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Giving Thanks

There are many ways to show gratitude and writing a Thanksgiving poem is the way many have expressed themselves over the years.

“The New England Boy’s Song About Thanksgiving Day”  written by Lydia Maria Child in 1844, is one of the most well-known poems of thanksgiving. (Although, you might recognize it as the song “Over the River and Through the Wood,” published in 1897.)

The poem describes a sleigh-ride through the snow. It begins with, “Over the river, and through the wood to grandfather’s house we go”.

Other well-known Thanksgiving poems include: “The Pumpkin” by John Greenleaf Whittier (1850); “No. 814” by Emily Dickinson; “Fire Dreams” by Carl Sandburg; and “Thanksgiving Time” by Langston Hughes.

The Bible also has thanksgiving verses, many of them poems. The books of poetry are Job, Psalms, Proverbs, Ecclesiastes, and Song of Solomon.
This year as you prepare for Thanksgiving why don’t you try your hand at writing a Thanksgiving poem.

Give Thanks in Everything
by Darlo Gemeinhardt

You see dirty dishes in the sink,

But I see the wonderful meal we had.

You see dog hair on the couch and floor,

But I see pets offering unconditional love.

You see piles of dirty clothes to wash,

But I see we have clothes to wear.

You see an old crippled body,

But I see someone who has had a long life.

You see kids who need a bath,

But I see the future.

You see the overall messiness and confusion,

But I see family.

You see the need to hurry away,

But I see the need to give thanks.

Darlo Gemeinhardt writes middle grade novels. She believes that there is a story in every dog. In her spare time she takes care of 1 husband (of 40 years), 29 dogs and trains with TALLAO, K-9 SEARCH AND RESCUE. Visit her at From the dog pen.com

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Is Your Poem in Shape?

Carmina Figurata or shaped stanza is a picture poem—a poem that forms a picture. In “CAROUSEL” by Jan D. Hodge, the poem forms the shape of a carousel horse. This is an illustration of positive shaping. A shaped poem can describe the object and is shaped like it.

When the poem fits around a shape it is negative shaping.This is illustrated by the poem, “THE VIEW FROM KHUFIT’S TONGUE” by Walter H. Kerr. the negative space form the shape of a mountain.

“CLIMBING THE TOWER AT PISA” by Richard Frost as you might guess forms the ape of the Tower of Pisa. The poem is read form the bottom up.

Create a simple shape with simple words until an idea takes shape. Play with the words. Don’t force the image. Have fun with it.

The following poem is an example of a shaped poem. For obvious reasons I call it “PAW PRINTS.”

Darlo Gemeinhardt writes middle grade novels. She believes that there is a story in every dog. In her spare time she takes care of 1 husband (of 40 years), 29 dogs and trains with TALLAO, K-9 SEARCH AND RESCUE. Visit her at From the dog pen.com

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5 Ways to Keep Your Poetry Simple

Simplicity is extremely valuable when it comes to communicating through poetry. I’ve always wanted my poems to positively impact the reader rather than turn them away.

From my experience, here are five things to keep in mind as you craft your own poems that will allow readers to appreciate them fully.

1: Relatable Subject

First, choose a recognizable subject that will resonate with your audience. If the reader can relate to the subject, he or she will appreciate the poem that much more. Many poets, if not all, write from the unique inspirations of everyday life. Example

2 : Simple Language

You might be tempted to use academic words or jargon in poetry, but I recommend that you do this sparingly and only for a certain effect, such as humor or reverence. Your ideas can still be complex, and you should use unique words and phrases. Just make sure your poem on the whole is decipherable. Example

3: Comprehensible Message

What meaning do you want to convey through your poetry? Whatever it is, try to make sure that it fits our common experience. People understand themes such as beauty, death, joy and disappointment. Choosing a simple message will make sure that the reader “gets it.” Example

4: Clear Imagery

Every poet should use figurative language and poetic devices to create imagery and mood in their poetry. That’s where the true complexity and skill comes into play. Whatever techniques you use should create easily visualized images that touch one or more of the five senses. Example

5: Familiar References

Allusion is a powerful poetic tool, but it can often leave the reader confused. If you make references, try to allude to people, places, events, etc… for which most of your readers will have some knowledge. If you make an obscure reference, the readers might miss the entire point. Example

Knowing Your Audience

Most of these suggestions have to do with knowing your audience. As you consider these ideas, also keep in mind your readers. If they will understand academic vocabulary, obscure subjects and references and extraordinary topics, then by all means use them.

Warning: Simplicity Doesn’t Mean Easy

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I want to be very clear about what I mean by keeping poetry simple.

When writing poetry using my suggestions, you may be tempted to simplify the techniques. For example, forcing rhyme in a poem at the expense of your diction (word choice). Or using clichés instead of coming up with original similes, metaphors, etc…

Be reminded that writing poetry shouldn’t be an easy task for you, the poet. It takes much skill to craft a commendable poem that resonates with a reader. If it’s too easy to write, then you probably didn’t try hard enough.

