. Some of the best stories of my marriage have come from shared research trips. And my husband has done the maps in my books. I love that connection.

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

Being told that a novel I’d written didn’t cut it. Rejection is the worst, isn’t it? But these women I write about have taught me much about how to deal with rejection or much worse:  despair, loss, grief, powerlessness etc. I find myself weaving their strength into my stories and my own life.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

Ah, you were reading my mind! I’ve been blessed with editors who did have to tell me the manuscript didn’t meet their expectations but could also tell me why and suggest how I could fix it.  And then they gave me the opportunity to rewrite the novel. One editor told me I had not answered the question: “whose story is it, the mother or the daughter?”  That was so helpful. Editors who can ask those questions always make the work better. Bad reviews. I have a book I read called Rotten Rejections. It includes rejections of greats like Hemingway and Faulkner. That makes me feel better.

Where do you get your ideas? 

Everywhere. It goes back to that unanswered question.  My 2019 release, One More River to Cross  grew from a footnote I read while researching another book. It referred to “eight women, 17 children and James Miller” who had spent the winter of 1844-45 in the Sierras.  What were they doing there?  Who were they? I had to find out.  Sometimes people bring story ideas to me and I must tell them that they are the keeper of that story and they should write it. But sometimes they wear me down and I am so glad they do because those have been wonderful women to spend time with.  A Light in the Wilderness and The Memory Weaver are books like that.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Oh gosh! Let me count them. There are many I sign up for to be notified when they’ll have a new book.  Donna Leon, Ivan Doig, Kathleen Ernst, C.J. Box, Louise Penny, Karen Zacharias, Michael Zimmer, Martin Walker, Bob Welch, Casey Donis, Robert Crais, Alan Bradley, Anne Lamott, Wendell Berry, Parker Palmer, Mary Oliver, Kim Stafford. Should I go on?

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have heeded?

Listen to the story. Try not to write for the market, for what is “hot” at any given moment. Because then even if the story takes a long time to find publication, you will have the satisfaction of knowing you listened to the story finding its teller which is a privilege. When promoting it or pitching it, that’s when I try to identify the current market interest. For example, I don’t pitch historical novels because publishers say, “they don’t sell.”  I pitch the story of a strong woman who did x or y which is very much the struggle of women today. Or “It’s a story of how to endure in challenge not of one’s making.”  I try to relate the story to contemporary readers.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writers make?

Being unwilling to reach out to a freelance editor to have a look at their work. Insisting that what they’ve written can’t be changed or improved. Believing they will make a lot of money :).

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

Look for where your strengths can be showcased.  Contribute to newsletters of organizations you care about, for example. Pay attention to blogs and Writer’s Digest and other places that let you know about possible markets. Check out Linked in. Find a writer’s conference that brings editors/agents in and research them finding those who match your story-telling strengths. Volunteer for such a conference that can connect you informally with agents and editors and published authors. I met with an editor at a conference who didn’t pick my manuscript but over breakfast the next day when I told her about a novel I was thinking of writing she spent an hour giving me great suggestions I ended up using and that novel is my most awarded book. She was a big part of that.

Jane Kirkpatrick is the New York Times and CBA bestselling and award-winning author of more than thirty books, including One More River to Cross, Everything She Didn’t Say, All Together in One Place, A Light in the Wilderness, The Memory Weaver, This Road We Traveled, and A Sweetness to the Soul, which won the prestigious Wrangler Award from the Western Heritage Center. Her works have won the WILLA Literary Award, the Carol Award for Historical Fiction, and the 2016 Will Rogers Gold Medallion Award. Jane divides her time between Central Oregon and California with her husband, Jerry, and Cavalier King Charles Spaniel, Caesar. Learn more at www.jkbooks.com.

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History in the Making

The History of Your Characters

When we think of “historical”, we think the story is set in a historical time period, and many of us have a favorite time period – the Victorian Age, the Renaissance, the Old West, or any one of so many more. We imagine poring over history books, encyclopedias, or websites that provide information about the time period so that we can be sure the historical parts of our fiction stories are accurate.

What about the history of your characters? This is otherwise known as “backstory”. The history or backstory of our characters can be just as important, maybe even more important, than the history of our time period.

Just like people in real life, your characters need a history. You can’t write accurately portray a character without knowing their back story. Just like real people, the histories of your characters are important to who your character is. Their history has an effect on the character and personality of your character. It may even be important to their motivation and goals.

Therefore, whether you are a pantser, plantser, or plotter, you need to create a backstory for your characters before you write your story. The better you know and understand your characters’ histories, the more realistic and believable you can make them.

Do you have to create a backstory for every character? No, I wouldn’t say that. I would say it is most important to have well-developed backstories for your main characters, and at least a good idea of the backstories of the minor characters make regular appearances in your story.

Even though you need a thorough backstory for your characters, you won’t include all of their backstory in your novel. You will only include what you need for your readers to understand your characters.

