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Screenwriting

December Denouement

Thanksgiving is over and we’re eagerly awaiting Christmas and the new year! It’s a safe bet 2020 hasn’t gone the way many of us had planned our hope. It’s a sad fact in life that while all things come to an end, they don’t necessarily end like we want.

As I write this nearly 1 ½ million people have died from Covid-19, it’s a safe bet that their fate was unexpected. While 2020 nears an end, our hopes for what 2021 will bring depend on the resolution of this year.

  • A vaccine.
  • Better health.
  • Financial gains.
  • A return to normal life.

In storytelling, the resolution is the end game of the story, it is what everything has been leading to: goals, hopes, and freedom. In a five-act structure, resolution is known as a denouement.

Denouement?

A Denouement is meant to tie up loose ends our climax didn’t settle and may even have caused. McKee notes, “The resolution, the fifth of the five-part structure, is any material left after climax.”1

If we break down the word Denouement we can better understand its purpose. M-W.com says: from Latin nodus knot, node; akin to Middle Irish naidm bond Middle English, from Latin nodus knot, node; akin to Middle Irish naidm bond.”

While the denouement is the final act of the story, it isn’t necessarily the end of our characters’ life journey. (Hence the rise of movie sequels.) This is why there are so many different kinds of story endings.

1. Book endings (The Bodyguard): this resolution uses similar imagery and characters to the setup of the film. It brings a story to a full circle while answering some questions along the way. I use this type of ending in my current WIP.

2. Narrator Ending (A Very Long Engagement): this concludes with narration by one of the characters over a still or moving image from the story.

3. Twist ending (Seven): these endings are inevitable, but not predictable. They are typical of mystery and horror movies.

4. Expected ending ( Pretty Woman): These endings conform to genre conventions. If they aren’t included in your screenplay the audience will notice something is lacking. An example is a romantic comedy. We all know the fated couple will eventually end up together. We enjoy these films because the characters have overcome multiple obstacles and have earned their relationship.

5. Moral endings (Shawshank Redemption): These are morality tales and the audience must sense that justice has been served. The main characters have learned a valuable lesson about life and have grown as individuals. The characters may either verbalize their journey or simply apply their character evolution to their new world.

6. DUBIOUS MORAL ENDING (Return Of The Jedi) : The main characters have achieved their goal, but they are feeling morally conflicted. Was the journey worth it? Did they achieve their goal? If so, at what cost? These are often bittersweet endings where the characters question their choices despite having achieved personal growth.

7. Emotional ending (Life Is Beautiful): These types of endings require the audience to have either an intense positive or negative response. The audience might be in tears (of happiness or tragedy) or warm and fuzzy inside.

8. Anticipation ending (Avengers Infinity War): This type of ending incites the audience to want more; either by a cliffhanger where the audience is excited to know what happens next or via a teaser scene which gives them a glimpse into how the story continues.

9. Gag ending (Beverly Hills Cop): This is a light-hearted farewell to the story. It could end with a joke, punchline, or sight gag to leave your audience laughing.

10. Confusing ending (Looper): This is the domain of screenwriting auteurs. It doesn’t give a clear indication of the story conclusion and is designed to initiate debate since the vital story details haven’t been given.

While the denouement ties up loose ends, it also hints at what’s next after the credits roll. Because the story continues after this adventure, only the characters know what happens after we leave the theaters.

What’s Next?

Keep in mind, the denouement serves more than one purpose. While it does provide a resolution of the story adventure, it may not be the end of your characters’ story. This gives the audience’s imagination a chance to write more into the story and it gives writers a chance to build a franchise or simply provide a sequel.

The end goal of every story is to convey a particular message or as Robert McKee shares a “Controlling idea may be expressed in a single sentence describing how and why life undergoes change for one condition of existence at the beginning to another at the end.”2 Below are a few examples of controlling ideas:

  • Justice
  • Unconditional Love
  • Greed
  • Revenge

By the time the credits roll in your film, the audience should have a clear picture of what the controlling idea of the story is. As the year comes to an end, we will each walk away with specific memories and thoughts about 2020. That is a December Denouement!

