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Writing Romance 101––Part I

So, you think you want to write a romance? It’s a great genre. [bctt tweet=”We all love fairy tales where the prince and the princess live happily ever after, right? Where romance got its start.” username=”@donnalhsmith @genremonkey”]#amwriting #romancewriting101

Think of some of the greatest romances you’ve ever read or seen in the movies or on television. I’m not talking about love stories, although those are pretty neat, too. But a romance is a happy ending, where a love story is not.

Sales of romance novels tops one billion, yes billion, dollars, most every year. That’s a lot of sales. Romance accounted for one-third of the overall fiction market in 2015, the last year stats were available for.

Why? I think most of us are romantics at heart. Especially women, which account for most of the sales of romance stories, no matter what sub-genre––such as historical, suspense, or contemporary. I write historical romance. Westerns are my favorite time period, because I grew up watching many westerns on television. I’ve read many good westerns in the past few years.

My first tip about writing romance––and this may sound elementary––is to read a lot of romance. Over the past several years, since writing became my passion again, I’ve probably read at least 300, yes––three hundred stories where romance was a major element (I’m being conservative in my estimate). I’ve read so much, I know what I like, and what I don’t.

This is important when deciding to write romance. First, know what you like. What time period, what kind of characters you want your two main protagonists to be, and where will your story be set?

But first, read. Read. Read. One of my pet peeves for writing historical romance is the question of: how to get rid of dear-old Dad or the father figure in authority over the heroine? With all I’ve read, I’ve seen two plot devices: 1) Father dies 2) Father doesn’t have daughter’s best interest at heart. Within the second one, the father, or father figure, will “sell” their daughter, niece, or ward, into marriage with a jerk, generally speaking, for money. Honestly, can’t you do better than that?

I decided I would try. It’s a tired plot device to make the father figure a jerk. I don’t like those stories as well. But maybe it’s just me. In my book, Meghan’s Choice, which will be released later this year, Meghan’s father is a good man, but he makes a hard choice. He tells his daughter she needs to grow up and learn to manage money before she marries. A very unique concept for 1871. But he’s a forward thinking, progressive man, and he wants the best for his daughter. We’ll see what readers think.

[bctt tweet=”In order to write romance, you should read a lot of romance in your favorite sub-genre before writing your own story. ” username=”@donnalhsmith @genremonkey”]Although, let your ideas percolate in your mind as you read. #amwriting #romancewriting101

What do you like about romance? Leave a comment and let me know.

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CONTEST OR NOT TO CONTEST? PART ONE

If you read my last column, you’ll know we determined that most fictional stories contain some element of romance. That is very fundamental as I talk to you about contests. There is quite a bit of debate in the writing world as to whether entering a contest is worth the money, time, and possible rejection of your work. I will state right up front that I believe they are worth your time and effort, published or non-published.

 

NOTE: Coming from a purely romantic and fictional world, I can only speak on fictional contests. I don’t write non-fiction nor do I have a blog, both of which I believe do have contests available. I cannot help you with the logistics of them, though I hope the end results are the same.

 

This month I would like to share personal and positive experiences I myself have had with contests, solely to show you why I believe in them.

 

In 1995, I wrote my first book, a Regency, and though it was perfectly acceptable to me as I was writing it for my own entertainment, family and friends urged me to seek out publishing. (That is when you really seek out people who will read your work and tell you the absolute truth about it!) Quite by accident I discovered a very small writing contest by a very small group of writers in my genre. The only reason I entered was that the winning entry would be given the opportunity to send the full manuscript to a very iconic editor of a very large publishing company.

 

Do you think I am going to say I won it? I did not. But at that time in my “career” I got what I needed most – feedback. Each judge had used the same standards for every entry they received. I got their copies of the scoring sheets, with comments, encouragement, suggestions, and problems – galore! Oh, there were many more problems than encouragement but the suggestions made me look at the story a whole new way. And the negative comments made me look even harder.

 

(This lovely little contest is also where I got the best advice I have ever received in critique; shall I tell you? READ WHAT YOU’VE WRITTEN OUT LOUD TO YOURSELF BEFORE YOU EVER SEND IT ANYWHERE! My dear friends, if you don’t do this, start. I’m talking cover to cover if it is ten pages or 300. You will “hear” when words sound out of order, when there is not enough or too much emotion, when the same word is used twice in the same sentence; I could go on and on, and this is really more for next week’s article. I just had to share to show you one of the advantages of contests!)

 

We left off with my poor little manuscript and me deciding whether to put it out of its misery or keep it. I kept it. Flash forward to 2004. My husband found my box of manuscripts (from 20 years ago) and I rewrote that sad little story using twenty years of life experience I did not have the first time and using several of the comments from that little contest. Then I went out into the publishing world to see if I fit.