For example, your twenty-eight year old female character is terrified of being outside in a thunderstorm. Why? Maybe in her backstory, when she was a little girl, she witnessed a tragedy that took place during a thunderstorm – maybe a tree struck by lightning fell on a relative and they were badly injured or killed, maybe she was raised by an abusive parent who locked her outside during a thunderstorm, or maybe lightning struck a tree stump near her and it burst into flames. I’m sure you can come up with more possibilities that would cause her to still be afraid of thunderstorms as an adult woman.

Why might this be important to the story? Well, maybe a thunderstorm begins quickly, with little to no warning, and her little boy is outside and she has to go out to bring him into the house or maybe she’s on her way home and there is no where to go to get out of the storm along the road she’s traveling and her only option is to get home.

I hope, by these examples, you can see how important your character’s backstory can be and how it can add tension to your story.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

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Novelists Unwind ~ Patricia Bradley, Suzanne Woods Fisher, & Linda Stenton Matchett

Patricia Bradley, an award-winning author who writes page-turning suspense, was my first Novelists Unwind guest…way back in August 2017! We’ve been friends since before either of us were published. Her newest novel, Standoff, is the first book in the Natchez Trace Park Rangers Series. During our chat, Patricia reveals her favorite way to kill a character!

Suzanne Woods Fisher, best known for her award-winning Amish fiction, returns to Novelists Unwind to talk about her shift to contemporary romance. The second book in her Three Sisters Island Series, On a Coastal Breeze, released earlier this year. Among other topics, we chatted about the name of her male protagonist, Rick O’Shea, which has a fun insight to his character. (Say the name three times fast.)

Linda Shenton Matchett writes stories about “ordinary people who did extraordinary things in days gone by.” Her primary interest is World War II history, but she also writes novels set in other eras. In one of my favorite Novelists Unwind moments ever, Linda shows us a notebook her parents gave her when she was eight or nine years old with instructions to write stories and amuse herself.

The next Novelists Unwind Giveaway will be announced on Saturday, July 4, 2020 at http://www.johnnie-alexander.com/. Be sure to enter for your chance to win an inspirational novel.

Meet Johnnie

Johnnie Alexander creates characters you want to meet and imagines stories you won’t forget. She is a best-selling and award-winning author who writes in multiple genres, serves as a board member for Serious Writer, Inc. and Midsouth Christian Writers Conference, co-hosts an online show called Writers Chat, and interviews inspirational authors for Novelists Unwind. She also teaches at writers conferences and for Serious Writer Academy. Connect with her at www.johnnie-alexander.com and other social media sites via https://linktr.ee/johnniealexndr.

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History in the Making

Inanimate Objects as Characters

Using inanimate objects as characters can add a powerful, interesting element to your story. I cried when Wilson, a volleyball, floated away in Cast Away. I shuddered when Gandalf in The Lord of the Rings read the engraving that said, “One ring to rule them all, one ring to find them, one ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them.”

The Darjeeling Limited is a movie about three estranged brothers in crisis who travel to India to find their neglectful mother. Their journey takes place on a train … until it doesn’t. Then they experience the real India while dragging an enormous mountain of cumbersome luggage, a powerful symbol for their own personal, heavy, and real emotional baggage. At the end—spoiler ahead—they exuberantly toss the luggage away and feel freedom in letting go of the negative experiences from their past.

During the entire movie, I felt the weight of their emotional baggage through the use of the luggage as an inanimate, passive witness of their lives. I experienced with the trio how burdensome and exhausting hauling our past around with us can be. I loved the metaphor and how the writers used the luggage as a character in its own right.

The literary term for this device is called personification. The giving of physical or human characteristics to inanimate objects, yet the reader understands it does not actually possess them. This is different from anthropomorphism when characters, like animals or insects, actually take on the characteristics of a human, such as human speech, like in Charlotte’s Web.

Authors have brought to life diaries, traveling pants, and wedding dresses with great success. In my first novel, my protagonist has an amulet on her arm that keeps her tethered to the false gods of Ancient Egypt. Like the brothers who discard luggage as a symbol of shedding their emotional baggage, when my character rids herself of the weighty shackle, her spiritual eyes open to the one true God.

A writer does a good job with this technique when the reader makes some kind of connection with the inanimate object. Either they begin to feel sympathy (Wilson) or relief (the luggage) but there is an emotive response when its fate is revealed. They care … one way or the other.

But remember, inanimate objects have (or lack) actual capabilities. Make sure your use of the object is believable. The luggage, for example, can’t wave, cry, or hold on to anything. It is a place for your living character to transfer feelings and become a symbol of their inner conflict.

Have you used the personification technique before? Please share how you did it.

Blessings,

KD Holmberg

K. D. Holmberg is an author, blogger, and freelance writer. She is a member of ACFW, Word Weavers International, and a founding member of the Jerry Jenkins Writers Guild. She is represented by Hartline Literary Agency. A retired flight attendant, she has traveled and lived all over the globe. She and her husband, Keith, love to golf and live in South Carolina. You can find more about her: Facebook @authorkdholmberg, twitter @kdeniseholmberg, and website kdholmberg.com

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History in the Making

Comic Relief: The Golden AGe of Comic Books Amidst Americans in Crisis

Comics Book #1 landed on newsstands in June 1938, and from its pages Superman soared into the lives of weary Americans. A throng of superheroes quickly followed on the fringes of his red cape: Batman and Captain Marvel (1939), then Captain America, Green Lantern, and Flash (1940s). In 1941 Wonder Woman made her debut in All-Star Comics #8, followed by her 1942 first feature appearance in Sensation Comics #1.