Martin Johnson survived a severe car accident with a (T.B.I.) Traumatic brain injury which left him legally blind and partially paralyzed on the left side. He is an award-winning Christian screenwriter who has recently finished his first Christian nonfiction book. Martin has spent the last nine years volunteering as an ambassador and promoter for Promise Keepers ministries. While speaking to local men’s ministries he shares his testimony. He explains The Jesus Paradigm and how following Jesus changes what matters most in our lives. Martin lives in a Georgia and connects with readers at Spiritual Perspectives of Da Single Guy and on Twitter at mtjohnson51.


1   McKee R. (1997). Story: Substance, Structure, Style, And The Principle of Screenwriting (Kindle edition) pg 312.

2 McKee R. (1997). Story: Substance, Structure, Style, And The Principle of Screenwriting (Kindle edition) pg 114-115.

Categories
Copywrite/Advertising

The End

The end — the two magical words every struggling reader wants to find and every author wants to write. Knowing when to type those words and nothing else is critical to authorial success.

It’s just as true for copywriters as for fantasy novelists. In fact, an article on Re:Worded says,

“Half of copywriting is knowing when to stop writing.”

So when – and how – do you stop writing?

  • Before you think you’re done. Have you ever started a new TV show or series of novels, got wrapped up in the plot and characters, and then watched in disappointment as quality fell off? In TV, it’s called “jumping the shark” — that point at which the show turns to gimmicks instead of a story to keep you intrigued. The creators of the hit series Breaking Bad avoided this problem by setting an end date for the story at the beginning of their work. When writing advertising or marketing copy, you could try writing your ending first, too.
  • When you hit your word count. Long-form articles rank better on Google than short-form articles do. Google loves an article that hits 1,000 words because the bots get more clues for what the article is about. Write longer articles, and your clients should love seeing their SEO rank rise, which is good for you. The downside? Long articles easily confuse or bore the reader. Make sure your content is valuable and easy to scan.
  • After asking a powerful question. Most people don’t want to read your opinion or listen to your knowledge, anyway. They just want to share their own. So end your blog post, article, or social media piece with a powerful question. Readers can voice their thoughts in the comments, doing some of your work for you!
  • Upon introducing a new topic. If you are pumping out content once or twice a week for a company, you could easily create 100 articles a year and soon run out of topics. When you realize you’re introducing a concept that could be its own piece, make a note of it for a future article and stick to your original subject. You’ll wish you had. Trust me.

Talking about quitting is counterintuitive, isn’t it? We live in a culture that bombards us with the message: “Never quit. Never give up. Never abandon the ship.” But quitting isn’t always a bad idea. If you smoke, quit. If you’re doing something you deplore for no reason, quit. When you’re done with a project, quit.

“One of the mistakes writers make,” says world-renowned journalist Malcolm Gladwell, “is that they spend a lot of time thinking about how to start the story and not a lot of time thinking about how to end it.”

Gladwell’s insight applies to more than journalistic pieces. It’s true for copywriting. It’s true, perhaps, for life.

The part of my story that involves writing a regular column for Almost An Author ends with this article. For the past two years, I’ve written on humor, drip campaigns, storytelling, laryngitis, copywriting history, and the freelance life. You’ve laughed at my jealousy-induced rant about Carlton Hughes and my story about my grandfather riding a horse down the theater aisle during a movie.

You were also gracious enough to congratulate me when I wrote about getting fired as an agency copywriter and launching my own business. In fact, your encouragement is part of why I have found success as a full-time freelance writer and editor.

Thank you.

For me, the fun has been in watching this site grow, change, and mature and in getting to play a part in its development. Winning that designation as a Top 101 Writing Site from Writers Digest was the cherry on top.

So before my column jumps the shark, I’ll leave this space for someone else to help A3 keep getting better. In the meantime, I’m launching a podcast in the spring, juggling several new clients, and tackling an intriguing project that I landed (where else?) through a fellow A3 columnist.

I’ll definitely keep an eye on the amazing articles over here, and I’ll put them on Twitter when I can. You can connect with me on LinkedIn if you want to talk about writing, reading, or weird ideas. Now get off A3 and go write.

