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Reading or Reading Aloud?

Libraries buy quality books for all ages in the children’s department and hope to match the book with the child who needs it most. But one collection tugs on our heartstrings to the point we sometimes buy a second copy and hide it in the back room! Those are the truly great “read-aloud” books for preschool story time.

Any book can be read aloud, of course, but not all books are suitable to share with a group. Picture the setting: a librarian, probably wearing glasses, has 20-25 children on the floor. Mothers are sitting nearby checking phones with even younger children in their laps. After an opening song, the attention span is reset to about 4 minutes for many of the children and only 30 seconds for a few. The librarian picks up a book to read.

Topics

Storytime happens all year on every subject of interest to 3-5-year-olds. Public librarians are always looking for holiday read-aloud books as well as evergreen topics like seasonal change, trucks, dinosaurs, colors, numbers, and fairy tales. Stories that engage children physically (while seated!) are a bonus.

Cover

The cover is the hook for the reading. It should excite the kids about the story – showing the main character or subject of the book. The title color and typeface must be easy to read in less-than-perfect light.

Format of the Book

The entire book will be held in one hand, open so the picture can be seen even if it stretches across two pages. Flaps, foldouts, and noise buttons must be easy to use while the book is held steady. Try holding different books – horizontal and vertical, board books.

Picture

Every picture must move the story forward. The text only enhances the visual on that page. Important elements should be large enough to be seen from 6-8 feet away without a cluttered background. 

Page Turns

Page turns must not interrupt the flow of the story. The best ones heighten anticipation of what comes next.

Page 1…and 32

Jump right into the story! If background is necessary, weave it into pages 2-3. By page 4, all characters and the plot should be introduced. Make sure the end of the story is so complete and satisfying that the librarians will not need to say “The End” to let them know the book is over.

Words per page Never describe what the picture shows. The time it takes to read one page cannot exceed the time span of 3–5-year-olds to look at the picture. The book is 500 words maximum.

Type Size

Plan a simple font, large enough to read out of the corner of one’s eye, even with bifocals! If the words and a picture overlap on the page, make sure the word color contrasts for legibility. 

Flowing Language

If rhymed, it must be perfect enough to read correctly on the first reading. If it is not rhymed, the words must be in a logical order with any “difficult to pronounce” explained. Words can be lyrical if they are also easy to read. Refrains that children repeat engages them further and can bring wandering attention back.

Whatever WIP is on your desk, look at it through the Read Aloud lens. Librarians will thank you! (And you DO want to be nice to librarians!)

Multi award-winning author Robin Currie holds a Master of Library Science from the University of Iowa but learned story sharing by sitting on the floor leading over 1000 story times! She has sold 1.7 M copies of her 40 storybooks and writes stories to read and read again!

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Let Me Introduce…First Lines in Children’s Biographies

Not as well known as “Call me Ishmael,” but equally important are these first lines from adult biographies:

  • “On 2 November, 1810, His Majesty King George the Third, raving and sometimes violent, was fastened into a straightjacket.” J.B. Priestly, The Prince of Pleasure and His Regency.
  •   “In August 45 B.C., seven months before the Ides of March, a procession entered the city of Mediolanum, modern Milan, in the hot and steamy northern Italian plain.” Barry Strauss, The Death of Caesar: The Story of History’s Most Famous Assassination
  • “On the day he was born, he would say, his white-haired grandfather leaped onto his big black stallion and thundered across the Texas Hill Country, reining in at every farm to shout: ‘A United States Senator was born this morning.'” Robert A Caro, The Years of Lyndon Johnson: The Path to Power.

When we know a person we admire, we want others to meet him or her. So it is with writing a biography – we put time and energy and sometimes deep personal interest into the book to introduce the subject to the next generation of readers. Equal attention should be paid to the first lines of children’s biographies. After all, would we want our life stories to begin with: “She was born in Peoria, Illinois in 1948”? SNORE!

For whom?

In any biography, it is important to tell the life story factually but in a way that will be interesting to the potential reader. Since biographies are written for those who listen to board books to beginning readers to advanced readers in middle grades, our task begins with age-appropriate interest, language, and sentence length. 