By 1941, comic book creators had dreamed up the first team of superheroes−The Justice Society of America. Premiering in All Star Comics #3 (Winter 1940-41), the initial team−Doctor Fate, Hour-Man, Spectre, Sandman, Atom, Flash, Green Lantern and Hawkman−added diverse out-of-this-world skill sets in the fight against injustice.

These popular superheroes unveiled themselves as the years of The Great Depression waned (1929-1939) and World War II loomed (1939-1945). People were digging themselves out of huge holes made in their lives by a long season of want and need−unemployment lines, empty bank accounts and cupboards, and bone-weariness.

For Americans, one set of challenges shifted to another. The men, previously pounding the pavement for work, now marched to war. Women traded personal kitchen gardens for community victory gardens, and found themselves in factories, laboring to feed their families while their men were away. Instead of no money, Americans’ greater focus became loved ones in harm’s way, gas rationing, and shortage of supplies such as tires and sugar.

In such times of despair and uncertainty, might these comic book heroes have transported their fans to another world…splashed some comic relief into their lives…even if only for a few moments? Perhaps Jobless Joe pictured Superman picking him up by his coat tails and delivering him to the door of an eager employer. Betty Button Maker may have envisioned Wonder Woman’s golden lasso easing the burdens imposed by a harsh taskmaster. And might Charlie Childheart, torn between fear and a salute, have imagined his daddy strutting alongside a tank in a faraway land with Captain America at his side?

Only ten cents a copy, comic books were new and colorful and offered escape to universes inhabited by bigger-than-life heroes. And oh how Americans must have welcomed such diversions! It should come as no surprise that this era became known as The Golden Age of Comic Books (1938-1956).

However, despite this decade of superhero fanaticism, by the late 1940s their popularity began to diminish. Some have opined those exciting characters had become boring. Maybe the crises in America had dissipated. Regardless of the cause, publishers slowly changed out superheroes for other genres. War, westerns, romance, crime, and even horror, drew comic book fans’ interest.

Yet−and not so surprising−by 1956, superheroes showed that they may have been rendered powerless for a short while, but they were not defeated. They emerged again, unleashing The Silver Age of Comic Books (1956-1970), with encores of the Bronze Age (1970-1984)  and Modern Age (mid-1980s to date). Nowadays, comic book stores, clubs, conventions, and successful full-length motion pictures, prove the timelessness of beloved superheroes.

For today’s writers, comic books and their superheroes have the power to zoom in with a flurry of creative ideas. Historical fiction writers might find that the plights of Americans during The Great Depression and World War II, teamed up with the popularity of comic book superheroes, provide much fodder for true-to-life plots colored by a comic-book-loving (or hating? Oh no!) character or two. Or maybe, for the sci-fi or fantasy writer, visions of the vast universe on display in comic books might birth new and glorious superheroes for their 21st century masterpieces.

Comic Relief− still swooping in to save the day.

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry. 

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In the Midst of the Flames by JP Robinson

New from Authorpreneur columnist JP Robinson! 
In the Midst of the Flames is the second book in the epic Northshire Heritage trilogy which spans the full duration of the first world war.  Publisher’s Weekly called In the Shadow of Your Wings (Book 1 of the trilogy) “an immersive beginning to a series that will appeal to fans of war dramas.” JP Robinson writes Christian historical and political fiction. As an author with a penchant for thrillers, he sets high-stakes scenarios against the backdrop of biblical themes.


Back cover blurb


Europe is burning.

As the fires of the Great War rage across the European continent, the Steele family is caught in the midst of the inferno.

Estranged from his wife, and haunted by a lie, Malcolm wonders if he can ever find forgiveness as he begins the long journey home to Northshire.

Meanwhile, Leila desperately searches for a way to escape her past life as a spy—and the German agent who has been sent to kill her—as she struggles to save her marriage.

Determined to save his family, Thomas risks everything in a high-stakes political gamble, jeopardizing the entire Allied cause and bringing Britain to the brink of obliteration, as British spymaster Robert Hughes plots his downfall.Will everything be reduced to ashes? Or does God still protect those who, through faith, walk into the midst of the flames?
Bio:

JP began his writing career as a freelance journalist, then moved on to the fields of B2B, B2C and entrepreneurial marketing. In addition to frequently leading workshops at Christian Writer’s conferences, he now heads Logos Publications,LLC an emerging publishing house and author-focused marketing ally. 

Moving into the fields of Relationship and Geo-marketing, JP has assisted renowned medical and non-profit groups achieve their promotional goals. He holds degrees in both English and French and is a state-certified teacher of French and History.  