Just saying.

Because poetry is an art, we want it to be worthy of appreciation as well as accessible to the world. We want our readers to understand it, but not oversimplify it so it loses its aesthetic value.

And I’m not suggesting that you should never write poems that have mystery and depth—both add value to poetry.

I simply believe that the complexity should mostly challenge the poet rather than the reader.

Do you have any other suggestions for writing understandable poetry? Tell me below.

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Keeping Poetry Simple

One of my goals as a poet is to make poetry practical and less intimidating for writers while respecting it as an art form. Maybe that’s why I get a little irritable when I see poets going to great lengths to make their poetry enigmatic.

I’m not saying that we should write greeting card poetry or Mother Goose poems. And I’m not implying that poetry should be an easy craft.

What I mean is that in the very act of writing a poem, an artist is trying to convey a message to a reader. If the reader walks away baffled and frustrated, what purpose has been accomplished?

Complexity and mystery have a crucial role in crafting the poem, but they shouldn’t be the reason people avoid it.

Of course, part of the enjoyment of poetry is figuring out the artistic secrets hidden within the words. But it shouldn’t take a doctorate in linguistics to excavate the meaning.

Because poetic trends come and go kind of like the style and color of jeans that’s in for the year, I have a proposition.

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Yes, I’m swimming against the complicated wave that contemporary poetry seems to be surfing. Maybe I’m kind of like my hero William Wordsworth when he started writing British poetry that everyday people could understand to rebel against the sophisticated language and concepts of his predecessors.

I, too, believe poets need to write so that people can experience it and understand it at the same time.

Poetry should always push your writing and creativity to its limits. Since poetry is an art, we have to keep in mind that it should be approached with respect and effort.

Consider William Carlos Williams “The Red Wheelbarrow.”  This  unusually short poem is recognized as a brilliant work of poetic art.

Isn’t the simple beautiful?

The poet intricately paints the image of a rain-glazed, red wheelbarrow, sitting near some chickens. The first words “so much depends” along with the imagery of rain creates a solemn mood so you know someone’s very life is affected by this simple everyday object.

Williams’ renowned piece proves that a uncomplicated poem can create a powerful image and mood.

Another one of my favorites is John Updike’s “January.”

In four succinctly crafted stanzas, the poem captures the beauty of a snowy winter day. Everyone can relate to the short gray days of winter when the sun seems distant.  The poet’s language invites us to imagine the artifacts of winter, such as the lacey, barren trees and a frozen landscape.

What I’d really like writers to realize about poetry is that a simple poem can be just as moving as a more complicated one.  Complexity definitely has it’s place in structuring the poem and creating powerful imagery and mood, but it shouldn’t rise through the surface to create confusion.

Just remember that simplistic poetry–like a piece of art– can still radiate with sophistication if you use your words and techniques effectively.

Disclaimer: you might not get a book contract by taking my advice on keeping your poetry simple. But maybe together we can turn the tide.

I’d love to hear your opinion. Do you prefer complexity or simplicity when it comes to poetry? Tell me below.

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5 Tips to Jump-Start a Poem

Have you ever struggled with blank page disorder?  I have.  Most writers face this issue at one time or another.

Sometimes we just need a little inspiration.  Here are five tips you can use to jump-start a poem today.

Find a spot where you can sit and observe. Observation is an effective tool for any writer. You might want to visit a coffee shop and listen to the conversations stirring around you. Or you may need to find a quiet place outside to experience nature. Regardless of where you choose to observe, be sure to find a place that will take you away from your normal routine. Take notes on everything you observe in that location, using all five senses.

Skim the recent news headlines for anything that catches your attention. Scientific discoveries, world news, and even weather reports can inspire a poet. Look for extreme events, rare occurrences, strange happenings, or moving stories that capture some unique aspect of life. Skim the article(s) for key words about the subject and then add a few of your own thoughts.

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Check your social networks for interesting conversations. Find a news topic or conversation that strikes your interest. Write down key words, phrases, descriptions, images, and personality traits that you observe through the interactions. Next, start writing a poem in response to that topic or conversation. For example, you could begin with “So, you went to Hawaii for a vacation…” Continue writing in a voice that is commenting on or responding to whatever people are discussing on the social network.

Try to find an unlikely comparison, also known as metaphor. If you already have an idea in mind, write down everything you can about the subject of the poem. Then think of a concrete object (one that appeals to your five senses) that is dissimilar to your subject. Write down attributes of the differing object. Once you have all of the ideas out on the page, look for connections. Is there a way to describe your subject as if it were the other object? I recently wrote a poem where I compared automobiles to snail shells—two very unlike items until you are caught in horrendous 5:00 traffic on your way home.