“Jane! Jane where are you?” Jeanette Winter, The Watcher: Jane Goodall’s Life with the Chimps.  

Why not?

Inventors uncover the possibility and combine things in a way never done before. Start with what is not possible and let the biography show how that obstacle was overcome.

“People had always known it was not possible for humans to fly like birds.” Wendie Old. To Fly: The Story of the Wright Brothers.

When?

Most people we write about are important to a specific time in history. Begin the story at that moment in the person’s life when their impact on the world is felt. Include a timeline, sidebars, or backmatter to fill in the details of the person’s early life.

“The small boat sped quickly along in the dark.” Yona McDonough, Who Was John F. Kennedy? 

What?

People important enough to have published biographies do many interesting things during their lives. Try beginning with the conflict moment that changes the person substantially. It may not be the most famous, but the results of that first moment will affect the later important event.

“It was Saturday and Eugenie wanted to stay at the aquarium forever.”

Jess Keating, Shark Lady: The true Story of How Eugenie Clark Became the Ocean’s Most Fearless Scientist. 

How?

A compelling quote is fantastic, either from the person or about him/her. However, not everyone has a quote-littered life! In that case, try a detailed description of the scene to bring the reader into the story.

“I want to be a great inventor!” 

Anne Renaud. The Boy who Invented the Popsicle.

Who?

Etymology: from Ancient Greek βίος (bíos, “life”) + γράφω (gráphō, “write”). We assume the story will always be about a person’s life, but real events can be observed by inanimate objects like a house or non-human life forms like a pet.

“My boy Peter gathers me inside his coat.”

David Lee Miller, The Cat who lived with Anne Frank.

In 2023 try introducing someone you admire to children in a biography.

Multi-award-winning author Robin Currie learned story sharing by sitting on the floor, during library story times. She has sold 1.7M copies of her 40 storybooks and writes stories to read and read again! Robin is the author of Tuktuk: Tundra Tale, a story of animals in the frozen north.

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Who’s Listening to Your Story?

We’ve all read picture books that just seemed not quite right – the subject matter was too obscure for a board book; the illustrations were too detailed to use in a group. Avoid these mismatches by taking a moment when you write (or revise) to picture the person or group who will most enjoy it. That decision will govern your word choice and count, tone and approach – even if you are writing a book about dogs!

1 Family one-on-one

The subject matter is not as important as the experience of snuggling together and sharing. Board books, pop-ups, and interactive sound books are popular. A dog story might review the actions of a puppy all day and the snuggle next to mom for the night.

Spot Says Goodnight by Eric Hill 

 2 Discussion topics for a family setting

The subject matter is specific to the child and situation. Topics may be divorce or bullies, sharing, emotions, school behavior. There will often be suggested questions for discussion or opportunities to follow up. A dog story might be fear of dogs and how to approach one safely. 

The Not-So-Scary Dog by  Alanna Propst 

 3 Small group school sharing

The subject matter will be specific to the group’s interest: dinosaurs, community issues, learning about other cultures. A dog story might compare the work dogs do in different parts world or use dogs to teach math concepts. 

Dozens of Dachshunds: a Counting, Woofing, Wagging Book by Stephanie Calmenson

4 Group read aloud

The subject matter is not as important, but the best (and repeated) read-aloud books have several common traits: simple pictures, limited text, humor, surprises, rhythmic language.

The dog story might be about a teeny dog who attempts tasks humorously too big for him but finally discovers what only a small dog can do. 

Dachshund Through the Snow by Michelle Medlock Adams

So, before you write the dog story (or folk tale or biography), take a minute to imagine the listener. That extra step may move your story to First Place. Woof!

Robin Currie learned story sharing by sitting on the floor, in children’s sermons, and in library storytimes. Robin has sold 1.7 M copies of her 30 Bible storybooks and writes stories to read and read again! How to Dress a Dinosaur is available now! How to Dress a Dinosaur – Familius.com Shop