Together with his wonderful wife, JP runs Fearless Marriage, a ministry dedicated to Christian couples. When  he  isn’t writing or teaching, JP loves spending time with his wife and children. Connect with him, watch videos and more on his exciting website:  JPRobinsonbooks.com.

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History in the Making

BOGGED DOWN IN CRANBERRY SAUCE: A condensed history of a Thanksgiving favorite

Think cranberries!

From there, it’s not a long stretch to thoughts of Thanksgiving. And for a writer, creative juices might quickly stir up a Thanksgiving scene. Preparation of the feast provides a pantry full of opportunities to introduce characters and reveal personalities. Perhaps it creates tension, exposes secrets, or puts on an explosive display of the family dynamics.

Picture it:         The hero says something−maybe innocently, maybe not.

The heroine’s blood boils akin to the cranberries and sugar bubbling furiously in the pot.

Or not.

If this piece is contemporary, the character can confidently cook up a pot of homemade cranberry sauce. It might be the traditional recipe of cranberries, water and sugar, or a zesty rendition with spices such as cinnamon, cardamom, or ginger.

But what if this piece is historical?

Was cranberry sauce readily available in the time period?

Consider the following:

The First Feast. Cranberries were native to northeast North America, thus they were likely not familiar to the settlers who had recently immigrated from Europe. Historians opine that the newcomers’ sugar supply had been depleted and they had no bread. Rising out of that and the influence of the local Indians, it has been suggested that raw cranberries and nuts might have been used to stuff the local fowl for that infamous meal.

Sweet and Saucy.

We may never know who concocted the first batch of cranberry sauce, or when. However, both German and Scandinavian immigrants are believed to have brought across the ocean the concept of cooking fruit. Further, John Josselyn, an English traveler  (c. 1671),  writes of boiling cranberries in water with sugar.

By the mid to late-nineteenth century, published cookbooks, which included recipes for cranberry sauce, appeared. The recipes reflected not only what has become traditional cranberry sauce (berries, water and sugar), but also the variations devised by pioneer cooks, such as sugar substitutes (honey, brown sugar, syrup, or molasses) and methods of preparation (mashing and straining, length of time to cook, and when to add sugar).

Availability of Cranberries. Early settlers in the New England region might have picked cranberries for their Thanksgiving table. However, folks living in other areas of America were likely dependent upon buying those celebratory berries in the marketplace…if the proprietors could acquire them.

The appearance of cranberry bogs in 1816 brought about an increase in the commercial distribution of cranberries. Nevertheless, markets would have remained limited to their seasonal nature (September to November), and to available modes of transportation from bog to market.

For example: Does the 19th century mid-west Mom and Pop general store boast a basket full of cranberries? Does the farmer’s wife have money to purchase a pound?

Canned Cranberry Sauce. In 1912, Marcus L. Urann explored canning cranberries. Success would expand the fruit’s availability from just the seasonal months to year round. By 1930, he joined with competing cranberry growers to form a cooperative which ultimately became Ocean Spray. Canned cranberry sauce arrived on market shelves in time for America’s 1941 Thanksgiving feast.

What can a writer glean from these tidbits to enhance a Thanksgiving scene?

For a basic historical setting, it may be enough to know that after 1890 the cook might open a cookbook or pull out a family recipe. After 1941, canned cranberry sauce might be the pick for the table.

However, if a main character is an aspiring and imaginative cook, or the plot is set in a cranberry growing community, getting bogged down in research on cranberry sauce might be a berry good experience.

Happy Feasting!

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry. 

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Bestsellers

Interview with Best-selling Author Sarah Sundin

Can you share a little about your recent book?

Burdened by his past, fighter pilot Lt. Adler Paxton battles the Luftwaffe over Nazi-occupied Europe as the Allies struggle for control of the air before D-day. Violet Lindstrom wants to be a missionary, but for now she serves in the American Red Cross, where she arranges activities at Adler’s air base in England. Drawn to the mysterious Adler, she enlists his help with her programs for local children. Adler finds his defenses crumbling. But D-day draws near. And secrets can’t stay buried forever.

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

I write because I can’t stop. The stories won’t leave me alone. I never start a novel with a theme in mind, but the theme develops from the characters and what they’re learning.

In the Sunrise at Normandy series, the heroes are three brothers who are estranged from each other. Forgiveness is the overarching theme of the series, and each novel in the series explores forgiveness from a different angle.

How long have you been writing?

Almost twenty years now.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

It took several years before I was ready to submit, and then I had five years of rejection letters before receiving my first contract. My first contract resulted from a submission to an editor at Mount Hermon Christian Writers Conference, and my first novel, A Distant Melody, was published ten years after I first started writing.

Which of your books is your favorite?

I have three adult children. I have no favorites. Same with my books.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

In The Sky Above Us, there are some heart-wrenching scenes—I take perverse pleasure writing those. There are some action scenes—the hero is a fighter pilot on D-day—and those scenes were great fun to write. But the scenes I loved writing most were when Adler and Violet were together and bantering.

How long does it take you to write a book?