THE END

PS: When and how do you plan to end your story? What’s the best ending you’ve ever read?

Holland Webb is a full-time freelance copywriter and digital marketing strategist living near Greenville, SC. His clients are leaders in the online retail, higher education, and faith-based sectors. Holland has written for brands such as U.S. News & World Report, iLendX, Radisson, Country Inn & Suites, MediaFusion, Modkat, Great Bay Home, IMPACT Water, and BioNetwork. He is a featured writer on Compose.ly, and his monthly copywriting column appears on Almost An Author. You can reach him at www.hollandwebb.com or at hollandlylewebb@gmail.com.

Categories
Screenwriting

The End?

Recently a fellow aspiring screenwriter reached out to me on social media. She was having problems with figuring out the details of her story and asked for advice on how to develop her story ending.

Like me she is far removed from the security of Hollywood’s screenwriting community, in fact, she doesn’t even live in the United States. Our common bond inspired me to share an unusual plotting technique I learned myself from other screenwriters earlier this year.

Reverse Plotting

Reverse plotting may seem counterintuitive, but once you’ve tried it the benefits reap dividends. Even with my current revision of an older screenplay, it helped me.

  • Create new plot turns.
  • Create new characters.
  • Flush out existing characters.
  • Develop clear subplots.
  • Improving the flow of my narrative.
  • Enhance my take away.

If you’re struggling with any of these in your screenwriting, read this post carefully to give your story a more satisfying resolution in the end. I don’t understand how some movies ever got the green light with endings so bad. Here is a couple to give you an idea of bad resolutions.

  1. Indiana Jones and the Crystal Skull- 
  2. Savages-

Resolution?

In the writing process, the resolution is the final element in storytelling. Its primary function is to tie together the previous elements into a proper conclusion.

  1. Exposition- Setting, characters and timing.
  2. Rising action- crisis or conflict
  3. Climax- The height of her story that results in a change of character or protagonists biggest test.
  4. Falling action- Tying up loose ends or subplots
  5. Resolution-where the initial conflict is resolved and the protagonist achieves their ultimate goal.

In reverse plotting, we start with resolution and work backward. It’s a lot like drawing a B and leaving a blank space before A, now the writer must fill in the blanks with the proper steps to show where our protagonist has come from and their struggle to get where they want to be. Somewhere along the way clarify our protagonist’s purpose.

Obviously, a story’s resolution is important. Robert McKee explains, “All films need a resolution as a courtesy to the audience.”[i] As 2018 comes to an end many people already working on coming up with a New Year’s resolution for 2019. They will start the year knowing where they want to be at the end of the year and then spend the next 12 months trying to get there. They’re using a type of reverse plotting; starting next month they will decide what steps need to be taken to get them to where they want to be. Their resolution is more than just an answer it’s their next goal.

Next?

Movies with satisfying endings answer the questions we first develop at the beginning of the story. They also let us know if this is the end of our protagonist’s journey and possibly clues us into what’s next.

However, there are times when storytellers in films don’t want to let us know if there’s more to the story in a film’s resolution. These cliffhanger endings are common in sci-fi movies, superhero films, and other genres as well. A couple of good examples of this are.

  1. The Star Wars saga
  2. The Avengers Infinity War  

In these types of films, stories are so complex the conflict continues through a series of films before the final resolution comes to the end.

[i] Mckee, Story:Style, Structure, Substance. HarperCollins, 1997. E-book.

Martin Johnson survived a severe car accident with a (T.B.I.) Truamatic brain injury which left him legally blind and partially paralyzed on the left side. He is an award-winning Christian screenwriter who has recently finished his first Christian nonfiction book. Martin has spent the last nine years volunteering as an ambassador and promoter for Promise Keepers ministries. While speaking to local men’s ministries he shares his testimony. He explains The Jesus Paradigm and how following Jesus changes what matters most in our lives. Martin lives in a Georgia and connects with readers at Spiritual Perspectives of Da Single Guy and on Twitter at mtjohnson51.