 

That book, my debut, was not only published, but won the 2011 Romantic Times Reader’s Choice award and the Holt Medallion award for Best Book by a Virginia Author!

 

Was it all because of the contest so long ago? Of course, not. It was an answer to my prayer, wondering what in the world I was doing. It was being led by God to a wonderful, supportive agent (who BTW also sent it out to five random readers as a beta group who sent me an additional 5 sets of critiques!) And ultimately, it was God’s perfect timing with an editor who wanted the story.

 

Please, please do not think I am bragging. You have no idea how many “thanks, but no thanks” we heard or “can the author say it in 70,000 words as opposed to the 100,000 words submitted?” Or a million other walls we hit first. My point is that if I hadn’t submitted that original unpublished manuscript to that little contest, I would never have received all of the feedback, which I still use today. And if I hadn’t entered the published book into the ten or so contests I had learned about, I would have lost out on the opportunity to put “Award Winning Author” after my name – forever! (Can anyone say PERK?)

 

But you know what I also received, almost equally as valuable? The scoring sheets on the eight contests I didn’t win. And do you know what I’ve done with those? I used them in writing my second and third books, and, hopefully, in books to come.

 

I’d love to hear about your contest experience! Let me know below and we can talk about them. Be sure to tune in next month when I will go over the logistics, and costs, as well as where you can find contests that might be just the one for you.

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WHAT CONSTITUTES A ROMANCE?

How many of you are reading this article under protest? “I don’t write romances,” you say. Well, you might need to stick around as I clarify the word romance for you. “Not necessary,” you say? “Everyone knows what a romance is,” you say? Okay, humor me.

Merriam-Webster defines a romance as, “a love story, especially in the form of a novel.” “Ha! You say! Just as I thought.” But wait, there’s more.

Dictionary.com defines romance as “a novel or other prose narrative depicting heroic or marvelous deeds, pageantry, romantic exploits, etc., usually in a historical or imaginary setting.” That might make, say, most of the stories of King Arthur and his knights romances! Still not convinced?

Merriam-Webster also defines romance as, “based on legend and involving the supernatural.” Is anyone else thinking The Lord of the Rings? What about Star Wars? The Christmas Carol (I mean three ghosts)?

Merriam-Webster has a third definition, “a prose narrative treating imaginary characters involved in events remote in time or place and usually heroic, adventurous, or mysterious.” Whoa, Hunger Games just popped into my mind.

This is my final defense. Dictionary.com defines it as “indulging in fanciful or extravagant stories or daydreams.” There it is friends; isn’t that really the definition of any fiction writer?

There is a method to my madness. All of the above was meant to be a humorous way of impressing upon us as fiction writers that there is at least a grain of romance in almost everything we write. But what I wanted us to really understand is that every contest out there gives you different categories, with different levels of romance, where you must determine where your book fits.

Let me tell you that, in my humble opinion, entering contests is an important part of writing. Whether published or unpublished there are contests to fit everyone. And whether you win or lose, if you realize that you are getting terrific feedback on your manuscript for very little cost, you come out way ahead.

I don’t know about you, but I’ve entered my fair share of contests and sometimes the hardest part is which category to enter my manuscript. That is the teaser for my next column. There is no excuse to skip it anymore because you don’t write romance!

I’d love to hear from your feedback on this article and/or questions we might be able to address for my upcoming contest column.

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Romancing Your Story

Welcome to Almost An Author! My name is Mary Moore. I started writing in 1995, but was not published until 2011. Yep, getting published can be a very slow process. But I hope what you gain from the invaluable information on this site will help and encourage you to keep pushing toward your goal.

If you do not know, I am a romance writer. Well, I’m a historical romance writer. No, I’m a Christian historical romance writer. Actually, I am a Christian historical romance writer in the Regency genre. Whew!

But whatever you write, whether Regency fiction, contemporary fiction, mysteries, chick lit, sci-fi, paranormal, historical, Amish, westerns or Biblical fiction, more often than not you will include a vein of romance. Me, I include an artery.

So from here on out, we will look at developing the romance portion of your plot and the components needed to make it believable. Even if the romance is secondary to, say, the mystery of your story, it still needs to be developed into and/or around the plot within some guidelines. And your characters? They definitely need to have the romantic elements that make your reader want to invest in them. Who wants a ho-hum heart throb?

Finally, I would love to hear what you would like to talk about. If you have questions on your characters or plots, or a specific question (that probably 100 other authors want to ask), just leave a comment below and we’ll go from there.

Be advised, however, that being published doesn’t make me an expert on anything! You could ask 20 writers how they plot or keep track of the main characters and their butlers and valets and rich aunts, and they will all say something different. So you be you and take away as much information as you think will help. I give you permission!

I look forward to getting to know you!

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