I write one book a year—that involves research, outlining, the rough draft, editing, and promotion.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

It’s definitely a full-time job! Since I’m not a morning person, I spend my mornings on emails, social media, and business aspects of writing. Over lunch, I read research books. In the afternoons, my brain kicks in and I focus on the actual writing.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I don’t think so. I don’t need special candles or snacks or music. When I started writing, my kids were little, so I learned to write anytime and anywhere. Even though I have a quiet empty nest and my own office now, those habits have continued.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

While contracts and awards are wonderful, my absolute favorite moments are when I receive a message from a reader that one of my books touched them deeply. When I hear that a story helped a reader through a difficult time, or that a character’s journey gave the reader a personal insight, or that God used a story to teach courage or forgiveness or humility—well, those fill me with incredible joy.

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

Probably a bad contest score at the end of my rejection-letter years. I felt very confident about my entry and was convinced it was my year. It wasn’t. What hurt more than the score—which was pretty brutal—was that I’d already submitted the same entry to editors at Mount Hermon. For a few days I was convinced I’d wasted years of my life in a futile attempt to get published. But family and friends and the Lord bolstered me. And that submission at Mount Hermon was the one that led to my first contract.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

I lost count. For five years, my first novel was rejected by just about every editor and agent in the business. But I wouldn’t trade those years for anything. Not only did I improve in my writing and in my knowledge of the publishing industry, but the Lord used it to teach me about humility and His sovereignty and His perfect timing.

Where do you get your ideas?

All sorts of places—historical events, news articles, what-if questions, songs, even from a dream.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Too many to name!! I hate to list any because I might accidentally omit writers I love.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have heeded?

Patience, patience, patience. I received this advice over and over but resisted it. Over time I’ve learned to trust in God’s perfect timing.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writer’s make?

Rushing to publish. The advent of self-publishing has been a wonderful gift, but many promising writers now publish after—or before—the first rejection. It takes time to learn the craft of writing, and those rejections and contest losses teach you vital lessons.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

Writing conferences. I can’t recommend conferences highly enough. You learn about the craft and the industry. You meet publishing professionals and get to know them as human beings. You receive professional feedback and often have the opportunity to pitch or submit. And you meet other writers on the journey and forge lasting friendships.

Sarah Sundin

Sarah Sundin is the bestselling author of historical novels, including The Sea Before Us, The Sky Above Us, and The Land Beneath Us (coming February 2020) Her novel The Sea Before Us received the 2019 Reader’s Choice Award from Faith, Hope, and Love, When Tides Turn and Through Waters Deep were named to Booklist’s “101 Best Romance Novels of the Last 10 Years,” and Through Waters Deep was a finalist for the 2016 Carol Award and won the INSPY Award. A mother of three, Sarah lives in California. Please visit her at www.sarahsundin.com

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History in the Making

Is This Story Historical?

As a writer, I like to continue writing flash fiction or short stories while working on a novel. My head is just too full of ideas and characters to focus on just my big project.

Recently, I found a short story contest I thought I could enter. The rules were simple and they were asking for clean contemporary romance. I began to write and the story was flowing.

Then I had an interesting conversation with someone who told me that if I’m writing for Young Adult (YA), in order for it to be contemporary, the story has to include today’s technology – laptops, tablets, smart phones, etc. I wasn’t writing for YA so I wasn’t worried, but decided to search for a current definition of “contemporary” fiction. The definition I found stated that anything after World War II is considered “contemporary”. So I thought I was okay.

But a little doubt kept niggling at the back of my head. Therefore I went to the contest website and posted my question: What is your definition of “contemporary”? A few days later a response came: anything that includes current technology.

I was flabbergasted! I mean, I’m a 50+ woman and don’t really consider things from my youth “historical”, but apparently things like pen pals who actually write snail mail are. Today’s technology didn’t exist in my youth. Therefore, the story I had begun did not qualify for this “contemporary short story contest”.

The story came to an abrupt halt, but my heart was broken. I love these characters and want to tell their story, but now there isn’t a pressing reason. I have a real historical romance novel to finish revising and send out into the world. Therefore, I don’t have time to work on a story I thought was “contemporary” but learned in today’s world is “historical”. So sadly, this story will have to wait, and maybe, instead of a short story, it will become a full-fledged “contemporary romance” story.

What’s the point of this article and what does it have to do with writing historical fiction?

The point is that you may have ideas for more wonderful historical fiction stories than you might think. If you’re in the 50+ age group, you, evidently, have a wealth of experience you could use to birth an historical fiction story. As long as your setting doesn’t include any of today’s technology, you can claim “historical fiction”.

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: https://kellyfbarr.com/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/kellyb_26

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History in the Making

The Epistolary Novel Form

The popularity of this literary device dropped off prior to the turn of the nineteenth century, but its recent resurgence is something authors of Historical Fiction should take note of. Stories set in the past are perfect for telling through diaries or letters. It can give your reader a deeper connection to your characters than even first person POV.

