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The Power of Prosody

When we think of songwriting, we often think of the lyrics—that is, the actual words spewing from our lips. Or, we may be thinking about the musical portion, if we’re a musician. But what makes a powerful song is not only the lyrics and the music, but the actual prosody of the song or even of the delivery.

Let us start by answering the question: “What is prosody?”

In music, prosody can be seen as the culmination of tone, pitch, meter, rhythm, tempo, loudness, softness, etc. in the delivery of the lyrics and music as a whole. How a person delivers the line of a song is just as important as the line itself.  The delivery of a word is just as important as the word itself. There is power in how a word is spoken. There is more power in how a phrase is sung. Whether we whisper something vengeful like, “I hate you.”  Or shout the words, “I love you!” The very tone, pitch, and loudness tell us something. It is through tone that gives our words believability. How a word or group of words is delivered is equally a part of songwriting as the actual written words or musical portion itself.

If someone is speaking to you sarcastically, you can usually tell by how they are saying their words, not by what they are saying. How you deliver words in a song is important. Imagine if you sang something with the same tone and pitch throughout the entire song (and sadly, I have seen this happen!) Imagine if you sang without emotion. It wouldn’t be a very interesting song, would it? If you are singing a sad ballad about someone dying, and yet, you have no emotion in your voice, the song wouldn’t be considered believable. But if the singer’s voice cracks and is close to tears, you may find yourself drying your eyes, overwhelmed with empathy.

But song prosody is more than that. It is also about how the lyrics marry the music. The way the lines are delivered and the tone of the content of the song must match the musical portion of the song, whether it’s in the key that is used, the tempo, the volume, or even the instrumentation.  If you have a song about being happy, you want your musical instrumentation to support that. What instruments make you think of happy? What would your tempo be for happy? It would be… happy, right? Probably fast-paced and upbeat. And you wouldn’t want your happy song to be sung in a minor key. The music would say sad and dark but the lyrics happy. It would be Frankenstein, and nobody would understand it because the lyrics oppose the emotional feel of the music. That’s bad prosody.

For happy, I would choose an upbeat tempo with drums, some brass instruments, perhaps even a trumpet to lead, and it would have to be written in a major key, like the song, “Happy”, by Pharrell Williams.

But if I want to write a song about emotional pain, I would probably choose a piano dripping in reverb with a slow tempo, written in a minor key, like the song “Angel”, by Sarah McLachlin. Or If I wanted the music to be harder, I could go grunge with heavy electric guitars chunking out chords.

Sometimes, we don’t hear lyrics at all. What we hear is how words fit together, mingled with how they are sung, reaching a certain pitch or note—mainly in the chorus. And if it’s done well, the song will stick with us for years and years to come. Think of the most memorable songs from your childhood. Now think about what lines stick out to you the most. It is usually because that particular line has a harmonious marriage to the music and reaches some sort of climatic peak that gives pleasure to the ears.

More than just the volume, meter, tone, or pitch of your voice, sometimes breaks without singing can speak volumes in the song. It’s not always what we say—sometimes it’s what we don’t say and taking a breath for a quarter or half note can tell part of the story. When The Supremes sang, “Stop in the Name of Love,” the producer had Diana Ross pause after saying the word, “stop.” That little break changed the song and made it memorable for decades. Another example of prosody is when Garth Brooks sang “Friends in Low Paces,” every time he said the word “low,” he sang it with a much lower note than the rest of the song.

By understanding prosody, you can enhance your songwriting from amateur to professional level. Just like writing a short story, the important key is to go ahead and write out what you want to say. Write your song’s first draft. Then, go back and take out words, replace words, and edit, edit, edit. Then, fine-tune your work with prosody in mind. What instrumentation and lyrics really sell what you are trying to say, and how can you marry the two? Can it be done by matching a word to a note, changing a rhythm pattern, or changing tempo? What else within the song reflects your theme?

Is there a future songwriting topic you would like to discuss? Would you like me to evaluate your songs? Please write me and let me know!