Get in touch with your emotions. Over the past week, have you experienced any joy? Or maybe you encountered someone who angered you. Capture the details of your experience on paper and either write about it or focus on how the emotion affected you most. For example, if you had a fearful moment, describe what fear did to you. Was it like a monster ripping you to shreds, or was it more like a cockroach scuttling about your feet? When you use personification or metaphor to characterize emotions, they become very powerful characters in poetry.

Now it’s time to get writing.  After you take notes, simply start writing on that white page.  I know it’s difficult, but once you start writing the poem out, it will begin to take form.

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Do you have any other creative tips to jump-start poetry that you can share? I’d love to hear them below.

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Poetry Defined

Teachers of literature typically define poetry as anything other than prose. Even though this definition is true, it’s vague at best.

Poetry has been around for a long, long time. Some historians even believe that poetry in the form of oral tradition predated the practice of writing. You can find poems in every major movement, era, and time period in human history. Likewise, throughout the ages it has developed many forms.

The best way to define poetry is to describe the various forms that it takes.

Narrative poetry tells stories.  Lyric poetry is usually shorter and uses strong imagery to create an emotional effect.

Concrete poetry expresses the theme through the design and the placement of the words. Haiku are short Japanese poems focused on the theme of nature.

Sonnets are highly structured poems that make use of iambic pentameter and rhyme scheme.  Similarly, villanelles make use of refrains, stanza, and rhyme.

The modern free verse form has opened up even more possibilities for poets because ironically this “form” of poetry is defined as any poem that doesn’t fit the molds of the other forms.  It’s a form without a form.  The rules are whatever you make them.

Essentially poetry can be fun or serious.  It can be simple or complex. Most poets try to communicate a complex message in as few words as possible.

Recently, I was sitting in a conference session with well-known poets, Sara Holbrook and Michael Salinger as they defined contemporary poetry perfectly. They called it “snapshot writing” and described it as “non-fiction focused through a creative lens.”

How appropriate.

If you think about it, much personal poetry today is non-fiction with a few exceptions.  Poetry takes our everyday encounters and transforms them into extraordinary experiences, whether for better or worse.  We poets paint pictures of our emotions that are too deep to describe with simple language.

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Of course these are only a few of the many ways we could define poetry.

One thing is for sure.  Poetry is not simply anything other than prose.

It’s a unique form of linguistic expression that allows for much creativity and imagination.  Poets can play with words, sounds and techniques until they come up with the perfect mixture that expresses the exact meaning and emotions they want to express.

Therefore, you could say my personal definition of poetry is an artistic arrangement of words to capture an experience.

What is poetry to you?  Comment below your definition of poetry.

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The Art of Poetry

In my opinion, poetry is the high art form of all writing.

Crafting a meaningful poem can’t be done by anyone, but I believe anyone can learn to craft an extraordinary poem.

Hence the purpose of this blog A Pinch of Poetry where we will take our poetic talent to the next level.

Let’s consider visual art for a moment.  We could agree that most anyone can draw, color, or paint even if on the level of creating stick-figure abstract art.  But not everyone will become the next Van Gogh or Picasso.

So what makes renowned artists’ work more valuable than say a third-grade rendition of family life?  What defines them as “artists” rather than someone playing around in paint?

Techniques and intention distinguish art and poetry because they create aesthetic beauty.

Professional artists employ certain techniques to create an effect on the viewer or reader.  Every brush stroke and medium or color chosen is with a purpose.  Nothing is accidental. If you study a work carefully enough, you will discover secrets hidden deep within it that the artist is trying to share with you.

So it is with the art of writing poetry.

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Crafting a poem goes beyond penning words on a page.  Many people can write a poem if given instructions just as so many could create a drawing.  But only a few will take poetry to another level and create written art.

How so?

When creating a poem, the poet has to consider the subject and the meaning they want to get across in as few words as possible.  Then he or she chooses the techniques which will best create images to convey those messages.  Some of those techniques are metaphor, personification, meter, alliteration, etc.

While we all have had the definitions of these techniques mercilessly beaten into us by our English teachers, implementing them is not as easy as it might seem.  And not all techniques are appropriate for every poem.  A poet decides what will work just like a visual artist decides what colors to use in a painting.

Every word and technique chosen has a purpose and meaning.  Nothing is accidental.

So if you’re already a poet then you can consider yourself an artist because authentic poetry is truly a high art form.  If you’re not poetically inclined yet, I look forward to helping you get acquainted with the craft.

Consider it an artistic adventure.

Have you ever considered poetry an art?  Tell me your thoughts below.

“VanGogh-View of Arles with Irises” by Vincent van Gogh – Web Museum (file). Licensed under Public Domain via Wikimedia Commons – https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:VanGogh-View_of_Arles_with_Irises.jpg#/media/File:VanGogh-View_of_Arles_with_Irises.jpg