Have you ever taken a sneak peek into someone else’s journal? That naughty element of voyeurism took you deep into their inner thoughts. It exposed things about that person you would not otherwise know. But in the Epistolary genre, even though diaries and letters are personal, reading them is allowed! You are encouraged to discover the writer’s deepest, darkest secrets, or read the private correspondence between two people.

What is Epistolary Style?

Epistle is the ancient name for letter. Epistolary is when a novel is composed entirely of letters or diary entries. Although, the contemporary epistolary genre may use emails, texts, and blog entries. It makes you feel as though you are receiving a running commentary of the ongoing events in the character’s lives.

Epistolary Novels Can Be:

· Monologic: The focus on one character.

·Dialogic: Two characters corresponding.

·Polylogic: Multiple people are represented.

Epistolary Novels of the Past and Present:

Arguably, the best known Epistolary novels are Dracula by Bram Stoker and Frankenstein by Mary Shelley. Both frame their text in letters and convey how powerful the use of intimate correspondence for narrative viewpoint can be. Both are still responsible for blood curdling nightmares centuries after they were written.

The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis is a Christian apologetic novel written in the epistolary style. A senior demon, Screwtape, mentors his incompetent nephew, Wormwood, through a series of letters on how to secure the soul of a man.

The Color Purple by Alice Walker is a heartbreakingly poignant novel. Celie, a fourteen-year-old girl, unfolds her traumatic life before us through letters she has written to God. Make sure you have a box of tissues nearby.

The Many Lives & Secret Sorrows of Josephine B. is the first novel in a well-crafted trilogy by Sandra Gulland. All three are written as though from the personal journals of Josephine Bonaparte, wife of Napoleon. Sandra Gulland reveals the sequence of events before, during, and after the French Revolution through the intimate sentiments of an island girl named Rose, who grew up to be Josephine, Empress of France.

One Voice or a Network of Voices.

Get your creative juices flowing and think of the many different forms this literary device could take in your next novel. You can use: post cards, newspaper clippings, memos, notes, or stick with the power of the personal letter. You can use one voice in a journal, like Sandra Gulland, or a network of voices, like Bram Stoker used with journals, letters, and newspaper clipping. In World War Z, Max Brook used interviews with survivors of the Zombie apocalypse for a United Nations report.

The Power of a Letter.

The Epistles comprise the majority of the books written in the New Testament. These Holy Spirit inspired letters, written to specific churches or people two thousand years ago, still speak into our lives today. They give us personal and significant insight, and even fresh revelation that we can use in our Christian walk.

Sometimes it takes my breath away to think on it.

The Epistles are a perfect example of how powerful using a letter to communicate can be. So, consider using this literary device in your next novel. And perhaps harness a little of that power as a Christian novelist.

K. D. Holmberg is an author, blogger, and freelance writer. She is a member of ACFW, Word Weavers International, and a founding member of the Jerry Jenkins Writers Guild. She is represented by Hartline Literary Agency. A retired flight attendant, she has traveled and lived all over the globe. She and her husband, Keith, love to golf and live in South Carolina. You can find more about her: Facebook @authorkdholmberg, twitter @kdeniseholmberg, and website authorkdholmberg.com

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History in the Making

A GLIMPSE OF EARLY TELEVISION

The youngster thought it her privilege to pick the name for her soon-to-be-born sibling. She gleefully and toothlessly spit out, “Pebbles!”

This casual mention of a cartoon character in the book I was reading triggered a warm fuzzy in my heart and a thought in my brain. Whether we write contemporary or historical fiction, incorporating specific TV programming can enhance the experience of readers.

For example, a scene from our story might read:

            Heroine made dinner while the children watched television in the living room.

Simple, almost boring. But the scene comes alive if we include the program.

Heroine made dinner, smiling at the giggles from her two children who sat in the living room watching Ernie and Elmo, their favorite Sesame Street friends.

Or, consider a scene with our Hero and Heroine:

The day had been long and Heroine hoped to veg in front of the television with Hero.

 Instead, ruminate on this:

The day had been long and Heroine hoped to veg in front of Wheel of Fortune and Jeopardy. Hero switched the channel to the Red Sox game.

With the above change, not only did we learn something about both characters, we created a bit of tension.

Before using early television programming in our work, we should ask a few questions.

Critical to writers of historical fiction: “Did they even have television then?”

Televisions were commercially released in 1938, though few homes could afford them. However, by the early 1950s, half of American homes had a TV set in their living room. This new phenomenon was boxy in appearance with an antenna (nicknamed rabbit ears). Programming was limited to only a few channels and the picture appeared grainy and in black and white. As technology progressed, screen size and picture quality increased. The number of channels expanded from a few to 13 to cable additions. By the mid-1960s, it was common to have a color television in the home.

Also, important: What programs were popular? Would our readers likely recognize them today or do we need to include an explanation?

The following is a grocery-store sampling of what folks in America might have been watching during the early decades of television.

1940s

Howdy Doody, the first children’s program, aired in 1947 and ran for 13 years.

Truman delivered the first televised presidential address to the nation (October 5, 1947).