 

Matthew Hawk Eldridge is a sleepless, coffee addicted, calico-cat hugging, Renaissance man. When he’s not passionately penning screenplays or stories rich in musical history, he’s writing songs on his guitar or working on a film as an actor, double, or musician. He is a Creative Writing graduate student at Full Sail University.

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(Writing the) Bridge of Freedom

Last month, we discussed writing a song from a premise, and how our premise will dictate what we want the song to say in the verses and chorus. I shared how the chorus is the theme of the song. It tells us what the song is really about, and how the verses support that theme. That is why we will return to the chorus and repeat it, but not the verses.

There are plenty of songs out there with a great melody tied between good verses and a strong chorus. However, a good number of great songs contain a bridge of some sort, and this is where freedom comes in, because a bridge can go in any direction. The only thing that limits a bridge is that the entire song needs to be between three to four and a half minutes long for airplay.

If verses support the chorus, and the chorus tells us what the main theme of the song is about, then the bridge can act as another statement, either equally as important as the chorus, or as another group of supportive lyrics, encouraging the chorus theme from another angle, or it can usurp the chorus and be the true ultimate statement of the theme. This usually happens if the bridge is at the end of a song.

The bridge can also act as a place of reflection, allowing it to be a musical interlude with a different melody than the verses or chorus. Or, it can even be a statement that totally contradicts the chorus, as if the songwriter is conflicted in what he wants or believes. Add contradictory chords to an already contradictory lyric and you can create the conflicted chaotic mood the songwriter wants the bridge to have. Remember the emo days? I usually go to a minor chord if I’m creating conflict, or a positive sounding, full, major chord if I’m being climatic. I also play with instrumentation or pianissimo or forte’ to make my point stronger and have the bridge stand out. This is the beauty of the bridge! Do what you want!

Whereas most songs in pop culture follow a generic pattern overall, the bridge itself can be inserted in a variety of places. It can also be written for a variety of reasons—to either support the chorus, to be the final statement, to reflect, or to contradict. It can be any length (within reason) you want it to be. It can be a single line, a couple of measures, or hijack the end of the song. And sometimes songs can have two bridges in their short four minutes. However, the majority of bridges are extremely short, under a full stanza.

Let’s take a look at the chorus for of the song, I Won’t Let You Go, by the band, Switchfoot. If you have never heard the song, I suggest you listen to it.

Jon Foreman does a wonderful job interweaving two different bridges into the mix: the first one acting as a quick, reflective period, the second one coming at the end of the song and making a final, ultimate statement. Before we evaluate the bridge, let’s review the chorus.

Chorus:

 If you could only let your guard down / You could learn to trust me somehow /
I swear, that I won’t let you go /
If you could only let go your doubts / If you could just believe in me now /
I swear, that I won’t let you go / I won’t let you go

Without reading the verses, we can see the song is about someone telling us that they won’t let us go. The song is about trusting God to not let us go.

The first bridge starts at around 2:47 and is just one simple line before jumping back into the chorus for a third time.

Bridge 1

I’ll always be by your side…

It’s simple, short, and sweet, and makes a strong point: I’ll always be there for you. Nothing else needed.

After singing the chorus for the third time, the music takes an octane boost and becomes louder and stronger, which compliments the second bridge. These are the final words of the song and ultimately tells us that nothing will ever separate us from the love of God.

Bridge 2

There ain’t no darkness strong enough that could tear you out from my heart /
There ain’t no strength that’s strong enough that could tear this love apart /

Never gonna let you go / Never gonna let you go

 If you are writing songs, the bridge is what can add dimension and take your song up a notch. After writing the meat of your song, I would suggest playing around with trying different bridges. Strangely enough, sometimes the bridge is the hardest part to write because there is so much freedom. Happy writing!

What aspect of songwriting would you like to hear next? Feel free to contact me and let me know.