These Are My Children was the first daytime soap opera. (1947)

1950s

I Love Lucy (1951)

The Tonight Show (1954)

Gunsmoke (1957) and Bonanza (1959)

1960s

The Beatles appeared on the Ed Sullivan show (February 9, 1964)

Star Trek (1966)

60 Minutes (1968-date)

Sesame Street (1969-date)

1970s

Monday Night Football (1970-2005)

M*A*S*H (1972-1983)

Nickelodian (1977)

ESPN on cable (1979)

If the above doesn’t stimulate our creative juices, an internet search of television programming by decade should provide a buffet of ideas that can (1) add another smattering of detail to our stories, (2) endear a character to our readers’ hearts, and/or (3) augment character development.

Whether comedy or drama or a memorable event, why not experiment with a glimpse of TV programming in our next writing project?

Jeannine Brummett lives in South Carolina with her husband of nineteen years, Don, who shares his three adult sons and three grandchildren with her. Reading is big on her list of things to do, but she also thrives on TV crime dramas, NBA basketball, and marvels at the critters and fowl life that live at the pond behind their house. She loves to sing praise songs, attend Bible Study, and help at a local food pantry. 

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History in the Making

How Much Research is Required in Historical Fiction?

As an historical romance author, I love history. I love learning about different historical time periods and the events that took place during those periods. I love learning what life was like during those periods: what people wore, what they ate, their jobs—everything about their lives. I love including  many of these historical facts into my stories. However, this presents two problems: 1) how much research should or must I do; and 2) how much of the historical facts can actually be used in the story.

Let’s take a look at these problems one at a time. First, “how much research should or must I do”? If you talk to historical writers, many offer a different answer when asked how much research they do. One writer told me they spend months or even a year researching before they even begin to write their story. Another writer told me they do “as little as possible”. So I have come to the conclusion that there is no real requirement or “must” in the amount of research to be done.

Next, “how much research should I do”? I can’t say that either of the writers, mentioned above, is right or wrong in the amount of research they do, but here is my own experience. As a pantser, I did some research before beginning my current WIP—enough to have a solid, well-rounded main character and enough to know what his job required.

As I wrote, I sometimes had to stop to research something I hadn’t thought about before starting to write. One of those things was horses—my main character’s job deals with a lot of horses, and I knew little about them. Other things gave me pause throughout my writing as well, but I had no problem stopping, doing some researching, then continuing my story.

One thing I had to learn: there is such a thing as too much research. What do I mean? Well, some friends and I were shopping in a used book store, and I was about one-half to two-thirds finished with my novel, when one of my friends shows me a book she found on something that was paramount to the life of my main character. I got excited and bought the book.

When I got the book home and began to read it, I grew frustrated as I was learning more about the subject than I already knew and felt like I’d need to go back and rewrite and change a lot of stuff in my novel to include more historical facts.

Once again I spoke to other historical fiction writers and was told, “You have to draw the line on research somewhere. Otherwise, you could research for years.” I realized the truth of those words and put the book away. Besides, I write historical “fiction”. That means not everything in the story has to be historical fact, and maybe, in the future, I’ll write a short story or some magazine articles using that book.

Where do you draw the line between too little and too much research?

Kelly F. Barr lives in Lancaster County, Pennsylvania. She is married and has three sons. She writes historical romance. She has also been a blogger for ten years, and every Friday, you can find her Flash Fiction stories posted for your reading pleasure. She loves her family, including the family dog, books, walks, and chai lattes.

You can find her online at:

Website: https://kellyfbarr.com/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/kellyb_26

Facebook: Kelly F. Barr, Writer

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Bestsellers

Award-Winning Author Interview with J’Nell Ciesielski

Can you share a little about your recent book?

The idea for The Songbird and the Spy came to me after watching a movie with a British soldier who posed as a Nazi to spy for the Allies. One of his rendezvous happened in this little French bar, and I though aha! Now that would be interesting. Could a woman fall in love with the enemy and what would that look like? The story would be ripe for drama!

Why do you write? Do you have a theme, message, or goal for your books?

I write because I have to write. It’s really that simple. Writing is how I express myself, and if I keep it all inside I’ll explode. I love telling stories and bringing to life characters in situations that I find fascinating and will continue to do just that for as long as I can.

To be perfectly honest, I didn’t start out with an intended message. I wanted to tell a fairly common story of falling for the wrong person with a twist of secret identities. Along the way, threads of not judging at first glance and finding unlikely bonds of love wove together in surprising ways. But it is the small deeds of courage in the face of evil that are the soul to this story. Every day people striving to do what’s right, taking risks no matter the fallout or danger to themselves because there is a rightness that goes above personal gain. I hope it gives people courage, no matter how small or significant they believe their role in life to be.

How long have you been writing?

My very first award winning story was written in fifth grade. A romance between an apple core and a trash can. However, I didn’t get serious until I was a junior in college where I put everything but the kitchen sink into that first novel. Riddled with beginner mistakes, it’ll probably never see the light of day, but sixteen years later and I’m still plodding away with all new stories.

And how long did it take you to get your first major book contract? Or are you published non-traditionally? How did that come about?

Let’s see, my serious writing didn’t start until around 2003 and it wasn’t until 2013 when I landed my agent. After a year of querying agents, she was the very last one I sent to haha. I finally got The Call from Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas on Palm Sunday 2017. In between all those years I kept writing and writing, and learning, and entering contests, and joining writers’ groups, and writing some more. I never kept idle.

How long does it take you to write a book?

I’ve been clocking about one year per book. From the time I start research to the end of the final draft. Once my daughter starts kindergarten later this year I anticipate my writing productivity to significantly increase.

What’s your writing work schedule like?

I’m a stay at home mom so most of my day revolves around keeping a little person alive. Around 1 pm she heads into her room for quiet time and that’s when my writing begins. I get about 2 ½ hours to put words on paper before she comes breezing out again. At night time I’ll try to go over the pages I wrote earlier or do some reading.

Do you have an interesting writing quirk? If so, what is it?

I wouldn’t classify this as a quirk, but I like silence when I write. Or very soft instrumental music at the least. Too much movement and sound takes me out of the head space I need to be in while unfolding the story.

What has been your greatest joy(s) in your writing career?

It’s pretty hard to top publication. Years of work and perseverance and it finally pays off when you hold that creation in your hand for the first time. It’s absolutely amazing, but the thing that has and continues to bring me the most joy is getting that story of my heart onto paper. Even if no one else reads it, the story burning inside me comes out. It’s cathartic.

What has been your darkest moment(s)?

The days of self-doubt. For a writer they come often and swift. One minute you’re glowing in the perfection of loquacious prose, and the next banging your head on the keyboard crying whut r werds? It’s a rollercoaster, I tell ya. Nothing kills creativity faster than thinking you’re not good enough. Your story and your words aren’t good enough. That no one will ever read this dribble you dare to call an attempt of writing. I can’t tell you the number of times I cried myself into a pint of ice cream/pan of brownies/wedge of cake wishing I had the talent of so-and-so. But, from the very beginning I’ve said that I write for me, even if no one else ever reads my stories, I’ll keep writing for me and hopefully, with a bit of stardust, someday I’ll be someone’s favorite author.

Which of your books is your favorite?

You realize this is one of the most difficult questions asked of a writer, right? But that’s why you do it. My absolute favorite hasn’t been published yet. It’s the story of my heart, but it’s time has not come yet to share. Sooo, out of the two published novels I’d have to say Among the Poppies is my favorite. It holds a special place in my heart because it was my first published book, and even while writing it I knew there was something special about it. It began my love affair with WWI.

Who is your favorite author to read?

Tolkien. The gift of story that man gave to the world is nothing short of astounding. He gave me the bravery to dig deep inside myself for possibilities I didn’t realize could exist.

What advice can you give aspiring writers that you wished you had gotten, or that you wished you would have listened too?

Never give up! If this is truly a passion and you can’t imagine doing anything else, read, read, read. Reading expands your use of language and imagination. Learn everything you can about the craft and industry, enter contests, join writer’s groups, but most importantly, write. Write every day because that is how you become a writer instead of someone wishing they could write.

How many times in your career have you experienced rejection? How did they shape you?

Hahaha! Too many times to count. No one likes rejections. They’re defeating to the soul. Whenever I get a rejection, I take one day to mope about it. Get all that anger/sadness/frustration out in one big swoop then I’m back to work the next day. You can’t dwell on the negative because it will cripple anything positive you’re trying to produce.

Do you have a favorite character or scene in one of your books?

Hoffenberg from The Songbird and the Spy is one of my favorite characters. He’s brash, eager, and loyal. I just love the lines he has because they’re completely unfiltered.

Where do you get your ideas?

Most of the time, if not always, my inspiration comes from a trifecta of resources: movies, music, or books. A single song lyric, or secondary character, or novel setting can trigger a whole world of possibilities that has to be explored.

What are common mistakes you see aspiring writer’s make?

Not taking the time to learn their craft. There’s so much more than simply putting words on paper and then sending it off expecting that an agent or publisher will snap it up. Like anything you want to achieve, you have to learn skills and then practice those skills again and again.

Where/How do you recommend writers try to break into the market?

This is a toughie even for me! Learn everything you can about writing, implement it into your stories to write the best book you can, network with other writers, attend conferences, and enter contests. Eventually, all that hard work will pay off.

Author bio:

Believing she was born in the wrong era, J’nell Ciesielski spends her days writing heart-stopping heroes, brave heroines, and adventurous exploits in times gone by. Winner of the Romance Through the Ages contest and Maggie Award, J’nell can often be found dreaming of a second home in Scotland, indulging in chocolate of any kind, or watching old black and white movies. Born a Florida girl, she now calls Virginia home, along with her very understanding husband, young daughter, and one lazy beagle.

Social Media links:

Website: Jnellciesielski.com
Facebook: Jnellciesielski
Twitter: twitter.com/JnellCiesielski
Goodreads: goodreads.com/jnellciesielski
Pinterest: Jnellciesielski

Her Books:

Among the Poppies

The Songbird and the Spy