Matthew Hawk Eldridge is a sleepless, coffee addicted, Renaissance man. When he’s not passionately penning screenplays or stories rich in musical history, he’s writing songs on his guitar or working on a film as an actor, double, songwriter, or musician. He is a Creative Writing graduate student at Full Sail University.

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Understanding Songwriting Structure

If you have been following my articles on songwriting, perhaps you’re ready to write your first song. There are a few guidelines I would like to show you to get you started. Much like a haiku or even a piece of flash or hint fiction, there’s a definite pattern to successful songwriting, and your verbiage is limited. One of the biggest amateur mistakes is to write a song over five minutes, especially if that song contains little structure or design. Sure, it has happened, but rarely since the 1800’s.

Let’s start with the premise of the song. What is your song about? What is it you are trying to say? What is your point? Without a premise, you lose focus of what you are writing or why you are writing it. Think about it, you only have a few lines of chorus to truly say what you want to say, and then a few stanzas of poetry to support that chorus. Your words have to be carefully chosen: much like a haiku: much like a twenty-five word hint fiction.

Our premise becomes our song’s logline. It’s a song about what? It’s a song about a sinner who finds Jesus?  It’s a song about a man who lost his wife? It’s a song about a father having a hard time seeing his little princess grow up and get married? Once you have your logline of a song, you can develop your chorus idea. You don’t have to perfect your chorus at this point. You just want the chorus idea down.

There are literally 3 parts to a great song. There’s the verse, the chorus, and the bridge. We’ve talked about the chorus. The chorus supports the premise or the theme of your song.  The verse is what gives us the story. The verse paints different pictures that give the chorus credibility. Most songs on the radio have one or two verses then a chorus, followed by another verse or two, then the chorus. Let’s take a look at one of my recent, favorite songs called All My Hope, by David Crowder.

Studying the structure of a song

As we can see in the first verse, David gives us an introduction to our lead character, in first person.

I’ve been held by the savior / I’ve felt fire from above / I’ve been down to the river / I ain’t the same—a prodigal returned

In four simple lines (most verses are four lines), we learn who he is. But we still don’t know the premise or theme of the song. These four lines lead to that, which is found in the chorus. So what is our song about? Let’s see what David wrote for the chorus:

All my hope is in Jesus / Thank God my yesterday’s gone / All my sins are forgiven / I’ve been washed by the blood

Ah! Now we understand what the song is about! It’s about being forgiven! It’s about erasing the past through the blood of Jesus! It’s about the hope in Jesus that makes it all possible! That’s the premise! Jesus washes away our sins so we can be forgiven!

But then he moves on to the second verse to give us a little bit more into the story and description. The first verse was an introduction to who he is. The chorus told us the premise. The second verse now tells us a little more about who he is. No more need for introductions, this is him, wide open.

I’m no stranger to the prison / I’ve worn shackles and chains / But I’ve been freed and forgiven / I’m not going back—I’ll never be the same

This poetic verse makes you want to clap for him, doesn’t it? It’s a proclamation. The first two lines tell us a little deeper about his sin, the second two lines reminds us of the premise, supporting the chorus! Now we jump back into the chorus, with even more gusto!

If we lay out our structure, we have an ABAB pattern. It’s simple. A is the verses, B is the chorus. David adds another B for emphasis. This song reads, ABABB. The total length of this song is just over three minutes. For playability on radio, songs must be at least 3 minutes, but under five minutes. The target is between three to four minutes. However, if you listen to praise and worship, that’s often not going to happen, unless they make a radio friendly version of the song. There have been album versions of worship songs that are over 10 minutes long, albeit, the actual lyrical portion was under five.

Next month, we’ll talk about a little more advanced songwriting—adding the bridge and the purpose of it. Is there a songwriting topic you would like to discuss? Please feel free to write me at matthewhawkeldridge@gmail.com

 

Matthew Hawk Eldridge is a sleepless, coffee addicted, Renaissance man currently working in the film industry while attending grad school for creative writing. His latest novel, The Pan: Experiencing Neverland, can be found on Amazon. His album, Overcome, releases June 1st.